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Summary: Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents. Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with the loss of both her family and her future. When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

Warning: Some scenes, including the opening chapter of this story, describe graphic events and gun violence which may be upsetting to sensitive readers. Please read with caution.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 108309
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2011 Updated: November 06, 2012
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: December 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Both Bella and Edward are miserable without the other. If Edward is to join Bella would lead the mob family to Bella. I think Edward will be watched now for any contact from Bella. At least now Bella has Alice for companionship. I had a feeling she was going to get pregnant while away from Edward. I think Alice when she reaches town next for supplies whenever that will be needs to ensure that word gets to the Cullens especially Edward that Bella is fine and expecting their child. At least he would know she was truly okay. Bella only knows he was better and eventually getting out of the hospital for Edward. He's been home and missing her very much. Bella will need medical treatment at some time in the future. Prenatal care, vitamins, new identity, new location, etc... For safety of herself and her baby.
Summary: Final story in the From the Wings AU series. While Bella & Edward repair their marriage, a new coven is trying to assume power in the wake left by the end of the Volturi. It is up to the Cullens to save humanity.

Banner by the adorable evieeden. Thank you!
Excerpt from Chapter One:
"Edward?"
"We have company."
Bella squeaked – a charming sound, under different circumstances – and rolled away, gathering her clothes up while she did. Hair swirling around her bare shoulders, she gasped, "Who is it?"
"Felix and Renata."
This story will feature adventure, relationship drama, and a surprise or two.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: Impromptu Trilogy
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 16278
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2011 Updated: March 19, 2013
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: June 01, 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Amun Interlude
Our loving Bella and gorgeous Edward have gone to meet the Egyptian coven per a couple Volturi guards. All of their members are impressed with Bella thinking she is a great warrior. Amun wants Bella to realize what he experienced when he was first turned and that treatment was being treated as a god. Took Bella out to the humans in the day to reveal their diamond glows. This coven was glad for the over throw of the previous administration of Aro, Caius, and Marcus. Wonder what happened after the sun, since Alice and Jasper joined them in the desert due to her probably vision of blood massacre. The thought of drinking human blood to Bella has never to her liking with her strong sense of humanity. Now Anum wants to talk her out in public wonder what will happen? Bella has learned her control from the best Edward. Looking forward to the remaining portion of this new chapter in the lives of the Cullens and how Bella earns all of their trust. How they become again the one close and happy family. Author's Response: Hello!
I am so SO sorry I didn't respond to this when you posted your review. Gak. I don't know what happened to me, except that last summer was exceptionally busy.
I have finally started updating this again and just posted chapter 7 of 10 (maybe 11 if I get ... adventurous). I thank you so much for having read and reviewed. :)
LJ
Summary: Sometimes, a simple message is all it takes to turn your carefully crafted world on end.
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Nothing is quite as bittersweet as "what might have been."
AH. Rated for language and a passing reference to a sexual situation.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10571
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2011 Updated: March 12, 2013
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 14, 2013
Title: Chapter 5: The End
Tue love wins out. It just took Bella a longer time to take a risk on love.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: February 28, 2013
Title: Chapter 4: The Message
Love the beginning chapters of the ships passing in the night with messages. Reaching out to the other not really knowing what they consciously wanted, but sub conscience mind knowing they want back together. Mentally they both think time has gone by, but Edward has realized maybe too late what he threw away. His words stopped Bella from settling with Riley. Maybe it can be, looking forward to future chapters and their journey hopefully together.
Summary: 
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NOW COMPLETE!
"They have something I want..."
Aro has coveted the talents of Alice & Edward for a long time, but when human Bella weds into the already powerful Cullen clan, Aro sees the perfect opportunity to get what he wants -- and more. Armed with the information he took from Edward and Alice's minds, he recruits Gianna and a special young American, Dominic, to carry out his plan. Will Alice see it coming? Will Edward believe he's lost Bella forever?
