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Real name: Colette Remillard
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I am a mother of 2. I am a part time worker at a school. I LOVE Twilight.
Go Team Edward
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Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed  
Date: October 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Kissed
This is a great story and I can't wait for the rest of the chapters. This is a much different Bella than Twilight as you stated in one of your comments earlier.
I hope you do give Jake a chance in the future. I think that Bella needs to work out with Jacob what happened in order for her to move on with her life fully. In addition, they were lifelong friends and I would hate to see that just disappear (it tears at my heart)! Even if they can't be friends, he should at least be able to give her the full explanation of what happened.
Summary: Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.
Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
First, I was surprised that Edward didn't tell Bella to take a shower before going to the Cullen residence.
Second, I am surprised to find that Alice told her about them "smelling" her.
I can't wait to see where this leads though.
I kinda wish that you could alter the story for them NOT to wait. But I think it adds to the excitement of how they do stop.
Thanks for writing such a GREAT story...don't stop now...
Author's Response: Hopefully that will be explained next chapter.
I kind of answered this on the thread so you might want to check it out.
Have I ever steered you wrong? ;)
Yea I know. I've been called a tease more than once for getting things all heated up and then making them stop. lol.
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: July 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I think it was a very good set up. I can't wait to see what Jasper and Emmett say. Edward's frustration seems quite appropriate and it is interesting to see the take on what he does to prepare for his wedding night. Author's Response: Welcome new reader. :) Nice to hear you like it so far. I've tried to keep as close to cannon as possible with this story so I hope you continue to enjoy it.
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Bella struggles with memories of an Edward that never returned to Forks...
Now a Contributing Story to "The Bella and Jacob Chronicles" !!!
Thank you to DiamondHeart for inviting me to participate, and for creating a place we can count on for quality, positive Bella/Jacob stories. Yay!
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3242
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: August 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thanks for not bringing Edward back. That would have ruined the story you were writing! Author's Response: i agree. it was wonderful to give this to jake and bella, and let it be.
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: August 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
OMG the love!! I love Bella's entries for Edward to read every hour....it's especially neat that she gives him "homework". So "Bella"
Summary: 
Special thanks to mellyfrisco6 for this new and improved banner.
Post Eclipse. Breaking Dawn never happened. Bella and Edward are engaged to be married, but Bella can't seem to ignore the feelings she still has for Jacob. Will she stay with the vampire who broke her heart, or will she run to the werewolf who put it back together?
Coming Full Circle has won praise from The Wolfpack Awards:
MOST SUSPENSEFUL
MOST ORIGINAL PLOT
BEST IMPRINT
Winner of "Most Loved Imprint Character" in the Summer JBNP Awards!
*And special thanks also go out to precioustandi for this banner as well.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 46 Completed: No
Word count: 415372
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: September 24, 2012
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-Two
Erin,
For a filler chapter you sure had a lot going on. Need the next chapter to find out what's up with THIS Jacob. Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I really do appreciate it. I'm excited about the next chapter which will be in Jake's POV. So, I'm hoping you'll like it. Thanks again.
Erin
Summary:  
He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?
OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue in Review
That was an AWESOME story! I like how you used the plots of Stephanie, but with your own twist. Amazing imagination.
By the way, I would like to be you for five days. I think it would be interesting to get in another twilighter's mind that can actually write like this.
GOOD LUCK on future endeavors.
Summary: Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start. With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to. When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes? Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?
Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: May 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
I love this new Bella...can't wait to see where it leads.
Summary:
Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.
All canon couples!
Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38:Twilight
I really have to tell you that this has been my FAVORITE story I have read on Twilighted! The suspense, the surprises, the happy ending. I can't wait for the sequel. I noticed that you finished in Dec 09 and now it is Feb 10. I want to wish you a Happy Few Months with your family and new baby girl. CONGRATS.
Can't wait for the sequel!!
Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Hopefully, this will straighten Edward out so he can face Bella!
Especially if she decides to keep him away!... Author's Response: Keep your fingers crossed!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I thought Alice promised not to say anything? I didn't expect her to run to her family.
I thought she would take off my herself....can't wait to see where this leads!! Author's Response: She did, but I think she realized that this was too important and that it was WAY beyond her depth to do alone. I think that she did the right thing, all things considered.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics
I love the name. As soon as Alice started reading the names, I knew it would be Elizabeth. My daughter's middle name is Elizabeth.
I'm glad he decided on Swan Cullen too. Author's Response: I am so glad you liked the name!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
Will they be naked when they wiggle?? Author's Response: LOL!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Of course, I want more! However, it was a nice tender story. It ended with such a gentleness I felt it in my heart.
