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Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
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Ideal romance only happens in the movies.  If Bella could just go off-script, she might find that perfection exists within the most obvious flaws.  ExB, AH.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9174
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: June 23, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, loved it!!!! Em is so smart ;)

Author's Response:

 

Thanks, mountainlion!  I often get frustrated with how Emmett is portrayed in fics: as a big guy with more muscles than brains.  I really wanted to write him differently.  He and Bella are good friends, but he's just objective enough to tell her what she needs to hear.

Thank you for reading, and for leaving a review.

Serendipitous/MeilleurCafe

 

 
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Thank you to ArtBeats+Life for the banner!

 

Written for Smut University's Back to School Fundraiser 2010.

 

Continued for SU's Back to School Fundraiser 2011.

Bella spends her summer cleaning houses and daydreaming about a certain green-eyed client she'd like to perform naughty fantasies with.


Thirty Dirty Days

It's going to be thirty days of smut. Thirty days of dirty, dirty cleaning. Thirty days of wild fantasies. All leading up to that one final conclusion we missed out in the original OS: Bella and Real Life Edward gettin' it on.

The conclusion will be submitted into PTB's Back to School Fundraiser Summer 2011 Yearbook. If you're interested, all you have to do is donate a minimum of $5, and you will not only receive my OS, but one shots from many authors around the fandom. For more information visit: www.projectteambeta.com

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 34565
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2011 Updated: January 17, 2012


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Thirty Dirty Days--Day 1

boy, that girl and her imagination....lol

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Daydreams of a Housekeeper (One-Shot)

:D what a way to get caught... Lol. Great job!!

 
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Summary: Bella is a disillusioned cheerleader who jumps off a cliff into the churning water below and gets more than she bargained for when she's saved by the man who's been waiting in the wings. Popularity doesn't always equal happiness. AH, Lemons

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7503
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2011 Updated: June 24, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In the Wings: a One-Shot

great story! loved it! popularity isn't everything......

 
Summary:

An R/K RPF fic set during the filming of New Moon. Written for arden8283's birthday.

Thank you to the gorgeous TwistedIn_ for making this banner for me.


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3941
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2011 Updated: June 29, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Teasing Rob

hot and sweet! great job!

 
Summary:

Isabella an assistant to a high society lawyer, Edward, seems so meek and innocent. But after her 9-5 Isabella works at a tattoo studio, inking people who only know her Bells. What happens when Edward, drunk and out with friends on New Year's Eve, decides to blow off some steam and runs in to the ink covered and pierced Bells?

Night and Day (Banner created by ginnyweasley)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7076
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2011 Updated: June 26, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Night and Day

Awesome one shot!!!! Loved it!!!

 
Caravan Shaker by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
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One night, a birthday, a wrap party, and a trailer.

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
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Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5886
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2011 Updated: June 30, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Caravan Shaker

Great one shot! Always wondered about Jackson and Ashley..... Hmmmm.... Lol!

 
Evolve by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
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Three intense and perplexing sexual encounters over four frustrating years. Is he the enemy, or is there a message in his seemingly hateful words? Will their mutual desires ever align? Have they evolved enough to be ready this time?

***SECOND PLACE WINNER*** 'I'm With the Band' Anonymous OneShot Contest.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8305
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2011 Updated: July 02, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Evolve

Great job!!!! Congrats on 2nd place!

Author's Response: Thank you! BB xx

 
Summary:

Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of The Wedding Photographer, which was originally a one-shot.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 138398
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2011 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Double Dating

:) they needed the fluff ...lol. Mike did very well for himself ;)

Author's Response:

Oh yes, some happiness was long overdue for them.  And I'm glad you liked Mike.  It was fun to turn him into a decent guy.  ;)

Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Finally

great job! they share the same line of thinking ;) can't wait for the rest of the weekend!

Author's Response:

Normally I try to reply to reviews before the next chapter posts, but my VB was extra speedy this time!  Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it!  glad you liked the chapter, and hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of their weekend together.  

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

too bad we can't make the frisbee time into reality in video form....*sigh* dare to dream...lol great chapter!

Author's Response:

No kidding!  You have no idea how many times I thought that while I wrote the scene.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter!  Thanks for taking the time to review!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - On Edge

someone is definitely messing with her...Edward should come up with something on one of those 2 people...i hope

Author's Response:

Edward's definitely working his hardest to find out who it is.  You know he'll do whatever he can to take care of Bella. 

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed
Date: November 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

Esme is a trip....lol! love their time together :)

Author's Response:

I really am having fun with Esme.  Glad you're enjoying her, too.  Thanks for the nice review!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Coming Together

very nicely wrapped up :) i can't believe it's almost the end.......i'm glad Bree is being helped

Author's Response:

Glad you like the way the story is wrapping up and that Bree is getting help.  Yeah, it is hard to believe this is almost the end, it has gone really fast and I'm going to miss this E&B.  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece

whew, thank goodness! Bree has to be watched, she might hurt herself.....

Author's Response:

Yes, Bree will get the help she needs.  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Answers

holy crap, holy crap, holy crap!!!! the bitch is mental! Bella i hope you had the phone on or the record button on....... and shoot the pepper spray NOW!

Author's Response:

Yeah, Bree is pretty disturbed.  And no, Bella's phone is across the room in her purse.  She does have the pepper spray though ...

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Fortunate

awww! what a sweet proposal! great job!!! :)

Author's Response:

So glad you liked the proposal.  I had such fun with it!  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Brunch

great chapter, loved her meeting eveyone as Edward's girl :)

Author's Response:

I think it went pretty well.  It was a bit nerve-wracking for Bella, but she did really well, and everyone loved her.  :)

Thanks for the review!  I really appreciated it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Soon

hope no one gets their hands on those pics! so nice that even if they're busy they can still make time for each other

Author's Response:

I know! Wouldn't that be bad?  Yikes!  And yes, they both made the effort to make sure that they have time for each other. 

Thanks for the nice review! I really appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

love the fluff....but what's up with Bree???

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it.  And you're just going to have to wait and see what's going on with Bree.  :) 

Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Epilogue - Full Circle

great job!!!! :) loved the future take and all the info on everyone!

Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed the way the story wrapped up. I didn't want to drag it out, but I thought you might enjoy the little glimpses into everyone's lives.

Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it! 

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: The Wedding Photographer

He should buy Esme a nice gift for hooking him up...lol

Author's Response:

Lol!  He really should.  He owes her big time!  Thanks for the review.  I appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope

so emotional, thank goodness for Edward and his soothing, comforting loving. i'm leaning more towards Bree because of the photos and the necklace. we'll see.......

Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.  Yes, Bella desperately needed Edward right then. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Question and Answer

great chapter, and they got the whole 'past' issue out of the way :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.  Yep, the talk about their pasts is out of the way and they can move forward. 

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday )

what an awesome birthday :) it's so much easier when your whole family gets along with your other half

Author's Response:

I know!  Such a fun day for all of them, Edward especially.  And yes, it really does.  My husband gets along so well with my family and it's a really wonderful thing. Thanks for the nice review!

 




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