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Real name: Kim Locy
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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room

I really like this story. hope you post soon.

 
Summary: Feature

AU-Human.  Manwhore Edward bets Emmett that he can remain abstinent for 40 days and nights - or lose his beloved Volvo. He's convinced it'll be a piece of cake. Of course, that was before sex kitten Bella moved to Forks, and set her sights solely on the delectable Edward Cullen.  NC-17 for extreme profanity, and ridiculously smutty sexy time.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 71906
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2009


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Dead Money

I would really like to know what is next.  When is the next chapter? 

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

Oh my gosh!!!!  I am totally in love with this story you have no idea.  Please put up another chapter soon. 

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5440]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Distractions: Bella's POV

Man can't wait for Jacob's POV on the Quil/Claire thing.  And oh most definately can't wait to go shopping....NOT...I totally feel Bella's pain, I am one of those chicks that just do not dig it at all.  Poor Bella, she has my sympathies.

Can't wait for the next chapter,

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
Guarding Edward by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1578]
Summary:

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

like the story!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I hope you enjoy all those NEXT buttons you can click!

Kathie

 
Summary:

Edward is married and devoutly Catholic, but what happens when he meets the love of his life two years later? Will he follow his heart or will he honor his past commitments and stay true to his faith? AU/AH, B/E/T, A/J, R/E

 

 Thanks to RoseArcadia for the fantastic banner!!

Come Play At The Forum:

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=3981


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 106373
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Voice Unheard

I love the story and can't wait for more,

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
Summary:

Picks up decades from the day in the meadow of New Moon. What if it had been Victoria who showed up, not Laurent? What if Victoria's 'plans' for Bella did not include killing her, but changing her (the one thing Edward wasn't willing to do to keep Bella safe from James.).

 

Bella has been living as a member of the Volturi for decades now, not able to remember her human life. What happens when she goes searching for her past and comes face to face with her mate and his family whom she has forgotten about for the past 65 years?

Thanks to Readergoof for the amazing banner!!!

Thanks to Tellytubby101 for the other amazing banner!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 86459
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Of course I want a happy reunion for Bella and Edward....Are you kidding me?

Waiting Patiently Impatienly,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

haha, everyone wants a happy reunion. We'll have to see how that works out, though. thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

A pregnancy changes everything in an instant. Bella went from being a Godmother to a mother and ended up raising her best friends daughter after she died from giving birth. With her families support, she makes it through obstacles until she meets a gorgeous guy at a rare night out. Something in his past could tear her world apart, will it end up that way or will love conquer all?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 52897
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Unexpected

Oh  too short....Seriously though I really like this story.  Good gravy I hope things don't get too awkard when it is revealed that Alicen is Jasper's.  I am right aren't I.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
Summary:

Bella Swan had big dreams.  You know what they say, the bigger they are the harder they fall.  When her life takes a sad turn she is forced to do whatever she can just to keep her head above water.  Edward Cullen's life is perfect.  Well, almost.  Perhaps these two can help each other out in an unorthodox way.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: No Word count: 326924
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2011


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Interlude

GAH!!!! just started this story yesterday and totally love it! Write more soon!!!

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

Wow!  You read 300,000+ words in a day.  I'm in awe.  Thanks for letting me know you found the story and are enjoying it.

 
Summary:

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl? 

Banner by Twimom817 @ TA


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 226754
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Happy now?  Happy now you ask?  Well I would be happy if in fact you posted the next chapter ASAP cuz I am going crazy on what Edward's reaction is going to be.  I am so flippin happy that she is pregnant.  Oh my goodness, oh my goodness.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)

Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again.  I could not do this without her. :) 

Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.

Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

loves it I do.  Can't wait till the next chapter

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

totally love it can't wait for more

Waiting Impatiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
The Ties That Bind by yesyov Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary:

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What happens when your past collides with your present and changes your future forever? Come read The Ties That Bind.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 367368
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2011


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Times are a-changing

I have to say this is one of my favorite stories.  I get all excited when I see that it has been updated.  Keep up the excellent work.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

Oh Mia Mya

Thank you so very much.  Your kind words are greatly appreciated.  I find wine helps with the waiting (and the writing) at times. 

Edward and Bella were finally talking to me in the shower this morning.  It's great when they do that, even if it makes it a little crowded in there.

Leisa

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - One Step forward, Two steps back

Love the story.  Oh man I wish Bella would spill already on what she did or didn't do while pregnant with Dan.

Waiting Paitiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

It's coming like a freight train... you know it's going to happen but you have to watch regardless.  Stay tuned

Leis

PS.. Thanks for the review.  I'm happy you're on board.

