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Lost Cause by bonnysammy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 427]
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A woman awakes in a forest. She is lost, alone and has practically no memory. Three members of the Cullen family find her and take her to their home. But everything is not as it appears, especially not with the girl.  How can the little she knows to be true actually be possible?  It could be said that anything is possible when thrown into a world of myth.

 

Follow along as she travels on her journey to find, forgive and move beyond her past, all the while finding herself and something she never knew she was looking for.

 

This is mostly an E/B story though other loved and not so loved characters will be involved.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
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Series: Raison D'être
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 145399
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2012


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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Research

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confirmation and Communication

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Sound and Sight

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Changes

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Arrival

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Discussion

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Talented

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Obscure

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Victoria

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Stress

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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Preparation

I love this story. I especially love the internal dialogue between Bella and Edward and how they skirt around each other. It's amusing and sweet at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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Thank you so much for all of your reviews.  I hope you don't mind me responding to them all.  The PMs might get to be annoying.  I hope you continue to enjoythisstory.  Thanks so much for reading! :D

 
Eternal Damnation by zomniac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 599]
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His question brought Bella back down from cloud nine. She glowered at him. “Bite me.”

A slow, wicked grin etched itself on Edward’s face. “I don’t think you’d want me to,” he whispered darkly, laughing silently at the irony of her insult.

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“I know I smelled an open wound, Bella,” Alice said sternly. Behind her, Carlisle and Edward exchanged a look.

Bella scoffed slightly. “Believe me, I felt it,” she told her as she tried to stand.

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“You don’t understand,” Edward said in a deadly tone.

Bella stared at him for a moment, a bitter expression overcoming her features. “There’s something for me to understand?”

 

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“Fuck her!” she heard one of them call.

 

“Oh, I will,” the man above her answered.

 

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Her smile faded after a moment when she realized something. “Oh, great,” she started grumpily, “we match.”

 

Edward grinned lopsidedly. “Indeed, we do,” he replied.

 

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“You’re funny,” Edward said dryly. “I bet you wouldn’t be saying the same thing if you were the one who turned up missing.”

 

 

“Are you trying to scare me, Mr. Cullen?” Bella asked as she snapped a picture.

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"Bella, listen to me,” he tried coaxing her gently.

“No!” Bella shouted, pulling her arms out of his grip. “I never want to see you again. Stay away from me,” she said through clenched teeth, and no matter what she did, she couldn’t stop the tears from falling.

 

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He cupped her face with both hands while looking into her eyes. “If you don’t find me, who’s killed before, whose diet consists of blood, repulsive, how can I look at you in that way?” he asked her softly.

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"What kind of man are you?!” Bella pushed and slapped his chest as she raged. She was becoming unhinged.

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“Bella, don’t come,” her mother said weakly. “Whatever he says, don’t come—” 

“No! That’s not what you’re supposed to say!” a voice exclaimed in the background.

A tear escaped Bella’s eye as she listened to her mother’s cries as he hit her.

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Edward nodded. “You’re safe now, Bella,” he told her tenderly as he softly massaged her cheek.

 

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It's cranky vampire Edward against angry, no shit-taking, possibly mortal Bella in the ring. Who will be the winner? Or will they both lose? Watch their journey to life full of drama, mystery, romance, and mythical creatures.

Twilight told with a strong, angry Bella, and a more controlled, bad tempered Edward. B/E, AU, canon pairings, lots of OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 221838
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2011


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Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Dangerous Beginnings

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Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sometimes Sacrifices Are Necessary

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Complicated Arrival

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: And So it Begins...

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Rescue...Attempt

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Behind Closed Doors

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Civility

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Regretted Confessions

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Collision

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Revelation

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deceived, Betrayed, and Broken

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Heart of a Fighter

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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Secrets Shared, Memories Awakened

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