Canon characters/AU, rated NC-17 for some lemon action and vampire immorality/violence. Dark but HEA promised.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Chelsea, Corin, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Gianna, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Other Character, Renata, Rosalie, Santiago, Sulpicia, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193724
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2011 Updated: April 06, 2013
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 27, 2012
Title: Chapter 28: No Sound but the Wind
Aro and Caius due to their evilness and lack of humanity have short-sightedness in regards to Bella. Their assumption that she will attempt to protect Dominic and Gianna from pain stems from her behavior of protecting Edward from Jane by offerring of herself. What they don't realize is the depth to her humanity as well as her perceptiveness to the mystic world of vampires and werewolves or "shape-shifters". Since none can enter her mind, she has the option of what she reveals as known facts about the shape-shifters and the relationships between their imprinted ones. She knows that the only reason Marcus has remained in Volterra with the Volturi is not of his choice, but devised by Chelsea and her manipulation of relationships. Once broken Marcus would leave the Volturi to mourn his lost love alone. With the depth of his humanity he might be persuaded to change his diet to vegetarian as well. Neither Marcus nor Aro will ever totally control her. Her most inner thoughts will remain her own. She is already withholding the information she knows regarding the reason why the shift shapers change into wolves. Jake told her the stories on the beach. She has seen them in action. Saving her from Laurent. She now knows that Dominic has imprinted on Gianna and she understands this bound. Based on Jake telling her and seeing it first hand with Sam and Emily. Knows that the loyalty and teamship of the Volturi against their adversary is based on Chelsea's gift. In the event of a fight to drop those bounds would be to drop Chelsea. Marcus has given her a clue to seeking the trick of her gift, to seek inward rather than outward to defeat Jane to protect Dominic and Gianna from pain. Once she learns how to control her gift and possibility of throwing her shield out to others for protection, only she will know how far-ranged it can be projected. She will be the only one to know upon who that gift of protection would be given as well. Aro will never know the workings of her inner mind or her inner plotting against him and his Volturi Guards. Looking forward to her subtling outsmarting the old fox at his own game. He is truly undermining the total personna of Bella as a human, a vampire, a personal being. It will be laughable when the tables turn and he learns too late how she was more cunning and smart than he himself had ever been. Author's Response: Oh, you know me so when to predict the tables will be turned on Aro. Although he is the master spindoctor, no? Glad to hear you are liking the story! New chapter up this weekend! Take care!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Cold
Don't like Tanya at all. Granted she was able to bring Edward out of his comatose fantasy world. But tying herself to Edward and expecting to be a couple because they are both single isn't right either. I mean Bella has only supposedly dead for a very short time. The man needs to grieve before another woman enters into his life. Especially Tanya since she's always wanted Edward as hers. He will never be her mate. Tanya taking him to Forks for the funeral hanging all over Edward won't look good at all. When they get the new Vanquish and do their testing they will realize that there would be body parts left of Bella after the accident. Author's Response: Thanks again for being such an awesome reviewer! Whoa! Such strong feelings about Tanya. I get it, you don't trust her at all! But have faith -- things will turn out different than you expect. I promise...
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Friends
I'm with Bella being with Felix would be a huge nightmare. But to find Marcus just sitting in her room watching and waiting for her is weird. What was he searching for? Searching for her bond with Edward? It should still be there. She still loves Edward has little doubts now based on half truths/twisted remarks/lies from Aro. Getting an insight into Marcus' frame of mind. Knowing the reason for his total disinterest in his existence and the world around him was in the retelling of his love story. If he ever found out his love was killed by her brother Aro, I wouldn't want to be Aro for any sum of cash or other incenitive. Marcus' fury as a warrior would rain down on Aro and he would be destroyed with that vengeful rage. It would be the collapse of the Volturi power because the need for the power would all have been a lie from the start. The threat was never there it was all constructed with schemes/plots from Aro including the murder/destruction of his sister Didyme. Carlisle is staying with Edward along with Esme. His coven is being divided making them vulnerable for attack as well as separation/losing themselves as a family unit. Something the Volturi has wanted for a long time since they have been the biggest coven outside of them. Especially since they live a very different lifestyle (living on blood of animals not humans.) Carlisle doesn't have the entire story correct about the Bella incident. They are all thinking that Bella is dead. No one has been thinking that she has been kidnapped. Jasper is thinking the wolves have been involved blocking Alice's vision to warn them of the fight between Edward/Bella, Bella driving alone, Bella's car accident, and pending car fire. Without the wolf involved Alice would have seen that Bella wasn't harmed and was taken against her will. Also that she was in Volterra in a cell that has been pimped out with antique furnishings befitting a royal ward. Edward still in his mind locked in his world of himself with Bella in his life. His body still in shock and motionless. Recognizing nothing in the real world only the created world within his mind where he is happy with his soul mate Bella. Craziness is definitely in the future for all to come. I already feel for Charlie when they call and tell him Bella was in a car accident and burned with the Aston Martin. My heart is breaking for him now.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Possibility
