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30 something mom
reads way too much fanfic
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On Fanfiction, I'm lobsters1128 - in case you were curious.
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Summary:  
Bella and Edward have been pen pals (the traditional kind, pen and paper stuff) for over a decade, but they never met for reasons even they didn’t know. After fourteen years of “courting through the postal service” and not realizing it, Bella gets engaged to Emmett, a fellow lawyer at the prestigious firm of Ateara, Call, and Uley. They move fast, and a wedding is set for a mere four months after they get engaged. Bella invites Edward to the wedding, wanting to finally meet her longtime friend, and when things go sour the night of the rehearsal dinner, Bella, in her shock, ends up in Edward’s arms. And this is all just the tip of the iceberg for these two…
Rated NC-17 for mature sexual content. Little to no bad language.
*banner by enchanted-mind*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 239223
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Welcome to Chicago
Wow! I have to admit that I was surprised by what happened between Bella and Edward. I didn't expect that so soon. I hope that they don't regret their decision.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Beginning of the End
Interesting story. I can't wait to find out what the letter said and for Edward and Bella to finally meet. Author's Response: Thanks for taking time out of your day to read and review :). The meeting and the letter are coming soon.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: More than Friends
I am SO happy that they finally met. I was great to see that they wasn't any awkwardness but they were instantly comfortable with each other.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: What Happens at SeaTac
I have a really bad feeling about Emmett and what is going on with him. I think he may be cheating on Bella. I hope not but I fear he is.
I did like seeing the first encounter from Bella's POV and loved seeing what he wrote to her.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Catalyst
I can't believe Emmett did that. And Rose? I think Bella let them off too easy. That was a really crappy thing to do to her. I realize that Emmett didn't sleep with Rose but he cheated with her.
I'm glad that Edward was there for her and I'm surprised she is thinking about moving to Chicago. That should be interesting!
Summary:
Edward is a CEO of a computer company. He is also Bella Swan’s submissive, but he wants more. He wants to be her willing slave all the time. This story will explore the journey they take to find what’s best for them both and the hardships they suffer.
This story will be extremely graphic in its language and sexual content.
The characters are also OOC; please keep this in mind as you read.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 10998
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting. Very interesting. Author's Response: thanks for the review.
Summary: Bella's marriage is crumbling. He's never home, he barely speaks to her... they haven't had sex in over a month. It isn't until Bella's life is put in danger when she accidentally becomes involved in a crime that Edward reveals the truth... He's been working for the FBI. Now he must lug a furious and untrusting Bella across the country in a hilarious and utterly unromantic road-trip. Can Edward keep them both safe when she's been losing faith in him for years?
Thanks Frozensoldier (below) and evenstar (above) for the completely awesome banners!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 30897
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2010 Updated: February 06, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: He Wanted Faith
Very interesting. I like the mystery about Edward and his past. I do feel bad for Bella and I hope she gets more answers soon. It seems that some might not be the one she is 'expecting'. heehee
Looking forward to what happens next.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: He Bought Me Pizza
I hope Edward figures out the clue Emmett left him or even better if Bella could figure it out. ;)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: He Freaked Out
I wish that Edward would have handled the news a little better when he heard about the pregnancy. I realize he was shocked but I did feel bad for Bella.
It was very cute when they were discussing names.
Summary: Bella agrees, against her better judgement, to go on a blind date with the brother of one of her friend Alice's coworkers. Meanwhile, Edward's brother has literally beat him into submission, demanding an end to his unintentional celibacy.
One-shot expanded due to reader appreciation!
NC-17 for language (extensive use of the F-word) and a lemon and half.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 10898
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: The Worst That Could Happen
Well, their morning was getting better until .....
That was hysterical. I'm starting to think that they are jinxed. Hopefully, no one else with disturb them and they can get through their lunch (and dessert) without any interruptions. ;) Author's Response: Haha, oh, if only... I keep running through all of these hilarious scenarios in my head, so rest assured that we have not seen the last embarassing moment for these two!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Blind Date
I really enjoyed this. It was so funny and I liked Edward and Bella's chemistry. Also, That had to be the most awkward morning after ever!
