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Penname: twilightdiheart [ Contact]
Real name: Michelle Cullen
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Member Since: June 18, 2009
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Thirty something girl that has become obsessed with Twilight, Edward, Rob, etc. I would like to think that I wouldn't leave my family if He sent for me, but I can't be certain. I love the series because I don't have to deal with reality. If I read enough fanfic I can usually dream of Edward. What a great super power to have, dreaming of Robward at will! ; - )
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Summary:  After years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: October 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Calamity
He is an idiot. If they are so wealthy and great why was Tanya his only prospect? How old was Bella when they got married? Why did they marry so young he was only 18, right? Author's Response: No, he was 23 when they got married. He is kind of socially inept. That part gets explained later so I won't ruin it for you now!
Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Strides
James or Tanya view would great for an outtake. Author's Response: Because they would give it all away, I think I'll do one of those after the reveal. Thank you!
Summary: 
Seventeen year old Bella Swan is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be everything she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And how will they find their way when one night changes everything?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 75114
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: November 27, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Fascination
I've read this before, but it's been a while. I can't remember where. Maybe here, maybe fanfic. I love your Bella so I don't mind reading it again.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Possession
I don't know how she will feel about him after the bite. I'm not certain that was what she meant by forever.
Summary: 
Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.'
After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.
Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.
Story is B/E with canon pairings (B/J are only in flashbacks.)
This story is rated NC-17 for a reason, for crude language,future lemons, vampire violence, and bullying. Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness.Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV
Edward Cullen: Confessions of a Love Sick Geek was rec'd by Fictionators
http://www.fictionators.com/pwn-of-the-week/pwns-of-the-week-102110/
 
Thanks to Rason for the super-swell Blinkie, and to Evenstar for the Banner, Solar Eclipse Comic Cover by ME!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Geekward and Nerdella, SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 39509
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2010 Updated: January 01, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: *~ The Consequences of Spanking It ~*
I like a smoking hot Edward, but he shouldn't have to change himself for her to notice. I do like him better with clean cropped hair.
Summary: Bella's marriage is crumbling. He's never home, he barely speaks to her... they haven't had sex in over a month. It isn't until Bella's life is put in danger when she accidentally becomes involved in a crime that Edward reveals the truth... He's been working for the FBI. Now he must lug a furious and untrusting Bella across the country in a hilarious and utterly unromantic road-trip. Can Edward keep them both safe when she's been losing faith in him for years?
Thanks Frozensoldier (below) and evenstar (above) for the completely awesome banners!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 30897
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2010 Updated: February 06, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: He Wanted Faith
Yep the Pregers light has been flashing over her head for a few chapters now. Will she grap a test and run into Walmarts restroom to find out? Will she tell him, seeing as he has kept so many secrets from her? This will be par course on top of all the other $#!% their dealing with.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: He Cheated
It's going to take more than good looks to fix this sh....... I want to read this story, but I was scared because it so new, and I'm an impatient little vixen. I will be going crazy waiting for updates, but I couldn't avoid this any longer. Author's Response: lmao. thank you for giving my story a chance :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: He Wasn't Home
She should have went somewhere. What makes her think that he wouldn't come home after their blowup? Maybe she wanted him to.
What the hell was up with James the briefcase?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: He Turned Thirty
What a mess.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: He Broke My Heart
Give him hell Bella.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: He Explained
Well I glad she kneed him in the balls. I wish she could have gotten in touch with Rose. Screw Edward and all his damn secrets.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: He Bribed Me
Yep. Still hating on Edward. Also wondering if Bella is pregnant or if this whole debacle is making her ill.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Outtake EPOV: I Met Her
More please?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: He Bought Me Pizza
He has to be the worst spy if he hasn't figured out what's up with Bella, but I guess none of the symptoms have really manifested themselves very openly. I am really worried about their safety if Em could find them in the middle of no where, then who else could also find them?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: February 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: He Freaked Out
Even when I'm mad with Edward I still love him. Edward handled it fairly well minus the jackass comments. I have been waiting for this update.