Dominic and Bella were so close to opening up about the supernatural world. If Dominic had further questioned about destruction of vampires, he would have had the answers to why he was restrained with his collar and cell. Yes the vampires are afraid of him. Because in his wolf form he could kill them. Especially Logan, that's why Logan wouldn't let Gianna in his cell to deliver the food. Concerned she would some how remove the collar allowing him to change to kill him. Without Logan guarding the cells there might have been a chance to escape prior to being changed. Of course, Alice still wouldn't be able to see anything so they could come to help with the escape plan. But once out of the castle a phone call would reveal her location. Nothing would stop the Cullens from retrieving her. Not even the threat of the Volturi in Edward's eyes, he would walk through the flames of hell for her. Also if Bella was aware Dominic is a wolf would also cause doubts with Aro's claims and restore her faith in Edward and his family. Aro has no intention of leaving the Cullens alone. He just thinks he can brainwash Bella completely to use her against the Cullens and their powers. He doesn't understand the bonds of true love. He made that mistake when he killed his sister. I still say if Marcus ever finds out, Aro is dead marble pieces in flames with purple smoke.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: January 11, 2012
Title: Chapter 15: It Will Rain
Bella's car wasn't set on fire until she was abducted. Dominic was shocked at Gianna's behavior. I don't blame him. Especially her treatment of him when she kicked him out of her rental car. Trying to give him his freedom. Too bad she didn't realize that Aro needed him to stop Alice from observing the plans. But since Gianna let him out of the vehicle and Gianna made a decision regarding Bella wouldn't that have given Alice anything/any clue as to what was happening to her. I hope. I know Dominic was in the area, but not anywhere near them. Gianna didn't follow the rules or guidelines, broke some of them, I can only imagine for her slight to major betrayal -- Gianna will have to pay a huge price. Edward must be even more a statue in his devastation. His anger at Alice for not seeing things occurring, resentment as well. Alice's guilt for not catching it either will be hard for her to live with. The three of them won't they be able to smell that Bella got out of the car along with a wolf being near her. They know what the wolves smell like due to all the tribe members back home in Forks/La Push. Horrible Bella knocked out, alone on a private jet with Volturi Guard vampires, away from her beloved Edward, betrayed by her own kind (human), etc... Hoping Edward will realize deep down that his true soul mate is not gone, but abruptly taken from him deviously by the Volturi. Surprised that Alice didn't see Aro thinking about it before Dominic got there since it was in his mind before. Looking forward to the new chapters. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It is tricky working around all these darn talented vampires! Aro took a page out of Victoria's book, as we learned in Brie Tanner's tale, the Volturi knew what was going on. Plus, what Aro took from Alice's mind, he's pretty wise to beating her gift. He made none of the decisions as to how and when -- he left that up to Gianna and Logan, who were not being watched by Alice. In addition, Aro knows the involvement of shape shifters will continue to block Alice's vision. Next chapter is already in the queue.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Like a Drug
Aro is such a snake. A true villain in every sense of the word does describe him. Plotting, scheming, lying through his teeth at every turn. The creature doesn't even speak one word of truth, it's all lies. A character you loathe and hate all at once. Hate him more than Cauis since he's just sadistic and cruel. He wants everyone to suffer and be under his thumb. Crush, Kill, Destroy all who will not adhere to his way of life. Marcus is usually just moody during these moments. Grieving for his lost mate and enduring his brothers' games. In this chapter he speaks and commands for order. Halting Jane from torturing both Gianna and Dominic during Bella's training. But it's Aro, that is the true demon amongst them. What makes me really upset with him, is this attitude that he thinks he'll get away with his plans scot-free. Bella isn't stupid at all. She's been around the Cullens and their reactions to Jacob and the pack. The jokes back and forth about their horrid smells. Now being a vampire herself it's all coming together. As soon as Dominic mentioned Jacob just confirmed what her mind was already forming by smell. Once the block to Alice's gift was established by Dominic's involvement all Aro's stories, half-truths, alright downright lies to Bella are all laid out before her. Bella now knows Edward has no idea where she is and neither do the rest of the Cullens. Aro had her taken against her will and used Dominic to stop the Cullens from knowing anything about it. Aro, Aro, Aro Even the mighty can come crumbling down with someone more powerful. All it takes is one person to start a revolution. Bella has powers that block your major strengths mentally. Physically she isn't trained to fight, but does has newborn strength. Aro you have made a huge error in judgement when you interferred in Bella Cullen's life. She's smart, you'll never know what's she plotting, she'll strike when you least expect it. Bella's goal will be to go home to Edward and her family. Along the way Bella will take the Volturi Crowned Heads down before she goes. I have faith in her. Author's Response: I just love how your comments make me smile -- even though this time it is an evil, all-knowing smile! Yes, Bella has put it together re: Dominic, but don't think for a moment that Aro doesn't have a half-truth to tell...
