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Summary:

Edward and Bella share a class at the University of Washington-and not much else. She's shy and reserved as she adjusts to her new life in Seattle. He's angry and isolated because of his upbringing in LaVerrot, a secretive, gated community. They're drawn together, but secrets of her past, and revelations of his pure lifestyle, threaten to keep them apart.

There is mention of sexual abuse and rape in this story. Please avoid if this is a trigger.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 95 Completed: No Word count: 618155
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2011 Updated: February 02, 2013


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Sealed Without a Kiss

please let him have gotten there in time!, now Cheney is gonna freak about more injuries to his body.....

Author's Response: Hi again. Edward got there in time to shut down the mechanism, but Bella was "out" from her fall. hmmmm. Cheney will definitely have a shit fit when he sees a bloody Edward emerge from the greenhouse. Thanks for reading, sweets. <3 Deanna

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 60: With All That I Am

somebody needs to lock up Cheney and throw away the key......i hope Edward being treated at the hospital has tainted him in Cheney's eyes so now maybe he'll 'off' himself since he has no purpose in life anymore....

Author's Response: Hi, sweets. I'm a little delayed in getting to these review replies out. I agree that Cheney needs to be put away for good, but conventional laws don't apply to him, unfortunately. He will get what's coming to him, though. Don't worry. --- Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~~ <3 Deanna

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Tanya

wow, TPOV was very helpful, so it's more the just Cheney trying to kill Bella, but how did they find out about Bella.......? BD1 was awesome, Charlie, Emmett and Jasper were a riot. Bella's varying stages of health were alarming (how did they do they???) but her final transformation gave me chills (good ones)

Author's Response:

Eleazar found Bella... more on that later.

Cheney had her investigated, but his information was incomplete. Heidi told Cheney Bella went to Student Health (we didn't spell that out) and he got into her medical records (very much against the law).

I loved Charlie in BD. He was at his very best. I couldn't believe how awful Bella looked (matched the pictures in my mind). She looked awesome as a vampire.

 

Thanks!

carolanne

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 64: This Isn't Over

Bella shouldn't be left alone for any amount of time before she's released. i'm so glad she'll be staying at Edward's

Author's Response: Hi, sweets. Thanks for taking the tiime to review. Don't worry, Edward will be by her side. Her safety is first and foremost in his mind. He has shown that over and over and over. --- see ya soon. Deanna

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Full Disclosure

Carlisle needs to be told all this. they have to put a plan in action

Author's Response:

Carlisle will be advised of everything they know... it's full disclosure from here on out. A plan is forthcoming!

 

thanks,

carolanne

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Speculation

i'm not sure about the 'mafia' aspect but maybe they think they are a higher power like the Lumenati? so now do they just sit and wait till Aro shows up???? and will psycho Cheney be in tow?

Author's Response: Hi, sweets. -- I'll tell you that Aro's affiliations are far more sinister than the mafia. They will not just sit and wait for Aro. They'll try to figure out exactly what is going on and who is involved. They'll have another visitor long before Aro arrives -- Tanya. Should be interesting. --- As always, thanks for reading. xoxo Deanna

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Weary and Wary

i hope they can get some good info off that phone!!! please let Edward get some much needed rest, he can't function on all cylinders properly if he's exhausted. Happy New Year and have a wonderful time in Disney!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. They will be able to get some really good info from the phone. And Edward will FINALLY get a little shut eye. I'm packing for the trip today... hitting the road tomorrow. Thanks for the well wishes and HAPPY NEW YEAR! ---- xoxo Deanna

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Circle of Friends

Bella had some great thoughts, i wonder if Em will find anything. that's a really scary thought if Aro's people are waiting for a signal. and what about Phil, he's so "Team Cheney" he could cause big problems for all of them

Author's Response:

Edward was impressed with Bella's revelations, too. You are right about Phil. He could be a real problem if someone doesn't make him "see the light.". Thanks for your continues support. xoxo

