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Penname: mountainlion718 [ Contact]
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Member Since: June 24, 2009
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Summary: One Christmas, Alice and Rosalie invite Bella to join them and their boyfriends on a vacation at Lake Tahoe. Little does Bella know that Emmett and Jasper have cajoled Edward into going along as well. Will it be a Christmas to Remember or a Christmas they both wish to forget?
Rating due to Emmett's and Rosalie's foul language and lemons.
Part II (Fool Me Once, Fool Me Twice) has started. I cannot disclose the summary because it may give away the ending to the first part.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed 
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue: I Hate Christmas Parties (v)
Nope! Don't feel sorry for him AT ALL! I'm glad Em wouldn't tell him anything.....jerk! ( just don't hook Bella up with Mike.... Ok?)
Author's Response: LOL. Well, if you don't feel sorry for Edward, and you don't want her to hook up with Mike, who should I hook her up with then? heehee.
Thanks for being a faithful reviewer :)
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: It Never Got this Good (v)
freaking Alice and her constant cock blocking! but finally :) yay, i hope they continue their relationship after they leave Author's Response: Alice IS the ultimate cockblocker. As for the latter, we'll see ;)
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Springtime Feelings (v)
love Rose's idea! but i don't think they'll be faking anything...lol! no they didn't kiss too soon! Author's Response: Will they or won't they be faking it? We will see. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Burning Embers (v)
Good job on the lemon! I hope it was convincing enough for Alice. Or was Rose setting them up knowing what would happen...hmmmm
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed
Date: November 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Part II: Prologue (v)
NOW? now the little voice is talking to him??? where the hell was it for 3 1/2 years before???? Yes, Edward, why didn't you ask Em for her #???
Author's Response: Because he's a man! Lol. Didn't we have this discussion on twitter? ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing as always :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 1: 6 in 10 (v)
dun, dun, DUN!!!! lol....good, maybe his arrival will throw a HUGE monkey wrench into that (yuck) engagement........Hey Alice, if you need any co-conspirators, let me know, i'll help ya! ;)
Author's Response: LOL. I don't think Bella would appreciate any more co-conspirators ;)
thanks for reviewing, as always :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed
Date: December 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 3: Telling Myself (v)
good, keep showing up Mike Edward. and Bella keep comparing....cause you know right now you have the short end of the stick (with Mike....yuck)
Author's Response: Aww. Mike's not that bad ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing as always :)
Summary: An in canon retelling of Breaking Dawn from the perspective of the thoughtful and pensive Edward.
Time passed, and I was blissfully unaware. I existed only in this moment with her. Hope burgeoned deep within me as I gazed at the sleeping enchantress. She was my salvation… my reason for carrying on what I had once believed to be a pointless and cursed existence. Through Bella’s love, I was redeemed. Through her, I’d finally found the peace that had eluded me for so many years. And so it was here, in our bubble, that I remained for as long as time permitted. Lulled into a state of relaxation by the steady pounding of Bella’s heart, and the rhythmic crashing of the waves.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 34486
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2010
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: March 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Distractions, Part I
great job on Edward's POV! love the way his mind works
Summary: Bella and her friends love the rodeo, and rodeo cowboys. But they know they can't get too involved. A traveling cowboy's "mistress" always calls him away. Now the man who taught her this hard lesson is back, and determined to make it up to her. "For My Valentine" contest entry
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12407
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: February 07, 2009
Summary: It's really hot out, and Bella takes a dip to cool down, a la naturale. Edward has no choice but to join. One-shot lemony zest, vampireEdward.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5325
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2009 Updated: February 12, 2009
Summary: 
A Final Nominee @ 
Edward Masen was changed in the early nineteenth century (1817) by Carlisle Cullen in England. Later on, he separated himself from the Cullens and moved to Washington, USA.
Bella Swan’s parents die in an accident, and she has to move to the small, village-like homestead township of Forks Prairie with her uncle, Charles Swan. Fate brings her to Edward’s doorstep, and the dreaded monster rears its ugly head. Will she survive the monster?
THIS STORY IS ON A HIATUS TILL JULY 2010.
NOTE- This story is getting updated over at FF.net as well. You can visit there if want to - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4900151/1/
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 119711
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2010
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
wow, awesome story, i've been glued since the 1st chapter. Bella dosen't seen like she will be all that accepting of Edwards lifestyle if she finds out. would Edward let her leave if she couldn't handle it or would he change her
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
how will she take the news that he is an immortal vamp.....it just seems the way she is, it will be very bad
Summary: Bella Swan, a young registered pharmacist from New Jersey, takes a job in the Forks, WA Regional Hospital, determined to start her life over. She meets the handsome, brooding Edward Cullen, who also works in the hospital's pharmacy...but on the night shift, of course.
Will Edward be able to control his agonizing thirst for Bella's blood? How will the emotionally wounded Bella react to her increasing attraction to him? Can Jacob be effective as a minor, if consequential, character? And most important, can Serendipitous refrain from the gratuitous use of hokey questions to attract readers?
Huge thanks to the talented and generous Anne Cullen for the banner!
Canon pairings; the Cullens are still vampires. Edward's and Bella's ages are advanced to their early-mid 20s, to give them more adult sensibilities. Other than that, the story parallels "Twilight," with some new adventures in line with the characters' ages and situations. The chapters alternate between Edward's and Bella's POV. While it's not a *funny* version of "Twilight," there are definite sparks of humor in it.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 206646
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2010
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Edward, Chapter 11
awesome story,! will James be the reason Edward changes Bella or are you going to go the "New Moon" route. you have me hooked on this story Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the story. I can tell you I *definitely* won't be going the New Moon route; I couldn't stand to write all that angst. But I don't want to give anything else away; the next chapter is almost done.
Thank you for leaving the review, too. Are you a Jersey girl? I've lived in New Jersey my entire life.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the story. I can tell you I *definitely* won't be going the New Moon route; I couldn't stand to write all that angst. But I don't want to give anything else away; the next chapter is almost done.
Thank you for leaving the review, too. Are you a Jersey girl? I've lived in New Jersey my entire life.
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Bella, Chapter 12
*sniff* she just about killed me when she said "don't break my heart" i'm so glad that he didn't do more damage to her, but where was the blood from???? Edward better keep his promise and not leave. Author's Response: Hey jersey devil! The blood was from the cuts she endured when she and James crashed through the roof of the maintenance facility. Although they went through feet-first, there was a ton of debris, as well as some ragged edges, from the roof.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed
Date: June 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Edward, Chapter 12
i can't believe he's still considering leaving!!!! oh she is gonna be so pissed, Carlisle should threaten to change her if he keeps insisting on leaving......
Author's Response: Hi mountanlion! Hang in there...you know Edward has to bring his own special angst into every situation. It doesn't necessarily mean he'll take it to the extreme!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed
Date: August 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Bella, Chapter 13
I hope Edward gives in. I really hope he won't even consider leaving anymore, even for her own good, there is way too much love there
Author's Response: Hello mountainlion! I agree with you; there is too much love (and an overall great relationship) between these two, despite their obvious differences. I'm planning to explore that in the sequel.
Thank you for reading, and for leaving the review.
Summary: Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.
Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?
Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011
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