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30 something mom


reads way too much fanfic


and is way too addicted!


On Fanfiction, I'm lobsters1128 - in case you were curious.


On Twitter, I'm lobsters4ever1 - in case you were desperate. ;)


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Reviews by lobsters4ever
 
Summary:

Bella is just plain Jane secretary by day but at night, she is Mistress Izzy Domme extraordinaire. What happens when her days and nights start to merge?


 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 61244
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2010 Updated: April 03, 2011


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Games Part Two

Incredible night.  I like seeing Bella struggle with staying in control.  It's nice to see that she may want more from this relationship. 

Also, very impressive control from Edward.

I am looking forward to more!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Serve Me

Interesting explanation of the modes and rules.  As always, looking forward to more!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Slave To Me

I really liked Bella's conversations with Rose and Jake.  I'm glad that she admitted her feelings about Edward.  It will be interesting to see how her feelings influence their D/s time together.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 So Far So Good

I loved seeing how Edward is adjusting to their new arrangment.   I imagine it would be difficult trying to balance the different relationships.  I think it would be very interesting to see Edward and Bella give into their want/desires at work.



Author's Response:

you may get your wish you will just have to wait and see.

Thanks for the review

 
Summary:

Ruby Slippers Banner

This is an AU outtake to my story, Breaking From the Ordinary, for the Fics for Nashville.  It was something fun to do within my story’s universe that isn’t a part of the actual storyline.  Many people have commiserated in reviews at the various ways they would like to see Bella & Edward rid themselves of the Tanya problem.  This is a tribute to my readers and reviewers.

You do not need to follow the main story to enjoy this little nugget.

Thanks to msambrosia for the awesome banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2534
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2010 Updated: August 03, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ruby Slippers

That was funny.  I loved how she met her demise.  Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I had a ton of fun writing this.  :)

 
Soulmate by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 311]
Summary:

Edward Masen is a single father, ex-con, and an ex drug user. He and his child move to Forks for a fresh start. Bella Swan is a straight edge, young woman. When these two people meet, the attraction is inexplicable. AH/M.

Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight. Stephenie Meyer and Summit own the right. I just play around with the characters.

Banner by: FrozenSoldier

Soulmate Banner

Blinkie by: Rason

Soulmate Blinkie


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 117546
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2010 Updated: March 20, 2012


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm so glad that he finally told Bella about Kate.  Bella was so supportive.  Also, I love seeing her being more imtimate with him - even if it was alcohol induced. ;)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Such a fun and sweet day for all of them.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They have a great rapport with each other.  There is a sense of ease and comfort between them.  I like how their relationship is starting out. 

I'm looking forward to more!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Vanessa is a sweetie and Bella is doing such a wonderful job getting to know her and Edward.  I'm glad that Edward is making more friends.  As a single parent, he will need the support.  I do wonder how everyone will react when they find out about his past.

Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: March 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So glad that Bella talked with Jake.  I think it was good for both of them. 

It is so wonderful seeing Bella and Edward spending time together.  I loved how jealous and possessive he got at dinner. 

 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really like how hard Edward is trying with Vanessa.  Bella was so sweet with Vanessa too.  I'm glad that Edward and Bella feel so comfortable with each other.  They really have a great start to their relationship.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting start.  I am intrigued.  I can't wait to see how their relationship grows.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Edward is opening up to Bella more.  They really do have a great start to their relationship by building a friendship first. 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such a sweet chapter.  It is great to see them growning closer and it seems that they are starting to fall in love too.  I hope that Edward is able to share his past with Bella soon and that she handles it well.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad that Edward told Bella bout his past.  I was surprised how well she took it too. 

I like how their relationship is progressing.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Such a sweet date.  I'm happy for them.  Edward and Bella both deserve some happiness.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm glad that Edward is doing things for himself.  This will help him and Vanessa - in the long run.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I did like that Bella didn't just immediately accept Jake's apology.  But I do agree with Edward that she needs to talk to him at some point and get some closure.  As usual, I loved Bella's time with Edward and Vanessa.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

They are just so adorable together.  I love their family time.  So glad that Edward had a good night at work. 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm glad that they finally told each other how much they mean to each other.

It was funny (to me) that Vanessa didn't want the Tylenol because my kids ask for it. ;)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad that Edward was able to talk to someone about his past and Kate.  I'm relieved that he is going to tell Bella.  She needs to know too.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward's behavior is making me nervous too.  I hope he talks to Bella ...soon.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so glad that Edward finally told Bella everything about his past with James. 

 
Summary:

One night in a dark, crowded bar can change everything. J/B/E.

My entry in the P.I.C's Two's Company, Three's A Party Polyamorous Contest.

Thanks to ms_ambrosia for the great banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5348
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: And Bella Makes Three

Interesting story of how the three of them got together.  I liked that it wasn't another Jasper/Edward couple and then Bella joined it. 

 
Summary:

A stifling hot car ride leads to the encounter of Bella's life.

Birthday fic written for venis envy.

Thanks to ms_ambrosia for the great banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4921
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Rest Stop

This was incredibly hot.  I enjoyed it - tremendously! 

 




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