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Reviews by lobsters4ever
 
Summary:

AU/Human, EPOV

 

While trying to run away from his future, Edward gets into a car accident.  He is bruised, broken, and covered in bandages from head to toe.  His disdain for the hospital staff extends to the woman who saved his life; a new nurse he won't even talk to, let alone look at.   

Though when Edward finally does meet his savior, he feels an inexplicable pull towards her.  Without the aid of his good looks, can he charm her?  Is he sure he wants to charm her?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 40103
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Push It

Still enjoying this story.  Edward is such a complex character with a very intersting past.  Can't wait for more!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Fidelity

Wow!  A lot was revealed in this chapter.  It was nice to see Edward and Bella just talking and sharing.  I liked seeing them growing closer.

Looking forward to more!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Smile Like You Mean It

I am so loving Edward crushing on Bella.  He is being fun and sweet, and of course - pervy.

Interesting twist with the crooked smile.  Looking forward to what happens next!

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan is orphaned and stuck at an elite boarding school on a request from her mothers ex-boyfriend and her guardian Phillip Dwyer. She was prepared for the spoilt rich snobs but what she wasn’t prepared for was Edward Cullen, AU-HUMAN


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8405
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Where No One Knows My Name

Good start!  Interesting story.  I am looking forward to reading more!

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1243]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow!  I mean WOW!  Incredible story!  I can't even imagine where this will go!  Keep the updates coming!



Author's Response:

Hi--

I'm glad you like the story! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The story is going in a good direction, I promise. Lots of drama and excitement coming up! I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story!

The next chapter should be up soon, it is currently awaiting validation.

Thanks again!

--Jess

 
Summary:

Bella is a princess. Her bodyguard Edward is an old childhood friend and has been in love with her since they were kids. Now that they are older, though, he is keeping things professional, but will he admit his feelings? Will Bella realize she loves him?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 20312
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: May 27, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start ..... can't wait to see what happens next.  Will there be EPOV too??

 
Summary:

Bella, Alice, and Rosalie make up a list of 10 things to do their freshman year in college that include things like 'falling in love' and 'a one night stand'. What happens when they meet three wonderful guys? BxE. AxJ. RxEm.

10 CT


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2056
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Great start!  Loved the list.  :)  Can't wait to see how accomplishing this list works out!  Update soon!

 
Summary:

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Inspired by Taylor Swift's 'You Belong With Me'.

Bella has been Edward's best friend since third grade. Now it's senior year, and nothing [not even his girlfriend Tanya, or the creeper James, or even her own insecurities] is going to stop Bella from making Edward see that he belongs with her.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 53887
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Weak

Enjoying this story but I have to admit that I am just as confused as Bella.  I like the interactions between ExB and am looking forward to how this turns out!

 
Summary:

Edward, the new, fresh meat at Bella's office, is a complete geek, which is ultimately her undoing. She fantasizes about him at work constantly... Will her fantasies become a reality, or will real life get in the way? Original O/S now extended. BxE, AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 9931
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tuesday: Pipe Dreams & Post-Its

So good!  I think that I need to change now! :)



Author's Response:

Lol - I love it when people say that!  I'm always like - Damn you Robert, Oh, I mean Edward!  Why are you so fucking hot!  Lol - Thanks so much!  :o)

 
Sugar and Spice by alaskangirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 534]
Summary:

banner for sugar and spiceWith Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the fast updates!  I am ready for more ExB interactions!



Author's Response:

thank you. it will happen i promise!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks for the fast update!  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

 
Summary:

Edward is a famous actor who isn't satisfied with his life. He and his good friend Alice are off to Chicago to film the newest superhero flick. After a fight with his boss, Edward ends up meeting someone who may just change the way he feels about his life.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 42339
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: February 08, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: As Good As it Gets

Great start!  I am very interested in seeing what is going to happen next and finding out who Edward's girlfriend is?  Hmmmm

Looking forward to more! :)



Author's Response:

hummm his girlfriend... yep she will for sure be in the next chapter... i hope you like her *grin*

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Soul Food

I am really enjoying the way that Edward and Bella's relationship is developing.  I like their friendship and banter.  I love that she is not all gushing over him but is honest with him.

I can't wait to see what happens next!  (and to find out what Bella is hiding ... you friggin tease!)  ;)



Author's Response:

Tease? who me? =D

I promise to reveal all... in time.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Enchanted

Damn!  What is going on with Bella?  I have about 15 different ideas ... why is she sad .... Emmett .... why is she famous.... what the....?

Ask Edward to google her for me and let me know what he comes up with, kay?!?

Obvisously, looking forward to more!!!



Author's Response:

Lol,

I'll be sure to ask Edward right away... and I'll let you know what he says ;)

stop by the thread and discuss some of your theories! I'll be thrilled to hear them!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Enchanted

OK -- read some other reviews after I posted.  SO he won't google her.  Private Investigator could work and there is always stalking!!  Stalkward.....aaahhhh!  Just some suggestions!