Things will twist and turn a bit more before all is said and done, but yes, the mightier they are, the harder they fall.
Thanks again and hope to hear from you again soon (chapter 27 is really kicking my butt....)
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: January 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 16: Northern Lights
Edward can't face the truth (as it appears) that Bella has died in a car accident with the car explosion. I'm surprised that Edward, Alice, or Jasper haven't arrived at the scene. Just to check out and look for clues. The vampires would recognize the scent of a wolf. Since Dominic did exit the car to get Bella into Gianna's car. Also checking further around the area would alert them to other vampire scents as well. Granted Alice's vision would be effected, but the doubt of whether Bella was actually killed would be there. The other scents could be tracked and then possibly locate where airplane took off. It wouldn't give them location of where plane went but might give them an area to further search for answers. Right now Edward is living in a fantasy world with Bella and his two children. Gianna double dosing Dominic so he doesn't phase on the small private jet was smart, too bad though, would be nice to have him destroy Logan. Life will be changing for the three of them Gianna, Dominic, and especially Bella. My heart goes out to the grieving Cullen family and Charlie along with Renee the loss of Bella. Edward had good reasons for not wanting to return home to his family. Listening to all their thoughts about loss of Bella and their feelings towards Edward and the loss of his soulmate. It would just increase his own grief 10+ fold. I hate Aro. I hate Gianna and her selfishness. Even if she has had a change of heart, she hasn't stopped things from happening. My heart is just breaking for Bella in her current state as well as all her loving family over her loss. Author's Response: Grief does appear to be affecting everyone. Hopefully all your questions will be answered adequately...the weather change, the fire, the delay of Alice and Jasper's arrive in addition to their grief and need to care for Edward all take their toll on the trail. But mostly, I'm glad to see (or read) you are emotionally involved in the story! And if you think you hate Aro now...just wait!!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: June 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 29: Eclipse
Proud of Bella for stopping after she fed from joining in with the sexual orgy. Deep down she still remembers her Edward. Marcus stopped Demetri from taking advantge of Bella in her newborn state. Aro tried to listen to Marcus' thoughts, but Bella threw her shield over him to prevent Aro learning more about the wolves and their imprinting habits among others. Through further investigation, the Cullens learned that the accident wasn't really an accident. Based on who was to gain the blame has been placed on the Volturi. The Cullens will be claiming one of their own from Italy. Looking forward to the Cullens to the rescue. Author's Response: So is it going the way you thought it would? I know I'm looking forward to some ass-kicking -- but I won't say whose...
