Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
Real name: G
Status: Member
Member Since: June 24, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes

[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by mountainlion718
 
Nature of Love by drotuno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary:

Hiking through the Appalachian Trail, Bella meets 2 brothers, 1 with a dark past. This is an adventure about friendships, love, loss and finding yourself. And just maybe finding more than you expected. AH/canon couples

banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 183740
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2010 Updated: June 07, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hot meals, hot showers, hot nights

i'm glad Bella gives as good as she gets! Why does Carlisle want to talk to Edward, to make him more miserable????

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Waving the White Flag

i can't wait for the questions! How can you do that to your child??? Renee's like a "MOMMY DEAREST" wannabe......

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: A Rose By Any Other Name

no, no way! Edward did what Jerry did to somebody????

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Rooftops and Riverbanks

eeesh, that's tough, cause telling him she knows might be too much of a push and he'll be hurt that she was digging before waiting on him.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Lost Causes and Lost Bets

that was awesome how they all rallied behind Bella, Mike is so stupid for even going there

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: So Close, Yet So Far Away

i knew something was wrong, i just thought it was Esme in the hospital.....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: A Parting of Ways

wow, they're done! what an accomplishment! :) i can't wait for everyone to be together again!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: For Your Own Good

i'm nauseous and in tears, how is Rose gonna keep this from her when she sees her crumpled in a heap on the floor

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Strength and Weakness

See Bella, Rose was telling the truth. Yes Edward could have gone another way about it but there wasn't time, they tried to get to her that same night

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Truth Isn't Always Enough

i know saying ILY had to be really hard for her but that's a huge step. hope the date goes well

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: I Need You Now

i think the moving in together will help so much! Mags is just feeling things out with Carlisle

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Music from the Heart

now Maggie is gonna sense it and i hope she puts the fear of God into Carlisle!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Sorely Mistaken

did Carlisle make her sick, maybe slipped something in her drink or is it just a cold?

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Residual Effects

yeah, shocker from Carlisle....will Edward respond?

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: More Than Just Fate

Great ending! I just don't want it to end...;) oh I hope they do get one of the puppies!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

incredible wonderful ending!!! i will miss this story so much! thank you so much for writing it and sharing it. looking forward to your future submissions. :)

 
The experiment (two-shot) by Taia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Eclipse. Edward and Bella. Alone in his bedroom on a king size bed. What's next? A game? A satisfaction? A pleasure? An experiment? They won't stop at innocent kisses.

(maybe one-shot)

Julia made this amazing banner.

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3525
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2010 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ahh, if only Eclipse went like that...lol! Great job! Please continue with E's POV!

Author's Response:

Eclipse needs such moments, I think. Maybe less smut. Although, I tried to write this scene without any vulgarity. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:) great job, they both have the patience of a saint...lol

Author's Response:

Patience is a virtue =) huh!

thaks for reading!

 
A Little Less Than Patient - One Shot by EternallyCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

A Little Less Than Patient

Set between Eclipse & Breaking Dawn.

Bella and Alice are having another one of their "girls sleep-over weekends" when as always, Bella's lack of co-ordination get the better of her. She needs a little extra care and attention from Edward.

Rated M/NC-17 for lemons.

Thank you to my betas, LisaDawn75 and BeccieT for thier help and input to this O/S

Check out the Twilighted thread for this story... http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=12403


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10308
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: June 24, 2010


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it! so hot

 
Made to Live Alone by JustTry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1391]
Summary:

stories/77496/images/MTLA_-_final.png

 

All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.

***Tissue Warning***


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Sunday, August 1st

omg!, leave the poor girl alone!,,,lol

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Thursday, July 29

lol what a way to get caught :) i hope her appt. goes well

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Sunday, July 18th

Her father is such and ASS! how can you do that to your child???? Edward is too sweet, i hate that she is still so down on herself though

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - Tuesday, July 27th

i think knowing all that now will help her open up to Edward more and be even more receptive to help

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Wednesday, July 28th

jeez, Charlie is such an ass! it's better if she just puts him out of her mind,

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Saturday, July 3rd

Great story!, i'm so hooked! my heart is breaking for Bella though :( so glad i too the rec to read this!

 



Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.