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Penname: mroth22 [ Contact]
Real name: mary
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Member Since: June 14, 2009
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Summary: 
Jacob stopped Bella from jumping off the cliff in New Moon and Edward never returned.
After 22 years, the Cullens move to Seattle for yet another fresh start and Edward winds up with yet another surprising lab partner... Bella's daughter.
She's so like her mother and yet so different. Is it possible to love both a memory and its reincarnate?
And does Bella's daughter have a few secrets of her own?
*Rated for language, sexuality and awesomeness.
SM owns Twilight but check me out if you're into sex and sarcasm.
Sloppy wet kisses to Kris (aka Mkystich) for the new banner!
Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 86339
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2011
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: January 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: The Princess and the Pea Brain
IF I have to choose, it's you? Wow. he doesn't want to choose but would choose Emma. Edward is an ass. I hope Emma imprints on someone soon, just to hurt him.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Scented.
Heartfail! I love Edward and Bella and hope they end of together. I think Edward is just now realizing that he still loves Bella. I think Emma will be fine since she hasn't imprinted yet. She will meet someone. Be interesting though to see how you will pull this all together. Can't wait for next update.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Humanity
WoW! i'm not sure who to feel sorrier for. Bella, Emma or maybe even Edward. I am Bella-Edward all the way and I hope he doesn't end up with Emma. Not sure how Bella is going to handle what happened especially with him just running off after Emma. Emma is young and I assume she will imprint at some point.
Would be funny if Edward picked Emma and she then imprinted on someone and Edward is left along just like he wanted when he left Bella all those years ago.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Unchained Melody
Holy crap! of course Emma would catch them. I can't decide if Edward and Bella still love each other or if it is just yearning for what could have been. Right before they got caught Edward thought something was off but I hope it isn't because he loves Emma. I think he was only with her because she is part of Bella and looks like her but is stronger. I hope this ends of E/B but I have my doubts.
Update soon!
Summary: Married for three years and expecting their first child, Bella and Edward were ready for their happily ever after, but that seems to be threatened when someone from the past reenters their lives, holding secrets that could break the couple up.
Thanks to MintKiss for the banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 62261
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: May 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Aftermath
Edward is making a huge mistake not telling Bella that he had coffee with Tanya. He knows she is insecure and not telling her about coffee and having her call him on his cell phone and not tell Bella is going to create some drama between them.
I think that he slept with Tanya at the beginning of his relationship with Bella. I don't think it happened after they got serious but I do believe it did happen while he was dating Bella. My guess is that she thought she was pregnant afterward and Edward realized how he felt about Bella and wouldn't leave her. Just a guess and I could be totally wrong!
Really like this story and can't wait for next update.
Summary: In the dead silence, all of the details suddenly fell into place for me. I’d made an absolute fool of myself. Jacob was smitten, thrilled that I cared so much for him, while my husband stood there, betrayal and disappointment written across his face. He turned away from me, and the realization hit me: in all my efforts to right Rosalie’s wrongs, I lost sight of what was actually important. And on top of that, he’d given me ample enough warning. He even went as far to tell me to fix it. And I made it worse. And now Edward wanted nothing to do with me. “Edward-”
“I don’t want to hear it,” he said dejectedly. I could tell by the tone of his voice that he was hurt. The last thing I wanted to do was hurt him. Pangs of regret attacked me. I should’ve kept my mouth closed.
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
and never brought to mind?
(credit to M81170)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97999
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2010
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Autopilot
Anther cliff hanger??? you're killing me! I am starting to think that he did not sleep with Tanya but something did happen. Not sure what the deal is with valentine's day but I think Jake blew it out of proportion.
I hope you update soon!!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Autopilot
Anther cliff hanger??? you're killing me! I am starting to think that he did not sleep with Tanya but something did happen. Not sure what the deal is with valentine's day but I think Jake blew it out of proportion.
I hope you update soon!!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed 
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Flashback
Love this story. I really like how you showed Bella realizing that she was responsible for making Edward feel insecure and how she allowed Jake to be a third party in her marriage. I dislike Jake so much. he is an ass and doesn't care about Bella. If he did he wouldn't have said that Bella was in love with him in front of Edward to cover his affair with Rose.
looking forward to next update.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: March 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Family
Really liking this story. It is so real. I am concerned about what Edward was doing on New Years eve. I have a feeling he did something bad. Maybe not sleep with someone but maybe kissed? If he did then he is in big trouble. I really hate Jake. He is such a jackass. Glad Bella told him they couldn't be friends anymore and she realized what she was doing.