Thanks so much for being a faithful reader and reviewer. This story is taxing my brain and it sure helps to get support!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 30, 2012
Title: Chapter 32: Full Moon
Bella, I hope she goes back to her room and rethink the conversation between Edwaes and Aro and realize that Edward answers thoughts more than verbal conversations. She knows Aro lies and is deceitful. She has to take his words and actions with a grain of salt. she doesn't know Edward has a feeling she was there. the only reason he is remaining in Volterra is because of her. Aro won't be getting Alice with the deal made in front of the rest of is guard. He can't go back on his word, at least, not in public. wonder if Bella will know Edward has remained behind for her only for his love. the only way would be if Marcus would tell her with his gift. still looking forward to Aro getting his power knock out from Bella.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Requiem on Water
I can't decide who I hate more Tanya or Felix (the pervert.) Taking advantage of a married woman in pain. Using his cold hands for reprieve of the burning pain of transformation of Bella only if she calls his name. While everyone else is sick of her calling for Edward. Of course she's going to call for Edward to come for her. He should be there. He would be there if Dominic wasn't there. They haven't made the connection yet about wolf being there blocks Alice's visions so Edward has no idea where Bella is located. If Dominic and Gianna were gone, Alice would see Bella immediately and bingo the Cullen family would be heading to Italy (Volterra) to claim Edward's wife. Felix would be dead for touching Edward's naked wife for sure. Edward's not the sharing kind of man when it comes to his woman. Now that Dominic and Gianna have declared their love for each other, each will strive for ways to plot an escape. Dominic is right he needs the collar off and become the wolf in order to deal with both Felix and Logan. Since Logan is fairly new, I'm sure he hasn't dealt with a wolf so should be "very interesting!" Can't wait to read that part. Still think Charlie and Renee will be upset if Edward shows up for the funeral with "a date." Talk about where's the "forever love" he claimed for their daughter when he finds another girl so fast. The disrespect towards Bella and her family is a disgrace. Tanya is just trying to use his grief to get her foot in the door so to speak to finally get her shot at Edward physically after all these decades. If Dominic and Gianna do escape, they do need to take Bella with them. Only if she can handle not eating humans. Hoping Bella has the same control and disgust over eating human blood and insists on animal blood. But with Aro and his warped teaching I'm sure that won't be the way of it. Hoping Bella won't go with Felix, it would literally mentally destroy Edward to have his wife be degraded further by having Bella getting down and dirty with Felix or Demetri or any other vampire in Volterra. Author's Response: I can see I have you wondering what other turns I have in store *evil laugh* On the other hand, I sure don't want readers to hate me! Next chapter will be Bella's memorial -- so you'll have some of your answers then.
No, Edward is not one to share his woman. And yes, Aro is not one to even consider animal blood. *more evil laughter*
Hope you like how things come together! And thanks so much for being a faithful reader and reviewer!!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: February 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Decode
Dominic final conclusion is that he is valuable to Aro because of Isabella. Now he needs to figure a way to help her against Aro. Aro was so cruel to have Gianna admit that she was involved in bringing him to Volterra for Aro's scheme. Dominic will have a hard time forgiving her this time. Once betrayed, forgive, and give second chance. Twice betrayed, forgiveness so/so, another chance doubtful. Trying to use her to be released, he didn't realize Aro couldn't care less about Gianna. In fact, if Dominic killed Gianna would be one less thing on Aro's list he would need to complete. The threat of having her decaying body in the cell with him and the idea of no food or water. Pretty gross thing to visualize. Besides he still loves Gianna, she is his whole world, he couldn't kill her. Will be interesting to see how Aro's plans will fail by his faulty thinking. Even with his great intellect he doesn't know what people will do for love, the sacrifices made, the crazy and wild things that can happen.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: January 01, 2012
Title: Chapter 14: All I Believe In
