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Real name: mesuba
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Member Since: June 09, 2009
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Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: mesuba Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

Eeeek!!! Finally! He says I love you, in front of everyone, just when she needs to hear it!  This story is so sweet and endearing, I love it!  Update soon please!

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: mesuba Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

This story is so wonderful, I love, love, love Bella's journal for Edward.  I love how you've written Bella's change, I love the feel of the family's love for one another, I love the soulful connection that is happening with E and B.  It is so magical that words can't describe.  I've never read another change in fanfiction, and I don't plan on it, as this one is simply the best, and all others would pale in comparison.  Stephenie Meyer should have consulted you!  I hate being left on a cliffhanger, but secretly love the excitement I'm left with!  Every time I think about this story over the next few days, I'll squeal a bit in excitement, until that email comes through saying I've got an update, then I'll squeal and clap my hands and drop everything and devour the next chapter!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC

Rated for situations and lemons later on...

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: mesuba Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Merry Christmas, Baby

So good!  This is the first fanfic I've read that made me cry happy tears!  Honestly, the christmas gifts were so perfect.  The love these two have for one another is so tangible, I'm literally sitting here feeling surrounded by it.  My heart is soaring! 

I read The Office first and absolutely adored it, thinking that this could be just as good, I decided to go for it.  I'm shocked at the polarity of these two ExB's, one being so full of aggressive fucking and the other full of sweet innocence, but the similarity is the deep, beautiful, sweet, all-encompassing love that wins out in the end.  I want and desperately need this love, and experiencing it through your characters makes me want to believe it exists! 

Thank you for writing these stories, you are simply brilliant!!

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: mesuba Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Call Time

My heart is soaring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  And I have tears in my eyes!!!!  I'm so in love with this story<3 <3 <3

 
Reviewer: mesuba Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Hidden

Ketchup and Yellow Mustard!

Eeeek, I love this story!!!!

 
Summary:

She's a feminist, he's a realist. Watch them grow and develop as they learn and challenge each other through differing ideas about sexuality and life in general. AH OOC.

Rated for adult themes and language.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 28339
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2009


Reviewer: mesuba Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holy. Fuck.    Best FanFic sex scene EVER.  I was moaning outloud while reading this, seriously.  I'm not kidding.  Soooooo HOT. 

 

And thank you for using this dissertation idea!



Author's Response:

thank you! glad you liked the scene :)

and it would definitely be an interesting dissertation topic. i'm sure it's been explored by someone. (but i might spin it differently, because exploitation is very subjective)





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