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Real name: Michelle Cullen
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Thirty something girl that has become obsessed with Twilight, Edward, Rob, etc.  I would like to think that I wouldn't leave my family if He sent for me, but I can't be certain.  I love the series because I don't have to deal with reality.  If I read enough fanfic I can usually dream of Edward.  What a great super power to have, dreaming of Robward at will! ; - ) 


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Harvest Moon by JanaOnWheels Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 605]
Summary:

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The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.

The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.

 

*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Will he tell her.  He will need to tell here about the quilette boundaries.  Does she understand how dangerous she would be to humans if she tried to run off?



Author's Response:

No, she doesn't understand that yet.

:D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Hopefully not Charle, but maybe it would be nice if Bella could have her dad.  Anywhoo.  I wonder why Victoria had run across James' scent in the woods mixed with Bella's.



Author's Response:

It is established in the saga that wolf stench covers vampire scent. The wolves were all over the area where James had attacked Bella, and the wolves were the ones who destroyed him. Their odor masked James and Bella's scents.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I know she's volitale, but maybe as much honesty as possible would help calm her. I keep forgetting to mention that I don't understand Rose's adversion to Edward allowing Bella's change.  It was not a choice in the story.  It was that or death, not to dissimilar to Rose's situation with Em. 



Author's Response:

You'll see as the story continues that, sometimes, information also sets her off. Edward's job of deciding what to tell her and when is not an easy one. :)

Rosalie isn't upset with Edward for 'changing her'. Initially, she was upset that he risked their family by trying to suck out the venom, because if he had not been able to control himself, he would have drained her, and that quite probably would have caused a war between the wolves and the Cullens. Why she continues to be a pain will be explained. Later. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Poor eratic Bella.  She's closer to acting like Reene now more than ever.  I am relieved that Jake and Bella were more like siblings than him crushing on her.  That should make things a little easier. 



Author's Response:

Yep. I like the 'easier' angle of having Jacob NOT crushing/in love with Bella. I like Jacob as a friend to her, only.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Who is the threat?  Eleazer?  Charlie?  I don't think Charlie, she wouldn't sense him as a threat.



Author's Response:

(grin)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Uh oh Emmett.  I think Laurent will be a bigger threat, now that he recognizes the scar.



Author's Response:

Heeheehee...

:D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

 
Dear Mr. Masen by jendonna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 746]
Summary:

"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 109238
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2010 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

They are cute.  IHOP is a hard limit for me as well.  How can their pancakes and service be so...ew?

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward should put an end toall this lesbian talk.  Are we close to that happening?

 
The Dom next door by saritat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

 

Bella adored the older boy next door, Edward, never knowing he was or became a dom. Edward can't forget the subservient girl next door whom he cannot possibly have...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 14789
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2010 Updated: January 10, 2013


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: From chapter 7 to chapter 9

Wow.  I hope he works fast.  Alcohol is a very good idea.

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: From chapter 4 to chapter 6

I wonder if Jake heard Bella speak of Edward? 

In consequently.  I wonders are you a Brit or Aussie?  I've noticed the uses of "s" as apposed to "z" in words like cozy and recognize. 



Author's Response:

Actually I'm neither, I'm finnish :D Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: From prologue to chapter 3

I wonder if Jasper ever saw through Edward.  I wonder how Edward had been introduced to the life style in the tiny town of Forks at the ripe young age of 23.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure how much of Edward's D/s history will be explained in the story, but suffice to say he went to college and saw the world a bit before the ripe young age of 23 :D It's a good question though. Jasper was a bit clueless, I think...

 
Summary:

All Human.  Bella gets knocked up during her senior year of high school, but Edward doesn't believe her.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 96724
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2012


Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like this will be really good.  I'm not sure what's so great about Edward right now.  I think Jake should pay him a visit and kick his ass. 



Author's Response:

he he - Jake will be here, but later on. thanks for being my first reviewer! :)

 




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