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30 something mom
reads way too much fanfic
and is way too addicted!
On Fanfiction, I'm lobsters1128 - in case you were curious.
On Twitter, I'm lobsters4ever1 - in case you were desperate. ;)
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Summary: Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?
This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2012
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: 15. - Epiphany
YEAH! Great chapter! Happy Edward = pure bliss for me!!
You are doing a great job staying in character. And good job incorporating the dialogue from NM in the story. Sometimes I forget that this is fan fiction! :)
Keep up the great job! Author's Response: As much as I love angsty Edward, happy Edward fills me with warm fuzzies... mostly because it usually means that Bella gets what she wants. The same as with any other man. Lol
Thank you so much!! I'm trying to keep it true to NM without it being a copycat story, so I'm thrilled that people are agreeing that that's what I've done. :o)
Summary: This isn't your typical 'love triangle'. It's more of a love rhombus. Bella Swan is being shipped to Forks, by her eccentric child-like mother. The only solace Bella has is the incredible mind-blowing sex she has with her best friend in Forks. She may only see him in the summer, but those are the best times of her life. Unfortunately, he now has a girlfriend. When Bella arrives and shows some interest in his younger brother, he can't help but feel jealous. Is he really in love with his girlfriend, or is he in love with Bella? What about the younger brother...what about his feelings?
Drama, drama drama.
This is an AU/AH story, slightly OOC. It is rated NC-17 for language and future sex scenes.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Makenna, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 47452
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2008 Updated: January 14, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Hot and Cold.
Please let Edward and Tanya end soon. ExB are so fun. Hopefully, Bella can play a part in the breakup!
Author's Response: Oh they'll end soon. I can't stand them together, but Bella needs a few things to do at once...she's a very busy lady :-)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Tanya.
Shocking -- Tanya is a slut!! ;) So can Edward find out and get the ExB loving going!
Author's Response: Haha, It'll happen. Promise :-)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Hells Bells
Jake = jerk! However, new Edward = HOT! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm writing the next chapter right now.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: What are we waiting for?
So good! Can't wait to see what happens next!! Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: The date!
Cute date! Eager for more ExB! Author's Response: Thanks! There will be plenty more ExB. Promise.
Summary: Bella Swan is starting her freshman year in college. How will her new life change when her past comes back to haunt her?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 56575
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2008 Updated: January 24, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Update this soon! I am interested in hearing what happened in Bella's past!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Thanks for the quick update. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: It was easy to update quick. It was screaming to get out of my head. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Damn this is getting intense. So, did James pick Tanya for a reason or was it random? Eager to see what happens next!
Author's Response: James is not random with what he does. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Glad to see Edward and Bella's relationship developing more. Too cute! Of course James would be watching. Wondering what will happen next?! Author's Response: I think their relationship is as important to the story as the situation with James. It will only grow and strengthen. James is such a sick guy. More of James and his sick, demented mind will be revealed in the next few chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Holy Crap! Intense chapter! Sooo much happened. I love Edward and Bella's relationship. Protective Edward is just so yummy!!!!
James is one sneaky bastard. I was impressed that Bella is deciding to take some action for herself.
Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Author's Response: It took me longer to write this chapter. I didn't want James to show up at the party, but it wouldn't get outta my head, so I had to go with it
I love writing Bella and Edward together. Their relationship is the easiest part of the story to write. Sometimes I have to remember there are four other people they interact with on a regular basis.
Yeah, Bella is tired of being the victim. She actually has so much more to fight for now that she has Edward and his family.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
This is getting so good. Very intense. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Intensity was one of my goals. Yay! I'm glad you like it. I'm feverishly working on the next chapter. Hopefully it will be done for the weekend. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
I am glad that ExB finally expressed their physical love. I am anxious to see what happens next with James. He is going to lose his friggin mind when he finds out! Author's Response: I'm glad they did too. That took a lot to write. James will definitely not react well if finds that out. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
WOW! Bella went for it. I hope that it turns out well. Can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Of course Bella went for it. Our lovely danger magnet can't help but run headlong into a dangerous situation. Granted, she doesn't always think things through properly. But we love her anyway.
Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
She did it! I was surprised by what happened to James. Good story and good ending. Thanks!
