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30 something mom
reads way too much fanfic
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On Fanfiction, I'm lobsters1128 - in case you were curious.
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Summary: This is a companion story to Lost and Found. Lost and Found is Bella’s POV, and this story is Edward’s POV as they both struggle to learn what it means to find love and happiness. Follow Edward as he struggles to deal with his past, and learn to live again. Will Bella be what he needs to heal and learn to love again?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 56193
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Brown
Sorry this took so long -- I wanted to reread this chapter in L&F. I wanted to remember Bella's POV of that night.
Can I say, again, how much I love getting Angstward's POV? Well, I do. There is so much more going on with him than I would have ever imagined when reading L&F.
One of the things that I found most interesting was that Edward remembered her clearly from high school. He saw her revert back to HS Bella when he was rude to her in her kitchen. And then when he was listening in to Alice and Emmett's - neither of them could remember her at all but Edward was detailed in his memory. Bella thought that she was invisible or tried to be and Edward noticed many things -- just not the important ones.
It is so intriguing how she gets under his skin - in good and bad ways! I am getting a better understanding of how Bella affected him too.
I am so looking forward to more of AG. Everytime I read L&F, I think about what was going on with Edward (too many to list). :)
And I loved the title of this chapter too. Great job - can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Just wanted to leave some love over here too. I loved this chapter even more the second time. I didn't realize how much he was watching her during dinner from L&F. She is truly an enigma to him. Author's Response: aww, thank you! Just wait til you read what happens next ...
Summary: Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC
Rated for situations and lemons later on...
©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Bella's B-Day Part 2
Wow! Great story and intense chapter. I am glad that Bella opened up and shared her past .. with Edward. What a terrible thing to have to go through as a child. I hope that this will lead to ExB getting closer. I am looking forward to seeing relationship develop more.
Keep the updates coming!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Illumination
So glad that they finally told each other their feelings! And as a reward .. they got to have great sex! :)
So loving this story ... looking forward to more!
Summary: 
Bella is an aspiring writer, who doesn't have time to date. In an act of desperation, Bella tells her mom, she has a boyfriend. Now Bella must hire a boyfriend for the holidays. Will Bella find that she likes her pretend world better than her reality?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 64982
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- What Now?
Finally! They admitted their feeling for each other! So happy! And then, of course, there was the celebratory sex! *swoons*
I wonder what will happen if the truth of how/why they met ever comes out? Hmmmm .....
Looking forward to what happens next!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- From the Heart-
Yeah -- so happy to get an update. I have missed these two.
It was nice to see that their relationship is continuing to grow. My heart hurts for Bella. She is so conflicted. I hope that they are able to work everything out ..... soon!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- My Heaven-
Oh how I love fluff. I just adore how wonderful Edward's family is with Bella.
And the hottest breakfast -- ever!!! :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 A Human Moment (VJ)
I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked that they are facing and deal with real problems and issues in relationships. I am glad that they talked about what had happened.
And two hours of Edward loving ...best dessert EVER!
Looking forward to more!
Summary: Edward's racing team is getting a new driver, too bad it's Bella Swan. Lemony.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3208
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OK -- you were right -- Raceward is hot! You write the best lemons!!! Wet, steamy, shower sex ..... HOT!
Hope you are feeling better!!!
Summary: Sequel to My Sacrifice. Bella and Edward have made it through the confrontation with James alive and together. How did all of the hell he put them through affect their lives? This is Edward's story of coping, loving, and learning to live again.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 60763
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So glad that you are continuing with EPOV! Really good start. I wonder how he will deal with his nightmares! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like Edward's POV.
Summary: Bella has given up her whole life for those around her. What will she do, who will she be, where will she go with no one and nothing holding her back anymore? AH/AU, canon pairings eventually - NON-canon pairings initially.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 134201
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: July 02, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I have spend the past few days reading this. Oh, how I enjoyed it. I was bad about reviewing each chapter so I give you one big fic review.
I loved Bella's plan. She was truly amazing for having gone through so much and to be able to survive that and be determined to live a life is astounding.
I am such a canon girl yet somehow, I didn't gross out when Bella dated (and more) with Jasper, Emmett and Tanya. I was proud of her for trying and exploring all her options and even prouder when she saw the connection between J/A and did the right thing.
