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Penname: twilightdiheart [Contact]
Real name: Michelle Cullen
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Thirty something girl that has become obsessed with Twilight, Edward, Rob, etc.  I would like to think that I wouldn't leave my family if He sent for me, but I can't be certain.  I love the series because I don't have to deal with reality.  If I read enough fanfic I can usually dream of Edward.  What a great super power to have, dreaming of Robward at will! ; - ) 


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With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5900]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

aww.  That was sweet and sexy at the same time. 

 
Summary: Feature

A story about love, about death, about keeping secrets, and dealing with the consequences.  Bella and Edward meet at a hospital when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease and he is recovering from knee surgery.  She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her.  This is a story about their journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain, and beauty of first love.

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Excerpt from Chapter 2:
“What are you most afraid of?”  Edward asks one last question.

“I'm not afraid of dying,” I answer truthfully.

“You're not afraid of dying?” he repeats, incredulous.

“No.  There's so much more.  I'm afraid of losing my hair but that's not my biggest fear.  I'm afraid of leaving my mom and dad all alone.  I'm afraid that if I survive, I'll never have children of my own.”  I yawn again.  Edward is quiet and I think for a moment that he's fallen asleep.  “Edward,” I whisper, in case he is asleep, “What are you most afraid of?”

“I'm afraid I'm falling for you,” he whispers back so softly that I'm unsure if I've heard him correctly. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 82940
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2011


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Doubt/No Doubt

Gwen knows how to give a show doesn't she.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart

I will visit your site about becoming an organ donor.  Many people have lost loved ones to cancer or have loved ones living with or fighting this invader.  My little cousin transition from this life around this time last year after a 5 year battle against neroblastoma.  I live in Memphis, TN and my family was VERY blessed to have access to St. Jude Cancer and Research Center.  Words can not describe that greatest of this facility and its staff.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Butterflies

he's so sweet and so jealous and smitten all ready

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Sort of New Moon

It's gotta be hard on a girl.  Us girls are so self-concious at that age without hair loss, vomiting spells, and fevers.  Hang in there Bella.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Sweet Ginger

Hmmmm

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch. 11 The In-Between

Aw. What terrific friends.  That made me tear up.  I can't wait until Rose meets Em.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Somewhere Over the Rainbow

I'm all out crying.  I know that being a cancer patient also holds the inevitable loss of newly made friends you meet in the struggle.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Falling Snow

Edward is a saint...Saint Edward of Asissi

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Matters of the Heart

Master of the Universe does it well and Facebook Friend

 
Finding Home by jennde Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 508]
Summary: Feature

 

It's 1941, and Bella Swan lives in the US territory of Hawaii with her father, Admiral Charlie Swan. Bella and Edward Cullen grew up together and were best friends until a falling out when they were 12. Now both 18, Edward and Bella come back together after realizing their intense attraction and feelings for each other. Just as their passions are coming to fruition, tragedy strikes and the United States is thrust into World War II. Edward, already bound for the US Naval Academy at Annapolis, is duty-bound to fight and defend his country.

Will Edward and Bella's love be enough to see them through one of the most trying times in history?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 171862
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I know the agnst awaits.  You have prepared me.  Although, I will hate to see these sweet kids at odds.



Author's Response:

Let me put your mind at ease - a little bit anyway.

They love each other. Honestly, and truly and without reservation. If nothing else, always remember that.

As always, thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like your story of first love.  Makes me blush and think of what it was like to be a teen.  I like an aggressive Edward you know! 

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Of course the Cullens will find them in this predicament...right?

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You mad me cry.  Not everyone can do that with their writing.  Know that this is a compliment. 

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

All I do is read. How do I get to the thread.  No wedding...dang this cliff hanger.  This is really good. 



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. You can reach the forums with the little "forums" button under the Twilighted banner. We're under fan fic, AU-Human.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was at the Naval Academy in Annapolis this summer and it is one of the most breath taking campuses I've seen.  I like it better than Harvard.  The buildings remind me of far away times.   I wanted to put it my application...unfortuantely it's too late for me.  ; - (



Author's Response:

It's too late for me too ;)

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

edward in uniform...yum.  Of course you know I love your story.  Its just so dog on sweet.  I think I have a cavity.



Author's Response:

You might want to go to the dentist now because I doubt it'll get any sweeter, so that should be your last cavity.

I too enjoy the image on young, handsome Edward in uniform. Just don't tell my husband.

As always, thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

uh oh.  I since trouble on the rise.  I wish Bella could go all 2009 on him and just spit out what she thinks about him holding back.  I know there new at this, but I can't imagine Edward not being able to make you come during intercourse.  I come just looking at that crooked smile. 



Author's Response:

Well, yeah. I understand that normally the place between Edward's legs is magical, but I'm going for realism here. Besides the fact that it's 1942 and "letting go", so to speak, is difficult, Edward is 18 and just started having sex. His staying power is for shit. It IS still Edward though, and he never leaves Bella unsatisfied, bless his heart.

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

uh oh.  I since trouble on the rise.  I wish Bella could go all 2009 on him and just spit out what she thinks about him holding back.  I know there new at this, but I can't imagine Edward not being able to make you come during intercourse.  I come just looking at that crooked smile. 

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Everything seems so sweet, but your reply to my review has me afraid of trouble on the horizon.



Author's Response:

Hmmm. Yeah, well, you've been reading, so you know I don't do fluff all that often. Take from that what you will.

Thanks for reading and for taking ther time to review.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Girl ride em.  You'll love it.  I know it was a different time. 



Author's Response:

AHAHAHAHA. Nice.

 

I feel the same way, but she was having none of it. Not to say that it won't work in the future...

 

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Things will be tense between Edward and James.  I can't sketch out James character yet.  It's obvious he has an attraction for Bella, but I'm not sure of how innocent.  Is he a threat?  I kept wondering if he would attack her in the dark while Edward was away.  Is my fear unfounded?  I think I kinda want him to be a nice guy...like Bella's Jacob in Twilight.



Author's Response:

You're not the only person to tell me that they thought James might show up in the dark, and I have to say, that surprises me a little bit. However, I guess it shouldn't since he's kind of been lurking around the edges, his motivations unclear.

 

Thank you for reading and for reviewing.

 

 

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh this is so bad.  Poor Bella.  I want to cry for her.  She should go back to Hawaii for a while.  Poor Edward.  Now I get the title even more. 



Author's Response:

Good thought on the title. Bella has to figure out where she belongs. Poor kid.

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella.  I thought she was pregnant and was going to find out at the doctor.  Wouldn't that add to her problems?  I'm glad she with it now...hopeful school and a life is next.



Author's Response:

NO. She's not pregnant. Could you imagine not only how hard that would be on Bella, but Edward as well? That he was away while she was pregnant and gave birth to their child would absolutely devastate Edward. No way.

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review.

 

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What did Bella miss doing in Hawaii?  Was it going to Charilie's grave?



Author's Response:

Yes, that's exactly it. Well, most of it. There was some small part of her that knew she needed to go back to Maryland and do something. Know what I mean? She knew she had to leave the comfort of her family and strike out on her own. But that being said, it was mostly visiting Charlie.

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review.

 




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