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Reviews by lobsters4ever
 
Summary:

 

She was standing by the bar looking beautiful. I hadn't seen her in two years. She smiled at me and tried to say hi. I couldn't say anything to her. Memories were racing through my mind, of a time when we were happy...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 112640
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 13 - Brothers and Friends

First, I loved the Emmett POV outtake.  That was great!  It showed how difficult a time it was for not only Edward but his family as well.

I was very surprised by their 'reunion'.  And my heart breaks for both.  Edward is thinking he has a chance of getting back with Bella and she can't let go of the past.

This might be really bad, but I was relieved that they didn't have a significant other with them or in their lives that night.  And now that I know more about the past, I can understand Edward's reaction better.  He said that he would stay out of her life and then she approached him.

So eager to find out what happens next!!  Great job!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed Em's POV- It came out very easlity surprisingly enough... He made me cry.. "I ws relieved that they didn't have a significant other with them" I figured after their encounter and experiences with Jake and Teri they wouldn't want to try another relationship for awhile- especially Edward since he hurt Bella and Teri so badly.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 14 - "Edward"

I am glad that they are moving forward.  Their progression seems to ebb and flow.  There are gains and recessions.  It seems that Edward is in a better place than Bella at this time.  

I really do hope that they finally talk.  They both need it.  This talk is years too late.   



Author's Response:

Bella is still in denial mode- hide and forget. Edward is in live and deal mode... sort-of, because he really isn't dealing well with Bella's rejection. They definetly should have talked a long tme ago! Could be why everything is hanging so heavily on them still. Will Edward force her to talk? Check out my blog for a Chapter 15 teaser. http://jarielynn.blogspot.com/

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - The Truth

Again, my heart breaks for Edward.  He has been so patient, too patient and Bella refuses to budge.

I was very happy that Alice help Bella pull her head out of her ass.  She has been so consumed with herself and her own pain that I don't think she ever considered Edward and his pain.

I thought that Edward was right to leave Bella.  He has waited so long for her.

So thrilled that Bella went after Edward.  I don't know if I agree that she waited but I am glad that she went.

I hope that they finally have the conversation that they should ahve had years ago and work on healing.  AND if they can get back together again - well, that would be great!!! ;):)

 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - The Whole Truth

Yeah!  I am so thrilled that they finally talked.  And they were honest with each other. I loved that they didn't blame the other but took responsibility for themselves.

I loved their moments together.  It just made me happy.

And Edward's family was great!  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

I think at first Bella did blame Edwrd but over the years some of that blame shifted back to herself. Edward has always blamed himself, never finding fault in his Bella. Until recently- when she pretty much refused to talk to him. I think he was so upset because he put her on a pedestal and she fell off when she acted that way.

More great moments together ahead! Yeah! And definetly more family time.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17- Falling In Love Again

I love that they are getting closer.  I think Edward is doing the right thing by trying to take it slow.  They are finally rebuilding their relationship.

Great job -- can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response:

thank you. Edward is trying, but I don't know how much longer he'll make it. There is alot of tension between them.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18- Comfort

I loved that he defended Bella to Emmett.  I can understand where Emmett is coming from and why he is concerned about Edward.

It has been so wonderful seeing them grow closer again!  I loved her reunion with Rose and Emmett.  I am glad that they were able to work past it.

And they finally were together together.  ;)  So happy for them.  It is just so amazing how far they have come.  Can't wait for more!! 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 19 - As One

Well, what can I say ....best chapter ever! ;)  I am thrilled that they have worked through so much and are together.

Edward's performance at the concert was amazing.  His performance in the hotel room was even better!

I am excited to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Yes the "performances" were very nice weren't yhey.. sigh.... if only.. ;)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 20 - Goodbye and Hello

Such a heartbreaking goodbye.  I remember those kind of goodbyes too well. 

I am so glad that the time apart went quickly.  And what a lovely surprise for Bella at the wedding.  Well two surprises - Edward being there and his proposal.  

I am just so thrilled for them!!  They have come so far and it is wonderful to see them happy.



Author's Response:

Did you used to have to tell a loved one goodbye like that? That would be hard.. I didn't want to dwell on their timae apart, they have had enough drama in their lives I think. ;) Thank you for reviewing throughout the story, it means a lot to me. The epilogue should be up soon.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue- The Future Together

This was such a lovely ending.  I am thrilled that they are finally together and happy and that they finally have their daughter.

