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Penname: twlightobsessed [ Contact]
Real name: Michele
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Summary: 
Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes
Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my who is it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Awesomely written.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Jasper? What happened to Alice? Why aren't they still together. On to find out. Great writting.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
oh my Logan sounds pretty hot for a human. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh I loved it. Bella has the guys lining up again. I total can't believe Bella checked out Logan's ass. I totally loved this chapter. Awesome job.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Oh my I can not express how much I have come to love this story. Although I am having all kinds of thoughts on where you could be leading us with your story. Like what does those two times now that Jasper remembers smelling a smell like Jacob with the same feelings of hate but can never locate the source mean and how Jacob seems to know what's going on at those moments but is back in Washington. I'm sure it will come to light in the future chapters. I also can't help letting my mind wonder to what if any of these events has Alice saw in visions and would Edward pick up on them or would she be able to hide them. Also what will happen in the future when Jasper admits to Bella that he knows Edward still loves Bella and never stopped that he lied to her. I also wonder what could possible happen if Edward does find out and puts himself back into the picture. Finally I'm wondering when Jacob is going to be showing up or at least contacting Bella again and what it will do to Bella and Jasper's beautiful moments. You have my mind going a mile a minute in all kinds of directions on all these thoughts of the possiblities of where you will take us with this awesomely written story you have created for us. You are awesome I hope you keep sharing your talented writting with us. I hope this story goes on and on and on. I so love it.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I love this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. You are awesome.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
ahh. I can't believe you just did that to us. This is a huge cliffie. Who is it and what's about to happen? You know since you had to leave us in such a state, I can only hope that you don't make us wait to long before you update us with the next chapter. I will be waiting. Awesome writting so I guess I will forgive you for the Huge cliffie.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
oh my what is going to happen next. Who is going to come to try and save her? Edward/Jasper/and or all the cullens? Will she end up being turned before any one can come to save her? Can't wait to see what you have in mind. Wonderful job love this chapter.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Oh my who is it. I'm personally hoping it's Alice since at this point she's the only one who can tell them where Bella is being taking and by who. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what you have up your sleeve. Also I'm wondering if it is Alice will she be bringing along the rest of the Cullens and will Edward be involved as well to mess things up. Awesome writting. I love this story.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Oh my when I saw you updated this story I screamed like a little girl I was so excited. I loved this chapter especially Bella telling Victoria off rudely and Felix's reaction to it. Although I must say I am a little upset that you went and left us with a cliff hanger of who was at the door and didn't even touch upon it in this chapter so you have still left us hanging. You are a cruel an unhumane author at this point in time. I am still left on pins and needles waiting to see that big reveal and how that will turn out. I still love you though and will patiently wait for the next chapter to hopefully find out more.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: March 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Very clever. I love Bella's suggestion. Can't wait to see what happens next although how can he get them to feel what he's feeling without effecting Bella as well. Awesome as always.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: April 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I am so loving this story and where you are taking us with it. I love the suspens. I am glad that Jasper started to tell her about the true situation with Edward even if Bella stopped him from going there. I must say you have me a tad nervous as to why they chose this room at the last minute over the other room and why this room isn't the room in the visions Alice had. What is that going to mean? I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you don't make us wait in suspence for to long. Awesome writting. I really really love this story it is one of my favorite favorites. I hope this story just keeps going and going for a very very long time.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: June 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Oh my goodness. He finally said it and Bella knows. What is going to happen next? Can't wait to see what comes next. Very awesome.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
I loved how you wrote the transformation. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next now that Bella is a vampire. Awesome writting.
Summary: When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.
What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Home
I am really enjoying this story. I figured Edward would be more angry/upset about Bella almost sleeping with Jacob but I guess we haven't seen what happens when he contacts Jacob yet. So time will tell. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. I didn't review until I got thru all the chapters that were up but I wanted to add one of my favorite scenes to date was after Bella and Edward finally had their first night together and the next morning Edward having to hide under the comforter when Jasper came in looking for him. Very adorable. Awesome writting.
