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Summary:

He's a Rodeo Cowboy and she is a local girl. Can they fall in love at the Greatest Outdoor Show on Earth?

Bella Swan knows there is one distinct advantage to living in the city of Calgary Alberta. That advantage is the Calgary Stampede; a summer event that brings her city to life for eleven days every July. With hundreds of things to do it was never boring. You could watch cowboys and cowgirls at the rodeo, ride the rides of the midway, test your skills at the games booths, or watch a spectacular fireworks display. At the Stampede there is something for everyone. This year, Bella’s something comes in the surprising form of rodeo cowboy Edward Cullen. Edward has travelled to Calgary for one purpose – to win the “Richest Ride in Rodeo”, but this year he is about to win something even better.

Neither was looking for the other, but if the timing is just right, the midway can be magical.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 82055
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2012 Updated: October 23, 2012


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Fallout

Edward has already made up his mind, Bella is more important to him than winning any rodeo.  While Bella loves him enough to let him go so he doesn't have to give up what she thinks is his first love rodeo riding broncs.  Little does she know. Edward's family is trying to get his head into the game.  Edward is missing Bella and needs her with him.  Bella refuses to be anywhere near the grandstands to prevent Edward any distractions. She needs the Stampede to get her mind distracted on the midway.  She has refused Alice to join the family.  Edward has left the wild card trials and gone to look for Bella.  Bella is walking on the midway.  Boy is she going to be surprised to learn that she is Edward's #1 priority over everything else in his life.  If she's in his life then everything else will fall into place after that.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Pancakes...and Pills

Very happy Edward showed up to spend the night with Bella. Neither one of them wanted to be apart for the entire night. Too bad neither was thinking completely with their brains though. Edward should have told Bella she didn't need to take the pill after. Even though she didn't want another James' incident, Edward would never have treated her the same. He would have taken the responsibility. Embarrassed for Bella when Esme and Rosalie took to medical trailer. Having to admit in front of boyfriend's mom and sister in law about taking the pill after. Humiliation.  At least Esme and Rosalie left so she could finish the exam in private.  Edward worried and even more upset with himself that she took the medication and it made her ill. Hoping it doesn't mess too much with his head and his ride. Because if it does will make Bella pull back even more thinking his poor performance is all her fault.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Morning After

Sober Edward was reminded to treat the girl he likes correctly.  Treat her like a lady not something to use and discard until the next rodeo.  Great advice from big bro although all of us were probably looking forward to some good Edward and Bella/condom time together.  I guess we would rather see the gradual romance between them.  The heat gradually spiralling upward until the end of the Stampede to find out what Edward and Bella will do when it's over.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - A Day At The Pool

loved Edward playing with the children in the pool.  so cute.  He will make a great dad.  He deserved all the teasing Bella gave him in his room after the teasing in the hot tub with those old men.  Looking forward to the next chapter for hopefully the continuation of the hard sexy cowboy loving and Edward in his bronco riding events.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - What now?

Edward was serious about her moving to Texas, Bella was the one who thought it was too soon.  He wants to try to make a long distance relationship work.  Great job of hanging in there to convince her.  At least being with the other rodeo families she is able to see that it works with others.  The reason Edward made the mental mistake wasn't because of Bella it was because he was angry at his sisters for interferring with his relationship with Bella.  He was concerned that their interference might have planted too many doubts into Bella's mind that might cause his relationship and happiness with Bella to fail.  Even his sisters that morning in the lobby knew that he was pretty upset with them and that could cause him to have a bad ride.  Bella, of course, will take the blame on herself and be another reason to start withdrawing from him.  Which will only cause him more mental anguish to cause harm in future rides.  Edward needs to make her understand what upset him was that his sisters need to butt out of their business.  They need to make the rules and build their relationship and how it will work whether it's in Texas, on the road, or long distance.  Edward won't ride well without Bella being strong in his corner and in his heart.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sneak-a-Peak

