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Summary:  Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.
This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: March 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Turbo
No, no, no, NOOOOOOOOO! You did not just end it there! What a great chapter. The suspense is killing me. When are they going to get together already? Please update soon.
Summary: 
All trace of torment fled from my body the moment I thought of Jake. Of course. Jake was the one good thing that had been given to me after Edward had left, again, for the second time. But then...hadn't he been here all along? Each day Edward had been missing from my life Jake had reached out with his hands, as well as with his heart, and had taken a hold of mine without hesitation, without a second thought as to how it could have affected him. He didn't realize just how much that little deed had done for me, how even those small signs of affection had meant so much.
Emptiness. The one thing Bella thought she would never feel again - but she did. Edward has left for the second time, and for the same reasons he had before. He backed out of their plan once and for all and has refused to turn her into a living blood-sucking monster. Bella is miserable, and she is positive this time that she'll never again feel the touch of happiness. But with Jake still in her life to patch things up, maybe things won't be so bad after all. Edward may have had the power of an eclipse, but sun can shine through almost anything...including a shattered heart.
A story in which Jake finally gets his happy ending.
Special thanks to Anne Cullen for the banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Embry, Emily, Eric, Jacob, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Quil, Renee, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 42188
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: I Love Everything You Are
Another great chapter. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: November 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Outtake #2: Bella POV
Great outtake. Very romantic. And Quil and Embry singing along to that commercial was classic. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see what the next outtake is all about. :) Author's Response: Thanks so much! And Quil and Embry singing the commercial was probably my favorite part, LOL. As for the next outtake, I'll just tell you.
It's their wedding day. =)
So keep an eye out for it next week, cause it's gonna be a blast.
~Mystic
Summary: What if Edward kept his promise and Bella never heard from the Cullens again? Jacob was more than willing to console her, but would she have the sense to let him?
"You know what your problem is, Bells? You're in love - with the wrong thing. You think you're hung up on a guy who left you, but you're not. You're hung up on the idea of yourself as the heartbroken heroine."
Alternate ending to New Moon...just a nice love story, with monsters. Rated for certain chapters, at a sultry 108 degrees!
Many thanks to Sassenach Wench for the stylish story banner!
~*~A finalist in The Indie TwiFic Awards Winter 2010: Best New Moon Complete & AU that knocks you off your feet! Thanks for all the love and support! ~*~
Be sure to read the follow up fics '93 Million Miles' and 'Jacob's Ladder' posted here on Twilighted!
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles, The Moonshadow Continuum
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 76998
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: March 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: A Study in Black
Well, I'm liking this story so far. I'm just afraid. I'm waiting for Edward to come back and ruin everything. That's usually what happens in these stories once I get attached.:( Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm anxious to see how Jacob/Bella play out together.
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: June 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Confusion
Mmmm, loved this chapter...especially the make-up sex. I'm glad that they had that conversation and that they got all that out on the table. Very well written. I'm looking forward to more. Author's Response: Both were dragging around insecurities about the other's past, they needed to clear the air. Glad you liked the lemon! <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Nightmares
Wow, sexy times were well worth the wait! That was hot! And Bella's dream has me so worried. Of course, I'm willing to have a dream like that if that's how Jacob would comfort me! Anyway, great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: You'll have to get in line behind me, sister! <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: July 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Black Hole
Wow, what a great chapter! You wrote the tension between Victoria/Bella so well. The end where the boys come to the rescue and then explode into wolves was awesome. I cannot wait to read what happens in the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Author's Response: Thanks! I was at least as nervous about this suspense chapter as about the first lemon I wrote! Maybe more (I have more experience with one of the topics than the other!) <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed 
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Magnetic North
Great chapter. It was nice (I guess that's probably not the right word considering what he went through) to see the events through Jacob's POV. I'm happy our lovebirds are together and free of the Victoria threat. Though, I'm intrigued by your teaser for the next chapter! Great job. Author's Response: So happy you liked hearing Jake's pespective on the ordeal *whew*. Good thing he has such stalwart brothers - and a sister! thank you! <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Proof of Life
Well, that lemon was definitely hot and much appreciated. I loved how you worked in a bit of depression after a near-death experience. I think it was more than appropriate. But, of course, I'd sign up for that kind of "therapy" any day. Keep up the great work. Author's Response: The therapy line starts behind me! <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Easy as Breathing
Wow, that was so beautiful and sweet. I like the fact that Bella wrote that letter and then burned it, because, as she said, it was more for her and not Edward. She needed closure on that part of her life. THe date with Jacob was wonderful and what they said to each other...well, you really captured that moment beautifully. And of course, Billy/Charlie are always histerically sweet together. I'm really sad that the Epilogue is next though. Although, I think you've pretty much covered everything you wanted to...there's still that sense of wanting more. Anyway, great job as usual. Can't wait to read the final chapter. I hope your little teaser doesn't ruin things for B/J because that future they pictured together sure is wonderful. :) Author's Response: Thanks so much, love!
I'd rather leave people wishing there was a bit more than have readers saying 'so enough already'! Life just isn't that tidy, wanted to give the feeling of life & living going on.... Glad you liked the B & C bit.