Then there was Edward. Oh, my Edward - you can give me a hot, horny, sweet, smart, pervy Edward anyday and twice on Sunday. He was just, beyond words with her. He made me very happy. He not only knew her so well but he understood her too.
I may have swooned (alot) when he proposed over and over again. That was adorable but ending this with Bella asking him was perfect.
This was such an incredible story. I am so glad that I read it. Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us. Author's Response: Thank you so much for this one great review :) I appreciate it so much! So glad that you loved the story, and I enjoyed hearing about which parts you liked the best. I'm appreciative that you stuck in there even through the different pairings.
Summary: 
Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.
Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24: Giving In
Woo Hoo! So thrilled to see an update!
Loved Bella's time with Renee. Sometimes a girl needs to her mom -- and usually they have good advice. And Renee was brilliant. I like that she was honest and loving with Bella. Exactly what she needed!!
I am so looking forward to Bella and Edward's convo. I can even imagine what will happen and can't wait to find out!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
What an incredible chapter! Hugely detailed! Great job!!
I love Bella and Rose's friendship. I like the back and forth banter and shit they give each other. It is completely unique!!
Also, I really like Bella and Jacob's friendship too. You can tell they have history together and are comfortable ... maybe too comfortable with each other. I like the way they flirt with each other. It is playful banter and I don't get the impression that it means more!
Looking forward to what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Outtake 1: The Mission
I love this story. AND I fucking love their plan!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65
So loving this! I was very surprised by Bella and her actions. What a little vixen! Edward was such a gentleman -- damnit! I love flirty Edward ... Flirtward! He is golden (even if he is flirting with everyone but Bella).
I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Well, I am relieved that Bella apologized and that ExB finally talked. These two have such great personalities -- they really compliment each other well. I love that he is a flirt and she is sarcastic.
OK -- I have to confess the whole Adrian thing is really bugging me. At first, I was annoyed with her because she was kinda cock-blocking ExB. Edward is a flirt and I thought she was just being flirty back. But then the contact outside the classroom increased and now she gets busted. lies and still continues to contact Edward. It just made me feel icky. I just kept thinking that if were a guy teacher/girl student -- I would feel just as grossed out (probably more) like with Rose and her professor. I don't know where this is going but I have a bad feeling. (sorry for ranting)
I am truly loving this story and Emmett is great .... "Did I win?". LOL Looking forward to what happens next! Author's Response: haha I know, I know. Everybody's hatin' on Adrian! My defense is that Rose's teacher was middle-aged, whereas Adrian is only a few years older than Edward. It's not the same! I just think it's the whole prospect of a teacher/student "romance" if you will.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
Loved this chapter so much because it had lots of Edward and Bella time. That makes me happy!!! :)
I really do like the way their friendship is continuing to grow. They both have such great personalities and senses of humor. I love their convos and banter. Also like the twinge of jealousy going on.
Looking forward to Jacob's visit and spring break!
(oh and the whold Adrian is still grossing me out!!!!! ICK!)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Outtake 2: Operation: Stranded
Great outtake chapter! I loved Alice's POV. It is sweet that she meddles but feels bad about it. I am nervous about Tanya's visit. I am glad that Edward was getting jealous. I didn't think he was feeling that way about Bella.
Hey -- maybe Tanya and Jacob could "hook up". That would so ease my stress. :)
Hmmm, whose POV -- I would LOVE some Emmett (POV of course). It would be just too funny. Although, Jacob or Tanya's POV could be intersting.
Looking forward to more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts
So good! So, so good!!!! There is just too much happening in this chapter.
I absolutely loved the Edward/Bella moments! They are just so genuine with each other now. No pretenses. I love it! The text-flirt was fun! And the real flirting was even better! I just can't get enough of these two!!!
The whole Adrian thing is still grossing me out and I don't know why!! But now I have a really bad feeling about their relationship. I truly hope that Edward doesn't get hurt by it. (Adrian can be hurt tho) ;)
I can't wait to find out what happens next! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
So good! I was hoping that you would write the bathroom outtake. YEAH!!
I actually felt bad for Tanya. That is huge because I am so not a fan of Tanya typically. I still think that she could hook up with Jacob though. They deserve some loving too. ;)
Alice and Rose were the best! From Alice planning on kicking her to Rose's plan to flush her head in the toilet -- too funny! LOL
Emmett -- ah, Emmett. All this going on and he still thinks about himself and getting some. And Jasper's plan to ask nothing -- funny!
