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30 something mom
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On Fanfiction, I'm lobsters1128 - in case you were curious.
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Summary: 
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: No
Word count: 322567
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2010 Updated: November 02, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I loved seeing the interview from his POV. it was even more incredible this time.
And I agree -- best interview ever! Author's Response: ;) I'm glad you think so! I felt that way myself, it seemed hotter through his eyes. I guess the porno aspect? I dunno. So happy you liked it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Bella and Alice crack me up. I just want to hang out with them.
Bella moments with Edward were just incredible. I love that they are still growing closer. I hope that Bella feels confident enough to share her feeling soon.
Great job! Author's Response: hahah I do too! I wish all 6 of these characters were reall and I could spend time with them. They make me laugh!
So glad you enjoyed their sexy time. They're coming together nicely and both a little afraid but they'll be on the same page soon enough!
Thanks for the review :) So happy you liked it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I'm so thrilled that things are working out for them. I truly enjoy Edward's time with Emmett and Jasper. Their conversations are great.
So relieved that everything is working out with Bella's job. And I was cracking up when Bella called her parents. That was too funny. I can't even imagine what Renee and Esme will be like when they finally meet.
Now, football - I'm hoping for a Bears/Steelers superbowl. And since every team I cheered for lost ....it will be Jets/Packers. ;) Author's Response: :) Yeah, this is a happy fic so I'm not going to fire her and have them break up and whatnot. A little angst here and there but not a lot. Not that type of story.
I love writing the three boys together. They're so much fun!
Renee is a blast and yeah, one day she and Esme will meet. I'm so glad you liked the parents! They were a blast to write.
Hahah I'm not having much luck with teams I'm supporting either. Packers look like the best team remaining, but what do I know? :) I want the Steelers to take it, because the Jets annoy me. We'll see!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
I loved their BBQ. Emmett was very entertaining and I thought his Edward collage was hysterical. It was nice to see everyone having a great time after all the Tanya drama.
I am so looking forward to more. Author's Response: Haha Thank you! I want that collage for my very own but I'm afraid I'm a little too old for such things. It might be frowned upon! haha But I love the image of him cutting out his pictures carefully and getting up on the bed to put them up, snickering away. Such awesomeness. Maybe that'll have to be an outtake at some point.
I'm glad you liked it! Tanya drama is over!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
Great chapter. I'm really liking how everything is goind for Edward and Bella. Her time with the girls was great.
Also, what Edward did after scoring the first touchdown was very, very swoonable!
Can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: Thank you! They're progressing nicely I must say! We're almost to the point this story started on and we'll see how they do once the spotlight shines on them. But they have a great support system.
I love the word swoon and that's what I did over the end of this chapter myself :) Love that so many of you are with me on that!
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
I am really liking this. I am loving their chemistry and can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! I'll try to get you an update pretty soon! I love the two of them together as well.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
I am so glad that they talked and worked things out. It was a relief that their misunderstanding wasn't drug out.
Alice was great. She made me laugh.
Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Alice! I wanted her to be fun and nonannoying and so far I think she is :) That makes me happy!
I will never drag out a misunderstanding, I like fun and romance, not angst. I mean, I like angst but I can't write it. So it's good times ahead! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On
I loved how much Bella has affected him. Emmett and Jasper's teasing was hysterical. I really enjoyed their work out time together.
Great job describing the games and plays.
Can't wait for their date! Author's Response: :) I like to think I get the guy mentality pretty well...they may be filthier than that sometimes but I like their dynamic as well. Bella's definitely on Edward's mind and we're all pretty excited for the date I think!
Thanks for the compliment on the football, means a lot to me ;)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Kick Off
I really enjoyed Alice and Bella watching the game. Alice's limited knowledge and misunderstanding of the term was hysterical.
Edward and Bella's date was wonderful. I am really liking them as a couple and can't wait to see how their relationship develops. Author's Response: Hee, I liked playing fast and loose with Alice's football knowledge as well. She's so much fun and so enthusiastic about supporting Jasper but has no clue what is going on. It's sweet, really :)
Every time I write a date chapter I get mad because I never have anything like them in real life. So unfair! Glad I can give my characters good ones! I am looking forward to developing a relationship too and dealing with a couple facing real challenges together :)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down
I just adored that Edward is being and feeling all girly about Bella. I enjoyed the locker room teasing between Emmett, Jasper and Edward.