You could tell this story from EPOV. I would love to hear what he was going through trying to find Bella. Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm working on the last chapter from Edward's POV. I hope to have it out within the next week. I'm still debating a sequel. I have a few ideas, but don't want to cheapen the integrity of the original story. If I don't do the sequel, I will definitely post an epilogue after the EPOV chapter.
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review.
Summary:  AU-Human. Manwhore Edward bets Emmett that he can remain abstinent for 40 days and nights - or lose his beloved Volvo. He's convinced it'll be a piece of cake. Of course, that was before sex kitten Bella moved to Forks, and set her sights solely on the delectable Edward Cullen. NC-17 for extreme profanity, and ridiculously smutty sexy time.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 71906
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Gut Shot
Clearly this chapter deserves all sorts of love. First it is EPOV ... which always makes me happy. And Jasper is just yummy!!!
I absolutely LOVE his little references to himself. "Edward Makes-Wilt-Chamberlain-Look-Like-A-Fucking-Priest Cullen ... Edward Cool-Hand-Luke Cullen ... Edward-Cooler-Than-the-Fucking-Fonze Cullen"
AND my personaly fave ... "Edward-My-Dick-is-the-Holy-Grail Cullen" I would give up everything and take the quest for that Holy Grail!!!
Summary: Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.
This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Bazaar
Edward is truly a conflicted complex man. And his relationship with Bella is so complex too. I am so curious about what he will do in regards to the church, Bella and his feelings.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Seventeen
Well, that was a heartbreaking birthday. Edward makes my heart hurt in this story. I just want happiness for him.
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Prodigal
Very interesting turn of events. Looking forward to what happens next!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Undoing
Great chapter. I loved what Bella said to Edward. It was brilliant. And I really appreciated his honesty with himself and Carlisle.
Very well done!!
Summary: 
It's Bella's 18th birthday, and what does she want more than immortality? Her darling Edward's loving company—minus the clothing. To her surprise, Edward caves and when Bella gets some, she gets WAY more than she bargained for. Cue Edward's standard self-sacrificing departure, a snarky, homicidal Victoria with some powerful connections, and a new Bella who grows a belly and a backbone and goes on her own little hunting trip in Denali to find answers.
Farewell is a twisted tale where everything is not always as it seems. There is an underlying current of betrayal that may knock your socks off on one or two occasions. A FRIENDLY WARNING: This story is not full of fluffy bunnies and rainbows and unicorns. It has the tendency to be very dark, in both drama and humor, on some occasions. If you choose to read, well, welcome to the dark side lovelies...
Special thanks to randigiles for helping me straighten out my synopsis. You rock, babe!
Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 214439
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Keeping the Blade
I am completely hooked. This is an amazing story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: i'm so glad i hooked you...hehe...no, really, i am super happy that you like the story and want to see what happens. I will try to update soon! happy reading and thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: History
Damn -- that was good! I liked that Bella stayed away from Alice instead of forgiving her immediately. Nice twist. Also, I am liking Conner. Irish, vampire doctor = hot!! Edward better step up soon!
Author's Response: gosh...it's almost like a direct split...half the people love conner and half the people hate him. i'm glad you're liking him and the interaction bella had with alice...2nd half of the chapter should be up tomorrow! be on the lookout...hope you enjoy, thanks for the review and happy reading! :)
Summary: Edward and Bella meet when their friends Alice and Jasper introduce them, however, the path to true love is rarely a smooth one. When they look back on the paths they've taken, will they have regrets?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 59205
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: February 19, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Goodbye
great story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Will there be any more POV from Bella? Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks for the review...BPOV is coming up next ;-)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Leaving on a Jet Plane
Damn she really left. I was having a Friends R/R flashback and chanted in my head -- getofftheplane, getofftheplane. :):)
Hope ExB see each other soon! Can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Hahaha....I like your little chant...LOL. Thanks for the review and Merry Christmas!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Charlie
First this story is written so well. I am throughly enjoying it! It was a very sweet chapter. Aahh, Charlie .... what a sweetie. It was nice seeing Bella's memories. Looking forward to more!
(can edward come visit soon -- i miss him!!) Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked Charlie and we will be hearing from Edward soon ;-)
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