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SUMMARY: Rising Star, Edward Cullen, gets cast in the role of his life alongside A-List celebrity, Bella Swan. AH Bella/Edward *This short story will be pure fluff and hilarity*
Beneath it All
SUMMARY: Bella Swan may be meek and shy, while Calista Kuknos is anything but. Edward Cullen only wants one of us ... Trouble is, we're one and the same...
Clean Slate
SUMMARY: After seven years of marriage, Edward's not the same man Bella fell in love with, and she gives up. An accident on a dark and stormy night changes everything, but how long can it last? AH Bella/Edward
Diving Right In
SUMMARY: Entry for the Fun With Your Clothes On contest: 18 year old Bella has been off the deep end for her best friend's older brother for years. Now that she's come of age, is Edward going to dive right in and make her his? Or will they need a little push? AH Edward/Bella
I Need You Now
SUMMARY: Two broken hearts. One late night phone call. They say "time heals all wounds," but were they were wrong? AH Edward/Bella My Entry for the Love Lost Contest.
Lost & Found
SUMMARY: Losing a child is a parent's worst nightmare. At the age of three, Bree Cullen was taken from a playground on her birthday while her mother turned away for just a second. Ten years later, she's found--alive and well--living an entirely new life in Chicago with no recollection of the one that was stolen from her. Will this bring Edward and Bella closer together again? Can he ever forgive her? Can she forgive herself? What about the 13 year old girl who has no memory of the life she used to have? AH Edward/Bella
Love Assassin
SUMMARY: Meet Edward Cullen: Womanizer extraordinaire. His reputation precedes him, but all the girls are lining up to try and tame him. Enter Bella Swan: the one girl he allows to bend all his rules. Problem is: She's not out to be played... AH Edward/Bella *WARNING, Pre-Bella whoreishness on Edward's part. You've been warned.*
Rm w/a Vu
SUMMARY: Bella’s a struggling student at Arizona State. After catching her boyfriend in bed with her roommate, she moves out of her dorm. Since it’s halfway through the semester, there are no other rooms available, so she takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised? AH Bella/Edward ALL BPOV, will probably do EPOV outtakes once complete :)
Torn
SUMMARY: Two Cities. Two Men. One Girl. One Choice. AH BxE & BxJ --> For Funsies
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I am a 30 year old mother of 2 beautiful boys. I have been with my husband for 11 years; married for 5. I am currently a stay at home mom and could not be happier. Sure, it's tough, but I love it and couldn't imagine doing anything else right now.
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After all the drama surrounding all the unauthorized downloads of quite a few fics out there, I have decided to release each of my fics in a downladable PDF format. A lot of people have eReaders nowadays and I feel that it's time to branch out. The downloads will be free (obviously) and will be formatted the way *I* want them to be. They will not be a generic copy, but will have a proper title page. More importantly, they will be a TRUE copy of my stories; released the way they were meant to be seen outside the internet. Please don't get your copies from sites that have done this without consent. Wait for the true releases. I am currently in the process of converting "Horse Play" and "Making Memories of Us" and will work on the rest as time permits it. Watch for the announcements in my updates and on my blog, Delightfully Sinful Tales. Thanks so much for your continued support! I couldn't ask for better readers :)
Available (Authorized) PDFs so far:
Making the Grade
Teacher’s Pet
Making Memories of Us
Horse Play
Feel free to download them! The only thing I ask is that you don't distribute it; if anything, link them to fellow readers and they can download themselves. I realize I can't stop anything on the internet, and I'm done bitching about it. I got into this for fun, and I intend to make it fun again and take the bullshit out of it. So, here's the first three PDFs; "Horse Play" will be next once it's complete :)
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We first joined forces on "Lost Legends" for a mutual buyer in the first "Fandom Gives Back" auction we were a part of. And we found that we not only made beautiful magic in real life, but also in our stories. It was then that we realized this had to be a regular occurrence, so look for more from us in the future!!
Up next for The Angel and The Muse:
The Dark Lust: A new one-shot for the "Afraid of the Dark" contest.
(The Real) Land of Living Skies: A new multi-chaptered Bella & Edward fic. *Coming 2011*
Finding Focus: The second book in the Lost Legends Saga. *Coming 2011*
CURRENTLY IN THE WORKS OR STASHED IN THE BACK OF MY BRAIN SOMEWHERE BEGGING TO BE FREED:
1) Chosen by Blood - I'm in the process of writing the final five chapters! Stay tuned!
2) Covet Thy Neighbor - A continuation to this story is in the works. I feel as though I only scratched the surface of this new relationship and look forward to further exploring these three and their future.
3) VOTE FOR THE FIC YOU'D LIKE TO SEE NEXT!
