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30 something mom


reads way too much fanfic


and is way too addicted!


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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3032]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time

PLEASE, please, please update soon!  I am hopelessly addicted to this story and need to know what happens next!!!



Author's Response: I will as soon as I can, I'm sorry it's taking so long.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Doggy Style (S)

Enjoying this story!  It is so HOT!

 
Summary:

Click here to watch the video trailer created by lilabut.

At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks.  Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night.  Edward/Bella/Jacob

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A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Crutch

OK the call from Alice made me sad!  And Leah -- I actually felt bad for her!

Great start!!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Close Call

WOW!  Such an incredible story.  I can't even imagine what will happen next!  So looking forward to more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm a lover of positive feedback!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: April 17 - 19, 2008

WOW!  I am LOVING this story!  Could Edward be more yummy?!?  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I am torn -- I would love for them to "fulfill their agreement" BUT the sexual tension between the two is addicting.

This story is so amazing and can go in SO many directions -- I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your enthusiastic review!

 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: April 19 - April 26, 2008

First, thanks so much for the update!!  (I actually squealed when I saw this chapter was finally up.)  :)

Second, so wow -- so many questions!  Setting a date, hmmm?  Didn't see the Jake thing coming?  Why does Edward have to become so distant?  Can't he and Bella just talk?

Also, I LOVED that she hid her bra and panties in her dress!  Brilliant!  (i do that at the dr office) ;)

And then she thinks, I may have been a little tipsy, but my logical skills were superlative -- and then walks into his closet...GENIUS!!

Great love scene and I CAN'T wait to see where is story goes next.  Possible Edward's POV!! (please)  :);)



Author's Response: there is a possibility of some EPOV, but I think it will be Emmett's POV.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: April 27 - May 5, 2008

Another great chapter.  I liked that there wasn't any "morning after" talks.  Also, I really appreciate that Edward wasn't thinking "best sex ever" -- that angle is over done and it is so much more "real" without it.

Loving Emmett!  Glad he is back -- can't wait to see what happens next!

Great job!

PS - oh yeah, finally got a friend to read this story (she is anti AH) and she loved it!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Glad you're enjoying the story :) 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Ahh, and yet another amazing update.  This story never goes where I think it will.  So pleasantly surprised!! :)  It is great to see their relationship developing even more.

I am eager to see what happens when Bella finds out about the depo.  Did Edward not tell her to protect her?!? hmmm

Looking forward to what happens next!! 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: May 17 - May 18, 2008

So glad for the update!  I am really liking the flashbacks to Bella's past with the Volturi.  It has me intrigued about what happened!!

Absolutely loving Edward and Bella's relationship.  I love that they talk more.  The chemistry between these too is incredible ... intense.  I love how passionate he is about his protectiveness of her.  And the sexual tension is hot!

Great job and can't wait for more!

Oh yeah, thanks for giving us ... drunk, wet, naked Edward.  Such a wonderful way to start the new year!!! :) 



Author's Response:

I do have a soft spot for as wet Edward... in case nobody noticed. So glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for your thoughtful review. :)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Welcome back!  I actually squealed when I saw the update.  There are no words to describe how I have missed this story!

Great update!  You brought back Wetward -- thank you!  I love Wetward!!!

Edward was just so incredibly sweet, kind, and caring.  It is amazing how much he has grown and changed since Bella has been with him.  His determination to be there for her was fierce.  And of course, he set up all the necessary deversions so that no one would know.  And, oh my, when Edward offered to run off with Bella ... gah ...  my heart exploded!

I am so eager to see what happens next!!  Thanks again for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the welcome and for your continuing support of this story. :)

And yes, Wetward came back. The world can never have another Wetward.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Oh my!  Everything about the chapter was perfect.  Watching Edward and Bella's relationship grow has been amazing.  I am glad that they aren't trying to fight their feelings anymore.  I realize that this will cause more problems but right now -- I will just bask in the afterglow of this remarkable chapter.

Great job!!  Can't wait to see what happens now!!!



Author's Response:

Basking in the afterglow was the intention. Thanks so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Welcome back!  I have missed this story .... and you too!  :)

The memory to Bella's birthday was interesting!  I am now so much more  suspicious about her parents' deaths.

It was so great to see Bella and Edward together again!  I loved taht they could admit their feelings to each other so easily and freely.  It was great to see.

Such a great convo between Edward and Emmett.  Very informative.  i was shocked by Edward's admission to joining the Occhi.  He would truly to anything to keep Bella save.

