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Penname: elisa [Contact]
Real name: elisa
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Member Since: November 15, 2008
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Summary:

Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
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Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: elisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story is amazing.  I've been reading twilighted stories, but never joined until just now, because I had to let you know that I can't wait for the rest of your story!  It is so well written, you seem like a very mature author. 

I am curious to see if there will be any exciting action, like drama with the return of Edward, or maybe something with Victoria (you elluded to the Laurent incident earlier, but there has been no mention of Victoria).

Anyway, I am truly enjoying your fan fiction, please keep writing!

 

 
Reviewer: elisa Signed
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This story just keeps getting better!  I need more soon! 

 
Reviewer: elisa Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Such amazing writing.  I absolutely love your story.  I can't wait to read more!  Please update soon. 





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