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Penname: twilightdiheart [ Contact]
Real name: Michelle Cullen
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Member Since: June 18, 2009
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Thirty something girl that has become obsessed with Twilight, Edward, Rob, etc. I would like to think that I wouldn't leave my family if He sent for me, but I can't be certain. I love the series because I don't have to deal with reality. If I read enough fanfic I can usually dream of Edward. What a great super power to have, dreaming of Robward at will! ; - )
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Summary: 
After the Cullens leave Bella behind she must find a way to survive her pregnancy. Betrayed by the Denali, where is she left to go and what will she become?
Is it a price Bella is willing to pay?
Every choice bears consequences, positive or negative, and results of the consequences will change the course of their lives drastically. What will their consequences be?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Effects and Consequences
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 96247
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2010 Updated: July 09, 2012
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Denali
She seems nicer, but I guess that's a hoax/ Author's Response: Tanya is... interesting.... I may at some point explain but I might not ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Petrified
I don't why she would head to the Volturi? That's just insane. Why can't anyone hear the baby's heart beat? Author's Response: Because they aren't paying attention?
She went to Volterra because she's scared and desperate...
Thanks for reading and reveiwing!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The Volturi
Dumb, insolent, girl. SHe would have been better off by herself, with the wolves, anyone else, but them. Author's Response: Yes she would have but she doesn't know that...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Growing Pains
I bet someone open that desk. How is so trusting of them? Author's Response: That letter is going to be rather interesting... for many reasons....
She's trusting because she doesn't have a choice... desperation makes people do strange things...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Bella Swan receives an invitation to the exclusive Evermore Experience, an in-depth immersion summer program where she plans to fully explore 19th century England, but fate has other plans for her once she arrives.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 153999
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2010 Updated: August 12, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
L must be from the south, because where I'm from everyone uses "Bless your heart" in varying situations Author's Response: That she is...mountains of NC to be exact. =)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Hell and a handbasket
why Author's Response: I'm not sure what you want to know. Feel free to PM me! Or go to the thread & ask there.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: November 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Romance in the air
Still confused. One minute I think Edward is Lord Masen, and then maybe not. If Edward is he, then why persue Bella under two names, and if he is not, then why help the man that's after your dame? Author's Response: More on this in the next chapter. I promise. Edward's not happy and is going to have his say.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: November 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Fallout
I get all are vampire, but I can't yet figured out what the heck is going on. I also haven't quite figured out if I'm intrigued or annoyed by this. ; ) Author's Response: I'm hoping intrigued. I'm not big on annoying people. At least not until basketball season & conference play begins. ;)
Summary:
I'd been dissatisfied more times than I could count in the past two years, which probably wasn't a bad thing. Usually, it just meant another long month of disappointment on my part when we realized the new batch of women were no good. We'd found several candidates that fit our needs, but as was often the case, they lacked that certain spark I'd personally been looking for. It didn't matter, though; I always had a lot of fun deciphering through the rejects.
It wasn't about promiscuity; it wasn't about experimentation, although we did plenty of that. Our program was about learning how to find sexual pleasure, adapting to different methods, and finding that one person who chemically and physically matched us to perfection.
Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, sexual/adult content, and foul language. Canon couples...eventually.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 108433
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2010 Updated: March 02, 2012
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: July 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
I'm so pleased that she has some confidence.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: July 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 The Dame
interesting. i'm trying to keep all my colors straight.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: July 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Interesting that the story teller, I assume it's Bella has entered this situation so willingly. I will be waiting for the whys of this.
Summary: 
All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.
***Tissue Warning***
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
WHAT is wrong with her? Author's Response: lol...all will be revealed in due time. Thanks for the review.
Summary:
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Swoon. Oh don't let him be an ass. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get the chapter in the queue here asap, sot hat you guys don't have to wait long for it to get validated! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter!
XoXo
Shel
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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.
"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."
"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."
"Duly noted, Alice."
Summary: 
Waking up naked in a strange bed is bad enough. Waking up naked and tied up in a strange bed is worse. Even worse than that? Waking up naked and tied up in the bed of the vampire who wants to eat you. WARNING: DARK SEXUAL THEMES, VIOLENCE, GORE.
