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Penname: romancaholic [Contact]
Real name: Carol Travers
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Dancing With Death by LJGoode Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

Bella Swan is starting her first year as a junior doctor, under the tuition of world renowned Surgical Oncologist Mr Edward Cullen. Obtaining a prestigious clinical rotation on his team, Bella finds herself working in close proximity to her mentor. Sparks fly and attractions deepen , but life isn't all hearts and roses and sometimes our fates are sealed by our choices long before our stories really begin.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8384
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2013 Updated: March 23, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella's getting in deep with her feelings. Wonder what edwrd has up is sleeve. Who or what is engagement might be? Taking care of Bella seems to be what Edward does.



Author's Response:

Yep on both counts...x

 
In Pursuit by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 349]
Summary:

 

In Pursuit by Jenny Cullen & Drotuno

 

A normal night out changes everything for two innocent sisters, who stumble upon something that will change their lives forever. Two brave U.S. marshals have to keep them hidden and keep them safe. How far are they willing to go to do what's right? Are the consequences worth it all?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 251309
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2013 Updated: September 08, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So glad you two are back at storytelling again. Love how this story starts out with a bang and is continuing in the same vein. Edward as a Marshall protecting Marie and Mary along with Jasper. Looking forward to the wild ride of them under Witness Protection.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I have to commend Edward in his strength of resisting his attraction to Bella. Unlike Jasper who has given in fully to his. Which makes his objectivity diminished. Edward really doesn't want to work with anyone else, but Jasper really needs to get his head back to protection rather than physical pleasure and release. This is life and death here not a garden party. Alice isn't much better abandoning her sister in her time of need. She knows her better than anyone else, but her selfish preoccupation with Jasper has led an outsider, Edward to observe Bella's distress.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Exciting chapter with being discovered. Boy did Uncle Al sure get mad and jump all over Peter. Has to protect his family. It's also a chapter we realize Edward is vulnerable to only to Bella, but his past. He's can be hurt physically and was emotionally as well. Dying to know the story behind the Celtic Knot.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Mr Rolex seemed to be extra interested in the witnesses and their new US Marshall's. Ben thinks has a leak, Riley appears to be a prime candidate. On the run again jut after only a few hours of rest or the girls. Can't wait until Sunday on the next installment.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very exciting chapter in all ways. Gun firing and racing through the streets with bullets flying. Steven Seagal type action. Can't wait for hand to hand combat. Bella saving Edward by yelling for him to get down and then shooting at the man coming through the front door. Great scene in the jet bedroom, holding and comforting, then dynamite kiss between Edward and Bella finally. Waiting on bated breath for the next chapter on Sunday. Thanks for the bonus mid-week chapter.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Finally somewhere the girls can stop to take a breath and some down time. Appears both the girls are interested in their guards. Also the guys have noticed and admired them. Opens up a lot of possibilities. Volturi out on the streets isn't a good sign, expected, but not good. Waiting on bated breath for next week's installment. 

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella's breakdown about her hone two fold of devastation. One losing herself and sister's memories with late family photos. Secondly her phone is how they are losing their identities and the reason they ave to leave everything behind.nthat would b hard to handle all the guilt of it being Marie/Bella's fault. Edward was pretty sweet to give them access for as long as they are still hiding. It's almost like losing her parents and grandmother all over again. Leaving the girls completely alone .

 
My Disaster by nijiska Rated: R [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

It's funny how everything can change in a year. Bella calls her sister home to Forks when Charlie gets shot. Amidst all the chaos, Alexa brings a surprise that none of them saw coming. Sequel to My Favorite Accident.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5932
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2013 Updated: October 10, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: My Night With The Masens

Really enjoyed My Favorite Accident and this is tarting out with a bang. A baby Edwards's? Alexa is with Jasper. Esme's remarks about family all add up to heartache for Bella and her Edward.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an A-list actor with horrific taste in clothing. Bella Swan is his long-suffering stylist who wants to strangle him one minute and kiss him the next. When Edward crashes her date, Bella has to choose between dressing her client and undressing the man she loves. 2nd Place Public Winner for the Happily Ever After Twific Contest!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11289
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2013 Updated: April 23, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: (Un)Dressing Edward Cullen

Very enjoyable storyline. Loved the bickering banter between Edward and Bella. Reminds me of the movie "Cutting Edge" where the two major characters banter all the time. Called it foreplay before thy both realized they were in love with each other. Took Bella going on a couple dates with Garrett before Edward made his move and declared him. The makeup sex would be intense.



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply.  I really enjoyed writing this story and I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed it, too.  I had such fun with the bickering banter.  I've never seen "Cutting Edge", I'll definitely have to check it out sometime.  Yeah, Edward definitely got jealous about her going out with Garrett.  They would DEFINITELY have some intense makeup sex.  Rowr!

Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it so much!

 
Given by Shadow Masen Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A hunting trip gone awry has serious consequences for Edward.  A companion to "Another Chance", written from Bella's perspective.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8802
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2013 Updated: May 08, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intriguing vampires getting ill and weak. Looking forward to future chapters to see where this journey will lead.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Angst writer that I am, I needed to know what could take down a vampire.  :) 

 
Summary:

 

For ten years, Edward Cullen has had a secret desire. Isabella Swan is in the business of making fantasies come true. Together, they'll discover more than they ever expected. 1st place winner for Public Vote and Judge's Choice in the LDA anonymous contest.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 25218
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2013 Updated: May 29, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Delightfully evil and delicious story. Loved Edward and his vulnerability in this one.



Author's Response:

Haha, we had fun with it, that's for sure.  So thrilled that you liked Edward's vulnerability.  We really enjoying exploring the dynamic between his strenth and his willingness to be vulnerable.  So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the nice review!

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Both of them felt the connection between them. Both want more. Both have similar interest with regards to the violin. Bella is doubting her current career because of her desire for Edward. Edward want Bella also, but not on a paying method. Neither is willing to cross that invisible line to find a solution together to be together. Both ar distracted and miserable without their connection.



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right about where they both are mentally right now.  They need to get to a point where they realize they want to be together enough to cross the invisible line and make the needed changes.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

 




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