Aro really has a good plan using a wolf to block Alice's visions to obtain Bella. Only with the car accident wouldn't that injure Gianna and Dominic? Or was that Alonzo? someone must have pulled her out at the last minute or she would have been killed instantly upon impact. Edward will feel guilty blaming himself for making her angry and allowing her to drive mad. He knew she wouldn't be careful driving his Vanquish. Of course, Bella was calm when she was driving home someone stopped short in front of her causing the accident. Dominic in area blocking Alice from seeing any of it. Gianna and Dominic in Volterra falling in love. The deceit Gianna used to get Dominic to travel to US to get Bella will probably bit her later. Dominic seemed to have imprinted on Gianna. He was attracted at first, but the attraction became obsession once he changed for the first time in his workshop. Looking forward to the remainder of the story as it progresses. Author's Response: So excited to see you have followed me to my new story. I think it is different that stuff I've written before -- Hope you do like it and thank you for the reviews!! Happy New Year!!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: February 06, 2012
Title: Chapter 18: I Didn't Mean It
Aro already made one grievous error with Didyme. She fell for Marcus and he fell for her. Both had no thoughts to continue with Aro's plans for domination and ruling over all vampires. Marcus and Didyme just wanted to go and be by themselves. Since Aro needed Marcus on board with his plans, Aro needed to get rid of Didyme. To set Marcus back on the right path. He used a Romanian vampire and his gift to have her feel like she was with Marcus and he tore her head off. He took the parts and burned her. Then he destroyed the Romanian as the reason Didyme was killed. Killed to save the secret of who actually killed her, stopped any chance of blackmail further down the road, and possible disloyalty from Romanian later. He would be the only one to bear the death of Didyme. Marcus still grieves his mate. Especially when he is in the presence of Bella and Edward and in presence of Gianna and Dominic. Wonder where Marcus was during the celebration. Is he talking with Gianna regarding her love for Dominic? Or is he looking over Dominic or Bella? Aro is not sure of Marcus right now with the strong love between the couples. Aro has plans to change Isabella tonight. He thinks he can convince her to turn against the Cullens. Use lies and half truths to lead her towards the Volturi side. I don't know if that's possible with her deep love for Edward. Of course, her human memories will be dim once the change unless she concentrates on them. With her so doped up won't be able to think of them to carry over into her vampiric life. Aro is truly evil along with cold and calculating. He has no remorse or even guilt over his actions. Maybe occasionally a little regret. Destroying his own sister, his brother(partner)'s soulmate. It will be hard to read about Aro changing Bella and his scheme to change Bella's views towards the Cullens. Author's Response: Oh are you correct -- a very grievous error!! It will prove his downfall, although I don't want to give too much away...or did I already? I love reading your thoughts on the story. If ever you have a question, just zip it over. Thanks for being such a wonderful supporter!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: February 05, 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Fifteen Step
Putting a collar on Dominic so that if he phases it would kill him is beyond cruel. Marcus sensing a bond deeper than Aro can comprehend. Deep as Edward/Bella if not deeper. Bella being changed and used by the Volturi. Wanting Edward to follow to get Bella to keep both of their talents to use against Carlisle and his coven. If I didn't hate Aro and Caius which I do, it's raising to despising and contempt for them. Destroying Carlisle's family and their happiness just to use their special skills for the Volturi's own ends. Author's Response: Yes! I've always written to evoke emotion -- only this time, I'm getting you involved in rooting for Dominic and Gianna while forming a deep hatred of Aro! Looks like I just may be hitting the target... Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: April 30, 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Meet Me on the Equinox
Still upset with Tanya and her clinging ways on Edward. Even if she is willing to die at his side in Volterra. She still wants him all to herself. It's going to get very interesting when they actually arrive to find Bella there changed into a vampire. Especially when she has her doubts about Edward's feelings towards her in full blast thanks to Aro and his evil mind feeling worms drifting through her memories. Just think how angry Bella (Edward's wife) will be to see Tanya standing next to Edward clinging to his hand which seems to be how she is all the time now. Tanya and Edward both will feel her wrath. Now if Edward was in his right mind, the statement of Aro "vanished" would click in his mind. Since it has happened before with Bella, but only when it was associated with her and her time with Jake. Curious that two creatures simply vanish with no further future once and only when associated with shift changing wolves. That would give them a clue that's why Alice didn't see Bella deciding to crash and kill herself, didn't see the accident ahead of time, didn't notice a second car and people involved. Notice the body and what happened to it. Since the burning vehicle had no body evidence, no bones, teeth, nothing survived. In their experiments, the car accident would have had different results. There should have been different