Summary: 
The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.
The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.
*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Vickie and Laurent will be problem won't they. All the pussy footing around Bella is making me nevous. I'm sure it's driving her mad. Author's Response: I don't want to give too much away, but... they haven't heard the last of Victoria and Laurent.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I'm not sure why I haven't jumped on this story before now, but I am glad I did. We get Bella's POV, I think I like Edward's POV where Bella gets to be the mystery. Poor Jacob. I wonder if Bella was his imprint? Probably not, but if she were would he cross the line and be with a bloodsucker. Interesting thought. I doesn't matter I'm always Team Edward. Author's Response: Nope, Bella is not Jacob's imprint. :)
Hope you continue to enjoy the story! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
I don't think Edward is OOC. I think is very much his brooding self. I am only surprised by how quickly he admitted to himself that he loves Bella. I think he is fighting Alice's vision, not because he doesn't want it, but because he is afraid to hope. After being alone so long, he probably terrified of letting the thought of happiness enter his mind to only have it snatched away.
Will they be able to remain in Forks with so many humans and Charlie is close proximity during Bella's newborn phase?
What role with Jacob play? Is Victoria lurking around threatening to ruin happiness at an inopportune moment? I hope not. I hate when she and James lurks.
I will be reading for all these answers. I am enjoying the story. Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story! I hope you continue to. :)
And, yes, all those questions will be answered if you keep reading. :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Now Bella is a littel OOC. She is a little more snickity than usually. I wonder if she is that way or if it can be accredited to her newborn temperment and bloodlust. Author's Response: Little bit of both :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Okay many questions:
Did they go tp Forks High with Bella. She didn't seem to know the Cullens? Is this due to amnesia or she doesn't know the town doctor and hs children?
Was she vegan before? I thought this may explain her adverse reaction to draining the buck. However, I am not vegan, but if I ever had to kill the little chicken or cow that I eat, I'm sure I would probably cry and never eat meat again. I try not the think about it.
I'm sure if Bella doesn't want to be vamp. They could just do her a favor and rip her to shreads and burn her. Author's Response: No, the Cullens don't go to public school. They didn't know each other before the events in the prologue chapter.
In the first movie, unlike the book, it is heavily implied that Bella is a vegetarian. More on that will be covered in future chapters.
There's no way they would ever grant her that 'favor'. Especially not Edward. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Will he tell her. He will need to tell here about the quilette boundaries. Does she understand how dangerous she would be to humans if she tried to run off? Author's Response: No, she doesn't understand that yet.
:D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Hopefully not Charle, but maybe it would be nice if Bella could have her dad. Anywhoo. I wonder why Victoria had run across James' scent in the woods mixed with Bella's. Author's Response: It is established in the saga that wolf stench covers vampire scent. The wolves were all over the area where James had attacked Bella, and the wolves were the ones who destroyed him. Their odor masked James and Bella's scents.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
I know she's volitale, but maybe as much honesty as possible would help calm her. I keep forgetting to mention that I don't understand Rose's adversion to Edward allowing Bella's change. It was not a choice in the story. It was that or death, not to dissimilar to Rose's situation with Em. Author's Response: You'll see as the story continues that, sometimes, information also sets her off. Edward's job of deciding what to tell her and when is not an easy one. :)
Rosalie isn't upset with Edward for 'changing her'. Initially, she was upset that he risked their family by trying to suck out the venom, because if he had not been able to control himself, he would have drained her, and that quite probably would have caused a war between the wolves and the Cullens. Why she continues to be a pain will be explained. Later. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Poor eratic Bella. She's closer to acting like Reene now more than ever. I am relieved that Jake and Bella were more like siblings than him crushing on her. That should make things a little easier. Author's Response: Yep. I like the 'easier' angle of having Jacob NOT crushing/in love with Bella. I like Jacob as a friend to her, only.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Who is the threat? Eleazer? Charlie? I don't think Charlie, she wouldn't sense him as a threat. Author's Response: (grin)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
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