SO Jasper made the phone call!!! I actually gasped! I hope that they find out about Edward's "study date" with the 'lab rat' (i love that name) before he goes.
Great outtake and can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
So good! So, so good!
First of all, I love Rose! She is great. She is bitchy but such a fierce friend. She is the kind of friend who would always have your back! I like that she can be playful and bitchy at the same moment.
Second, I like Bella and Jake's friendship. They are very close and it is easy to see why anyone would think there was more going on with them. Why was he upset about Edward? Does he have feeling (more than friends) for Bella? I don't think so but ....
Lastly. I can never get enough of Edward and Bella together in this story. I thought their interactions when she was working were adorable. I love that he had to come down to see her instead of just IMing her. I loved that Bella could laugh at herself. I like that they joke and flirt with each other. Too sweet that he quizzed her.
UGH! Damn cliffie. What happened? Why is he there? He is supposed to be with the "lab rat". Please let Edward realize that Adrian is vile and he likes Bella. Is that too much to ask?! :);)
Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Author's Response: lmao all over '...Adrian is vile...' hahaha, that was great.
You'll see in a few chapters why Jake is upset. He really does not want her in any other way than as a best friend, and she doesn't want him in any other way than a best friend, either. I had a best friend I was WAY more affectionate with than B/J...granted, he was gay, but still. We used to make out and shit like that, so that's proof that you can be that physically affenctionate with a friend when there's no sexual attraction or want to further a relationship.
Glad you liked it, and I'm super excited to write chapter 15. Thanks for reviewing! <3
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
So, I left a friggin kick ass review the other day and my computer was effing up and lost it.
I will try again .... well Edward had a very interesting day on Tuesday. Mid-terms.. classmate.. oreo milkshake.. modeling gig.. "studying" with Adrian *gag*.. cockblocked (heehee).. "saving" Bella.. hanging with Bella.. studying with Bella.. walking Bella home.. tingly hugging Bella!
While i dislike this "thing" with Adrian -- there were a few things that I found intersting. He left immediately to help Bella. As much as he thinks he wants Adrian *gag* he doesn't even give it a second thought to go to Bella even though Jake is there. I keep thinking that if I got the chance to finally be with Rob and someone called me to tell me that my friend needed me, there is no way in hell I'm leaving! What Edward's decision says to me is that he may want the labrat but he truly cares about Bella.
The cockblock was great but Rose's excuse was hilarous ...."dream dialing" and "8% of americans" --- LMAO!
I just love Edward and Bella moments and long for more of them together. I often wonder how they are going to realize that they have feeling for each other and then act on it.
It was a great chapter! Well done!! Can't wait for Sunday! :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
What a great update! I love Jace!! He was perfect. Just so yummy! I hope that he helps Edward recoginize his feelings for Bella. I ultimately want Edward and Bella to be together. :):)
Still loving Edward and Bella moments together. I just can never get enough.
Hope Edward shows up soon to "save" Bella from Mike. Can't wait to see how the rest of the break goes for these two!!!! Author's Response: Honey, you just wait until the next chapter. Juuuuust you wait. <3
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans
Loved it! (you knew I would) ;) I just love these two together so much. They make me happy. :)
I loved that Edward saved her from Mike. And the kissing on the neck ... um, yeah, .... hot! I think I had goosebumps too. *swoons*
The glasses were hot!!! Yeah, Bella was right with the whole "really hot nerd" thing. It seems that in this chapter Bella was reacting to Edward more and her attraction to him. And that he is seeing that she is attracted to him too. I can't wait for him to realize that he is attracted to Bella. How much longer do I really have to wait?!
Oy my, Newtow really is a tool. I can't wait to see what he has planned. I laughed when he asked Bella if she has a ski mask. I thought "what the fuck" too. LOL
Can't wait for next Sunday!! Great update!!! Thanks Six!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me
So loved it! The attack on Mike was the best. And Edward was shot -- too damn funny. They have such fun times and I love their sweet moments too. When Bella was upset and Edward was comforting her --- awwwww! And then "I love yous". more awwww!
I so love Bella's time with the guys. I really like seeing that side of Bella. I would love for Edward to see more of her too.
GAH! Edward is such an ass. I so want Bella to wipe the smirk off his face. I know this is called Breaking Bella but sometimes I think that Edward is the one who needs "breaking".
Thanks for the great update!! Can't wait for Sunday!! :)
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