evidence, bodily evidence available to prove Bella still in the vehicle when crashed. Leads to conclusion Bella wasn't there. takes it further, what happened to her? Where did she go? Who took her? Why didn't Alice see it? What would block Alice from seeing someone take Bella away from the scene of the accident? All valid questions none of them are thinking about. They need to check the facts, yes, but since Alice is so gifted and her gift hasn't been working. The Cullens need to work outside of the BOX. What makes Alice's gift not work? What possibilities could happen if her gift isn't working? They already feel the Volturi are involved. Edward has been inside Aro's mind before, think as devious as Aro using the facts, and the not facts based on blocks of Alice's gift. Using all those things, theories, etc.. should come up with a good battle plan and good idea what happened to his beloved Bella. The Cullens truly believe Bella didn't kill herself because her body wouldn't have been totally destroyed in the car fire. I still don't like Tanya. It's going to cause more trouble between Bella and Edward. So much that Bella will have major doubts about how Edward feels for her and their life together.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: June 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 30: Let Me Sign
Bella has another trail day in the tower, Requested Dominic and Giannas release if her gift was used in front of them. Aro said would make them vampires because they know the secret can't release them. Gianna doesn't want to be a vampire any more. Jane with her evil smirk provided the pain to Gianna. Bella placed both Dominic and Gianna inside her shield. Love it when Jane gets angry when her gift is made worthless. Bella could feel Jane's attacks against both herself and Gianna and in Bella's angry forced her shield outward again. Causing unconciousness for Jane as well as Dominic and Gianna. I think her power frightened Caius somewhat. Surprisied Aro, but delighted as well. Marcus was proud. Not sure I understood how he knew Edward was there. Since his power can only sense relationships strength. Since Bella is unaware of him being there, don't see where the bond would provide him to use his gift. But the cavalry are on their way for Bella. Wonder what Bella's reaction to them will be. Especially with Aro's explanation about humans being plentiful and trying to destroy all the vampires. Author's Response: I loved giving Bella's shield two aspects. One that protects and embraces and another that repels. I've taken some liberties with Marcus's gift. Here's my thinking: Bella and Marcus share a strong bond through her being sired. I wish SM would have played with this theory a little more. Bella and Edward do, despite Aro casting doubt, have a incredibly strong bond. I would think with Marcus's gift, he can sense when Edward is close to Bella, so it is easy for him to conclude when he feels Edward and Bella's bond, he can assume Edward is near. I'll try and fit this in somewhere in the chapters to come. Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 33: Leave out all the Rest
starting to follow this story on fanfiction now. still enjoying, but can't wait for Aro to lose.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 30, 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Spotlight
I liked when Marcus put Dominic in Bella's cell, but was sad because he did stop her from trying to kill herself. Enjoyed his challenging Aro about the collar. Dominic noticed ruffled Aro a little about removing collar in order for him to change. Equal playing field between Dominic and vampires. Granted too many vampires to his one, but once Bella noticed he was a wolf, her doubts about Edward and Cullen family would vanish. She would understand why the cavalry didn't show up this time. Alice's vision wasn't working. Wonder if Dominic will question Bella about Jacob when he touched her during her nightmare. If she mentions werewolf, then he'll come clean. Open her eyes a lot as to why and how Alice didn't see accident in order for Edward to stop before she was kidnapped to Volterra. Why they didn't come to her rescue. If Dominic didn't cause a diversion Marcus would have drank her dry and killed Bella. I wouldn't have wanted to be Marcus when Edward found out he drank her completely to her death. Nothing would stop Edward from seeking revenge on Marcus and the entire Volturi Guard. Felix will watch her during the change while she tosses in pain. After her nightmare of him attacking her, bad move. Aro is still one sick puppy. Getting his jollies by watching and feeling what Marcus experienced when he drank Bella's blood. Caius wanting his share of the blood too. If he started, Bella would have been drained and their precious gifted new vampire would never exist. Hope Bella will continue to think of her family Cullen during her change. Her love for Edward. Her friend Jake and the packs as well as remembering her dad. If Bella holds on to those memories she can still maintain herself and partially her humanity. She doesn't want to kill humans. Wonder if she'll learn to hunt animals and refuse to drink humans. Looking forward to the following chapters.