Oh, their date - what a mess. Poor Bella she tried so hard to impress Edward and her a/c goes out. I did think that their hallway date was a very sweet option to their date.
I am addicted to their intense attraction to each other - such incredible chemistry. I am looking forward to more. Author's Response: Haha yeah, girly is a good description. And of course he has Emmett & Jasper to tease him about it the whole way through. You have to love that guy dynamic. At least I do. So glad you are enjoying it :)
Yes, Bella was all worried about impressing him and then everything went wrong and he didn't care in the least. He came up with a workable solution and made some moves and even showed his own possessiveness where she's concerned. All in all, a successful evening :)
I'm so happy to hear that their attraction to one another is working for you. I know it's fast but sometimes you just feel it! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play
Edward and Bella's texting were sweet and fun. I have to admit that I like when Bella's crazy, jealous side comes out. I'm glad that she did ask him about Tanya. She may not have gone about it the right way but it was good that she asked.
Alice, again, was great. I loved how supportive she was and she completely cracks me up.
Great job. I can't wait for more! Author's Response: Hee, they both have a jealous side which makes things interesting. No harm in it unless they go around kicking ass all the time. hehe I promised they would always talk out their stuff and I will stick to it!
I loved the texts, they're so darn cute together.
I heart Alice so very much and I'm glad you all like her too! Makes me so happy :)
Thank sso much for the review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown
That was great. I liked their nervousness. It was sweet and endearing and hot. Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I was going for :) They really like each other, obviously, so it was a big deal to both of them. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: August 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down
I truly enjoy Edward, Jasper and Emmett's banter and friendship. It is so fun to see them getting along, teasing and joking with each other. While still being friends and supporting each other.
I can completely understand Bella insecurities about Edward and his ex. I'm glad that they talked and Edward was able to explain his past with Tanya.
I am so looking forward to the photo shoot. It should be interesting.
Author's Response: Haha honestly, writing those 3 boys together is probably my favorite thing to do. I love how they insult one another in one breath but are unequivocally in one another's corner in the next. True friendship. I heart them all!
Yes, I think Bella's fears are pretty common and most of us would feel intimidated by an ex of that magnitude coming to town. Edward's being very understanding and reassuring too. I love him and wish he was my BF.
Photo shoot should be fun, can't wait to write it and see how it goes myself!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: September 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
I don't think I could have loved Alice any more than in this chapter. I want her for my best friend NOW! She was supportive, caring and so, so brilliant. I'm thrilled with how the commerical worked out for them. I truly believe that Edward and Bella should buy Alice many nice things.
Brilliant chapter. I am so looking forward to more. Author's Response: I wish I could give her to you. And to me! I want to rip her off the screen and make her real. Well, all of them, really. They're such great characters and I love playing with them all. But Alice in particular, we could all use a friend like her!
Ha! Many nice things huh? I'll see what I can do :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I loved Edward's conversations with Jasper and Emmett. They were supportive and insightful. I'm glad that Edward has such amazing friends to guide his through this. Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy the boys interactions more than anything else I think :) They're good friends and know just what he needs. So happy you enjoy them along with me :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan
Great chapter. I'm glad that Edward told his parents about Bella. Not that he had much of a choice. ;) Author's Response: Haha glad you liked it. You're right, even if he hadn't planned to tell them, it would have been a done deal :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
I have to admit that I just adore Emmett. I swear it took me forever to figure out that he was calling her reporter's names. I actually laughed at the Ray Romano one.
Bella truly has some wonderful people supporting her. I loved Buddy and Alice and how they stood up for her. I was very impressed and proud of Bella for not wanting to use her relationship with Edward for her own gains.
I can't wait for dinner with his parents. Great job!! Author's Response: :) I adore Emmett too. Yeah, he's been doing the reporter thing with her since they first met :) Woodward, Bernstein, etc. He tries to fit it to the person. haha I'm glad you laughed at Ray Romano!
Bella has the best support system in the world. Very lucky girl! Bella's absolutely not going to compromise her relationship for work!
