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Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
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Summary:

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Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend.  When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death.  As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.

A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever.  What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Protège Moi

good job for your 1st lemon :) how awkward are they gonna be around each other now....lol

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Yes, Monday at school is going to be a bit AwkWard...

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Two Steps Back

Jazz & Em as SS...too funny!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know

i knew he wouldn't be able to deny her....so damn stubborn, always trying to fight it......

Author's Response:

I found it ironic that Edward called Bella stubborn!!!  Bella RULES!!!  Edward doesn't realize it, but he's putty in her hands...

 
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Date: June 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Death and Destruction

Like Jake so much better when he's not all pining over Bella! glad he showed up when he did!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Mystery Zone

happy chapter, yeah, Edward on a motorcycle...pretty HOT

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Dead Man's Party

i loved this chapter!!! great job. Edward & Jake's conversation was funny and perfect. LOVED the costume ideas.....i can't wait for the tree house....lol

 
For Better or Worse by Tess84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

Sequel to "Hearts in Pain", so it might be a good idea to read that first. The happily ever after part of the fairytale. Because nothing bad could possibly  happen now, right?

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 196995
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2 - A Big Moment

yay!, i'm liking the sequal so far....so glad that Edward is getting to experience the whole pregnancy thing this time around

 

btw, i used to be njdevil30718, just in case you are confused...lol

 
Summary:

Good friends and culinary school graduates, Bella and Edward own a hot new restaurant, The Reservation.  They've worked hard to make it a success, but what else is cooking in the kitchen?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2348
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2010


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:) love it! No hesitating, no overthinking, just sweet and to the point!

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  I'm trying to get better at editing my own writing, so yes, I did my best to keep it short and sweet.

Thanks for reading, and for reviewing!

 

 
Summary:

Bella, who is twenty-three years old, in college, and engaged to be married the following summer, is forced to move back to her hometown of Forks, Washington when her fiancé leaves her after she becomes pregnant with his child. Upon returning home Bella meets Edward, who not only falls in love with her, but her unborn child as well.

Growing Up Is Hard To Do by museandpinksocks

Growing Up Is Hard To Do by museandpinksocks


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Edward, Jessica, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 21117
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Going Home

great begining, please update soon!

 
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?

Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?

Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Vampire Royal

that's a good 1st step to getting rid of the garbage that infested the collective. where will Bella go?????

Author's Response:

you'll see... soon!

thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

ugh! i just wish she'd believe that he grieves for her!!! can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

this is Bella we are talking about.... she never makes anything easy for poor edward ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! more soon :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Charlie

AWWW, I'm glad Charlie got the closure...kinda sorta. i know the next chapter will be nerve wracking

Author's Response:

yes... closure... kinda sorta... that's a good way to put it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Reclaiming

thank goodness she wasn't harmed. I'm sorry your husband lost his job, i hope he will find another quickly

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll be glad when life goes back to normal but I'm thankful that we arent on the streetor something... More story coming soon :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Home

yay! she's home!!!!! beautiful reunion! i'm so sorry for all the things that have happened to you, i hop you are recovering quickly as well as your dad and grandfather. get well soon!

Author's Response:

Life is basically back to normal on my end now which is good, but for a while there, fic had to take a back seat to all the crazy going on. On the plus side it gave me an idea for a fic that I think I'm going to start working on soon!

Thanks for your support, reading, reviewing and sticking with me!!!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Eighteen

great begining! can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks :) The next chapter is just waiting for my beta to approve it :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Charlie

:) Charlie took it all really well!!! Renee will be a different story i'm sure ;) Em being bested twice in one night...awesome!...lol

Author's Response:

I thought everyone would love to see that these angsty kids can have some fun too...  I'm putting the next chapter in the beta queue in a few minutes. You should have it soon :)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Volterra Changed

what the heck did Nessie say to Jane????? Freaking Bella needs an intervention!

Author's Response:

She needs something....that's for sure! Somethings coming ;) thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 No Longer a Lamb

love Nessie's gift. Edward must be freaking out about now......

Author's Response:

Edward is kinda overwhelmed at the moment and not quite sure how to handle all this.. but you'll find that out in Cause and Effect, which went into the valildation queue today :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Two Strands

they have to be a team or it won't work, i hope Jane brings all of Volterra to help

Author's Response:

Exactly!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- Renee and Phil

see he so confused was funny....Awww Jacob is in trouble now...lol

Author's Response:

Jacob is in big trouble now... you better beleive it ;)

More coming soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Love at Long Last

Evil! Evil cliffy....lol! I'm so glad they are back together. It's so sweet how he didn't want to part from the Volvo! Can't wIt for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Awww thanks for reading and reviewing!

The next chapter is going in the queue in a few minutes!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Italy

love this, can't wait to read more!!!, Edward's gonna be crushed when Kate tells him that LIE about Bella.....i hope Bella not in too much danger now.....

Author's Response:

Crushed doesn't begin to cover it... you'll get to read it as soon as I'm able to finish it :) I'm about 2/3rds of the way through Edward's side of the story :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The Volturi

i don't trust him........Bella better keep her wits about her.

Author's Response:

lol... who would??? it's Aro after all ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Growing Pains

i can't wait to see how she will get away from Aro.......Does Alice know??????

Author's Response:

That will be interesting... and I can't tell you if Alice knows or not... Edward will tell you all about that ;)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Newborn

See, they're already trying to trick her, she needs to leave ASAP. I'm sure she's strong enough to do it. Or will the Cullens find her 1st

Author's Response:

Are they? Or did they really not think through the consiquences of their decision? Was it a harmless, well-intentioned mistake?

We shall see ;)

More coming soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

Are they? Or did they really not think through the consiquences of their decision? Was it a harmless, well-intentioned mistake?

We shall see ;)

More coming soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 




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