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Summary: WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN
After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?
NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.
Winning Summary:
"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight." With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can. The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption. That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope. The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister. What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative? Will Bella's hopes be destroyed? What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?
Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No
Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: England
next chapter already.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: August 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Barbeque
OMG that is some off the funniest shit i have ever read!!!!!!Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Next Day
hurry up hurry up hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!! next chapter already and i loved that line about tha witch hilarious!!!!!!!
Summary: Bella Swan is devistated after Edward leaves her in the woods. After he leaves, she experiences some of the worst pain imaginable, but not all of it is from her broken heart. 80 years later, the Cullens return to Forks, Washington to begin fresh. But even Alice couldn't see what would turn the Cullens' peaceful world for a spin. AU for new characters and a completely new story line.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 4777
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3-A Little Lunchtime Conversation
Hurry it up. come on get the next chapter already!!!!!!!!!!!
Summary: Kimmi
Kimmi Odell, a physically 17 year old vampire, is about to have her life changed forever. Once a poor girl living on the L.A streets, now a rich girl moving to Forks, Washington, to live with one of her Daddy's friends: Carlisle Cullen.
Seth
Seth Clearwater, a 21 year old werewolf, has his life figured out. That is, of course, until the new girl comes to town. Happy with his pack and his life, will he be able to admit the truth to his friends, as well as to himself, about what this girl means to him? This beautiful red headed girl he knows he can't have, or...maybe...he can have her after all.

"You didn't have to stand up for me like that," I persisted.
"Yes, I did," Seth replied, sounding frustrated and amused at the same time.
"Why?" I asked, stopping in my tracks.
He stopped as well, a few steps away from me, and turned around. He was smiling, that large goofy smile I love so much. "Because, silly girl, I love you." He leaned forward, placed his warm lips on my forehead for a soft kiss, then winked and walked backwards into the trees. Leaving me wide eyed and gaping mouthed where I stood.
Set five years after Breaking Dawn with cannon pairings, Seth/OC, Leah/OC. Will change point of views between Seth and Kimmi for most of the story.
Thank you, justalilcrush, for the wonderful banner. It's beautiful.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Other Character, Seth
Challenges: Series: A Little Thing Called Imprinting, Hey, Move The Damn Spotlight!
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 42778
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Bonfire
really good msg me when next chapter comes!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Talking to Nessie
hurry up with the next chapter already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: August 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: The Peace Breaks
OMG this is a good story but a little sad and sick.seriouly almost puked!!!
Summary:
Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly. As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?
To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.
Show and Don't Tell.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story hurryup please im waiting to read more!!!!!
Summary:
Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.
All canon couples!
Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!
hurry up nex chapter.this story is soooooooo gooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: August 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows
hurray up next chapter already!!!!!!!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: August 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows
hurray up next chapter already!!!!!!!
Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
OMG!!!!!!!! I love this story its so good please,please,please,please,pleeeaaasse finish the next chapter!!!!!!!!And hurry cant wait!!!!!
Thanks
horses191 Author's Response: I have 32 chapters already written, so you should get the next one shortly!
Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: 
Edward and Bella are reunited after the tragic events of New Moon, but things just aren`t the same. One night Bella finds Edward at his piano, will a tragic song from a broken heart be enough to mend the wound?
Songfic, Oneshot.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1220
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot
i love it, but i think u should add on to it. i want to know what happens.
Summary: AU New Moon. There is no Jacob. Edward comes back during a school party in the gym. Has a happy ending :)
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2127
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i love this story!!!!!!!!!
Summary: Set in the timeline of post Breaking Dawn (i.e the first November Bella is a vampire!), but AU. Imagine Edward had the strength to stay away from Bella for her to save her humanity. She is happy with Jacob and is settling into a routine. Coming back from Florida to tell Renee some news, Bella meets someone she doesn't expect on the plane.
Now three of our characters face a crossroads and must all make an important decision. What are the consequences of each decision and how will they effect the other two?
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Brady, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kate, Kim, Leah, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 17015
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: - Back to Earth with a Bump!
this is really good.please hurry with the next chapter ill be waiting!!!!! Author's Response: I'll try - read my chapter notes they are there for a reason! :P hee hee Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Summary: Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.
What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)
~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~

~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2590
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!! u need to write more!!!!!!!!!
Summary: Clumsy Bella breaks something. Helpful Jake tries to fix it. New Moon missing moment. One-shot.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 832
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Pieces--One Shot
this is a good story!!!!!! Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Summary: The Volturi have surrendered in defeat. Peace has been restored in Forks for the Cullens and Bella and Edward can finally begin their eternal happily ever after. But what happens when the past, long since forgotten, overlooked, or undiscovered altogether comes back to haunt you? The turmoil within the vampire realm began long before Bella and Edward and old grudges don't fade easily. Once again, the Cullens will find themselves in the heart of it all. When friends become enemies and families divide, who will be left standing when old bonds crumble and the past comes back to shape the future?

Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 87933
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: February 13, 2010
Reviewer: horses191 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Homecoming
please hurry i want to no who Carisle has with him so please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Summary:  
It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

Set during early 2006.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: 19: Flight
hurry up with the next chapter already!!!!
Summary: 
Set during New Moon, crossover with the film 30 Days of Night. When Bella travels to Barrow, Alaska to attend her cousin's wedding, she unwittingly steps into one of the most dangerous situations of her life. This story will extend well beyond the traditional 30 Days of Night storyline to include how the ramifications of what happens in Barrow affect Bella's relationships with all of the Cullens.
*Warning - Some chapters contain graphic violence*
Categories: Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 115486
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2009 Updated: July 18, 2010
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End
its good please make another chapter!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: June 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The Last Day of Sun
HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what r u waiting for hurry up and write the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am always glad for the enthusiasm, it keeps me writing.
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Kyphophobia
omg this is such a good story hurry up with the next chapter!!!!! Author's Response: in the queue!
Summary: 
THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.
After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?
Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!
Favorite review so far:
Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.
Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
hurry up hurry up!!!!!!!!!!! next chapter please. and hurry Author's Response: Hey now, play nice! I am sticking to my guns this time and am not posting the next chapter until saturday, I swear! Haha, I'm glad you like it so much! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: July 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
hurry next chapter!!!!!!!!!! love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! What's your fav part so far? I'm always curious what my readers like! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: horses191 Signed    
Date: August 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
OMG!!!! finish the next chapter already!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: It's already finished. I'm just waiting for it to be validated, but thanks.
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