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Penname: Souillet [ Contact]
Real name: Alisha
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Member Since: June 10, 2009
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Summary: It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!
Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.
Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I am totally upset that Jasper lies, or witholds some of the truth from Bella..but love the chapter nontheless. Great job. Author's Response: The truth will come out...he is doing it for a reason. I think it is funny how both brothers feel the need to protect Bella from herself. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue
Wow Loved it!!! I think it was a great story and very well written.. you know you could easily make a sequal without it "dragging" on. hehe
Summary: 
Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.
Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo
AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:
http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr
OR in my LJ gallery:
http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2
Special Update:
For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.
Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes
Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I really enjoyed this chapter, it was great to see this side of Edward and have a stronger bond/appreciation for what Carlisle does and why you saves people. Great writing and can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thank you! And that was a tough chapter to write. Poor Edward!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
By far my one of my favorite chapters! I love Jasper and am glad they were able to have a moment together with no worries and his life is so facinating! Author's Response: Thanks! And Jasper was (and is) rather unexpectedly fun to write!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Awe I love this chapter and it was worth the wait to have her realize what we all know! Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I much prefer this logic to Stephanie`s, it make a little more sense and I was never sold on the whole Renesme part of the Saga. And like you said even if it should be impossible for a Vampire to have an erection it is quite a bit more fun if they can hehe. Author's Response: Ha. Yes, indeed!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
ahh!!! I have been reading the story for two days straight and am so dissapointed I am at the end of what you have posted! I can#t wait till Monday to read more! Thanks for the great writing and I will be sure to pass your story along to other readers!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
ahhh, I need more!! Love the writing.
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I really enjoyed this chapter and really hope that Martha is in it more and hears some stories about the Cullens, I would really like to know what she thinks about all this.
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Wow really enjoyed this chapter and am glad to see everyone working together for the common goal and greater good. I really wish though we do not have to wait so long to the next chapter :( Author's Response: Thanks! And like I said, some of you want it all NOW, some are begging me to slow down. :-)
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Thanks for the chapter update, it was great and yep I was waiting for Chip to get cocky and stir up some trouble, although never thought he would take it to national news. Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
So she is sitting I hope it is safe to assume she can walk, can't wait for the next part. Great writing I really enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
This was a great chapter, I love the time and effort you put into to giving as the image as if we were right there in the store, the sounds the smell. Your description was wonderful.
Can't wait to read the next chapter and wish we did not have to wait so long. Author's Response: You may be confusing the next chapter with the epilogue. The next chapter may be up tomorrow but certainly by Thursday.
Summary: When Bella is seventeen she is brutally attacked for weeks. She escapes and is saved by Edward Cullen. Six years later, adjusting to normal life is difficult for her. Edward enters her life, shaking things up.
Thanks to pixieyow for the banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 67075
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue
Loved the story and look forward to reading the sequel!
Summary: Takes place several years after New Moon. AU. Bella never went cliff diving, Edward never went to the Volturi. For years Edward has been forced to live with the pain of Bella’s absence in his life, knowing that it is no one’s fault but his own. How will Edward and his family react when Isabella Swan turns up as one of Carlisle’s intensive care patients and has no where to go? Will the mystery of her condition and the events that she has overcome in Edward’s absence be revealed?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 55312
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: January 17, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Wow love love loved this story... and you know *hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge nudge* there could totally be a sequel to this story hehe!!!!
Summary: 
Jasper cannot handle Edward and Bella's overpowering emotions anymore. When Edward and Alice go hunting, Jasper decides to teach Bella how to satisfy her needs. But what will he learn in the process? Nominated for two Eddie/Bellie Awards. Winner of the Twi-Fi Award for Best Non Canon Couple.
Categories: AU, Other Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 59555
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: September 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Let's Find a Way
Ok so I say up until this point I love the story and can't wait to read the rest. I also have to say that no matter how you slice it I think what Jasper and Bella are doing is cheating. I know I am sorry, but just because they did not kiss or have intercourse I think they did so many other intimate things that wow still means cheating heheh I love the Lemons and can't wait to find out how the story ends.
Summary: Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: The Ambassador is Revealed
hmm I think it would have been way more better to hold of on telling us what the song was until the wedding.. but that's just my opinion
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Smurfin' A! Afternoon Delight!
Think the whole Smurf thing is smurfin hilarious, I never heard that term before but think I might add it to my repatoire
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings
Awe I so want more of this story!! I so want a sequel. Great writing
Summary:
 What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Awesome!
Summary:  With Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes
Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Ok love the general story line up to this point, and although I normally don't make a point of saying anything bad about another Author but since I assumed that all chapters are proof read and put through the ringers before they are posted I think maybe you should find someone better to do that job for you lol.
Summary:
Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.
THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I love the Tim Hortons references us Canadians really do worship the coffee that they make!
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: August 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I am so glad i got to read an update from you! I was worried this story would be left unfinished.
I cant wait to read more and hope you update soon :)
Summary: The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release. Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college. But what happens when fate intercedes? Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue: Girls' POV
So I know I am not such a good reviewer but at least I am taking the time know lol.
I read the first story only reviewing once commenting on how I thought that no matter how you looked at it what Jasper and Bella did was cheating and you told me to hang on and all would be revealed.
Well let me just say wow!! I loved both stories and you were right although the initial story idea caught me off guard and was not sure how I would like it I more that LIKED it, I LOVED IT!!!
Thanks for sharing both stories with the world and hope you continue to write.
Summary:  
He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?
OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: Souillet Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Angles
ahh!!! I need more, loved this chapter alot and can't wait for the next one, you need to write faster!
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