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Bedtime Story by love-tart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 309]
Summary:

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Two strangers, one kiss.

Since this would probably be the only time I’d ever get to kiss this gorgeous creature, I decided to make the most of it... 

A chance meeting + a slightly devious plan =  Happily ever after?

Not your average bedtime story, this is the tale of Bella and Edward.

**Thank you so much to the amazing Readergoof for making both of those gorgeous banners up there! Perfection! **


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 98200
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2012


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

she's about as dumb as a box of rocks.....how did Edward date that????

 
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Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

glad he didn't just drop the obvious attraction between them!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great beginning! damn that kiss was hot!!!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i love how they are together :) i hope no one will try to come between them

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

lol....love feisty Bella!

Author's Response:

Yeah, she can be fiesty. LoL. Thank you so much for this review and all of the others, I appreciate them so much!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

oh my! *fans self* hot, sweet, steamy and tender.....man i'm jealous...lol. about the revenge, i gotta think about this for a bit....but i'll let you know ;)

Author's Response:

Thank so much! and yes, please let me know! LOL. I'm still concocting that part :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

she's trying to kill him...lol

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

whew! no wonder she's tired....lol, thank goodness no interruptions

Author's Response:

Yay for no more interruptions! LoL. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

damn, that boy knows just what to say...i'm melting over here...lol and Ew! James and Victoria..drama and trouble rolled into one!

Author's Response:

LoL @ drama and trouble rolled into one. I love it! LoL. Thanks so much for taking the time to be such a faithful reviewer, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Whew! Friday night will be hot and mind blowing......lol! I love that they are so comfortable with each other already

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy that you're continuing to enjoy my little endeavor :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love this story :). 8 can't wait for the next chapter. Will there be any angst? I just wanna prepare myself, just in case......

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! there is *possible* angst coming up, but not in the next chapter. I think you can guess what flavor the next will be :) (Psstttt. It's citrus) Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good im glad they get along . i can't wait till he tells her his feelings

 
Hearts in Pain by Tess84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary:

AU/AH. What would have happened if there had been no supernatural forces at work in Forks? Bella Swan moves to the tiny Washington town to live with her father. There she meets Edward Cullen and they fall in love. Their relationship is cut short when Edward moves from Forks, but he is leaving behind more than he knows... Will they ever see each other again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 167647
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: 27 - The Morning After

omg, great story, i couldn't stop reading all day!.....i'm so glad they got back together and are gonna be a real family now. 

 
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Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: 28 - A Family Holiday

awww, Christmas blessings.....very nice.  glad Charlie is coming around. 

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: 29 - New Year, New Dreams

i hope the offer will lead to bigger and better things.....will they think about a wedding soon???

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue - A Fairytale Ending

:D  I hope you do a sequal!  great job

 
That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1077]
Summary:

That Girl

 

Summary: Bella told Edward in Eclipse that she wasn't that girl...but what if she was? 

It has been four and a half months since Edward Cullen left Bella Swan.  Abandoned by friends and family, she has been left to pick up the pieces of her life alone.  Desperate and with no other options, she seeks out the one man she believes can help her: Carlisle Cullen.

Set in New Moon and beyond.  Characters may be a little OOC.  Rated M/R for Language, Adult Concepts, and Lemons.  Romance with some Angst & Humor. Canon Pairings.  Edward/Bella 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 158902
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: August 01, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45-- The Truth

whew, Charlie's a tough nut to crack....but glad he came around

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32--Unknown Factor

wow, didn't expect that!  but what if Edward bites her and adds more venom, then can she change?



Author's Response:

NJDevil30718,

Thank you for your rating and review!

Glad I surprised you a bit! We'll have to wait and see...those Cullens are pretty crafty critters! :)

Shay

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33--Choices

poor Edward, i know that has to be killing him :( temporary sadness though, they will have a wonderful eternity together



Author's Response:

NJDevil30718,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing!

Yes, you are right, it is killing him.  But Edward has grown up some and his inner-man will come through in the end.  And these two were always meant to have eternity together!  Yes, there were! :)

Shay

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45-- The Truth

Great ending, cant wait fir the sequal!!!

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34--Transition

was her transformation more painful then normal beacuse of Renesmee's anti-venom????? 



Author's Response:

NJDevil30718,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing,

Actually I'm not decided on that one!  I think that the transition is painful no matter what.  But it is certainly possible that the fight in Bella's body could have made it more excruciating!

Shay

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35--Going Vampy

i see some future ass kicking for Emmett.....lol and i think Jazz might just be as overprotective of his sister as Edward is.



Author's Response:

NJDevil,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing!

LOL!  I think you may be right!  Emmett will definitely get his...but I'm going to make y'all wait for it! :D

Jazz is as loyal to his family as Rose is...possibly even more!  I am a huge fan of Jasper! 

Shay

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36--Taking Care of Baby

i would love to see her go hunting with Emmett, but i don't think Edward would trust him just yet......lol



Author's Response:

NJDevil,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing!

LOL! I didn't write a hunting scene with Em, but you are making me wish that I had!  That would have been too funny! There are some insights into Emmett's hunting habits in the next chapter though! :)

Shay

 
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37--A Bear of A Vamp

a vampire bear....too funny...only Emmett!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39--Field Trip

what happened to Charlie????? Victoria????? the wolves better back off, that's still Bella's father and Renesmee"s grandfather. Bella and her family get to help too

Author's Response:

MountainLion718,

:) thank you for reading, rating, and reviewing!

Yikes! Charlie...it shall be revealed.  And the wolves...I won't lie, they are a pain in the arse in this story! LOL!

Shay

 




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