The Stampede Days do sound very intriguing and exciting. Being from AZ where ranches are quite common in rural areas, cowboys are common, not rodeo cowboy as a norm.  They do arrive here for the rodeos that float through here.  They are small probably in comparision, but Prescott Days up north is always around the 4th and Payson has them too.  Just a couple small towns here that have their share of events of barrel races, bronco roping, bull wrestling (I have to say I can't remember seeing that one -- that would be exciting to see), also chasing and roping a steer.  You haven't given any clues as to Edward's specialty so hard to choose.  Bronco and Bull riding events are wicked with the cowboys hanging on.  Have seen actual rodeos in Phoenix as well sponsored by Jaycees too.  The events are thrilling to watch.  You have had Bella and Edward bump into each other twice now.  We have Bella's reaction to Edward already.  She's taken by his eyes and gorgeous face already.  Can't wait until she finds out he's Alice's brother.  Looking forward to more midway games, rides, food, rodeo events, etc... during the Stampede Days.  Will Alice invite them to join her family for the parade?  Can't wait for the story to continue.



Author's Response:

Here in Calgary is similar, we have cowboys, but not really a whole lot of Rodeo cowboys. They come out for the Stampede though! Our cowboys are probably more like yours, farmers and ranchers. Calgary is basically in the heart of Canadian Cattle Country, (We actually do refer to ourselves as cow town, and love the nickname). I love the small town rodeos and events too. I was just at one about a half hour out of the city last weekend. You get to see some awesome events in a smaller closer setting. (Not that I don't love the Stampede...cause I totally do). Calgary is pretty big, but by no means the biggest, they just have the most prize money. It's not an actually pro event (not part of the tour that leads to the national finals) it's by invite only, and you compete only for money, not rankings.

I hope you enjoy, and keep reading. I'll get a lot more into the Stampede...specifically the rodeo very soon.

Steer wresting is intense, it's over in about 3-4 seconds, but the cowboy does literally slide off his horse and wrestle the steer to the ground. These cowboys are usually like 6'5 and huge! so Emmett fit perfectly into that event. Riders (Bull, bareback, and saddle bronc) tend to be smaller.

Thanks for the great review, it makes me so happy to see how much you are enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - A Night Out

Talk about a couple of pills, Jessica and Lauren.  If they were hung by a new rope they would still complain.  Are they ever happy about anything?  Have to nikpik ever little detail.  If they didn't want to go to Stampede, expect to get wet, dirty, or experience the country feel, why did they bother going?  It's not the prom, it not's clubbing, what did they expect?  If I was Bella, Angela, or Ben, I would want to get the story from people who are in the know about rodeo events. Besides listening to those Texan drawls all night would make me drool.  Especially coming from that gorgeous green eyed face. Edward riding bareback --- looking forward to that event.  Sounds like Edward's fascination in Bella is getting deeper too as hers is for him.  Emmett sure loosen him up with shots.  Female bartender giving free shots was she hitting on Mr Gorgeous too.  Since Emmett was a married man, must have been Edward.  Wonder how many seconds until Mike and Tyler go flying off the bull.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Late Night

Actually I don't think you were cruel at all, I'm glad it was lemony goodness.  I agree with you neither of them are the one-night stand types.  One or both of them might have regretted going to that extreme when sober.  Bella's hurt face when Edward got up afterwards and put his boxers backon said it all.  She felt like a one-night stand.  Edward wasn't treating her that way, he had already told her outside whether she invited him up or not it wouldn't be the last time they were together.  They had made a connection, they both felt it. Angela encouraged her to go for it.  Along with the other women of the group.  Alice was already encouraging Edward to go for it too. She likes Bella already. The only thing Bella forgot to do was text Angela she got home okay.  Angela's going to be worried about her.  Of course, she'll probably think Bella hooked up with the gorgeous cowboy. Now Alice will wonder about Edward even though she encouraged him to get laid to relax.  Emmett will never let him live it down especially if he's not at the parade and can't be found in his hotel room. Both Alice and Emmett will figure Edward went home and stayed with Bella. Bella has Alice's phone number thanks to Jasper since both girls were pretty bombed.  Glad the drinking helped to loosen Bella up enough to dance and have some fun.  Both she and Edward need to loosen up and have some fun.  She almost opened up and told Edward about her scandal. I am personally appalled that the school district didn't even take her testimony into account about what happened.  Bella has had a lot to endure, she definitely deserves some happiness. A roving cowboy traveling the circuit might be the answer if she gets to travel with him.  It's not like she's has to work and since she's not teaching, she's not doing what she really enjoys.  Looking forward to the next chapter.  What will sober minds and a new day effect Bella and Edward.

