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19, college student, learning to stand on her own while indulging herself in the world of vampires, werewolves, unconditional love and temptation. Hopes to write for a living because it's the one thing I love to do. Is also an admirer of excellent authors.


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Summary:

Another Missing Moment from Breaking Dawn.  Just can't leave those Lovebirds alone.  Bella finally grows a pair in this one, for a little while at least.

 

Stephanie Meyers owns all things Twilight.  I just like playing Barbies with 'em


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5742
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2009


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: November 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Time to Play

I love this!!

 
Summary:

Honeymoon Suite

NOW COMPLETE!  We all wailed a collective 'ugh!' on the fade to black scenes during Edward and Bella's honeymoon, not to mention the frustratingly limited Jacob POV.  This canon story fills in all the holes that were left by SM -- mostly from Edward's detailed POV.

Enjoy a captivating look at the romance, emotions, music and imagery of Bella & Edward's honeymoon, the struggles of the pregnancy, the bliss over Edward hearing the unborn child's mind, the harrowing birth, and finally Edward's joy as he bonds with Nessie during Bella's transformation. 

 Banner by the talented m81170 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 96645
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2011


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Forbidden Love

I thought your version was a logical take on Edward and the situation. Good job, can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  I have put much effort into making this a canon as possible.  I know AU/AH is very popular, but after reading many reader profiles, I do think there are folks who really want canon behind the scenes -- and I strive to deliver that.  I am submitting the next chapter for validation now.  Hope to hear from you again.

 
Summary:

Bella is a twenty five year old woman with her own thoughts, opinions, and history.  She meets a mysterious pale stranger in the library, and chemistry brings the two together.  But with a murderer in the streets on Seattle, nothing can come easily.  Alternate reality.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 24698
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 24, 2010


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: July 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You write third person very well. I like your ending words especially. Something about its simplicity is enchanting. Plus, the suspense is great!

 
Summary:

After over a 100 years of existence, Edward is still disgusted with being a vampire and never grew out of trying to rid the world of murderers, rapists, and generally bad people.  One night while tracking a group of drunken men in Port Angeles, he catches a whiff of the most delicious human he has ever smelled.  He wants her blood more intensely than any other human he's ever come in contact with; that is, until he realizes things are just a bit too quiet. . .  How would their relationship progress if Edward had never come around from his newborn angsty ways?

Takes place at the same time and location (roughly) as Twilight.  Edward may be slightly OOC.  Bella might be too.

Edward's POV.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9148
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: May 20, 2009


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Your Insecurities Will Kill You

well, I really like how you wrote this. The imagery how you describe the city and the moon was really beautiful and haunting. I was hesitant to read this story because I don't really like stories that have OOC and because I love Edward so much just the way he is ;) But I thought you portrayed him very well here.

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: We Have Company

Love this chapter! I especially love that one paragraph where he's talking about how Bella makes it feel like his heart is coming alive. That was beautiful! Can't wait for more :D

 
Seventeen Again by Ledybug Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1051]
Summary:

What if Edward and Bella acted like regular seventeen year olds? With all the passion, lust, and curiosity that comes with being a teenager. Would Edward be able to keep both monsters in check? And will there be other more disturbing consequences to his lack of control besides just giving in? Can their new love handle anything?

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A somewhat OOC re-telling of Twilight (with a few small plot changes) until Port Angeles, AU after that. Canon Pairings, Alternating POVs of Edward and Bella, Rated NC-17 for violence, language, a little alcohol/drug use, sexual acts and assault. If those topics offend you, please do not read.

Beautiful banner by: AchelleDenaliCullen


Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 82752
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation

Well, I usually don't like the overly explicit stories so I was hesitant to check this one out when I saw the rating but I think it's well written so far and I like how you've blended scenes from the book and movie together without actually copying. But I thought Bella sounded just a tad too smug compared to how modest she's supposed to be but everything else sounds great and I'll give this a try :)

 
Sasha by KenoshaChick Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

This is the beginning of Nessie's story. She's grown, and even with the strength and intelligence of a vampire, she can't escape the confusion and flaws which come from being human. Original characters.

An nominee in the Original Character Awards, a Indie Twific Award Shortlist Nominee for Best Original Character, & a Twilight Award Nominee for Best Jacob/Nessie.

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 100208
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: October 22, 2010


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: And I Wish that You Could See

Aww! Cute!

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: October 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: I'm Looking for a Sign

wow.. This is so exciting and really original! Creative on your part with this princess. I'm really loving this story!

 
Summary:

When Bella moved to Forks, she thought her biggest problems would be finding a job, buying a car, and surviving highschool.  Until one day, she begins working for the dashing Dr. Cullen and spots a lonely boy in a photograph who inexplicably calls to her cautious heart and leads her into a world of myth she can scarcely comprehend. 