1st Place Readers' Choice winner in the "There Will Be Blood" contest.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 80475
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2012
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my. That was so naughtly delicious. I love a real Vampward with his entranching bloody eyes.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
She should be pissed at her. He was selfish and did it without asking. Still, I love him.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This story is so freaking good. Can't believe it will be over in a couple of chapters. I have questions. What's going on with Charlie and Jake? Are the other Cullens in this story? I'm thinking they should be out there some where. If Bella can't find a compramise to killing humans will she burn herself. Which poses another important question. If Twilight's Edward wanted to off himself, why not just set yourself on fire instead of going to the Volturi. That's question for Stephanie I guess.
Summary: Bella is a first time drinker sitting in the bar where her three-year relationship was ended. Edward Cullen is a 109-year-old vampire who is suspected of being gay by his family when he is dragged to the same bar. Both feel an attraction to each other and act on it like normal people would. The product, however, is not so normal.
Scared and confused Bella has no choice but to accept the help only Edward and his family can offer. A B/E prego romance. Vamps. AU. Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse never happened.
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Excerpt:
Bella didn’t tell him to stop as he laid her down on the queen sized bed in the middle of the room. Bella didn’t move as he took off her clothes hesitantly, revealing her skin slowly. Nor did she stop him when he took off his. She didn’t stop to ask his name, or how old he was, or why she was so attracted to him.
And she certainly didn’t ask him to put on a condom.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 17921
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2010 Updated: September 08, 2010
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Why live with Mike? That was a bad idea.
I never thought Edward would take advantage of a drunk girl. Tsk tsk; however, I'm not opposed to the idea.
Does she still smell irresitable to him like in Twilight? Author's Response: what's with the hate of Mike? He's a nice guy...some times. Yeah, she still kind of smells like she did in Twilight.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: A Party Song (The Walk of Shame)
Is the address really listed in account inforamtion? Author's Response: well, I know a lot of info is in cooucnt information. I had to take some lieabilties with that. Sorry.
Summary: 
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Bella is about to leave for college and pursue her dream of becoming a teacher, but an unexpected complication leaves her plans in ashes as she struggles to pick up the pieces of her broken life.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 41947
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2010
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Go to school in another state. No one has to know.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I'm surprised Alice hasn't figured it out yet.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm so glad Jake is with Leah. I always thought they made a cute couple.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
How could she not tell her brother and parents about this?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Horrible way for Edward and the family to find out. I'm angry with this girl. Edward should close enough to finish his residency to be able to handle this news now.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
He should be really pissed at her. What made him settle in Seattle?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart Signed
Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Nope, did not live up to my expectations. Does no one see the green eyes? Is that all she got from him? Author's Response: I hope you don't mind me answering all your reviews in one go. Firstly, thank you for taking the time to review in the first place. I really do appreciate it.
I think a lot of your comments are regarding Bella's decision to move to Forks and not tell anyone. A couple of the characteristics of Bella in the Twilight series are her stubborness and her ability to stick to a decision once made. Rightly or wrongly, she made the decision to have the baby and "protect " Edward and his family. She couldn't see past this point. As time went on, it becomes more and more difficult to tell people the truth, so it is easier to just go on as usual. This accident was a catalyst, forcing her to do something that she had been avoiding.
I only ever show Bella's POV, so all feelings and thoughts of the family not relating directly to Bella are hidden from us. The Cullen's, however, are always quick to rally round and forgive easily. As for them not recognising Carlie in the beginning, unless you are looking, you do not see things, even if, afterwards, it is blatantly obvious. No-one, including Edward, would look for similarities, because as far as they were concerned, he had never got anyone pregnant. Esme was looking and saw things clearly - the hair, the smile and the eyes.
As for Edward's character, he is quick to think himself a monster rather than accuse Bella. (as in Twilight) He was never angry at Bella, only at himself.
I hope that helps clear up my reasoning to you. I'm sorry it did not live up to expectations, but the telling Edward part was never a big part in my mind as I wrote it. I can only assume it hit some nerves along the way!
Sue
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