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Penname: twilightdiheart [Contact]
Real name: Michelle Cullen
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Thirty something girl that has become obsessed with Twilight, Edward, Rob, etc.  I would like to think that I wouldn't leave my family if He sent for me, but I can't be certain.  I love the series because I don't have to deal with reality.  If I read enough fanfic I can usually dream of Edward.  What a great super power to have, dreaming of Robward at will! ; - ) 


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Auld Lang Syne by niknox Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 596]
Summary:

In the dead silence, all of the details suddenly fell into place for me. I’d made an absolute fool of myself. Jacob was smitten, thrilled that I cared so much for him, while my husband stood there, betrayal and disappointment written across his face. He turned away from me, and the realization hit me: in all my efforts to right Rosalie’s wrongs, I lost sight of what was actually important. And on top of that, he’d given me ample enough warning. He even went as far to tell me to fix it. And I made it worse. And now Edward wanted nothing to do with me. “Edward-”

“I don’t want to hear it,” he said dejectedly. I could tell by the tone of his voice that he was hurt. The last thing I wanted to do was hurt him. Pangs of regret attacked me. I should’ve kept my mouth closed.

 Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
and never brought to mind?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 97999
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2010


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fool

Jacob is an ass too.  I hate Rose and Jake, and Bella just a little less than them.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leave

She's no better than Rose.  Pot meet Kettle.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Changed

Ugh! Ugh! Ugh!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Auld Lang Syne

Man,  I can't imagine all teh drama Barter will hold. 

I throughly enjoyed your story.  However I was hoping for a reconnect with Bella and Jacob.  Although I am ALL the way Team Edward.  I have always liked Jacob too.

The story was full and the agnst we love that leads to a happy ending.  Wow.  Four kids.  Edward has super swimmers.

 
Here We Go Again by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 629]
Summary:

*INDEFINITE HIATUS*

 

 

All through high school, Bella was in love with her best friend who was in love with her, too.  Both never expressing their feelings and never knowing how the other felt.  In the end, Edward decided to go across the other side of the country leaving Bella with only one memory of him: his journal. Heart-broken and confused by it’s content, she casted it aside. Years later, Edward moves back home, but Bella wants to move on with her life.  Can they really stay away from each other, or will history repeat itself?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 118790
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: October 23, 2010


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Unchained Memory

Poor Bella.  Boys are so dumb sometime, and teen girls are so underconfident sometimes.  Ugh.  All the agnst.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Home Is Where The Start Is

Oh Alice.  Don't be so mean to Jazz.  What did Bella do with the journal?   Poor Jake.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Move On

I can't believe she's been such a prude.  Read the damn book Bella.  Of course she hasn't read it fully, therefore not knowing how he feels, and he will assume she knows, but doesn't want him.  Ugh. 

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Don't Be A Bass

I would have prefered her to be with James so it wouldn't be so hard for Jake when she left him.  She will leave him right?  I truly love Jacob, but I am Team Edward all the way.  I'm thinking both James and Tanya will resurface.  Not so sure about James, but I bet Tanya definatly will.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: A Final Fantasy

Edward could have called or tried to contact her.  He was totally wrong, but Bella is being a real B-I-T-C-H!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Our Time in the Sky

Jasper's little comments might lead you to the same conclusion as Alice.  Jeez.  Man up Jazz.



Author's Response:

lol! And Jasper's an artist... I'd be having the same reactions as Alice, to be honest.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Change in Tune

Why couldn't Jasper get him not to come?  Where the is the journal? 



Author's Response:

Maybe Bella just misplaced it?  I dont knooooow. ;-)

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Goodbye Kitty

Everyone honking was hilarious.  I would leave Jasper stranded for that.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Me too, but Edward knows, deep down, that it was payback for his last prank.  So, he couldn't really do anything like that to Jasper unless it was another prank. 

Thanks for reviewing and check your email for the teaser.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Way Too Comfortable

The whole Jasper/Alice situation was hilarious.  As far as the Edward/Bella situation...arg!



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah. Jasper and Alice are coming to a resolution or already have.  Edward Bella... hmm.  Maybe next chapter?

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Futile Confessions

Are you freaking kidding me?  I can not even begin to understand how that conversation ended there.  Ugh!



Author's Response:

Haha, sorry! Lack of communication can do that to you.  :-)

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Surprise Visitors

Crickets is right.  Freaking cliffy!  Ugh!



Author's Response:

Aww I'm sorry about the cliffie! It's either that or make an incredibly looooong chapter.  Too much!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Just Between Us

Both of them should let Alice and Em have it!  I don't know what they were thinking.  Can't wait to hear the explanation.

 
Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 248]
Summary:

Gloaming

 

AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens hadn't been living in Forks when Bella moved there? What if they'd relocated to the quiet town 18 years later instead?

Bella is married to her high school sweetheart, what happens when her son starts growing rapidly when he changes schools?