Oh wait ... just ask Alice -- she will know!!!! :):)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Shall We Dance?

Very good update!  You are doing a great job with the pace of this story.  Keeping me intrigued and wanting more.  Oh and the questions about Bella just keep on coming! 

I do have one theory I will share, Bella didn't hurt her wrist falling on the stairs --- she did it punching a werewolf in the face!!!  Am I right?!? :)



Author's Response:

*snort*

you caught me! Too bad there are no werewolves in this story or else that would totally be true!

glad im keeping you guessing when it comes to bella. I was really scared that it would be so obvious that there would be no point in continuing the story!

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Dreamgirls

WOW!  Thanks for the quick update.  So glad that Bella called Edward.  I am really loving their relationship. 

So, Bella was a dancer.  WELL, one part of her past revealed but so much more to find out .... can't wait!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Lost in Translation

"That's what she said."   

*snorts*  I think, I think I have heard that somewhere before ...... hmmmmmm?!

A couple of things stuck out for me ....  parts of Emmetts story didn't add up for me.  She didn't remember how long she stood there after Mike left and how did she get a black eye falling down?!?  Also, when Bella said to Edward, "So Emmett told you what happened to me" .... I got the feeling that there is another version of what happened and Edward got Emmett's.

Still intrigued!! Can't wait for more!

 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Center Stage

So the drama just keeps on coming. 

So, Edward and Tanya .. is she always that quick to get off the phone or is there something else going on?  I appreciate that Edward is trying to do the right thing with Tanya but he isn't being honest with himself, Tanya or Bella.  Oh what will he do?!

A cliffie, huh?!?  You evil, evil tease ... I hope that you are happy. 

Can't wait to see what happens next with Mike!!

And "that is what she said" .... always a classic!!!!! :)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Beauty and the Beast

So glad the truth finally came out!!!!  I didn't think Emmett's story was the whole story!

I love protective Edward!  He is so wonderful.  I still enjoy their relationship and I loved the way Bella handled the reporter.  HA!

But now what?  I have no idea what is going to happen for ExB ... ugh!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Good Night and Good Luck

Wow Delta -- it is really over.  I really have enjoyed your story.  And I did notice the chapter titles were movie titles (being the dork that I am - it took me a couple of chapters tho) :)

I thought the ending was cute.  It went well the the theme, characters (your Edward would totally run on stage) and flow of this story.

Good job!!!  Any plans for any other stories?!?

 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: From Here to Eternity

Sad to see this story end.  I have enjoyed it.  You did a really good job in telling this story.  It was sweet with a dash of angst and a side of drama.  Go you! 

 
Tahoe Tanglings by HammondGirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 274]
Summary:

Bella & Alice head out for a winter vacation in Tahoe. Along the way, they meet Rose & Emmett, and during their stay, they meet both Edward & Jasper. Tahoe Tanglings is co-authored by AHizelm & HammondGirl, and will include all POVs. BxE, AxJ, RxEm, AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 107334
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Why Do You Get It All?

Really loving the angst with Edward and Bella.  Keep the updates coming!



Author's Response:

haha. Well, we are glad to hear it. Thanks so much! We will update soon.

 
Summary:

This is a companion story to Lost and Found.  Lost and Found is Bella’s POV, and this story is Edward’s POV as they both struggle to learn what it means to find love and happiness.  Follow Edward as he struggles to deal with his past, and learn to live again.  Will Bella be what he needs to heal and learn to love again?  

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 56193
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW!  Incredible update!  (really am too happy for an update)

Damn... Edward ... pain ... self loathing ...angst!  Angst -- party of one!  How the hell does he survive day in/day out?  No wonder he stays numb. 

It is so amazing seeing EPOV after reading Bella's.  Does he go into more detail about why he thinks/feels this way about Bella?  I guess we shouldn't ask Edward to become the president of "that Swan girl" fan club!!  I love that he wouldn't even think her name.  She was "that Swan girl".  She was less of a person then.

Intense nightmare!  No wonder he avoids sleep.

Loving this story and so glad to get more!  Great job!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Brown

Sorry this took so long -- I wanted to reread this chapter in L&F.  I wanted to remember Bella's POV of that night.

Can I say, again, how much I love getting Angstward's POV?  Well, I do.  There is so much more going on with him than I would have ever imagined when reading L&F. 

One of the things that I found most interesting was that Edward remembered her clearly from high school.  He saw her revert back to HS Bella when he was rude to her in her kitchen.  And then when he was listening in to Alice and Emmett's - neither of them could remember her at all but Edward was detailed in his memory.  Bella thought that she was invisible or tried to be and Edward noticed many things -- just not the important ones.

It is so intriguing how she gets under his skin - in good and bad ways!  I am getting a better understanding of how Bella affected him too. 

I am so looking forward to more of AG.  Everytime I read L&F, I think about what was going on with Edward (too many to list).  :) 

And I loved the title of this chapter too.  Great job - can't wait for more!!

 




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