I wept copiously through the writing of this chapter! Sad, but pleased too. The Epilogue will do what epilogues do... <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Wow, what a wonderful ending to a beautiful story. I was pretty nervous at the end there when Edward showed up, knowing that Jacob had kept his previous visit from her. But, Bella proved that she was worthy of Jacob by telling Edward to hit the road. Of course, having her way with her husband knowing Edward was outside, invading their privacy, well, that was priceless. Sue and Charlie's wedding was lovely. I was sad to know that Billy had died. Interesting that you decided to make Leah gay. I'm glad she found a partner though, and happy that she had a little baby. She definitely deserved a happy ending. All in all, a wonderful story. I'm going to miss not getting any more updates. Are you planning on writing another story? Thanks you for sharing this with us. Well done! Author's Response: This epi was in my mind almost in its entirety from the very first keystroke! I really needed to do more than just a conventional romantic close... and Edward needed to make an appearance 'cuz Jacob would always wonder, otherwise.
I've always really liked Leah, I wanted a happy ending for her, too - one that would set La Push and The Pack on their collective ear!
I have about three projects working -YAH! <><3
Summary: Bella and Jacob are getting married tomorrow. While struggling to write their wedding vows, they receive a phone call that will change their lives from now on.
Expect insights in their newlyweds' life, worries about imprinting, familiar vampires, jealousy between husband and brother, pack life, road trips, college memories and more!
Rated for language and lemons.
Banner by Dazzled-by-Jake
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes
Word count: 255571
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2009 Updated: July 11, 2011
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: October 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: 31. A Little Bit of Heaven...
Aww!!!!!!!!! I loved it all...right up until Dr. Cullen came into the picture. I know you said that they were coming into this story eventually...but why did it have to be during their romantic Valentine's Day? (sigh) Oh well, I will continue to LOVE this story, even if the Cullens stick around. I just hope Bella remembers who her husband is and doesn't do anything foolish. Great chapter as always. Author's Response: Oh, if it wasn't during their holiday far away it would have had to be in Forks and I'm against it. I don't want them close to where Bella live. This is not a story about Bella being shared between vampires and werewolves. It's a story about Bella having a baby with Jacob so no worry about remembering who her husband is. But bringing Dr Cullen has a purpose that you will find in the next chapter. Hope it reassured you :)
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: June 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: 7. There's Always Someone to Shout At
I'm really liking this story. Please keep up the good work. Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: 9. Waiting For My Soldier-Husband To Come Home
Great chapter. Sad to hear that Leah died, but happy to know that that's part of why Bella and Seth are so close. Love, love, love Bella and Jake together. I just knew that missing bra was going to cause trouble! Great job. Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: Thank you. I just thought that being a werewolf is something dangerous because they go fighting vampires all the time and I couldn't believe they all get safe of these fights all the time. You'll see more interaction between Bella and Seth in the next chapters.
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: May 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: 25. What About Gamma?
Another wonderful chapter. I'm glad that Jacob had his own little breakdown. It makes him more of a well-rounded character. Loved it. I'm glad that B/J had that moment together. Of course, the mere mention of James and her feelings about the Cullens, all these years later, makes me nervous that they're going to be making an appearance soon. I just hope that Bella isn't stupid and doesn't ruin anything with Jake. Personally, I don't care if you decide that the baby is a boy or a girl. But, I think it would be adorable for Big Bad Jake to have to take care of a baby girl. But, either way, I'm sure you'll make the right decision for the story. Looking forward to more. Author's Response: Jacob had always looked like he was perfectly okay with Bella being pregnant. He didn't seem scared of anything and I knew it wasn't true. Even a big guy like him has to be at least a little bit afraid when it comes to be a dad, especially for the first time; But he has Bella to comfort him *sigh*. I wish I was the one here to hold him while he cries.
Who said that the Cullens would make an appearance in this fic? ;)
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: 14. I'm A Baby Sitter And I Suck
Aww, poor Bella. What a rough day. :( I'm glad Jake was there for her...finally. Looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: Next chapter will be submitted very soon. Actually right after I finished reponding to all the reviews :)
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: 15. Who's the Idiot Who Invented Stairs?
Oh no!!!!! Damn Bella and her clumsiness. I hope that she/the baby are okay. Prior to that, I really enjoyed your chapter. I thought it was sweet that J/B couldn't keep their hands off of each other before a family dinner party. You've created such a realistic couple. I'm anxious to see what happens next. :) Author's Response: You're right, damn Bella and her clumsiness! You'll see that it is what she will exactly say/blame in the next chapters.
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: February 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: 20. What Sam Wanted
Holy Hell! I can't believe Jacob lied to Bella like that. Of course, what Bella said to him at the end wasn't all that nice either. It seems our favorite couple has a lot to talk about. I hope they can work things out. And, it makes me very nervous to see that Bella always turns to Seth for comfort and support. I know he loves her like a sister...but, it does make me nervous. Anyway, great chapter. Looking forward to more. Author's Response: Haha, the Seth issue. I know you guys you don't really like their relationship but you know what? Everything is going to be settles down in the next couple of chapters and then I hope you will feel better.