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 07, 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Monsters
Dominic realized he was brought in as a major portion of the kidnapping of Isabella. Only if he knew it was only because he is a shift shaper (wolf.) In his mind he is trying to find a way to escape for himself and Isabella. Since he is responsible for Isabella being in Volterra he feels he needs to get her out of there. Metal collar around his neck and small cell are problems. Gianna hasn't been around with either food or water. Listening to Aro talk with Isabella too bad he didn't pick up any clue words. If they could only talk and Bella find out Dominic was a wolf that would explain why Alice didn't see her being kidnapped or the accident. Aro's lies were very convincing. Bella's self doubts about her worth compared to Edward were being played on well by Aro. Using every one of her insecurities against her. The truth is Edward would fight through hell and back to get her. No matter what the consequences Edward and his family would have come to rescue her from the Volturi. If Dominic and Bella could talk without having their vampire guards interrupt them some doubts and clues could be solved. Like the accident wasn't an accident neither was the kidnapping. All planned ahead of time, just waiting for a time when Bella was alone away from Edward. Hackles are up with the decent and half truths Aro was dishing out to Isabella. Evil doesn't even cover how devilish and ghoulish he can be. Author's Response: Good to hear from you again! Bella and Dominic are still hiding things, rightfully so, I guess. After what's happened to them, you can't blame them for being hesitant to trust. And yes, Aro does play the information he's gained very skillfully -- that's his gig, I guess. And it is a blast writing him too! Thanks for reading. New chapter just submitted for validation!
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Never Think
Not sure what Bella is really thinking, is she really believing the stories given to her by Aro about the Cullens. I thought she was taking his stories with a strong grain of salt. Now that Edward is there and Marcus has alerted Aro and Caius of their arrival. Divide and conquer and Aro still wants to acquire, but only if he can control his acquisitions. In the case of Edward and/or Alice that would be a big NO. Alice would do anything to save Jasper though so it might work there. Be happy they wouldn't be. Marcus wanting to keep Edward away from Bella to keep his own spark is very selfish on his part. Now that Bella knows it's Edward will she really block the Volturi's thoughts from Edward. Her body is already responsing to just his scent and voice. Now that his face has been revealed how will she react? Waiting for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, sorry so late in responding! Oh, Bella is a confused mess along with being only 18 yrs old and having crazy newborn emotions! Wait until you read ch. 31 (which is posted). Aro really tricks her and Edward!
Summary: Bella and Mike wed four years ago and their marriage hasn't exactly been the picture of bliss. A carefully guarded secret surfaces, destroying an already fragile Bella. Everything she knew was a lie, everything she wanted for her life, wiped out with the click of a mouse. An E x B story.
Warning: There is mention of past sexual assault, crappy childhoods, an even crappier marriage, and some very prevalent social issues (that I’m not going to mention here, because it would defeat the purpose of reading the story).

Banner thanks to Forthelongestday
Excerpt: I looked at the clock again, 5:44. Jesus Christ, did time stand still? Those fourteen minutes felt like fourteen hours. As the moments ticked by, my palms began to sweat and a nervous pressure mounted in my chest. It's not the end of the world Bella; just the end of your marriage...and everything you knew. God, how was I going to do this? People up and left their spouses on a daily basis and never looked back. Of course, how many of them were under these same circumstances, I wondered. How many women were faced with leaving the man they loved because he'd woven a lie so hurtful? When it finally surfaced, did it kill them?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171435
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2011 Updated: November 27, 2012
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: July 17, 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Blood and Fire
Loved the chapter with all the POV's. All the lovey dovey between all the couples especially Edward and Bella. Just can't get enough of each other. Charlie being happy with Edward being in love with his daughter. Happy for his little girl. Finally getting a man who adores her. Laughed so hard with Esme's POV and Edward's first drunken adventure. Especially tidbits being added in by Carlisle. So cute. My husband wanted to know what I was laughing about. Jasper's proposal was unique and sweet. Just perfect for the two of them Jasper and Alice so cute together. Rose and her mouth. Gotta love a mouthy woman once in a while. Especially when she's telling Emmett (crude one) off. Good all around chapter. Great party at Bella's everyone having a wonderful time. Only part a little sad was Bella and not her heart's desire, a baby. She's got Baby Cheney to hold for now. I'm fairly sure Edward will give her one some time in the future. Author's Response: It was a pain in my curvy backside to write, but I have to say, after reading it over, it really does feel like you're floating around this party. So it's a win. Thank you for taking the time to toss a little love at EIK.
~Jen
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