I have enjoyed this story.  Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

 
I Get Off by Britpacksuccubus Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 333]
Summary:

 

When Bella becomes Edward's assistant and moves in across the street, what will happen when he takes in the view? And not just that of the skyline... AH, OOC, Lemons


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 71226
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2009 Updated: January 29, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-I Get Off

*thud*

That was great!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

And I can't wait for you to see what happens next. 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Nasty Girl

Smoke'nStrokeward is hot!  I love EPOV .. it is always a win!  I wonder why Bella stopped her shows -- is she pissed at Edward. 

Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hang tight my pretty, all shall be revealed.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The Animal

Hot!!  So friggin hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  RAWR...

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Candyward

Ooooo, how I would love a Sundaeward!  Yum!  Great job!!



Author's Response:

Right?  Who wouldn't love to nom that chocolate dipped dick cone?  ;)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Tumble Down

Great chapter!  I love that he was willing to quit for her -- actions do speak louder!  Alice was great.  What a way to tell a dad!

I am addicted to Bella and Edward moments.  I can't wait to see what happens when they finally admit their feelings.

Oh, and I really hope that Bella kicks Tanya's ass!! 

Can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response:

Haha, you know a good Tanya beat down seems to be the general consensus which just cracks me.  Thanks for catching up and leaving all the reviews.  <3

::kisses::

 
Summary:

A gift for my buddy, a one shot inspired by Bad Girlfriend by Theory of a Deadman, using the lovely characters of Wicked Game by Emerald_Rosalie.  Bella's been a bad girl.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Song Based One Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2972
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great one shot!  I love Possessiveward!!!

 
Summary:

Edward is dared to do something stupid by his older cousin, Emmett.  Jasper and Emmett stand back and watch.

"Yeah, but do you think we should've told him that she's the police chief's daughter?"

One dare, one purse and two unsuspecting vicitms lead to a series of pranks and events that will change their lives.

 

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 87422
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2012


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Lojack

This is great!  I am loving it!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Little Miss

Damn -- this is hysterical.  I am so enjoying it.  And "spidey senses" -- LOL!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Payback

Emmett in jail was too funny.  Loved his begging and Jasper getting sick.  Just too damn funny. 

Can't wait to see what happens with Edward and Bella.

 
Interference by vamplicious Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 239]
Summary:

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Edward, a talented, up-and-coming engineer, is on his way to Colorado on a business trip. A business trip he's not too happy about. When he gets into a sticky situation in the departure lounge, he's rescued by Bella, who's working as a doctor in the very same town he's going to. The two are immediately attracted to each other. But things get complicated once they arrive at the destination. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 51321
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So happy to see a new chapter.  I really enjoyed that they were talking and getting to know each other more!!  I liked the star talk and the simple flirting. 

And while I would love for them to get to the 'hot and heavy' soon -- I have a feeling it might take a little longer.  Luckily, I am really enjoying their moments together!

Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

These two have had a rough start, with way too many misunderstandings, so I think they need some 'good old' flirting now to get back on track. I'm happy you liked it. We'll see how patient they'll be! :) Thanks for your sweet review! Vampy

 
Summary:

Two strangers, two computers.... one night.

Lonely ER doc Edward Cullen goes online one night to relieve some tension, never expecting to find what was awaiting him. AH/possibly some OOC. Rated NC-17 for a reason.

Banner by tby789

Banner by Lindsi loolabell


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 132766
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2009 Updated: May 08, 2011


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?

I was hoping that Edward and Bella would talk and it would get better.  Thankfully, Edward has a mother to help him pull his head out of his ass. 

I hope that Bella is okay and that Edward is able to explain his thoughts/feeling better.  (Once Bella is fine.)

Looking forward to more!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~Anxiety

I do love dirty-talking Edward.  He is just beyond hot!!  I am so excited that they are finally together - in person!  I can't wait to see what fun they have in New York!  :)

 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20 ~ Resolutions Pt. 1

I'm glad that Bella is okay and that she and Edward talked.  They still have so much more to do to recover and improve their relationship. 

I would love to know what Edward and Charlie talked about.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York

I am so loving that they are finally together.  And I really appreciate that they went to dinner first before all the sexing.  It shows that there is more to their relationship than sex.  And, of course, the sex was HOT!

Can't wait for more!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Unknown

Hmmm, cybersex ... I like it!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected

So good -- so hot!  Can't wait for more!!!!

 




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