Can't wait for next update.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Valentine
glad they are trying to get back to normal. I still think there is more to the Tanya situation. I think he slept with her. If Bella finds out he is a dead man walking. If it turns out he did sleep with Tanya, I hope Bella doesn't turn to Jake. I hope she kicks both to the curb. lol
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Uninvited
I knew something happened with Tanya! He better not have slept with her or see her again. I really hate Jake too. He is just trying to cause trouble and edward is being immature by letting Jake get to him. Can't wait for next update.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Warzone
hmm. Just had a thought. I don't think Edward slept with Tanya New Year's but what if Edward slept with Tanya when he left Bella years ago and Jake knows about it. It would Explain why Tanya seems to know Edward well and Emmett probably knows about it too. There is definitely something going on with Edward and Tanya.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Promise
I think meeting with Jake is a big mistake. He is going to bring up Tanya and I still think that Edward was with her when he left Bella years ago. I don't think anything happened recently but I bet it did back then. Her sister was with Emmett then and so the knew each other. I can't wait for the update to find out what is going on.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Rebirth
Great Story! really loved it. Glad to see Jake got what he deserved though I wish there had been a smackdown on Tanya too! Hope you write an epilogue to see the family in the future.
Thanks for sharing this story with us!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Death
I knew he was dating Tanya! What a bastard. Acting all pissy because Jake is Bella's friend and he was jealous and then he cheats on Bella while she's pregnant. He even called her on the phone once he realized he was going to get caught! I'm glad she made him leave!
Can't wait for the next update! Update soon please!!!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Rebirth
Great Story! really loved it. Glad to see Jake got what he deserved though I wish there had been a smackdown on Tanya too! Hope you write an epilogue to see the family in the future.
Thanks for sharing this story with us!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Enough
I love this story! it's one of my favorites. I hope a few more questions are answered before it ends. I really want to know what Jacob saw on Valentines day that made him think Edward was cheating with Tanya! There had to be something other than talking! Secondly, how far did the touching go on New Years? Edward was pretty vague and Bella just believes him even though she now knows he lied to her! He said he was protecting her but no, he was protecting himself. Bella may have been too close to Jake but she didn't hide anything from Edward. He hadn't known Tanya that long so why was he upset that she "Liked him" and felt bad. Edward should have felt bad that he was with Tanya on Valentine's day rather than Bella. Were those flowers even for Bella? He knew she didn't like flowers. Something more happened on Valentine's too and Jake saw it. I really hope this gets cleared up! Sorry for the long post but I really love this story! Author's Response: There's so much left unanswered... but don't worry! All of your questions will be answered in the next chapter! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Enough
sorry for the second post but another thing that bugs me is that she asked him if Tanya touched him and did he touch Tanya, but he never answered her. He just hung his head down which tells me that he did touch her too. He was way too vague on what happened. Bella needs to demand that he tell her everything or she will ask Tanya and Jake! Author's Response: Please! Don't apologize for the 2nd review! I appreciate it!
Uh.. as to the other thing -- stay tuned!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Details
great chapter. Thank you for answering all my questions! I'm glad that they straightened it all out and dealt with Tanya. Now they need to deal with jacob!
can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: July 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Auld Lang Syne
great ending! Really enjoyed the story.
Summary: 
Bella Swan becomes Bella Black and leaves Forks with Jacob to find their own slice of Heaven. After Jacob’s death, Bella resigns herself to the fact that she has already had her one shot at the ‘happily ever after’ fairytale. She throws herself into her writing and avoids Forks at all costs until the day when their son asks her if he can spend the summer with Charlie and Billy. What decision will Bella make when she is presented with the opportunity of a second chance at the love of her life?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 151208
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: December 09, 2010
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - A Promise Made
came across this story and really like it. I iike your version of Bella and her relationship with Jason. I like how she was happy with Jacob and doesn't hate the Cullens for what happened. Can't wait to see Edward and Bella interact. Pls update soon! Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter is being submitted tonight (after I am done playing in the chat room here on Twilighted) again, thanks for reading and especially for the review.
Summary: 
“He’s engaged,” Angela blurts out in the middle of dinner. Once those words escape from her mouth, I know nothing will ever be the same again.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Word count: 9877
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2010 Updated: April 23, 2010
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Denial
I hope you are going to continue this story. It looks interesting.
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Denial
I hope you are going to continue this story. It looks interesting.
Summary:   
Bella goes through the motions in life and finds herself always thinking about her past, her lost chance at love. Forces begin to compel her, but is she finally strong enough to go after the only thing she has ever truly wanted… even when that dream is farther out of reach than ever?
Excerpt:
“I don’t have any reason to break things off with you. I know this must seem crazy. I mean,” Edward had paused and jangled the keys he was staring at apparently hoping that they would give him some guidance, “we get along great. I always knew we would..."
Edward had reached over as though he’d meant to tuck a lock of hair behind my ear, but I felt myself shift toward the side window. Lit in an olive hue from the latest Volvo’s dashboard glow, I couldn’t avoid his face, which was now mutely reflected on the glass of every window. It was the first time I hadn’t wanted to look at him. Ever.
Thanks to beegurl13 for the amazing new banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 90614
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: December 16, 2010
Reviewer: mroth22 Signed
Date: March 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Stems & Pieces
Just found this story and really like it. Can't wait to find out why Edward dumped her. I hope Bella becomes more confident soon and starts to socialize more. Looking forward to your next update. Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you're enjoying it!
No worries, Bella is going to let that inner voice start seeping out soon - let's hope poor Edward can handle it
Working on the next one now!
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