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30 something mom
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Summary: Bella and her roommates, Alice and Rosalie, are young women in their twenties trying to establish themselves in the city of Chicago and figure out who they are, and what they want in life. Little do they know, that the people they meet will change their lives along the way.
Rated M for Partying, Sexual Content, and Edward Cullen
New Banner by RachelCullen77!! xoxo!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 92377
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2009 Updated: May 30, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I was wondering when Bella was going to find out about Victoria. Can't wait for Edward to get back and see what happens with him and Bella. Love the Alice/Jasper lemon.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Aha, so she is pregnant. Edward really has alot of explaining to do. It will be interesting to see what happens next!
Summary: Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.
Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I continue to be so intrigued by this story. I am relieved that Jasper has a better understanding about Bella and Edward's relationship. And, I have to admit, I really liked Jasper as a Dom. Very, very hot!!!
Can't wait to see what happens at dinner. I wonder is Tyler will be there to see Bella with two hot men!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I can see why Bella likes Edward's possessiveness. It seems to be very comforting to her.
And they just can't seem to catch a break. I am curious about who is in the garden. Can't wait to find out!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I have to admit I am still confused by Edward. I just don't know what he wants from Bella in regards to Jasper. I don't think he really wants to share but is he 'showing off' Bella and their relationship? Just so curious. Can't wait to find out more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Wow -- just, um, wow! I am so intrigued by this story and their lives. I have so many questions. I am confused yet intrigued by the desire to become a slave.
How is this satisfying to her? to him? Do they ever have non-slave/master moments? Is she really happy losing herself to him? Is he?
Do they ever just want to be Edward and Bella? How do this work when they are out? What happens when they get married? And what would the vows be like .... "I slave take you master ...." ;):) And what happens if one of them want to end the M/s contract -- does the marriage end? What is going to happen with Jasper? I can't imagine he would share her. Edward seems to be very possessive of her (cameras watching her).
Also, will there be EPOV too?
Sorry to throw so many questions at you --- clearly you have piqued my interest. I am so looking forward to more!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Wow! That was incredible. I continue to be impressed by Edward. By telling her to punish him, and how difficult it was for her was a brilliant way to explain how it felt for him to think about punishing her.
I loved that they were able to have a Edward/Bella moment. I just loved it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I liked that they talked. And even though Bella was still his slave, she was able to express her thoughts and feelings. That does put my mind at ease.
I think that Edward also "cleaned up" when he returned from work because he smelled like Lauren too and wouldn't want to upset Bella. It was obvious through their discussion that he truly does care about her.
I thought about this after the last chapter -- this role of Master must be mentally, physically and psychologically exhausting for Edward. He has to think, prepare and plan for everything in regards to Bella. I am grateful that he has the chance to talk to her too. I hope that helps him too!
Such an amazing story -- can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I adore the way that he takes care of her. AND I loved that he had her come into the office to "show" her off to Lauren. I do hope that Lauren got the message.
I am so interested in what will happen with Jasper there. I can't imagine he would share her with Jasper. Edward seems so possessive of her.
Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
It was very interesting to see how Bella and Edward responded to Jasper being there. It was a delicate balance. I felt bad for Bella when she worried about how Jasper's return would impact her and their relationship. I would think she would worry about keeping Edward's attention often.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I was surprised that Edward 'shared' Bella with Jasper. I thought he would have been more possessive of her. I would have loved to know what the convo was between Edward and Jasper that led to this.
Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Another insightful chapter!! :) I got the impression that Edward wasn't ready to go back into Master mode. He wanted more Edward/Bella time. She didn't have her collar on yet. I would so love to see more Edward/Bella moments.
So glad that Jasper and Bella talked. I hope that it helped clear some things up for him. The scene with Jacob was great. I do love the thought the Edward puts into everything. I can't imagine how trying that is for him.
Can't wait to find out who is at the table!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
What an interesting night! I would actually pay to have that dinner with Edward and Jasper. And while I am still conflicted about Jasper's involvement - it was hot!
I loved Edward's convo with Jasper in the car. That scene reminded me of the Fire and Ice chapter in Eclipse! Such a great way to understand and appreciate Edward and their relationship more!!
My heart broke for Bella at the end with Tyler outside their home. I hope everything goes well.
And have a Happy New Year!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
It is still amazing to me how well Edward knows Bella and her needs. He and Jasper did a great job taking care of her. And while I have enjoyed Bella's interactions with Jasper, well most of them, I am looking forward to it being just Bella and Edward again!
Great job! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I just love this story!
I remember when I first started thinking how unusual their situation was. I couldn't understand the desire or need for this. I constantly wondered "how could she/he want that? How is this possibly fulfilling" and about a million other questions. What is so amazing to me now is how 'normal' I view their relationship. The love and respect is so evident to me now. And their desire and passion is epic.
I am so anxious to see what happens next with the Tyler situation. Can't wait for the 9th! Great job!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I was getting anxious for this update. So happy now!!
Wow - Bella really is a magnet for trouble, danger. She can attract it. I do think that part of why she is noticed, especially this night, is when she is with Edward she is so at ease with herself that she is alluring.
Can't wait to see what happens at the club! Great job!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Edward might be the most creative man ever! How does he come up with these ideas and scenes? They are amazing. Is he reading "Dominating for Dummies'?!? ;)
Incredible job -- can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Great chapter. You did a great job of showing us what this club was like. I liked how it was described. I felt that I could easily picture it.
She really is a danger magnet. I am half expecting Tyler to show up at any moment. ;)
Amazing chapter --- can't wait for the 23rd!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I continue to be intrigued by this story. In the beginning, I couldn't understand how/why Bella would want to be in this type of relationship and now I am in complete awe of their relationship and the intensity of their love.
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I am beginning to think that they will never get a moments peace. I hope that Tyler is dealt with soon and I can't believe that Victoria was killed. I have a bad feeling about her death. Eeeks!
Can't wait for the 20th!!! =D
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I am very relieved that it was just Jacob outside. It was an intersting dynamic with Jacob there and Edward involving him. I wish I knew what he was thinking.
I am nervous about what will happen next. I am eager and anxious to find out!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Thank goodness Jasper was there. He asked all the questions I wanted answers to.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
That was a very interesting ritual. I was intrigued by the various 'steps' they went through and the reasons behind them.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I completely enjoyed Jasper's conversation with Bella. It was very informative and enlightening. It was nice to see Bella just being Bella. Also, seeing Jasper all worked up is hot!!
Summary: 
This is a one-shot (outtake) from the multi-chaptered story, "Nice Catch".
Picks up immediately following Ch. 16 but can stand alone. Please note that this story is not Rated T as the original story is. Edward and Bella are reunited after almost nine years apart. Changes and circumstances are powerful, but nothing can compare to undying love and its ability to make everything possible. ExB. lemon.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4576
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: September 02, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was great! Just what they (and I) needed!!
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