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Penname: Dillinger910 [ Contact]
Real name: Derrick Ingram
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Summary: 
All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed
Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th
Heartbreakingly sad, but beautifully written. I mean, shit, I want to reach through my monitor and comfort her.LOL! I just feel compelled to follow Bella on her journey of discovery. Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm really glad that I'm getting that kind of reaction and that you want to help Bella and see her through. That means a lot.
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Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
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Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Saturday, July 3rd
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Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Sunday, July 4th
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Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Monday, July 5th
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Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Sorry bout all the smiley just wanted to go back and review. So thank you for writing and sharing your talent with us. Author's Response: Don't apologize. The more smilies the better. Thanks so much for all the reviews.
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Date: August 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th
:) Author's Response: :) right back at ya. Thanks for the smiles and the review.
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Date: August 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Friday, July 9th
:) Author's Response: Thanks again for the smiles.
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Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Saturday, July 10th
:) Author's Response: thanks ;)
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Date: September 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Sunday July 11th
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Date: September 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Tuesday, July 13th
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Date: November 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Saturday, July 17th
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Date: December 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Monday, July 19th
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Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Tuesday, July 20th
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Date: January 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Wednesday, July 21st
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Date: February 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Thursday, July 22nd
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Summary:
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?


 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
:) Author's Response: Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. The story has already been in the queue here for a couple of weeks, so we should be good to go! I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: October 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: October 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"
Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."
Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."
She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: October 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to hop on here sooner and get your review to you! I'll definitely try better! The next chapter should be up here soon!
A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!
XoXo
Shel
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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.
She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.
"What's wrong, baby?"
He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.
"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."
She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: October 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
:) Author's Response: Sorry about not being to respond to Chapter 21's review! Hopefully I'm forgiven! <3
Chapter 23 should be up shortly!
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: January 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now, as well as the Jack POV outtake! Go check them out!
Chapter 35 is with my Beta now, so hopefully we'll have it up here in the queue shortly!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: October 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow on FFnet. I'll do my best to get it up here quickly as well! It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again hopefully on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Thanks for all of the love and support!
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Shel
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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.
"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."
Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."
Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."
Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.
"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: November 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue now as a special early update! Hopefully, it will be up soon! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed    
Date: January 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
:) Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
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