I can't wait to read the epilogues!! Author's Response: I truly hope you enjoy them!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Bella makes a painful mistake and must delve into the past in order to save her relationship with Jacob. As the pieces slowly come together she experiences a personal revelation, but will this clarity help her gain Jacob's forgiveness? Bella/Jacob NewMoon
[Banner by the amazing blueandblack (AKA bluesuzanne)! Much love. <3]
[Sort Of Beautiful Award banner made by i_rise_inside.]
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Word count: 29839
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2009
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: September 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love the delving in to Jacob's mom. Puts a whole new look at why Jacob is the way he is with Bella. Wouldn't I like to meet just ONE guy like that!
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: September 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
ohhhh...I wanted them to have a passionate kiss! They were just so meant to be together! THANKS for writing! Author's Response: Aw, sorry I didn't give you a passionate kiss at the end there. I've actually had similar comments from others saying that they wished I'd made J/B jump each others' bones to finish it off. I just couldn't see that happening in this fic, not with all the heavy emotional stuff they both go through. Don't worry, though, there's a one-shot from me that's in the queue right now which has some serious bones-jumping going on in it. Stay tuned!
Thanks for the review!!!! <3jo
Summary: 
“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”
Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.
Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?
As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.
** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **
** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **
** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **
Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: May 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Fate's Decision
This was a Great chapter. I love how Edward was able to "release" Bella in front of Jacob and the pack. I also liked how Bella figured out the whole imprinting thing.
Thanks for writing such a good story.
Summary: What if Edward never came back, Alice never saw Bella jump from the cliff, and Jacob had his fair chance with Bella? Bella and her werewolf friends are left to defend themselves against Victoria, and Bella's life lays in Jacob's hands, in more ways than she will ever know.
FYI: Bella x Jake. . . I have read some of the raunchier stories, and I see that many of them are OOC, majorly. Bella and Jake are two inexperienced teenagers. They don't use dirty language, they don't talk nasty to each other, they don't call each other "baby." They are clumsy, they are hormonal, they make mistakes. It is rated NC-17 because there is sex. However, the sexier scenes of this story will be free of vulgarity and nasty words, and will read more like a romance novel than a porn script. Please please please review and let me know what you think!
P.S. Like the banners? Want one, too? Contact me with details [who you want in it, what you want it to say, etc.] and emails! I will make it happen!
I am a member of Project Team Beta. If you would like to join or are seeking help, you can find the info at: http://community.livejournal.com/ptb_twilight/
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 29154
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: November 30, 2009
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: October 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Heart and Soul - Bella
AWESOME! I cried right along with Jacob.
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: October 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Heart and Soul - Bella
AWESOME! I cried right along with Jacob.
Summary:
When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins. He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own. This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction. Can they find their way back to each other? And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?
HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No
Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: 1999 - Camping Trip
That was a nice way to get Edward to Kiss Bella. We know it would have taken the whole story otherwise!! Author's Response: LOL! If they had ever gotten up the nerve.....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - The Truth
I am so glad that Bella decided to talk! I don't like the way she has been toying with Edward - being nice one minute and then walking out on him the next. I feel it in MY heart.
Thanks for writing such an emotional story. I can't wait to hear their talk. Although, I have to admit, I'm not sure where it will go. That is what makes this such a good story.....you always have to read on.... Author's Response: No, Bella was not being very nice. She wasn't considering Edward'sfeelings only her own. BUT she has realized that now.. Thanks for the praise, i much appreciate it.
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: February 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - The Whole Truth
I am really glad that Edward stopped before they got carried away. It makes his feelings more real. Keep it up!
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: March 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17- Falling In Love Again
Did you see Remember me???? I haven't yet...how was it?
Your story is going in the right direction as far as I'm concerned!!
Author's Response: Yes- I saw it! It was wonderfu, but sad and I can't stop thinking about it. Actually- I have seen it 3 times! LOL! There is no limit to my Robsession... sigh. Thanks for the review. Hope to get somethinh posted this week. I know it's been awhile. sorry.
Summary: 
Banner made by the lovely my hubby is no edward
What happens when an engaged Bella meets up with her drunken one-night stand at a baseball game after she never thought she'd never see him again? Will she be able to put the past behind her, or will she be lured back into her lust for the sexy and mysterious Jacob Black? For Bella, this is a story about having to examine her life, her actions, and her heart to determine if her future is as clear as she once thought. This is a story about unfaithfulness, commitment, and betrayal. Betrayal can come in many forms, forcing our female lead to realize that she isn't the only one capable of keeping a secret. AH, OOC, Bella/Jacob, Bella/Edward.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 48199
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2010
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Addiction
I really like this story. I would like to see it show more of what Jacob is thinking and what is causing him to "want" Bella. It seems like it should be just sexual, but he definetly is portrayed as really "liking" her. Did something (a conversation not yet mentioned) that set up his whole demeanor of this relationship?
Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed
Date: May 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Open Up, Let Him Inside
I love where this story is going!!
Enjoy your wedding....but don't forget the story for too long.
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