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Penname: twimomof4girls [Contact]
Real name: Michelle
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Member Since: June 13, 2009
Website: www.mamainpajamas.blogspot.com
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I am a SAHM to 4 lovely girls and total Twilight addict, all thanks to my little sister.  She forced me to read Twilight and nothing has been the same since.  Now I forced her to read fan fiction! 


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Reviews by twimomof4girls
 
Summary:

 

Banner compliments of CrimsonIceGoddess - YOU ROCK my dear!

 

 

 

It is amazing how quickly life can resume normalcy after a traumatic event.  It's not that the inhabitants of the scenario don't know they are rebounding, but the force of the universe pulls them back into its patterns without their consent.  Everything will not be the same, but the normal routine is enhanced, flavored by the bittersweet taste of change or loss in any form.

Bella told me she had once envisioned our lives as the complex pattern of a rug, the colors and textures intermingling, each individual but, when placed together, producing a beautiful creation.  If challenged, I would have most likely used a musical analogy.  I would have compared our lives to experiencing a musical performance by one of the masters. 

Beethoven...Bach...or if you wanted a little strife, Wagner.  Most at one time or another had performed their masterpieces within European chapels.  I could envision the rise and fall of the notes, as they would weave their spell.  The light in the building as it filtered through stained glass, creating a dizzying array of colors. The smell from beeswax candles permeating the room.  Modern musical halls lacked this perfect simplicity.  Yes...this would have been my analogy.

 

Little was I to know that Fate had much in store for me.  Before she was through with me, I would barely resemble the boy I'd been...

 

What happens to the Cullens after the Volturi left. Edward and Bella begin life together and face both heartbreak after their lives are irrevocably changed by losses of family and friends, and immeasurable joy as the events of their lives unfold. 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Completed: Yes Word count: 388303
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Anything for Love

oh wow.  Charlie.  just - wow.



Author's Response:

I hope I did justice to Charlie's reaction.  My betas have the conversation with Edward for review as we speak!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Mouth of Babes

WTG Henry!  such a smartie pants!



Author's Response:

I have six kids of my own - all under the age of 8.  I think Nessie and Henry are a combination of all my pack.  

:)   April

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Only with the Heart

the wedding!  it was lovely - Emmett finally gets to play preacher! 



Author's Response:

Sorry for the mix up in chapters - I don't know what I was doing.  :)   Christmas pressure!!!

 

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Reaction

I'm hoping that Nessie's insecurities are just stemming from the car incident and Jacob isn't leaving her!  Nessie having Bella's abandonement dreams, hmm.... 



Author's Response:

Hmm... we'll see.   I don't think anyone's love life goes without some trouble - even including a imprints.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Innocence

Wow.  Amazing.  I wonder what Nessie's reaction will be.  And how will Henry manage to torture the Volturi enough to release him early?  I am sure he's got something up his sleeve.



Author's Response:

I've mentioned this to a couple of the other reviewers, but I am so grateful that I've been able to build another character that people can trust.  It is amazing how many truly believe that Henry is coming back. 

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Children

OK  After crying through the fake chapter and nearly losing my mind, I had to read the real one twice.  Thank you for not killing Jake off.  And if Nessie and Henry need any help with that doctor, I'd be glad to assist!



Author's Response:

I'm considering a "Jackass" outtake.  I just see them recruiting Jasper into it - for some reason.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Moments

Wow.  That took me a minute - had to do a reread.  Wow.



Author's Response:

:)  my little twist.  Leah was one of my favs from the originals.  Not becasue she could be a B, but because she faced so much heartache and still had loyalty for her friends.   I just needed to hear her snarky voice again.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Surprise

Wow!  This chapter rocked my socks!  I wonder who is going to be the savior with the Volturi this time?  Nessie?  Henry himself?  I can't wait to see!



Author's Response:

It won't be immediate - hang in there with me!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Farewell

Very had to handle - their grief is so palpable.  Are you familiar with Paramore's song We are Broken?  Take a listen, it played in my head as I read this chapter. 



Author's Response:

I had not heard that song, but after receiving this went right over to Utube.  Truly, that song should be put as the playlist for this chapter.  EXCELLENT recommendation.

april

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Unanswerable Questions

Wow - I'm so glad that Rose and Emmett reconciled.  I've been waiting and waiting!  And I'm on the edge of my seat for the next update.  Henry's return...



Author's Response:

I know you've already gone on to the next chapters - but just wanted to give a shout out for reviewign.  Thank You!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 60: I Alone

Hooray for Henry!  His triumphant return was worth waiting for!



Author's Response:

Glad he reedemed himself for you!  

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Sunshine

Dead??  Vladimir and Stefan?  Oh my. 



Author's Response:

:(  I know.  I wrote that in the story line over a year ago, and I couldn't change it, but I hope their ending will make it okay!

april

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Beyond

great ending!  I love Seth imprinting on the baby!!!  A sequel would be awesome.  I'm so glad that I stuck with you on your journey and got to enjoy your work.  It's been a wonderful read and I can't wait to see more from you.  Even though I really hate FFn, I'll head over there just for you! 

 
Sway by Hibbleton Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 719]
Summary:

Single mom Bella finally has life under control again when a new PD starts working at the same radio station and teaches her that she doesn't have to be alone to take care of her responsibilities.