Deanna

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Burning Up

touch and go there for a minute!!! but now all the vamp is purged outta him! I can't believe it's almost over...A-MAZ-ING

Author's Response: All the vamp is gone! We were going for a reverse transformation. You've been with us for a very, very long time and we appreciate your patience and all of your reviews. We'll have an epilogue up in a few weeks to tie together some loose ends. georgiaedwardlover of georgialion (bpov)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 95: A New Beginning

awesome ending!!!! thank you both so much for writing this, it was well worth the wait between chapters. BRAVO on your edge of your seat, detailed wonderful story. Take a bow, you deserve it!

Author's Response: awwww. Thanks so much, mountainlion718. You've been with us a LOOOONG time and we appreciate your support of Pure Revelations. I'm so glad you were happy with the ending. Expect an epilogue to tie up all the loose ends... until then, xoxoxo---- Deanna (ilovealion)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Mutual Trust

i'm so glad he told Carlisle everything! what's up with only Bella and Edward healing so fast??? i can't believe they went all that time living there and never questioned anything being in their names!!!! now who is outside with Edward and Carlisle, i know it's not Cheney, cause all hell would have broken loose!

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving us some love, sweets. Just so you know, only Edward shows signs of fast healing - Bella's cuts and bruises are still very evident and healing at a normal rate. The visitor has some results in hand. Ruh-Roh. Xoxo. Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time, where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Didyme, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4122
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2011 Updated: April 22, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

i love E's POV! is the isolation room just for 1 day?

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter!  No, Rose will stay in the isolation room until she comes to her senses.  In other words, she will be in there for a while.  Thanks for the review and rating!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Age Begins

good begining, good luck, can't wait to read the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you enjoy my story and thanks so much for the review and rating!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: He Picked Me

Rose looks like she'll be spending a lot of time in that room......

Author's Response:

Yes, it takes Rose a while to come around to the Twilight way of thinking.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

 
Cullen's Anatomy by LisaDawn75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 394]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a down on her luck, single mom whose son suffers from an extreme medical condition. Edward Cullen is a medical student who is assigned to help Bella and her son find affordable medical care as an ethics project. Needless to say, he's not too happy about the assignment as he would prefer to focus on what he feels is important, and Bella is not thrilled with a snobby medical student butting into her life. Will they be able to get along so Edward can get his project done and Bella's son the medical attention he needs, or will they end up hating each other on the way?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 52297
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2011 Updated: September 11, 2012


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

omg! ....lol, that was evil! but i'm so glad she trusts him that much and is letting him in :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hmmm, hard to tell, it might start off well and he may even be able to help, but that big fat foot of his might end up in his mouth and her temper might get the best of her.....

Author's Response:

Hehe...yes, that foot of his will probably be a problem! Chapter three will be up today! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He coming out of the woodwork now??? He has to want something or maybe James parents want to see Matt

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so happy she got a job, i'm glad she held her temper when Edward offered the scrubs, he's only trying to help not make her feel inept

Author's Response:

Yes, she's learning to accept help graciously. We'll see how things go! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hope they can find out how to treat Matt properly. Good, I'm glad Charlie can see the 'looks' between them :). Come on Bella, take a chance! Like he said, your not an assignment anymore....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

:) i'm glad they understand each other and that things didn't end tense

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good beginning! wonder what's with the apt?

Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter 2 will show you what shocks Edward abou the apartment and I just posted it. I hope you enjoy it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I can't believe you stopped right there...lol! Meanie!!!! ;). That was a wonderful 1st date!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So excited to get this update! i hope Edward can sway Bella to give them an honest chance. something's gotta happen to trigger an epiphany for her to see that they are right for each other and that he will be good for Matt.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh no! why is that scumbag doing that!!!??? she's gonna freak......

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He coming out of the woodwork now??? He has to want something or maybe James parents want to see Matt

 




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