"Horse Play" Picture Glossary
Western Saddle "Anatomy"
English Saddle "Anatomy"
List of Horse_Jumping_Obstacles mentioned throughout the story
Alice & Bella's Dress Shopping Trip in Chapter 6
Rosalie & Bella's Dresses for The Wedding in Chapter 11
Bella's Engagement Ring in Chapters 28, 30, 31
Bella & Hayley
Edward & Ransom
Carlie's Nursery in Chapter 34
Carlie's Birth Announcement
The Animals of "Horse Play"
Oscar
King’s Ransom aka “Ransom”
Starla
Morning Glory aka “Glory”
Bandit
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Oliver aka “Olly”
Phoenix
Bones
Vlad
In other exciting news... Several of my stories have been featured and pimped on various sites! How honoured was I to see this?? The answer is: VERY!
"Snapped"
Darkest Temptations
Altered Lions & Sacrificial Lambs
"Making Memories of Us"
P.I.C's FanFic Corner
Delicious Delusion by twivampchick
"Teacher's Pet" & a brief mention of "Making the Grade"
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"Horse Play"
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"Horse Play" is the winner of Best Charlie in The Sunflower Awards!
*giggles uncontrollably* "The Mechanics of Thrust" is the winner of Pavarti's Pick in Tea Bagging Twilight's Pineapple Awards
xoxo,
AngelGoddess1981
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Summary: Just a little pre-Breaking Dawn speculation on what Bella and Edward's wedding night and honeymoon would be like. Mature themes.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6094
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2008
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Edward's Room
OMG! That was...wow. Now THAT'S a wedding night!
Great first chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
O
M
G!
Did it just get EXTREMELY hot in here?! Holy Sh!t...seriously.
I...I need to...wow. Just...wow.
I may still be a little overwhelmed by the awesomeness that i just read.
Have I told you lately how much I adore you?!
xoxo,
AG1981
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed 
Date: October 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I totally panicked when the sun started to come out...
But before that happened? With the ice cream cone? Pure awesome.
And then, the IMAX theatre...AWESOMER.
As a canadian (I'm from Alberta, not BC) I feel the need to give you some random FYI: IMAX is Canadian technology. Maybe you knew that from your Victoria BC research. But I like to tell people that when they talk about IMAX.
Random, I know.
Thanks again for yet ANOTHER hot fucking chapter.
ILY and your writing SFM <3
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
While I want to leave a long drawn out, and articulate review...I just... CAN'T.
My brain is MUSH. That was...that was just. *PHEW* Holy Hotness.
I hope you take my lack of a longass review to mean that you were quite effective in making me crave a cold shower. That had to be the hottest shower scene I have ever read...even with the whole "blood topic." It wasn't as scary as I'd have thought. :P
THANK YOU for this chapter.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
The male-bonding was great. I loved having Edward voice his thoughts and concerns. And to have him be okay with Carlisle having talked to Bella already was great.
LOVED when Emmett quoted one of the poster boards to Edward, only to have him be confused :P
And Alice thinking about Bella's List? Good save with wedding checklists! LOL!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing
I'll be honest, at first I was a little skeeved out about the whole "period" arc of this chapter...but I got over it right quick ;) While it's not something EYE would EVER do (personally) I could see how in a vampire story it would be deemed, um, "not icky" LOL!
This chapter, again, had me in a giggle-fit at certain parts and it only made me love the story more and look forward to their reunion...
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
LMAO! LMAO! LMAO!
LOVED this chapter! OMG!
As always, Edward and Bella were awesome. Edward's "dare" was fantastic...and I was glad when Bella played along, but was quickly conspiring for her on how she could break Edward :P
Then..THEN, you had Emmett and Rosalie find Bella's poster board notes to Carlisle??? OMG...I laughed so hard that it caused my husband to question what was so funny... It was an awkward conversation :P
THE TATTOO! YES YES YES! Omg...I loved that she got a tattoo... Edward's gonna lose it. :D Hmmm...where did she get it though... I'm gonna guess it will be somewhere that only HE will see it. So, maybe...um... front hip bone? Inner thigh (above the hickey)? IDK! It's Bella so it would have to be classy, for sure... I will find out as soon as I move forward, I suppose :P
The phone sex was BEYOND hot. Loved it (shocker...especially since I've hated everything else you've written, right? *rolls eyes at self for being repetative*) Srsly.
can't wait to read on...and I'm so glad I don't have to! LOL!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frustrated
HEY!
Okay, so I know I said MONTHS ago that I would read this, but then I got busy because I have this problem where I commit myeslf to multiple fics...which leaves me no time to actually READ anything. So, here I am. better than never, right?
Anyway...
This first chapter was GREAT! I loved how funny it was without being ridiculous, KWIM? And I think you conveyed her teenage sexual frustration PERFECTLY. I often wondered how Bella would feel after making out with Edward only to have him cock-block them both. :P
All of her little fantasies were awesome, and I loved her internal monologue...especially as she was imagining Edward having his way with her at her work with Mike watching...wait...what? LMAO! So great!
And I'm glad she was able to find her release. Our poor girl deserves it! I can't wait to see what hotness awaits from here on out!!
