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The day Bella went to the Cullens’ home for the first time.  Starting at Chapter 15 of Twilight from various Cullen perspectives.  This story is the behind the scenes look at the day Bella met the Cullens.  What did they think and what went on where Bella could not see them?  

 

 

Carlisle’s POV, Esme’s POV, Jasper’s POV and Emmett's.

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17689
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Preparations - Carlisle's POV

Wow!  This is fantastically in character!  Right down to the verbal beat down Rosalie gave to Jasper.  Poor guy.

Rushing off to read the next few chapters!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Meetings - Esme's POV

Typical nervous mom.  :-)  How frustrating to have Alice right all the time! lol  I love Esme and you really did her justice.

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Siblings - Jasper's POV

Ah, Jasper.  He holds a special place in my heart.  I feel so bad for him.  But you did such an awesome job writing him.  :-)

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Insecurities - Emmett's POV

Wow, you really wrote a deep side to Emmett!  I'll admit, I'm no fan of Rosalie, but you explained things that at least make me see why she is how she is.

Can't wait for the update!

 
Warmth by KatieBelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 858]
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A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011


Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Liberated

I've run out of words.  Hot, sexy and perfect.

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Battle

Also, forgot to mention that I loved the cheesiness of it all!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Battle

Guh.  I don't know if I have words besides, guh.

That was just pretty damn hot!  NICE update!!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Warmth

So fabulously romantic and hot!!  *fans self*

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Light

I did catch the biting! Nice work!  Loved every moment of it!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Dangerous

I love Edward's thoughts at the end.  How perfectly him.  *sigh*

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Dangerous

I love Edward's thoughts at the end.  How perfectly him.  *sigh*

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Dangerous

I love Edward's thoughts at the end.  How perfectly him.  *sigh*

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: October 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Goodbye

Well, I thought the angstiness came across very well.  It was painfully beautiful.  Nice work!

 
Movie Night by NoMoreThanUsual Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
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A night at home with the Cullens and Bella.  Set shortly after Bella and Edward return from Phoenix after James’ attack. 

 

 

Family fluff and teasing. 

 

 

Esme’s POV.  Humour. 

 

 
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4491
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: September 29, 2008


Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: December 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so cute!  Exactly how I would picture a nice evening at home with the in-laws.  :-) 

 
Summary:

 

 

 

After weeks of Emmett teasing Bella, she plans to give him back a little of what he's been dishing out.  This time, Emmett may have bitten off more than he can chew.

 

 

Family humour.  Various POVs. 

 

 

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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31879
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole

Oh this looks like it's a fun story!  Glad I stumbled across it!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Threats

I love the relationship between Bella and Emmett!  They fall right into that big brother/little sister part.  Great job writing them!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Inspiration

"Once you go pack, you never go back"  Priceless!!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Plan

Oh I'm gonna love seeing Emmett's reactions!  Good thing I have a few chapters ahead of me!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Phase 1

Poor Emmett, but he's getting what's coming to him!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Pheromones

Oh, I don't feel too bad for him.  I'm sure he's just as able to get as well as he gives.  I can't wait to see his reaction to all of this!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Conspiracy

Ooh, adding Rosalie to the mix ... going to be interesting!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Rosalie's Return

Haha!  Emmett is in for it now!  The interactions are great, can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Haha!  Too bad he finally found out, but it'll be great when he finds out it was all Bella.  And who just walked in?  Esme?  Emmett seems scared of whoever it is.

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Busted

LOL!  I love how the the family line up went.  Hysterical stuff!  But with Emmett, things are NEVER over.  :-)

Can't wait to see what else is coming.

 
Reviewer: Starlight623 Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Instigator

Emmett, a catapault and Newton & co. as targets??  Perfect afternoon for the Cullen boys.

I cannot WAIT to see what's next!

 




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