For the past century, Edward has lived a sort of half-life.  Gifted with immense power, but forever alone, he has come to loathe his very existence.  A vision of a beautiful girl holds promise of a better future, but how could he ever claim to truly love her if he is willing to corrupt her soul?

She's afraid of rejection.  He's afraid to commit.  Will it take a tragic accident to prove that love can both create and heal the deepest wounds?

This is a re-telling of Twilight centered around the assumption that Alice DID predict the fateful meeting in Biology.  I have tried hard to maintain the integrity of the central characters, so we do have insecure Bella and angsty Edward, but the plot will take us to very different places. 

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All canon pairings.  Some characters slightly OOC.  Told from alternating Bella/Edward POV's in each chapter.  Rating is for language, violence, and mature themes in later chapters.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 35596
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: July 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Wheels

wow I really like this so far. Usually stories about Bella working in a hospital sound too OOC to me but this one actually made sense.

 
After All by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 754]
Summary:

Banner by Ms.Ambrosia

 

Bella is in a car crash that kills her mother and Phil, leaving her with many physical and emotional injuries. Bella is completely devastated by the accident and is no longer the woman she used to be. She returns to Washington to be closer to her father and best friends, trying to find a way to put her life back together.  

Edward has had a "thing" for Bella for ten years, but he never acted on it, and no one ever knew about his feelings for her. He's done a decent job of building a good life, but Bella's return makes him question and re-think everything he thought he knew.

Once these two meet again, he's going to do all he can to finally get his girl, but life and circumstances will make it difficult for him - and Bella will be the biggest challenge of all.  

Story is AU-Human. 

 

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 159480
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: July 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye

sounds good..how old is Bella in this?

 
Summary:

Written for the Darkward Contest. Set in the early 1920’s. Edward
is a young vampire trying to find his purpose. In an attempt to find his way,
he joins Chicago's most notorious gang: The Chicago Outfit. Rated M for
Violence and Lemon's

The Chicago Outfit


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 16213
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: August 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Rebirth

I absolutely love this story!! I love the time period and Edward was amazing.

 
Summary:

 

This story is also on fanfiction.net

Sequel to Event Horizon: Edward's side of New Moon.  This is Eclipse as told from Edward's point of view. Canon, but there are several extra scenes that were not in the original novel.  This story reference certain events in my previous story, Event Horizon, but you don't have to read it first.  Dialogue from Eclipse is used in places out of necessity. All of this is the property of Stephenie Meyer.  I do not own the characters or the situations, and I will not profit from this work.  :)  

Thanks so much to FrozenSoldier and TheTwilightAwards.com for the amazing banner. You should check out all of their work.

This story has been nominated for a Bring Me to Life award in the Red Ribbon category.

Also on fanfiction.net.

  Thank you qjmom for working so hard!  


 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 185996
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: January 21, 2011


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1-Provocation

oh this will be quite interesting :P especially later like chapter 20 LOL I'm looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much,  I'm getting back into writing this now so hopefully the proposal chapter soon. 

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: May 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Prophecies and Ploys

I was hoping I'd find out what was going through Charlie's mind during "the talk". It would've been hilarious! But good, as usual.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it. I'm sorry I've been slow about answering reviews but for some reason two hasn't been notifying me when I get one. The reason I decided not of include "the talk" from EPOV is I decided it wasn't something he'd want to hear. Edward has some very old fashioned views about sex in spite of everything he does hear about it on a daily basis. I felt like he wouldn't want to embarrass Bella further by listening in. I guess it would have been funny to hear though.

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Panic

I know sometimes Edward seems paranoid about Bella hanging out with werewolves but I thought it was sweet how he was so relieved that she came home safe. The part about how he would've cried if he could was really sweet.

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: June 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Puzzles

for some reason I find it sexy whenever Edward curses...lol Maybe because he hardly ever does.

 
Summary:

A mosaic freely drawn from book and movie, wanders into AU as the story unfolds ... ....

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Showing is stronger than telling.  Forks was just like I remember it.  I felt the short little hairs on the back of my neck stand straight on end.  Cut your losses before they can become catastrophic.   “It’s not fair,” I say aloud.   The night wind swirls, lifting the fine surface powder from the tops of the snowdrifts, coating us in diamond dust.  

 


Then weave for us a garment of brightness

 

Moving to Forks, spending the last eighteen months of her childhood with a father she barely knew ... it seemed like a good idea at the time.

 

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A/N about the rating: The narrative in this story ranges between PG-13 (most of it) and R (occasional language and occasional non-graphic reference to mature themes). An isolated technicality in a late chapter has necessitated changing the rating from R to NC-17, however R is a much better measure of the farthest outer limit of what the reader will encounter in this tale.