Epilogue posted!

Sway

Huge thanks to Shug for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 194808
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Everybody Knows

I'd love to hear what J&EM said to Edward to get it out of their systems - I'm sure it would be hilarious!!



Author's Response:

A few others have said the same thing, and I *may* do an outtake at some point once it develops better in my head.  I have a general idea of the kind of harrassment I'd write, but I need to flesh it out a little more before I attempted it so that it doesn't sound forced...and I'm on a roll with actual chapters right now, so it won't come until I slow down...or unless the scene gets so clear in my head that I can't concentrate on anything else.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Moving Forward

yay!!!  They'll figure it out together.  Excellent update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Booomerang

Oh Edward - I hope he's doing his best to fix this mess.  Great update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! And yes, he has a pretty good plan to turn things around.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

Yay!!  I love a good HEA!  This story has been such a pleasure to read - thanks for sharing it.  I can't wait for the outtakes - I'm not really ready for Sway to end just yet.  Looking forward to your new story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

 
Summary:

Bella, Alice, Rosalie, Tanya: The four were supposed to be together forever.  After cancer claims one of them, Bella decides to stay with her late best friend's husband and children to help with the grieving process.  But as what began as a temporary move becomes more permanent, she and Edward will have to adapt to their changing situations.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 21306
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2009


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I cannot stop the tears.  What an amazing story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; they're better than chocolate cake!

-Miss Mudpie

 
After All by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 749]
Summary:

Banner by Ms.Ambrosia

 

Bella is in a car crash that kills her mother and Phil, leaving her with many physical and emotional injuries. Bella is completely devastated by the accident and is no longer the woman she used to be. She returns to Washington to be closer to her father and best friends, trying to find a way to put her life back together.  

Edward has had a "thing" for Bella for ten years, but he never acted on it, and no one ever knew about his feelings for her. He's done a decent job of building a good life, but Bella's return makes him question and re-think everything he thought he knew.

Once these two meet again, he's going to do all he can to finally get his girl, but life and circumstances will make it difficult for him - and Bella will be the biggest challenge of all.  

Story is AU-Human. 

 

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 159480
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Concession

I'm really loving this story.  I found it when you posted the outtake.  I'm heading to read that now!  Can't wait to read E giving Tanya the boot.

 
Summary:

 

“Son, you are here to receive a precious gift.  It is one that my father bestowed upon me, and his father bestowed upon him—one I will pass on to you now and expect that you give to your own sons when it is time.”

“You are a Cullen, and were therefore born with certain natural—endowments—that predispose you to success with women.  But, there is a beauty in sex which, if you could only grow to appreciate it—an art which, if you could only commit to learning it—will bring you and the women in your life such divine fulfillment as most mortals never know.  It is the art of worship, Edward, and it has very little to do with sex.”

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15498
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: In The Bedroom

hot.  I'd love to read an outtake chapter of Carlisle talking to Jasper. 

 
Mind's Eye by catharticone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

A momentary loss of control leaves Edward desperate to find a way to fulfill the promise he made to Bella about "trying" during their honeymoon. 


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 22762
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 (Ninapolitan)

I liked this - but I'd definitely like to see some Carlisle smut.  Maybe an alternate scene?  I do love your writing!



Author's Response:

Hmm... I'm tempted to do a really AU scene, but I'm not quite sure I could bring myself to post it!  It seems so very out of canon and out of character for all involved.  But I will think about it!  Thanks for taking the time to comment!

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: September 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68- Let Me Introduce To...

I saved this update as a reward for cleaning the kitchen - well worth it!  Oh yes, outtakes please - definitely one of Rob and the ladies of the View.



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! maybe as a reward for readers soon. I really have one in mind with Barbara (cuz she kinda scares me!) so we'll see, then there is always OTT...

thanks my dear! 

more soon! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74-Remember Me?

I'm a spoiler alert kind of girl.  I hate knowing the ending before I see a movie.  Remember Me was no exception.  The second I realized what was going to happen, I got up and ran from the theater.  I lived it.  I couldn't bear to see Tyler in THAT building.  In my mind, all I could see were the thousands of people covered in ash, running past my office on Park Ave.  I sat outside the door and cried until the movie ended and my sister and bestie came out.  My poor friend.  She knew the ending but I begged her not to tell me.  She felt awful.  Such an amazing movie - maybe in a few years I'll be able see it through to the end.  Rob was amazing.

Love this chapter.  Jen is so amazingly strong and I love her scheming.  Can't wait to see it all come to a head!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much my dear for telling your story. This movie truly touched on a lot. So much emotion. I understand your need to wait. But isn't it incredible how the cast could provide that emotion for us. So proud of Rob.

Jen is there for him, no doubt. And the scheming will continue to grow. hehehe.

thanks so much ! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90- Ellen

I really needed that.  Thanks.  I love when I check my email and see an update from you.  Loved Ellen. 

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85-Orcas

OMG!!!!!  I've been awful at reviewing lately, but this pulled me right out of my reviewing slump!  Holy Cannoli.  A proposal.  I LOVE it.



Author's Response:

Woohooo! thanks so much my dear! 

He's making it official! 

thanks! 

mWAH!

steph

 




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