Summary: Bella is a newborn vampire in Volterra with no human memories and an aversion to human blood. Aro decides to send her to live with the Cullens. Will Bella ever uncover her past? will she find what she is missing? What is Aro's master plan? Story came in second place for Best Vampire Bella at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 135619
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Breaking Dawn
I have loved reading this story. I think this is one of my favorit chapters since you show off Bella's power to the max. Bella kicked some ass which was beyond awesome. I've read alot of stories and I think the power you gave Bella has been the best out of all of them. Loved this.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Reverie
I love how you brought Bella back and how this chapter played out. Love it.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Forever
I so love how you ended this story. You have managed to give us the story of what would have happened if Bella hadn't moved to Fork's but still managed to be change in Italy. I love it. I also liked you revealing that caius had a hidden power. I also like how you wrote Jacob into the story earlier on and in this chapter. If you bless us with of this story in one shot's I would love to see the story of Jacob's imprinting and possible Bella and the rest of the Cullens coming back in the future for a little interaction with Jacob, his imprintee, and the rest of the pack. Awesome writing. I loved this story. I love all your stories therefore you are saved as one of my favorite authors. Author's Response: Thank you!! And I will keep that in mind!!
Summary: Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love.
But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.
A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.
Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: February 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Beauty, Bolognese and Boarding
I am loving this story. I am a little disappointed with Bella in that she didn't even leave a note or letter telling him good-bye. I can't wait to see what Edward has to say and what happens next now that they are going back to their real lifes. I can't wait to see how they cross pathes again and what will happen. I look forward to your next update. Awesome writting.
Summary: 
Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.
Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo
AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:
http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr
OR in my LJ gallery:
http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2
Special Update:
For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.
Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes
Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Wonderfully written. I can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I loved the interaction between Bella and Jasper. I enjoyed and total agree with Jasper telling Bella that she was Edward's event horizon. I was thinking that while he was explaining it to her and telling her what his was. Awesome writting. Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm glad that little tag made sense. :-D
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: January 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Very well written chapter. I liked Bella clueing Jacob and Irene in on the Cullens in her life and their reaction. Can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: Thank you! It'll be easier for Bella to have at least someone -- not a vampire -- know what's truly up. :-)
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: March 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
I really liked this chapter. I enjoyed the visit from Martha and what she had to say to Bella. I also am glad she told Bella she should take off her wedding ring. She will also be a complication to Bella moving on with Edward in Martha wanting and expecting Bella to stay in contact and part of her family (wanting Bella to tell her about the man she will meet and fall in love with). Can't wait to see what you have in story for us next. Author's Response: The interesting thing about Martha here in this chapter is that she is both a "freeing" factor for Bella, but also a "complicating" factor. Martha can't just be brushed off to the side.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
I don't want this story to be over in a couple more chapters. Please tell me your thinking a bunch of one-shots or a sequel. I would love to see a lot more moments of Bellas vampire life and her future interactions with Martha, charlie, and Jacob as a vampire. Alice also commented on the Volturi not coming YET which could imply they will in the future. Sequel please please. If not I can respect that it is your story. A beautifully written story I might add. I have loved this story. I'll just be sad if there's no more after just the little that's left. Author's Response: Alas, no, no sequel. I just don't have any story to tell. Some of those loose ends will be wrapped up, and while as you'll see. There will be a few loose ends, but not really.
I'm really a READER. This was an oddity, for me to write fiction. I'm actually quite ready to be done and get back to reading. I don't see how the real writers keep it going. I'm EXHAUSTED. Ha.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed Signed    
Date: August 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
I have loved this story. I'm so sad it's over after the epilogue but I guess all good things come to an end eventually. For someone who isn't normally a fiction writer this story was awesomely written better than a lot of them out there. I loved the plot and how everything played out. Don't hesitate to bless us with another of your creations if ever another story or idea should come to you as this one did. I would welcome some more good reading from your creative mind if it should ever arise. I loved the fact that the wives are the ones who came to visit. It was very fitting for this story. Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I thought it made much more sense for it to be the wives! :-D
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