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Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
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Summary:

 

She waited with bated breath for each post card she would receive.  Each month it would come from a different locale.  Each time she would hope that it would bring her news that he was headed back to her and to all of the dreams that he sold her.

 

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 19337
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2011 Updated: January 08, 2012


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

oh my! not good, not good at all! when he realized it, right then and there he should have come clean, of course she's gonna feel betrayed, hurt and foolish. i can't wait to see how he'll clean up this mess

Author's Response:

Yes, Edward made quite a mess of things, didn't he?  Thank you for taking the time to review.  I hope to have part 3 up in a week or so.  Thanks again & here is the teaser I promised

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The last two months had been a tornado of unexpected events.  Events that had completely changed my future.  Gone was the naïve shy girl from northwestern Washington, instead a confident and on my way to being worldly woman sprung in to take her place.  I wasn’t sure where this new persona had been hiding, but I sensed that she’d been inside me all along, just waiting for the right moment to break free of the chains that I had shackled myself to.   

When I got a call from Alice a week after Edward had broken my heart into smithereens, I thought it was a joke.  She dialed into my office line direct, a number I’d never given Edward.  When she told me who she was, I almost hung up on her thinking she was calling to make excuses for her brother.  Instead she promised not to even breathe his name until I gave her permission.  And as of yet, I never had.

We’d had lunch later that week and the bomb that fell out of her mouth, sent my world spinning off axis and the shrapnel flying into every aspect of my life. 

 

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3 - Conclusion

yay, a HEA! it was close there for a while, i thought she was not gonna cave. but true love can't be extinguished....right :)

p.s. btw I was cracking up when you said Edward was wearing Kenneth Cole Shoes....I work for Kenneth Cole in our NJ office :)

Author's Response:

OF course. I couldn't leave these two without a HEA - just not in my blood really.

Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts.  I wrote Kenneth Cole because my hubs has a pair and they are kind of distinctive looking.  I figured after a year in the fashion industry, Bella would be able to tell.  LOL

THanks again!
Xo

M.

 
Summary:

Bella is happy with a fulfilling career and great friends. What more
could she ask for? Nothing, at least until her cousin decides to take matters
into her own hands. And Bella is fighting to win the heart and love of
eligible Bachelor Edward Cullen.    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9818
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2011 Updated: July 23, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it! great job!! :D

 
Summary:

This was my entry for The Lemonade Stand's Lyrics and Lemons Contest. I received an "Honorable Mention Award" :) Thank you to everyone who read, reviewed and/or voted. I love my readers!

 

How would one answer the question, "Are you gonna kiss me or not?"

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5630
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2011 Updated: August 27, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Are You Gonna Kiss Me or Not?

Beautiful! But I'm crying like a baby! So sweet and sad at the end, but great job!

Author's Response: Hi bb! I'm so glad you liked it!! Sorry to make you cry :( thanks for reading and reviewing! xoxoxoxo!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are both finishing the same graduate program, and have been friends for 5 years.  Of course, Bella is in love with Edward, but won’t tell him because she thinks there’s no way he would be interested in anything but friendship.  During a particularly difficult week in April, when he shows up to help her move, she discovers the truth about her good friend Edward.

Three-chapter fic written for Fandom for Storm Relief, to benefit the victims of the April and May 2011 tornadoes. 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 11719
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2011 Updated: August 29, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome beginning! so Edward's a vamp.....Bella is suspicious and he seems totally fine being near her.....love it

Author's Response:

Glad you're liking the story so far!  Edward and Bella have been friends for 5 years, and they've been around each other pretty much daily for that time,  So by now he is used to being near her and has become "desensitized." 

Next chapter will be up soon!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is what they call the calm before the storm.....right?

Author's Response:

(*laugh*)  You are a master of word play :-)  I suppose if you put it that way, then yes, it is definitely the calm before the storm!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great ending!!! loved it! you put so much into 3 chapters, wonderful job!!!

 
Summary:

After nearly a year, Bella finally finds a number for the Cullens in Ithaca, New York. A last minute invitation to a reunion bash at Mike Newton's, though, leaves Bella drunk, alone, and holding a cell phone. Will a stupid mistake bring them together?  Can what started with a drunk dial lead to a happy ending?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7709
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2011 Updated: September 03, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: At Wits End

I hope they can help heal her, but I'm glad that Charlie is open to having them back in her life.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Say No to Mike Newton

that was so sad! poor Bella, wonder if Carlisle will make an appearance?

 
Summary:

Banner

 

Incredible Banner by readergoof...she even found a white bikini!!  Thank you!!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

 

 

 

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 57554
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

why's everyone upset????? he's so happy......don't rain on his parade!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

great ending, but it sucked that he couldn't find her for 6 months!....i'm so happy they are back in the Bahamas

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lure of a White Bikini

Great beginning! That should be one week of fun for them and hopefully healing ;)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Take Two

i'm so glad they reconciled! i hope he does go get her after the 2 weeks

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

i;m glad they're near each other but he's being way too cocky, she's been hurting for 9 months, throwing up and crying and he's the one that asked her for space, now he tricked her into going to the same place, and acting very full of himself . i don't blame her for stalking off....i know she lied to him and that started it all, but 2 wrongs don't make a right......

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

:( i hope they can reconcile soon. absence makes the heart grow fonder.....so we'll see....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

omg, it was all set up! i don't blame him for being mad! and i know Bella loves him too but you can't start a relationship with lies! hopefully they can work it out

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

hope he gets his ring back!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

this might end u filling the emotional need too!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

glad they are getting along so well, but what's with the phone call, what deal is she talking about. Alice knows about it too. i hope it has nothing to do with Edward......

 
Always Mine by seh314 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Bella Swan has a past that she tried to change. Along the way, she lost a friendship. Now, eight years later, she's a third grade teacher at Forks Elementary. When a new student arrives on the first day of school, Bella's world is changed entirely.

New friendship, possible love, and a reunion that makes her realize what she had really missed out on.

(Any similarities to true events, past or present, are merely coincidental)

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 5796
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2011 Updated: November 25, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: First Day of School

omg, i'm gonna cry! she gave her up??? does Edward even know??

Author's Response:

Hey! I recognize you from my last fic! Thanks for reading! ;)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

good beginning.....see, all it takes is 1 time. what's she gonna do?

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: All About Me

oh wow, so emotional....how is Bella gonna get thru this....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Parent/Teacher Conferences

so we have 2 major bitches in this story.....sheesh! is Leah so insecure that Reneesme's drawing is a threat???? unfeeling bitch! and Bella's gonna make me cry....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Donuts For Dads

*sniff* i know this is killing her little by little......

 
Summary:

When Edward meets the girl of his dream, will the differences between them pull them apart or draw them together? 

Written for the Opposites Attract Contest.

Thank you to the lovely TwistedIn_ who made me this banner.

 

And thank you to everyone who participated in the Opposites Attract Contest.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9960
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2011 Updated: September 23, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Miles To Go

loved it! Edward didn't disappoint! so true that opposites attract!

 




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