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Lost and Found by gemmabobella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 775]
Summary:

Bella Swan is now a teacher at Forks High school. She's been gone for six years, and now she's back.  What old and new friends will she find? What happens when she is reunited with an old crush? A realistic look of life, love, and the pursuit of happiness. Is true love only found in fairytales? Find out!  Special thanks to Manyafandom for the Banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 216661
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Acceptance

Poor Bella - can't she get a break.  Please update soon! 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

WOW!  Another amazing chapter.  I read it 2x to make sure I didn't miss anything.  :) 

I loved that Edward opened up to Bella and that she was the one holding back.  This chapter felt so important to their relationship -- pivotal!  Dare I even compare it to the meadow. 

Great, GREAT job!  I can't wait to see what happens next! 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Pop

WOW and Ugh!!  I read this chapter 2x hoping the ending would change -- damnit it didn't!!

Where to start?!  So, I loved that Bella did her research, loved the baseball part of the date -- so sensual, erotic.  Yum, Edward's hands...touching.  So glad that they did talk and work some things out and SO proud of Bella for letting go and just enjoying being physical with Edward.

BUT do these two have a friggin time share in Angstville or something (and you are clearly its' mayor)!??  :)  Frustrated that Bella couldn't enjoy all her date with Edward because of her insecurities.  On one hand I understand b/c she doesn't know and questions his feelings but on the other hand, i want to shake her and remind her to just enjoy the moment. 

I was glad that the ball didn't hit Bella in the batting cage .... because it then had the opprotunity to gain momentum, fly out of left field and smack me in the side of the friggin head.  What the hell happened during the night for Edward to react that way in the morning?  Did she sleep talk?  Was he busy self-loathing?  My heart literally broke for Bella (tears even)!

I mean come on!  I knew there would be more angst soon but I wasn't expecting it sooo soon! 

Please tell me this won't take forever to work out.  That they talk and make up soon!  I must live in a world where ExB are together!! :)

Enough ranting --- again you have done an amazing job with this story.  It is brilliantly written and the plot development is riveting.  PLEASE update this soon!  Thanks for such an awesome story!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Silver and Gold

Great update!  I didn't realize that I had missed Alice too.  It was great to see some girl time.  I love that Bella is trying to work on her intimacy issues.  I really appreciate that she talked with Alice.

It is wonderful to see ExB relationship continuing to grow and develop.  I like that isn't perfect and that they are both struggling with issues but they are working on their communication and that is amazing to see.

The only Twilight thing I caught was when Edward said, "You're beautiful."  (eclispe -- graduation)  Was that it or was it something else?

I am eager and anxious for more!  (and I will continue to hold vigils for an HEA for these two because damnit they deserve it!)  ;)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Thick and Thin

Welcome back Gemma!  I have so missed you and this story!!  Absolutely thrilled for an update!

Such an incredible chapter.  I am thrilled that Bella recognized that her insecurity issues have to do with her mother and not Edward (well maybe a little).  That was a huge epiphany!

I love that they are communicating more with each other.  Loved that he played for her and told her that she wasn't invisible.

Great update -- looking forward to more!!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Progress

Another great update!  I just so enjoy seeing how far they have progressed with themselves and their relationship.  I know that Bella still struggles but she is continuing to work on it and I love that about her!

I have a bad feeling about James.  I have had it for a long time.  I did find it intersting that Bella was looking for 'obvious' signs from James (bruises and clothing).  I have a feeling that it is the subtle signs she needs to look for!

Loved that Alice is getting married and I love that she wants a quick engagement!! 

Can't wait for the opera!  (i had forgotten about the tickets he got her)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Such a beautiful chapter.  It is one of my faves!  I loved their date.  The intimacy of the opera and Edward sharing it with Bella. 

And he confessed his love!  I think that I was almost as happy as Bella.  It was a huge step for him to say that. 

And then they made love -- finally.  Such an amazing journey these two have been on.

Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - That Feeling (Twilighted Beta - vjgm)

Such a difficult and amazing chapter.  It provoked so many emotions.  I was anxious by the end of the first chapter.  My heart was racing and my stomach in knots -- I had a bad feeling..... too!

It was horrible to see Edward pushing Bella away.  She tried to be patient, understanding, and give him space -- nothing seemed to help.  I was glad that she did take time to reconnect with her friends.

Major heartfail when she went to his apartment.  I think I felt as nauseous as Bella.  I hope that this is like the opera and that there is a big misunderstanding.  I fear there isn't! 

Thankfully, I waited until today to reread this chapter -- now I won't have to wait for the update!  :)  Eager to see what is going on!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Shattered (twilighted beta - vjgm)

Great chapter!!  Truly amazing!  To witness Bella's life... survival is upsetting - depressing.  It was terrible to see her shrink back into a hole and my heart broke for her when she thought of herself as invisible again!  The Bella in this chapter reminds me of Edward in AG and how he is doing what he has to to survive.  It is tragic to see.

I think that Alice needed to say what she did.  (She could have just slapped her and said, "snap out of it.")  And, while Bella was yelling at Alice, I felt as if she was getting out all the anger she felt (especially in regards to Edward) on Alice.