I would like to read more. I hope you decide to expand this. Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. That is really great! I am going to continue this bad boy under the title The Worst That Could Happen. Chapter 2 is already up on FF.net under the pen name eles. It's being beta'd for this site currently. Please keep reading! Thank you.
Summary: Seth and Emmett discuss basic functions. Very basic functions ... Breaking Dawn era one-shot. Humour.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Emmett, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 572
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2010 Updated: October 17, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Talking Bull
I liked this. It was cute and funny. Author's Response: Hello lobsters4ever,
glad you enjoyed it! Seth and Emmett are quite funny together, methinks ;)
Thanks for R & R-ing,
Kara's Aunty ;)
Summary: Selected outtakes from The Arranged Marriage. Main story is a must read to understand.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 8783
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2010 Updated: October 18, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really liked getting Edward's POV. While I still don't understand why he did what he did with Tanya, I am getting to know him better.
It will be interesting to see what he does next and how he handles Tanya. Author's Response: I am glad that you liked it. Getting to know him was a major part of the point and I am glad I was successful with that.
Thank you!
Summary: Someone's had a long day and needs a cold shower to cool off. Little does she know, she's going to get some company.FemmeSlash.
A smut-shot for the Smut University 2010 Fundraiser.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2505
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2010 Updated: October 20, 2010
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
For a cold shower ...that was very, very hot!
Summary: 
Bella swan is working as a reporter for the Seattle Tribune when an assignment comes across her desk she doesn't want. However, she gets stuck writing Seattle's Most Eligible Bachelor's What happens when she crosses paths with the elusive Edward Cullen.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 311
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2010 Updated: January 14, 2012
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 10, 2011
Title: Seattle's Most
I'm glad that Edward and Bella talked. I can't wait to find out what happened and why Bella is late.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 14, 2011
Title: Seattle's Most
I am enjoying this story. It is being told in an interesting way. I would love to see more of Edward and Bella together. I really liked their time/conversation together at the auction. I'm looking forward to their date.
Do you plan on it continuing to be told through emails?
Summary: 
Handsome yet arrogant Edward Masen's life intersects with Bella Swan when she takes a job as a waitress at the restaurant he dines at for lunch every Friday. He doesn't know how to love anything or anyone, and she isn't impressed by the things that usually have women falling at his feet. He's got secrets and a temper - can Bella break down his walls? She'll get her chance Fridays at noon...
Thanks to Beautiful Liar for the awesome banner
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 236322
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2010 Updated: August 30, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I loved the conversation with Tyler. Their conversation gave so much more insight into Edward and this situation.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
That was an interesting way to meet the parents -- without the boyfriend. ;)
Jim gave me the creeps. I'm glad that Bella was concerned by him too.
So happy to see Edward home early. I love their passion and tenderness with each other.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I really feel bad for Bella. She had a bad day. Both Jake and Jasper were giving her such a hard time, Edward was upset about the gift and then James harrasses her. AND she didn't even get to have sexing time with Edward --- worst day ever. ;)
I hope that they are able to stop James from bothering them anymore but somehow I doubt they will.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
I really liked getting to see Bella with one of her students. It's wonderful to see her in another environment.
I love what she wore as revenge too. Good for her for standing up to him. I understand he is scared to let anything happen to her but it is almost too much protection.
Interesting night too. I'm scared as to what James is trying to do.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
James and his intentions are making me nervous. I'm glad that Bella agreed with needing more protection.
Also, I was glad that Edward told her what happened. She needed to hear the truth.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
I am so sad about Alec. I really liked him and he was so amazing with Edward. I am scared to see how Edward reacts to his death. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry for the late reply! Updating soon :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: April 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Such a difficult time for both of them. I hope that they are able to get through this.
You did a great job describing PTSD. That is exactly what it is like living, loving someone who is suffering from it. And 'the darkness' is a perfect way to describe it. Well done.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh.My.God! That was hysterical. Good for her!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I wonder if that is how Edward really feels or if he is saying that to protect himself.
I am so intrigued. Can't wait for more.
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