 

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<3<3<3  and  @};-  @};-  @};-  to  DeliciousDreamer for this beautiful banner ~~

delicious dreamer's lovely banner for garment of brightness

I never in my wildest dreams thought that something I wrote would inspire someone to make something like this.   I am so touched.  THANK YOU DD!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 59050
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: February 13, 2011


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

wow. This was really incredible! I like how you made Bella's voice sound unique but still hers and the nature description wasn't tedious but beautiful too. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Oh my, thank you so much. I am always so touched when a new reader discovers the story.

I will be eager to read any comments you may offer as you read on. I so remember when I was your age.

JSYK, although it has been a while since my last update, I am NOT on hiatus. Just a touch of writer's block. In fact I work on this story at least a little bit almost every day. Yes, writing can be work sometimes.

There is an image gallery for this story on a forum thread I set up, and some of the later entries on that thread include teasers for future chapters. Enjoy.

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8074&start=0

 

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Tell it to the Rain

oh the poem is gorgeous! I was lost in it :)



Author's Response:

Oh my, thank you. You see, you let me go back to earlier chapters and enjoy them all over again.

Best wishes.

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Harry Clearwater's Famous Fish Fry

You're really awesome! You have such a knowledge of nature and Native people and their culture and that brings something extra special to this story, making it even more amazing! :D



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you very much! And I am so happy that you are enjoying the story. Thank you especially for sharing your thoughts. Cheers!

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Una Rama Oscura

The imagery is beautiful but you know, I really want Edward and Bella to start being sweet to each other :(



Author's Response:

Read on, my dear, read on.  <3

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Owl Called Her Name

wait a second, so the owl called Bella's name? Uh oh...It's foreshadowing the almost car accident, isn't it? LOL I'm getting excited! I freaking love your story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this review. I never received notice of it in my inbox :-(  but luckily I cruised by the story and have found it here. So glad you are enjoying the story. Hopefully I will keep more on top of replies after this!

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Morning

oh my gosh! That song fits Bella so well! It's perfect for this story. 



Author's Response:

Oooh, thank you! I had so much fun with it, too. Thank you for reading and commenting!

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Consequences

Please write more!



Author's Response:

I have ... am. Thank you so much. <3

 
Summary:

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 EDIT: TO SEE THE END OF THIS STORY GO TO FANFICTION.NET. SAME STORY NAME/SAME AUTHOR NAME. OR IF YOU NEED THE LINK GO TO: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4983089/17/Tomorrows_Aurora

I WILL NOT UPLOAD THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS HERE. FOR MORE INFO GO TO MY LAST UPDATED CHAPTER ON THIS SITE (LOOKING AT MY END OF CHAPTER NOTES) AND/OR THE FANFICTION PAGE. I HAVE MY REASONS POSTED AT THE TOP OF THAT PAGE.

"Alice couldn’t see me. No one would hear my screams. I wouldn’t live. They’d never even find me. And I’d never see him again." Jacob and Renesmee’s story Post-Breaking Dawn.

Nessie is stuck between worlds. She is not fully vampire nor is she fully human. Nessie strives to be human more than anything and she wants the same for her best friend, Jake. Hearts, villans and problems collide as Nessie falls for her new school's most popular kid: Josh Ugondey. Can she really be with him though? And what about her surfacing feelings for Jake? Will she ever figure out that Jacob has imprinted on her? And what exactly is Josh hiding that has the people he's close to so keyed up? One way or another Nessie's life seems to be in danger and it's something that Edward, Bella or even Alice can't protect her from. The only one who can protect her is her Jacob. But will she let him?

"...You can't save a damsel if she loves her distress." - Gossip Girl


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 44157
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: November 02, 2010


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: May 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Preface and Chapter 1: Read This!

Good. I like the Gossip Girl quote. I think it fits Bella/Edward's love story too.

 
Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: May 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Alter

I think this is great but I don't get why it seems like you're rushing Nessie's feelings towards Josh. I mean, they barely said a few words to each other and already she's thinking about if she'd want to change him? She doesn't even know if he's in love with her, though I guess that is the direction you're taking, to her it isn't clear yet so it doesn't make sense.

 
Summary:

Edward walked a knife's edge in Volterra.  What if things hadn't gone so well?  Love can survive when it is surrounded by monsters, but it does not survive unchanged.  Deviation 'fic, New Moon.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Felix, Marcus, Renata
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 81940
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2010 Updated: October 28, 2010


Reviewer: transitory_moment Signed
Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Ch. 1 Yes

I normally don't read New Moon fics but this kept me interesting. I like your writing style. It sounds very genuine and right for the characters.

 




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