 

 
I Get Off by Britpacksuccubus Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 333]
Summary:

 

When Bella becomes Edward's assistant and moves in across the street, what will happen when he takes in the view? And not just that of the skyline... AH, OOC, Lemons


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 71226
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2009 Updated: January 29, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Candyward

what can I say...I loved it.  I really like this story and can't wait for another chapter.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

Hold on to yer britches, OMM, chapter 6 is awaiting validation as I type.  ;)

 
Meant to Be by juliebee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 611]
Summary:

A life-changing event drives teenage Bella from her home in Arizona to live with her father in Forks. Will she be ostracized for the choices that she has made, or will she find the love & acceptance that she craves for her and her new baby?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 68831
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - First Talk

I really like this story.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Keep em coming.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MY

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 First Defense

Yeah Edward!!!  Poor Bella having to hear that talk from those jerks.  I hope you post again soon.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Party Time

What the hell!holy crap why do these things always have to happen. 

you best post another to explain yourself please.  lol

Waiting Patiently NOT so Patiently

OH MIA MYA

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Family

No flippin way  argh

 
Summary:

 

 

dorian gray bannerIt is 1886 and eighteen year old,innocent Isabella Swan is staying with the famous wit Oscar Wilde and his family while she visits Europe. At Wilde's house she meets Mr Bram Stoker, Mr Sheridan Le Fanu, Lord Alfred Douglas and his mysterious friend Mr Edward Cullen ( rake about town and debaucher of young innocents). Miss Swan is about to delve into the sordid underbelly of Victorian sex! Come with us genlte reader...


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 74892
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: An evening at the theatre

most definately would like to go to Chang's most definately.  Hot, Hot, Hot.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

LOL!! thanks so much for your review! it's great to know what people liked!! glad you're enjoying it, more to come! (so to speak!)

 
After All by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 749]
Summary:

Banner by Ms.Ambrosia

 

Bella is in a car crash that kills her mother and Phil, leaving her with many physical and emotional injuries. Bella is completely devastated by the accident and is no longer the woman she used to be. She returns to Washington to be closer to her father and best friends, trying to find a way to put her life back together.  

Edward has had a "thing" for Bella for ten years, but he never acted on it, and no one ever knew about his feelings for her. He's done a decent job of building a good life, but Bella's return makes him question and re-think everything he thought he knew.

Once these two meet again, he's going to do all he can to finally get his girl, but life and circumstances will make it difficult for him - and Bella will be the biggest challenge of all.  

Story is AU-Human. 

 

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 159480
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoyed chapter 2...3 is on it's way!!! Thanks for patiently waiting and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Girlfriend

Well how did I stumble accross After All?  Well I was looking for yet another story to sink my teeth into and so I went to most recent and I thought that this might be a story I would like and well I was wrong....I LOVE IT!!!

So hope to have you post soon and until then I will be

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're loving it!!! Seeing that just makes my day! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan has a loving supportive family and friends, but life isn't always easy. When she finds herself pregnant without a significant other, she retreats to Florida to make sense of her life.

Love isn't always in black and white...

OOC

Special thanks to M81170 for the new banner and special thanks to ms_ambrosia for my new GIF, which is now on the Forum.  Virtual hugs to you both.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 200321
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2009 Updated: January 29, 2012


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Destruction Leads to Life - Part 1

Yes I hang my head in shame as I am one of those who do not leave a review.  I apologize for that.  I have no excuse other than number one I am lazy.  The next being as I have so many other stories that I am reading I just feel the need to read them as well. 

That being said I really like this story and I am anxiously waiting for part two of this.  Holy crap James is a douchebag and I hope he gets his in the end.  Question though is Edward Alice's brother?  Just curious.  I am quite slow at times.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 



Author's Response:

Yes, James is an asshat in the true sense of the word.  Everyone wants that man to pay.

Edward's twin sister is another web I'm weaving.  There are clues that make you go hmm...and there will be more.

In all honestly, his sister is someone that has already been introduced, either directly or indirectly.  The exact answer will depend on how complicated I want this thing to get.

It's complicated enough already don't you think?  Should I create some more webs?

Thank you for reviewing, it made my night ;-)

~Browns

 
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Destruction Leads to Life - Part 2

Mad? Mad you say...What ticked me off you ask...Well for starters that flippin James is such a douchebag I don't have the words to begin to even describe the loathing in regards to this oxygen theif that he is.  I so hope he never gets a chance to even see that poor little baby that Bella is carrying.  He so does not deserve it.

Second of all Jasper...Sweet, poor Jasper...PIGEON PELLETS!!!!!  All he is a spoiled baby who just runs away.  Basically I am just pissed off cuz of the message he left her telling her he didn't want her to ever to call him.  What a pussy.  Plus he was such a thoughtless ass having kissing Alice before knowing whether or not Bella was in fact over him.  Men are such idiots sometimes I.....

But most of all I can't get over that horrible shrew Alice!!  She knew the truth, she knew how much pain Bella was in and this is what she goes ahead and does to her so called friend.  ARGH!!!!!  It pains me to say such horrible things about Alice...Normally I just love her.

Now that I have vented...but you did ask so I supose I was only doing what I was told.  LOL

Love the story and am really looking forward to what Jasper has to say.  Hope I get to find out soon.  I love this story and hope to hear from you soon.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 



Author's Response:

OMG!  WOW!  I did ask...lol!!!

Your review rivals with Scorp this chapter...I'm speechless.

I will say this, you miss nothing.  There are some readers that did not pick up the hints in this chapter, which my goal as always is to subtly hint at something, and then reveal it in all its f*up glory.  Although, these hints were less than subtle.

You have been patient with me thus far, please continue to do so.  The webs would not be so fascinating, if they were woven in a rush.

Thank you for remaining a loyal reader and reviewer!

 

 
Summary:

Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband  than she thought.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Driveway

what in the world?  I am just stunned and shocked.  i think i might need to reread this story to figure out if i missed something or not.  if i didn't yet i hope you spill soon cuz i am going crazy here.

Love the story and i am

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

 




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