 
Summary:

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Petulant little boys, sticky summers, awkward first kisses, sexual awakenings, teenage fantasies, a back seat almost and a challenge... Make me!

Bella and Edward grew up together, annoyed each other, and wanted each other. Edward tried to flush her out of his system with other women, and Bella suffered in silence, believing her best friend would disapprove.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6726
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2012 Updated: July 10, 2012


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S

From the time little Edward was akid he really liked Bella.  Talk about a big tease. Wouldn't admit it was him that really liked Bella had to always make it a Bella thing. Bella you're thinking of me, a little drool at the side of your mouth. Doing anything to get arise lout of her. Any reaction is better than none. As if they were fooling anybody around them, they all knew Edward and Bella had it bad for each other. I'd say it's about time they finally got together. The two of them were about to internally combust into flames. At least now they can burn together in pleasure and eventually in love.



Author's Response:

I see you stumbled upon one of my one shots. Grovey. Glad you enjoyed my little UST fuelled fling. Thanks for reading!

~Jen

 
Summary:

all i want

"Mom," he groaned, his head falling back dramatically and causing his blond mop of hair to bounce lightly with the movement. "I know. I'm not asking for a dog."

"Oh. I see," she replied, surprised. "So, what is it?"

Mikey turned in his seat to look at her with an expression on his face she'd never seen. "A daddy."

Bella's five year old son makes a Christmas wish she'd never expected, and sets her entire world spinning. Written for the Fandom for Preemies 2010 compilation. AH.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 34838
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2012 Updated: January 17, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute and sweet. Little Mikey sure enjoys pushing his mommy.   The groundwork and feelings for Edward and Bella to be together were already established over the last three years. Edward had been in love with Bella for quite a while, it just took Bella a while and Mikey to open her eyes to her feelings. Now Mikey wants a sibling by summer, looks like slowness between Edward and Bella making themselves a twosome might be escalating if that goal will be accomplished. Or he'll be learning some serious facts of life. Very funny. Precocious youngster.

 
Summary:

Bella is an executive on her way home from an overseas business trip. Edward is a popular actor on his way to meet a director about his next movie. When the two of them are literally thrown together, their lives change forever, and they realize that what they had before is not what’s in store for the future. Love, loss and lotsa lemons! 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 204810
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2012 Updated: June 16, 2013


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Baby Talk

Jeff is totally off his rocker.  special diet, positions, etc... doesn't guarantee a boy. Good thing doctor is on a vacation for a couple of weeks gives Bella a little breathing room.  I am glad she spoke up and pushed back with his too much pressure.  definitely too much hard press since she's been home.  She really has suffered from a horrible ordeal and she does need deserve to ease back into a life, any life, actually the life of her choice.  Purchasing her own big green bad to store her life.  Starting work the following work where she can lock it up away from Jeff where she has a place to run.    Finding lipstick in Jeff's pants can't blame her for being upset.  Granted Jessica could have dropped it from her bag, or didn't want to carry a clutch and asked him to hold it for her.  Neither option  seems to fix a Jeff scenario.  He's too selfish to carry female articles in his pockets.  Looking forward to her first therapy appointment to see how that will go for her.  The only time she seems to be content and happy is when she is talking with Edward.  She's at peace.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Visit

