Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed
July 27, 2010
Chapter 5: 5 - My Superhero
Beautiful story! I love seeing Bella's growth from who she was to who she wants to be. I think Edward liked her from the start otherwise he wouldn't point things out that have changed in her character and he is the only one taking a chance to really get to know her. I hope he contacts Alice one day and helps with his niece or nephew. Edward's independent from his family, just seems like something he would do.Author's Response:
Awww, you think the story is beautiful? Wow. I love that you can see Bella's growth and what the future holds for her if she'll grasp it! I really love your insight and opinions! Thank you so much for telling me them! Enjoy the surprise teaser. :-) Belinda. xoxo
I swam over to Edward quickly and raised an arm while he reached down for me. He could only just get contact with my hand, and he gripped it firmly, swiftly pulling me up by it until my ass was level with the jetty, and he sat me on it. He was so strong. I collapsed onto my back in my now wet, white T-shirt and tennis skirt, relieved to be safe again, looking up at him standing over me in silence. I squinted. Edward appeared like an angel because the sun was behind his head, making him too bright to make out.
“Thank you,” I breathed.
“S’alright,” he croaked seriously, standing stock still. We just kind of stared at each other for a moment as if time didn’t exist.