Loved it - great job!!!  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

thank you for sticking with this story :)

 
Summary:

What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas. Right? But sometimes, it's just the beginning of something special and you find what you never knew you were looking for. AU/AH, Canon pairings.

Blame it on the Cuervo Banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 74977
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Hot, Hot , HOT!!!  Can't wait to see what happens next -- hopefully, I the next chapter will be ready after my cold shower!! :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry, the next chapter isn't anywhere near being completed, but I can say that it's been started.  I won't be able to do much more work on it until Sunday, but I'll get it completed, betaed, and posted as soon as I possibly can.

 
Summary:

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A small shout out to WillBeAWriterSomeday for the amazing banner!

 

What if Edward left Bella again, after returning from Volterra? What if thirty years later he returns to Italy, in hopes the Volturi will end his existence this time? But what if Bella's among there coven and she's one of them?

Rated NC-17 for future chapters, will have a few different POV's but mostly Bella & Edward

GOOD NEWS!!! Tigress5cubs has honored me by taking on my story and being my beta. I love you...you are my saviour.

Twilightzoner has also honored me by becoming apart of my team for this story. Thank you dear. I love your work and all your advice.

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12422
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: April 07, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Please keep going -- must know what happens next!!!

Author's Response: THANKS FOR THE REVIEW, MUCHLY APRRECIATED

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: My Little Distraction

This is such a good story.  I am looking forward to reading more -- soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you are enjoying it.

 
Movie Night by NoMoreThanUsual Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

 

A night at home with the Cullens and Bella.  Set shortly after Bella and Edward return from Phoenix after James’ attack. 

 

 

Family fluff and teasing. 

 

 

Esme’s POV.  Humour. 

 

 
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4491
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: September 29, 2008


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!  It was great seeing Esme's POV and  you gotta love Emmett.

Too cute!

 
Resident Geek by cdunbar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 700]
Summary:

Geeky Edward thinks he has absolutely no shot with the popular, beautiful Bella. Is he right, or will she be one of the many girls who thinks geeks make for better lovers? M for language, sexuality and some underage drinking. A little OOC… okay, a lot OOC.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 71582
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks for the Pretty in Pink reference.  Duckie Rocks!!! :)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am glad that Bella explained her past.  Edward was too cute in this chapter, from humping her to copping a feel and then finally telling her how he feels.  I can't wait for more with these two.  They are so adorable together.

LOVED the Sandlot quote. LOL  I use that one too often too.  Another one of my faves from Sandlot is ... "For-ev-er". 

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yeah an update!  Loved it!  So happy that they are moving forward in their relationship.  I love how nervous and awkward Edward is -- too sweet!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was great!  I loved their costumes.  It was sweet that they both wanted to be each other's fantasy. 

And I liked the awkwardness of their first time.  And that it was at a fraternity.  Classic college!

Looking forward to more!!

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (SA)

I just adore him.  So happy that they confessed their feelings. 

 
Blue Moon by Porcelain Mortal Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 599]
Summary:

Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?

This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.

Blue Moon Banner

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2012


Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: 10. - Making A Concession

Didn't see that twist coming!  It provoked an UGH and WOW at the same time.  How did you do that?

Come on though -- 10 chapters and Bella hasn't seen Edward -- it is like slow torture!  PLEASE update the next chapter -- soon! 



Author's Response: I'm all about the slow torture, apparently. ;o) Thank you.

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: 12. - How To Save A Life

That was amazing.  I absolutely loved it.  You did a great job with this chapter.  I could almost feel them being pulled apart!

Can't wait for the next one!  Looking forward to what happens next!



Author's Response: Oh good, I'm always afraid my "action" scenes are lacking a bit in the excitement department, but I'm so glad you got into it. Thank you. ;o)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: 14. - Honestly

So good!  It seems that Edward keeps digging himself deeper and deeper with his explanations.  Can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'm thrilled to keep you interested. :o)

 
Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: 15. - Epiphany

YEAH!  Great chapter!  Happy Edward = pure bliss for me!!

You are doing a great job staying in character.  And good job incorporating the dialogue from NM in the story.  Sometimes I forget that this is fan fiction!  :)

Keep up the great job!



Author's Response:

As much as I love angsty Edward, happy Edward fills me with warm fuzzies... mostly because it usually means that Bella gets what she wants. The same as with any other man. Lol

Thank you so much!! I'm trying to keep it true to NM without it being a copycat story, so I'm thrilled that people are agreeing that that's what I've done. :o)

 




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