Best chapter in a long time. Edward and Bella together for a wonderful afternoon and evening together in Chicago. No Jeff and his garbage what a relief. The visit will only make them want to be together sooner. Make Bella realize with Edward she can be herself completely. She doesn't have to play any role or be someone she isn't. Bella resents all of Jeff's demands.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Going Home

Jeff was such a jerk.  His opinion of Edward was uncalled for and unnecessary.  He was jealous he wasn't the center of attention.  He didn't want it because his wife wasn't pristine and ideal conditions. Bella needs to leave Jeff.  His praising Jessica for all her help since Bella was gone. I'm still convinced she was servicing all his needs while Bella was gone.  Not just cooking food.  Bella needs to get a new phone.  Set some money aside. Pack her bags. Tell Jeff she doesn't love him any more and divorce the big self centered jerk.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: February 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Christmas in London Part II

Big chapter, both news about pending baby with a Christmas proposal for Bella. Really special. Talk about mind stopping dialogue for dinner with Edward's parents. Knew everyone would be glad. Just didn't think it would happen so soon. Will be interesting to find out Charlie's reaction next. If they get married before she gets either too big then Edward can have his honeymoon with only Bella otherwise the ones on will be a party of three.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: December 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Counseling

My heart is breaking for Edward and the terror he is experiencing with his nightmares. Glad Bella found a friend in Jenna wand had fun shopping. Sounds like she bought an awful lot of clothes. I'm jealous.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: In the Closet

Jeff is still a jerk.  Waking up his wife drunk and not taking no for an answer is not right.  Husband or not  no is  NO.  Bella should have the ability to say yes or no. Got a a reprieve because of Doug getting pulled over with a DUI.  I'm surprised that Jeff didn't get one too when he arrived down at the station since he was drunk too. He shouldn't have been driving either.  It will be hard for Bella because she does have some feelings for Jeff, but he is a creep.  Then stating he won't be home until late, but expects Bella to wait up for him.  Has no consideration for the ordeal she has endured while gone. At least she is calling the divorce attorney.  Bella should really also contact a counselor to discuss all these turmoil emotions.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: More Talking & Waiting

Love the concept of this story.  Random meeting of two strangers at the airport.  Plane almost crashing. Bombing at the hotel the airlines set them up.  Edward being generous and letting a married Bella stay with him in his penthouse rather than sleep in the lobby chairs.  Good thing Bella would have been killed with the morning bombing.  Falling in love while being held captive in that penthouse with their passports and cell phones being removed from them at gun point. excitement at every turn.  Then having them both realize what is important in life and realizing they were missing it in their life.  I wanted to go through the phone and belt Jeff myself.  Talk about the most self centered individual on the the planet.  He could have cared less what had happened to her.  I'd bet the reason he's not answering the phone is he's sleeping around on her right now with Jessica.  He couldn't be bothered when she really needed him to pick up.  It will be hard on her to leave him because he'll be a pig about it.  It'll all be about how she's destroying his imagine, etc...  Looking forward to the future chapters.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Esme & Carlisle

Loved the second half of Edward's parents visit. Plans to spend Christmas in London. Fragrance spokesperson awesome!!! Just love these two together. Wonder if those awards show will have more photos taken for the publicity rags.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: January 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 The Visit

Great Edward was able to complete the movie including the scene that freaked him out earlier. Pretty exciting about all the new furniture was delivered. Also it is always nice when she future mother in law likes the girl. Not subtle about wanting to be a grandmother. Of course, Edward and Bela are already a step ahead of her.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Making Up & Moving On

Edward is sooo cute being excited about Bella's baby bump. Making sure to show her off. Loved the red carpet fashions. Can't wait for next chapter.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Psychiatrist