And Edward, he angered, and frustrated me and he broke my heart.  I can see both sides to his arguement.   I had hoped that when he finally said ILY he was in a better place and was accepting of their love.  That he truly did deserve it.  He was being selfish and selfless at the same time.  He was trying to protect her but didn't want to let her go too.  I am glad that he was honest but am aggravated that it took him so long to do it.

I can't wait to see what Bella says and what happens for them.  AND I am terrified about what James is going to do.   AND I am still hold out hope for an HEA!!!!

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Margarita Monday

Great chapter.  I love that he is torn about what to do.  He still doesn't understand his feelings so I can't imagine that he would leave.  It seems too soon to be the good guy ........ however?!  :)

Can't wait for the next update!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Temptress Tuesday Part II

Another great chapter.  I was surprised that Bella admitted that she wasn't drunk?  Was that part of her plan or is she just confused?  Can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Falling Friday

W.O.W!!  Great chapter.  Glad to get some back story with Edward (i didn't remember the family history from before).  Too cute when they found the lost girl.  AND Edward realizing his feelings for Bella!  It was incredible. 

AND the sex was HOT!!  Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

 
Summary:

The Volturi have requested an immediate return of all vampires to Volterra to discuss the recent threat pressing upon all their kind. A request that has never before occurred. The reason: the complete exposure of the vampire world to the entire human population. Or is it? A request that forces not only the Immortal Children to become involved, but also forces Isabella Swan to come out of hiding since she was changed in 1692.

 

Battles, romance, secrets, vendettas, and vampire powers galore!

 

 

Also - if your ever looking for a story that ACTUAL incorporates ALL the vampires listed...check this out! I'm using every single vampire I can get my hands on! Zafrina/Stefan/Vladimir and the Volturi Group play major roles!


Categories: Other Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Benjamin, Caius, Carlisle, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Other Character, Renata, Rosalie, Stefan, Tanya, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 55872
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Into the Vampires Den

This is an amazing story.  SO original and so well written.  Can't wait for more!

Update soon -- please!!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions

Hmmm, intersted to see what happens next.  Loving Jasper in this story.  Update soon!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing

Awesome!  I love that the guys got played!  Looking forward to more.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted

Ooohh, loving Laurent!  Such a great friend!  Happy to see Jasper and Bella work something out.  Can't wait to see what Edward does next.

 
Secret by Twilighter620 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary:

As crime tarnishes the image of Seattle, Edward Masen lives as the disillusioned, hot-shot, Lieutenant of the Seattle Police Department's S.W.A.T. team. He soon realizes his fascination with the Seattle Weekly Journal's investigative reporter Isabella Woods - but all is not as it seems with Ms. Woods and her identity. Will Edward be able to change his ways and finally fall in love in a city that's tumbling to pieces?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 111243
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 26, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

This is getting so good.  I can't wait to see what happens next between ExV and BxJ.  SO, if Bella wasn't at the conference - who was?  OR was he just imagining her there?!? hmmmm

Author's Response: Edward imagined her being there.

 
Summary:

 

Bella: "It occurred to me that there was another way to let you taste my blood, without dying, and without needles. And I think I might like it too."

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 26841
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So I have actually had this discussion with a friend and her husband.  (sick - i know)  ;)  You did a good job writing this and staying in character.

 
Yes, Please by Coquette Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary: One-shot. While out of town, Bella devises a way to finally seduce the ever virtuous Edward – with a little help from an unexpected source.
Categories: AU, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7768
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: October 30, 2008


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW -- that was great!  Go Bella!! :)

 
Betting on Success by Twitch Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 209]
Summary:

The time had come for us to relocate. Again. I’d caught a few stray thoughts from several of the wary, yet still exceptionally unobservant humans, who seemed to find it odd that in the seven years of living here we seemed to lack the aging gene.

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15 years have passed since Renesmee was born, and now the Cullens are relocating. Renesmee, Jacob and Bella experience the high school charade for the first time with the rest of the family. But what happens when Jacob wants to start a little bet?

 Edward's POV at first, though it might change in later chapters. First Twilight fanfiction, so please read and review.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21887
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: December 27, 2008


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Gossip

Great story!  Looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and update as quickly as possible =)

 
Summary:

The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars.  Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them.  Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is so good!  Please update soon - I am eager to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter!  Looking forward to seeing what happens when Edward finally meets Bella (soon I hope). :)  Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Edward is being difficult, which I suppose is nothing new. :)  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter!  I am interested in seeing how this story develops.  Bella is breaking my heart and Esme is wonderful. 

Can I be adopted by the Cullens?!?

Update soon!!



Author's Response: I want to be adopted too!  Thanks so much, and I plan to update every Monday!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another great chapter!  Leave it to Rose to get everyone to stop walking on eggshells.  I hope that Bella can start sharing some of what she went through.  It will be intersting to see how this story develops.

Author's Response: Bella needs a bit more trust before she can open up, but it's coming, I swear.  I don't know what I would do without Rosalie either. :)  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love Emmett!  Great update.  This story keeps me wanting more.  Update soon!

 




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