Dinner is next. Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
This might be my favorite 'meet the parents' scene ever. Bella's awkwardness and nervousness was adorable. I loved how his parents teased both of them and pervy Esme was just win!
Loved it. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Hehe thank you! It was definitely not your normal meeting but it sure was a lot of fun. I'm so glad you liked it! Pervy Esme made Bella feel like she fit right in. Too awesome!
So glad you loved it ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Great chapter. The rapport between Bella and the girls and Edward and the guys is just so much fun. I was impressed with how well Bella handled Tanya but loved how Rose handled her.
I completely enjoyed the antics with Emmett and how he won Jasper. Their introductions (that Bella wrote) were hysterical. Also, I loved how Rose glared at women who she wanted to stop auctioning.
I did enjoy how Edward and Bella 'revealed' their relationship to everyone. Yeah, I enjoyed it. ;)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! The girls are definitely getting bonded, just like their boys are. Bella did a good job with Tanya and Rose wrapped her up. hehe
Emmett...once the man bought him, no way he wasn't buying one of his friends. hehe The intros were my favorite part I think.
The relationship revelation was pretty cute I thought. So glad you did too! Thank you :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: February 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
I have struggled with the review for this chapter. Not because this was a bad chapter - it was an incredible chapter. I just can't find the right words to describe how amazing it was.
While I loved the lemon in this chapter, it was so much more than that. I truly think we saw how deeply in love and committed they are to each other. I loved how certain and confident Edward is with their relationship and future. Bella's nervousness was sweet and Edward's reassurance was just hot.
So, basically, I loved it and you did a phenomenal job. Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it! I'm blown away by your review, so never worry there!
It was definitely more than a lemon. I love the way they communicate with one another, even during the sexy times. Edward knows exactly where they're headed and he's no longer questioning it. Bella, of course, feels like she's in a fairy tale and is waiting to wake up and find it's all a dream. I'm sure we can relate with her. But Edward does a great job with reassuring her.
I'm so happy you loved it :) Thank you!
Summary: 
Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would send her life in a direction that would surprise her beyond belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell...What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AU/AH...Canon Couples...with a twist. NC-17 for smut, dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemons.
Stephanie Meyer owns all things Twilight. I like to put them into awkward positions and see what happens. Take the ride?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 264490
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2011
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
I'm loving the STL references. But now I want Imo's and Syberg's for dinner. ;)
Summary: 
All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.
***Tissue Warning***
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Sunday, July 4th
Bella actually broke my heart this chapter. She is drowning in her lonliness and depression. I truly hope that she talks to someone about it. Even if she met someone, she isn't ready for a relationship. Jasper is right about her loving herself before she can even let someone in.
I know you updated - so please don't take this the wrong way but ...I need more NOW! I am so eager to see what happens next. Can't wait. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm so glad that you picked out how unready Bella is for a relationship and how it is about her loving herself that will fix her. Chapter 3 is already up so make sure you check it out.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Wednesday, July 14th
I'm glad that Bella got out of her house and went for a walk - instead of continuing her downward spiral. It seemed to be a proactive thing to do. Granted her thoughts were consumed by Edward, she didn't wallow.
I loved that he came to her house when his shift was over. It seems that they both needed each other.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Sunday, July 18th
I couldn't believe that Charlie said those things to Bella. I did wonder if he is usually so thoughtless and insensitive or did it just seem that way because of Bella's perspective.
I do love what Edward sent to Bella. That was beyond adorable and so sweet. I did agree with him too ...she has come so far.
I hate that she thinks so poorly of herself. While some of the negative thoughts have diminished, it still lingers. I just wish she could focus on the positives in her life. I know she isn't in the right place now to do that - I just wish she could.
As always, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Saturday, July 17th
I still am enjoying their time together. I appreciate that Edward understands what a big deal it was that Bella gave him a key.
Their date was fun and great. I always love bowling dates.
Oh and the pacing is great. It wouldn't make any sense for her to drastically change. They have know each other a week. She has been depressed for so long - it will take some time to work through it. Heck, she should still go to therapy.
I was wondering why she hasn't been to Edward's house yet. I'm trying not to worry about the reasons why. Does he still live with his parents (or wife) or does he have a household of cats? I'm very curious. ;)
As usual, I'm looking forward to more.
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