Bella's conversation with her therapist started out pretty rough was glad Bella spoke up and turned her opinion of her around.  She wasn't just some airhead women wanting to escape a humdrum housewife life to the exciting life of living with a movie star in Hollywood. Bella had actually been through quite an ordeal that she shared with Edward in Canada which opened her life to the unfulfillingness of what she was existing.  Her husband is a self centered egoistical person who regards Bella not as a woman, wife, but as a show piece, something to help him achieve his goals, a possession to be used for his needs.  Bella claiming he isn't a bad lover just not a considerate one.  If all Jeff is in it for is his gratifications and not making sure his partner has also, then he is a bad lover.  Just makes Bella want to leave Jeff quicker and return to Edward who makes sure his partner receives before he even thinks about his own release.  Can't stand Jeff.  Glad he's so worried about "perfect baby" and is using a condom.  If Bella doesn't want to have sex and says "No" she shouldn't be forced to have it. whether Jeff wants it or not, being forced in marriage is still considered being raped.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Divorce Lawyer

The more I read about Jeff the more I want to slug him a good one. If he was ever a good guy I doubt it. He's a calculating, manipulative using sob. He has Bella as a trophy wife and thinks of her as strictly a possession. He's not thinking of her as a person at all. Any other husband would be thinking of how to help her deal with everything that has occurred in the last several weeks. Definitely not coming home drunk demanding. Not pushing pregnancy on her or constantly criticizing her every action. They would understand that maybe a glass of wine to help her with all the mental anguish she's been dealt with recently. Letting her ease gradually back into things at her speed. Loved the way Bella stood up to Judy and poured her snide attitude back into her bottle. Made her realize that it's not just because of Edward that show wants the divorce. He is a major part of it, but living under the constant scrutiny and control of Jeff she's feeling a prisoner and trapped even worse than being held by terrorists. At least with her marriage there is hope of escape an freedom. I don't think Jeff will be so nice and sweet when papers are served. Just his instant anger with refusal of not drinking wine and idea of getting pregnant right now is an indication Bella really will need to be somewhere else for her safety. Transferring out of state the sooner the better for her than facing what he will retaliate towards her.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: Fragrance Overload

Edward didn't believe Bella when she mentioned Austin's intentions. Enjoyed the gala and the performance on the platform. Can't blame Bella for being disturbed with the photos quite sensual with her man. What a way to earn 12 million with a perverted freak.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Showdown

Bella and Edward just waiting for Ramon adding more stress and tension to this terrorized situation.  I don't blame Edward for not completely trusting Ramon especially when they were told he was going into a different van.  Sneaking down 29 flights of stairs to a locked exit. Pretty scary scenario.  At least they were able to escape prior to the hotel being blown up.  They have sanctuary in the police station without their luggage, cell phones, and passports. At least they were able to reach their family and close friends to let them know they were ok. Jeff was a little over the top especially based on the messages he had left previously on her phone before the terrorists took hers. Edward is still holding Bella to the promises of moving to LA, teaching him to drive, etc.... It's going to be difficult for Bella to deal with Jeff. At least Roger is still alive and well in the hospital that's probably how the police knew A. Cooper was Edward Cullen. Edward letting Bella know ahead of time that he was going to keep her out of the media circus in New York to keep her name unassociated with his for her and for the idiot Jeff.  I have a funny feeling the press will get ahold of the information that they were together in the penthouse suite while held hostage. Jeff will blow a gasket due to his political career etc.. The fact that Bella and Edward survived the hotel explosion will link their names initially until someone digs deeper.  Looking forward to additional chapters.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: On Display

I think I'm more appalled by Jeff than I was before, having her change her bra to show more for a larger donation.  Pimp 'em out his wife for money, what a jerk.  Then the guy touches her inappropriately and Jeff thinks that's okay, because it's going to get him more in campaign donations.  No way.  Let's put Bella totally on display so all the men can drool land paw at her from now on until election and beyond.  What kind of husband does that. She's only a show piece. Now he wants to push the issue of her getting pregnant.  Glad Bella went to a clinic for birth control. She needs to talk with her dad and her boss.  If she has to take money from Edward for things do it.  Also needs to talk with a divorce lawyer. Bella needs to continue to throw Jessica in Jeff's face.  I'm still convinced he's already been involved with her. 

 




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