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: 22. Because You Live
I absolutely LOVED this chapter. I must say, I've been crazy nervous throughout this story. The thought of Jacob imprinting on someone else had me more worried than even Bella. Your description of the imprint was wonderful. I loved how he was finally able to once Bella finally accepted it. It was always her. How could he possibly fall in love with someone else, right? Thank you for assuring us that these two will be together and that the little kangaroo won't have to grow up in a broken home. ;) Anyway, I'm looking forward to more. Please udpate soon. Author's Response: I would have never allowed Jacob to fall in love with someone else because Bella and him deserve their happy ending. I was actually very surprised at how fast the update came up given that I only submitted the chapter last Monday. So next update will be in maybe two weeks and then, I found this new challenge at TWCSL and I'm very inspired for it so it may come in the way of the story but don't worry. The next 4 chapters of the story are happy ones without angst or yelling or anything bad :)
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: March 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: 23. Insomnia
This was a sweet chapter. Definitely needed after all that angst and drama. It's nice to see them happy together, enjoying a nice Xmas together like a "normal" couple would. I'm going to enjoy the respite for now...though I'm nervous about what kind of drama can come up next. Keep up the great work. Author's Response: I needed a break from all the drama. Without being mean or anything, I'd say that you are right to be nervous....
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: 26. Are These Instructions Even Written In English?
This was such a wonderful chapter. I'm sad to see the separation between B/S for Bella's sake. But, I really do sympathize with Jacbo's predicament. His wife should want to consider him first and foremost. I happen to be someone who fell in love with and married someone I consider my best friend. If your spouse isn't your best friend too, I don't see the point. So, I hope that B/J can grow stronger together. I loved the playfulness you interjected throughout the chapter. Bella's raging hormones are quite entertaining. I loved the last scene with Jacob breaking down and Bella being the one to comfort and reassure him. It's nice that she takes the reins every once in a while. I always look forward to these updates. You've done a wonderful job so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you! Bella never realized how much she depended on Seth rather than on Jacob and now things have changed because they're married and she just needed to see that Jacob used to be her best friend and that he still wants to. They're going to grow stronger, don't worry.
And just so you know, next update may take some time to come because RL sucks right now.
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: 29. This Isn't Goodbye
I just wanted to say that you did an excellent job with this chapter. Your description of Jacob's grief was realistic and so poignant. As sad as the topic was, it was still a joy to read. I look forward to read what you have in store for us next. Btw, I love your new banner. Author's Response: I love the new banner, too :)
The most important for me with this chapter was to be able to write about the sadness, the pain, and the grief in a way that made it enjoyable for people to read it. I know it was sad to read because it was extremely hard to write for me but it makes me happy to see that people enjoyed reading it anyway. Next chapter will be more light-hearted and fluffy. I promise :)
Summary:
This takes place in New Moon toward the end of Chapter 16. Bella has just been saved by Jacob from nearly drowning and he’s taking her home. Imagine if Bella had the courage to make the choice she was afraid to make. That instead of just thinking of the words she wanted to tell Jacob she actually said them.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Jacob, Jared, Quil, Sam
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 20855
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: September 09, 2010
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: September 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Great chapter. It was nice to see Jacob's POV during that weekend. Keep up the good work.
Summary: It only took death for him to realize how much he loved her.
For anyone who ever wondered "what-if" for Leah and Jacob. "What-if" Jacob had never broken away? "What-if" he hadn't imprinted? "What-if" life was completely different? NC-17 for extremely crude language.
-Thanks to JaneJoke for the banner. I had to play around forever to get this up!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Jacob, Leah
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 206365
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: June 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Stupid Love Hate Relationships
Oooh, I'm really liking this story. It's nice to see Jacob and Leah go through their own emotional roller coasters and find common ground. I love the way you capture Leah's mind. Great job. Author's Response: Thank you. It's an absolute blast to write and to know that others are enjoying it as much as I've enjoyed writing it makes me feel all...giddy. Please ignore the fact that I just used the word "giddy..."
Summary: Bella makes a painful mistake and must delve into the past in order to save her relationship with Jacob. As the pieces slowly come together she experiences a personal revelation, but will this clarity help her gain Jacob's forgiveness? Bella/Jacob NewMoon
[Banner by the amazing blueandblack (AKA bluesuzanne)! Much love. <3]
[Sort Of Beautiful Award banner made by i_rise_inside.]
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Word count: 29839
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2009
Reviewer: toooldforthis Signed
Date: July 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow, what a great chapter. I like how you point out how selfish Bella was being with her pain. I mean, come on, we all deal with pain. And poor Jacob. I hope he has Bella groveling at his feet soon. Anyway, great job. Author's Response: Haha... oh yes, there will be grovelling. And yes, Bella is sometimes selfish with her pain, but I wanted to be clear that she's justified in feeling pain... she just can't assume she's the only one who does. Plus, I wanted their relationship to be about Jake for once. He deserves a little bit of the limelight too.
Thanks for reviewing!!!
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