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Selfish by MizzB Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary:

“There is no way Bella is going to fall for you, Edward,” Emmett said with a laugh. “Wanna bet on it?” was Edward’s cocky reply. It started off as a bet but when he finds himself falling for her things begin to get complicated.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 46880
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2008 Updated: March 06, 2009


Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: March 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Brothers

great chapter

 
Summary:

AU-Human, but Edward and Alice retain their mental gifts. An overly sullen Edward is swept off to the unlikely destination of Hawaii by his family after graduation. However, only Alice knows the reason why they are there-she's had a premonition that Edward would finally meet his true love. But when their destined meeting is ruined by unforeseen circumstances, can Alice make things right again? Or does fate have other plans?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 99368
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: July 02, 2009


Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: When Vision and Reality Meet

Cute idea for a story!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Mermaids and Lost Boys

No, no, no, don't let Edward ditch Bella!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Peter and Wendy

Okay, you are wonder women updater!  You rock for updating so fast!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: You've Got What It Takes

Wonder women strikes again!  Thanks for the speedy updating, I can follow this story easier.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Alice In Wonderland

Ahhh, how cute!  That was a well rounded chapter, I loved it!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: You've Spun A Web For Me

Poor misguided Bella! 

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Mermaids and Mayhem

Things are getting complicated!  Hopefully Edward can make the right decisons.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Truth Or Dare

Okay, that was just to sad!  The angst in the story!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Edward's Lullaby

Oh, that chapter is so sad!  I'm glad that Tayna ended up not dating Edward.  When you love somebody so much, you just can't move on.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Bella's Lullaby

Ohhh, I hope that it is Edward!  I feel for Bella and Edward being miserable.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Let's Make A Deal

Ahhh, the angst!!!  Hope things look up for Bella dn Edward.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: A Change In Perspective

I'm glas that Bella and Edward finally got to see what life was like without each other!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Can't I Destroy the World With You?

That was an intense chapter!!  I'm glad that everything worked out for them!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Tilting At Windmills

I'm glad that they were able to work out their problems!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Destiny

The steak knife to the eye is funny!  I'm glad that they are working things out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for always reviewing every chapter-you're a peach!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Destiny, p. 2

Over all ready???BooHoo!  Loved your story!

 
Persuasion by carribbeanlady Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

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Alternate Universe


Isabella Swan is living in 1918 Washington State until she decides to run away to Chicago where she meets the Masens. Mrs. Masen is afraid her head-strong son, Edward, is headed to war so Bella takes it upon herself to get him to stay.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 31958
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 27, 2009


Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is such a good story line!  I love it!

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just what I was thinking, get back in that room!  Poor Bella is losing everybody.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Can't wait for the next chapter...hint, hint.

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The end of the chapter was so sweet!

 
Summary: Bella goes on vacation for the summer where she meets her neighbors the Hales and their friend the Cullens, more importantly the Cullen's gorgeous son Edward. Sun+beach+summer romance, throw in a little Mike, and youve got a a heckofa summer! E/B A/J Em/R
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 27797
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2008 Updated: March 10, 2009


Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Our Place

fun story

 
Not Her by Heavens Immortal Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

What if Edward didn't get to Bella before Tyler's van hit her...what if he responded to her blood...? What if he bit her? Where would they be, how would their lives change...a view into an alternate Twilight.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 57901
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2009


Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emotions

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

 
Legacy by Autumn Dreamer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 962]
Summary:

Edward is no stranger to new towns and new schools. In his seventeen years, he's been dragged all across the country by his parents, Peter and Liz Masen. With no siblings, no real friends, and no place to truly call "home," Edward gets used to living life as a solitary teenager--until he moves to Washington. There he meets the Cullens and their friends—a beautiful, brilliant group of people who are both rejected and revered by their classmates. Edward reluctantly finds himself growing to like these people more and more...and finds himself having friends and, for the first time, feeling like he belongs. But just when everything settles down, his world is torn apart by a long-kept secret and an ongoing betrayal that will leave him questioning everything he's ever known.

Drama/Humor/Mystery/Angst-lite
Rated R/M (for language and sexual innduendo)

This is not an Edward/Emmett slash story however, there is a lot of Edward & Emmett togetherness.

If you like Legacy, check out Legacy: Extra's & Outtakes for an extra Legacy fix.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 218730
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010


Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Breakin' Dishes

great chapter

 
Reviewer: brain candy Signed
Date: March 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Haunted

great chapter

 




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