Reviewer: elisa Signed
November 15, 2008
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Your story is amazing. I've been reading twilighted stories, but never joined until just now, because I had to let you know that I can't wait for the rest of your story! It is so well written, you seem like a very mature author.
I am curious to see if there will be any exciting action, like drama with the return of Edward, or maybe something with Victoria (you elluded to the Laurent incident earlier, but there has been no mention of Victoria).
Anyway, I am truly enjoying your fan fiction, please keep writing!