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Penname: bellasara [Contact]
Real name: Sara
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Member Since: June 17, 2009
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I am what I am and that is all that I am!


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Reviews by bellasara
 
Summary:

a new take on Eclipse.

That's all I can really say without completely spoiling it.

rated R for intensity and violence.


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14099
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2008


Reviewer: bellasara Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok, I love it so far.  It is funny and smart.  I love your Bella, she seems stronger and she is sassy.  I also enjoy the no Jake tention, I am sure I will love the rest of it as well.

Thank you

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13657]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: bellasara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Thank you so much, this was a very heart-warming story.  I enjoyed it very much and will be looking out for more.  Congrats on the publishing, it is a wonderful news!

 
Summary: Feature

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EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: bellasara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Possession

So good, so so so good!!!

Thank you it was such a wonderful way to read Breaking Dawn, EPOV was wonderful. it flowed so freaking well with BPOV, and everything that happened in Breaking Dawn.  Just everything was perfect and nothing felt out of place or that there was anything that Edward could have been doing or thinking that did not fit in perfect with the story steph wrote, you are very talented!

I would love to see what you would do with it from here, but I understand writing can take a lot out of a person, just know that this was just wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so flattered! I'm happy that you enjoyed the story.

 
Summary:

 

               Banner for The Way We Move =)

 Fabulous banner made by readergoof!

We have been, as Aro put it, reckless in our ways. We have been having fun. Now that is off the agenda. Period.

SM owns it all!

NC17 to be safe...

Completely off the story line. They're all non-canon, except perhaps the more boring characters.

 

Come play on the forums! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=5882


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 59375
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2009 Updated: July 24, 2010


Reviewer: bellasara Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22, Ornamental Whips and Deals

Jesus, I have almost peed myself.  Thunderbirds?  I am glad I found this story it is hard to find a good funny FF. I am soo enjoying myself reading it!

Thank you



Author's Response:

I love Thunderbirds! Those little puppets are hilarious =D Thanks so much for your review!

xE

 
Summary: Feature

Single father Edward watches his daughter taken before his eyes, along with stranger Bella during a routine trip to the grocery store. Follow him as he searches, and Bella struggles to survive under a delusional madman's torment.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 70724
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2010 Updated: June 21, 2010


Reviewer: bellasara Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The First Night Pt. 2

OMG OMG, I feel so bad for them.  Is Bella going to be raped? Cuz that is so much harder to get over then emotional or physical abuse. Is Lilly going to be so attched to Bella she needs her in her life to cope after they are found?  How long will they be missing?  Geez, is Bella going to be sick from whatever meds he is going to give her? Do they find the real Victoria and Abby, or are they dead? OK crap, I liked the story, I hope she does not get raped, cuz how would she and Edward ever get together if that happened?  I hope they find them sooner rather then later. 

Thank you for this story! You are doing a great job.





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