Is finding your soul mate more important than keeping your family together?



This will eventually have canon coupling.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Quil
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 98987
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: June 19, 2010


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

I hear you Bella.  Thirty Something over here.  I think Edward could help clear out some cobwebs.



Author's Response:

LOL, I am in my thirties too, so this one is for us! : )

 
Never Enough by gray_matters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 724]
Summary:

 

 

After fifteen years of marriage, Bella and Jacob are going their separate ways – Jacob into the arms of another woman. Everything is changing, and Bella isn’t sure how to move on with her life. When she meets Edward Cullen, sparks fly, but can she take a chance? Or will her insecurities keep her from pursuing what she really wants?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 201872
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2010 Updated: April 17, 2011


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jacob uh I don't know what to say about him.  He and Ness have NOT won me over. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & taking the time to comment - I really appreciate it.

Luckily, Jacob encounters are few & far between, but everyone had to meet.  Why not make it as awkward for poor Bella as possible? ;)

Thanks again for your feedback!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I would let Miss Sarah just go ahead and move in with Jake and Ness since that's where she wants to be.  Teenagers...ugh!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - I really appreciate your feedback!

Yeah, Sarah's a bit of a bratty teenager, and Bella's gotta figure out how to deal with this new attitude!

Hope you'll stick around & let me know what you think as the story progresses :)

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Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes.  Please no more Sarah rants or I may be forced to stop reading (just kidding).  He smart mouth makes my eye and plam twitch. 



Author's Response:

Thanks once again for taking the time to read and comment - I really appreciate your feedback!

Oooh, twitchy palms make me think of Fifty Shades and Master of the Universe!  <grin>

Sarah's a handful, but Bella's getting a grip on it.  Hope you'll stick around & let me know what you think as the story progresses!

Thanks again, so much, for reading :)>

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Take that Jacob and screw Nessie flat tum tum, she hasn't birth two children.  ; )



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!  It sure looks like Bella's having the last laugh, doesn't it?  :)

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Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Nope, the kids reactions were not what I thought.  Roles totally reversed.  But I have a tween boy who can't stand for men to even look at me.  He thinks he's my man.  LOL. Edipus complex much?  But it's seems that Jake might want to schedule some one on one with kids so they can spill special, but he's a dad.  And no offense, but there not always the best at that kind of stuff. 



Author's Response:

I appreciate you continuing to take the time to read and comment on my story – your feedback means more to me than you could ever know! 

I'm glad to hear that I surprised you with the kids' reactions - it's always a little fun to mix things up.  Good idea for some one-on-one time with Jake & the kids, I may just have to use that coming up!!

 

As promised, here’s your teaser for Chapter 16, which should post this weekend:

 

His voice quieted as he sang the chorus one last time, his eyes only on me.  The applause startled both of us, and he mumbled a quick “thank you” into the microphone.  Edward waved to the crowd and stepped down from the stage even as the applause picked up for his performance.  He waved off the waitress who approached him with his usual post-performance drink, and ignored the calls of people wanting to speak with him.  My breathing was rough and excited as he stalked across the bar toward me, a predatory gleam in his eye.  Ignoring his brother and our friends, he reached down, grasping my hands and pulling me from my seat into his arms in one fluid movement as he crushed his lips to mine.

 

Hope you’ll let me know what you think of the update when it posts.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I had never heard Awake, but I went right to youtube, and hell yes and hear Robwards raspy bluesy voice doing this song justice.  Rob and anything soft and acoustic is just yum. 

I love how Edward is being so patient with her.  I know she's been in a drought, and if I had no prospects I'm not totally sure if my sleeping and undergarment atire wouldn't be like Bella's, but it's time to go shopping Bella.  I'm a 35 mother of two (wishing mine would find his Nessie and leave me the hell alone) so I so get this story! ; - )

This story should have more reviews.  It is fantastic.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading & commenting - I love getting your feedback, and appreciate your sweet words.  I'm glad you enjoyed the update.  And I agree with the song choice... although I think Rob could sing the ingredients off a can of chicken noodle soup and sound amazingly sexy doing so ;)

 

Bella may just have to do a little shopping... good thing she's got Alice as a friend.  Even better is that Edward doesn't seem to mind... of course he'd probably prefer her in nothing...

 

Next chapter should hopefully post this weekend - I hope you'll let me know what you think of it when it does.  Thanks so much for your support!>

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It's about time she was happy.  How will she ever go back to sleeping without him.  Weekends only...man!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that you liked the update. Even I wonder how she's gonna get by on weekends only after all of that!

Chapter 18 should post within the next week - you'll have to let me know what you think of the morning after... :)

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing - your feedback makes me so happy!>

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I love how Edward is pulling her out of her shell, and how she coming alive under his hands, words, and adoration.



Author's Response:

Ooooh, I love your words!  Coming alive is the perfect description for what is happening to Bella with Edward. 

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment - I really appreciate it!!

 




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