Moving on!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Consequences
LMFAO! You started this chapter off with a BANG! Jasper catching the scent of Bella’s panties had me ROLLING on the floor! OMGOMGOMG!!! Jasper and Alice’s lovin’ was super sexy. I love those two. And E’s POV had me dying! IDK how you do it, but I bow down to you. I can’t wait to see what Edward has to say to Bella…and of course, what she has to say in return :P Thanks for another great chapter! xoxo, AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Control
Okay, so besides the utter HOTNESS of that chapter, I loved seeing a little Domella come out to play.
I honestly don't know whose POV I enjoyed more...Bella's or Edward's!
I loved when she found him wearing boxers (for once) and then made him strip. THEN...to have her call him on his panty theivery. Awesome.
this chapter was all sorts of WIN for me and I can't wait to go on...
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Another great chapter! I loved Bella’s “conversation” with Carlisle. I loved his reassurance that she had nothing to be embarrassed about, and that it was actually mature of her. Hot damn! There’s number twenty-one! HELL YES!! OMG! Man…it’s a good thing Edward can’t read Bella’s thoughts. Hee hee hee… THEN…you go and pull out a sensible Emmett! SWOON! I’m glad Edward understood he was being ridiculous :P And, the club. O…M…G…THE CLUB! How hot was that?! I mean, seriously… Not as hot as what happened in the Aston Martin, though. Am I right?? Am I?? xoxo, AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Awkward
Aw, I was sad that Edward was pulling away a little. I get why, though. I do. It's just no fun. For anyone.
HOWEVER...that being said...HE'S A LITTLE PANTY STEALER!!
LMMFAO!! OMG! That was FANTASTIC!!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Games
I’d like to say I will eventually pick a favourite chapter…but they are all easily my favourites (so, basically you’re consistent :P) This chapter was FUCK-HOT in so many unbelievable ways. I don’t even know where to begin… I loved when Bella said she was so hungry she could eat a horse…then Edward joked about actually having had it and it wasn’t good! LOL! This chapter was great (shocker). I loved the questions they asked each other. It was great to get a peek inside their minds. And of course, because I have to quote: “When we can, Isabella, I will have you on this piano,” Guh. I…wha…did he…why not… GUH… Not only did he say he would take her on the piano (which was #21 on Bella’s list) but he called her ISABELLA. How fucking hot is that?! “You showed me. I have to show you. You know, in the name of science.” Saucy little vixen ;) He closed his eyes and rested his forehead against my forehead. “Very much.” His voice was husky. “Do you like it when my fingers are inside of you?” Oh my freaking God. He did not just ask that! Me= :-O Bella teasing Edward as she went up to have a shower…then he grabbed her and tossed her on the bed?! I was GOO…seriously. I don’t know that I will be able to walk. My legs are like jello. And to learn that Edward is a fan of going commando… FUCK YES! And, when she disrobed for the shower? His reaction to her new bra and panties was PRICELESS! LOL! xoxo, AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Music
This chapter started off really sweet. Her waking up to the note and the rose. So awesome. Then when she was wandering around the house and stopped at the piano...
When she was able to remember her half of Beethoven's sonata, I kind of geeked out and cheered...there may have been clapping involved :P
Then...to have Edward arrive and ask why she never told him she played...and then to sit down and play with her (hee hee...I said "play with her" Which, he did actually do, so take that however you want :P)
And speaking of... THAT WAS SOME HOT-ASS PIANO ALMOST-LOVIN'! FANTASTIC!
Thanks for yet another great chapter!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Additions
OMG! EPOV! EPOV! Did you know the first half of this chapter was EPOV?! *ahem* sorry…I was a little excited there… I did notice one POV slip up early on though…right after Bella threatens him (weakly :P) you say “he rushed the words out…” ;) I do love that she told him not to apologize, but he did so—but quickly with more to follow :P Sneaky bastard. And he’s a swearing MACHINE. LOVE IT! And apparently, so does Bella. *giggles* This: “I’ll come as quickly as I can.” Her face blushed brilliantly and I looked at her curiously. I wasn’t letting her off the hook this time. “What?” She was biting her bottom lip hard. I growled. “I swear, Isabella Swan, tell me what’s going through that beautiful head of yours right this instant.” She pulled her shoulders back and took a deep breath. I hissed when she swatted me on the ass. “Not a chance, Cullen.” Then she slipped out of my arms, picked up the blanket, and calmly began folding it. I watched her intently for a moment. She was specifically attempting not to look at me. I ran our conversation through my mind several times before my brain finally clicked. “I’ll come as quickly as I can.” The little vixen. I crossed my arms. Time to make her squirm. I struggled to make my tone innocent. “Bella?” She finally allowed her eyes to move in my direction. “Hmm?” “Coming agrees with you. You have never looked more ravishing than you did then, and now.” I swear to god, you’re trying to kill me, woman… Hee hee…Alice and Jasper “talking” to Edward…Loved that. Seems Bella’s not the only one who’s easily embarrassed :P To do! Ha! To do: Edward! LMAO! OMG! HAHA! 13) Whatever it takes to get him to say FUCK again Oh! Even better: 14) Get him to talk dirty in general The downside to that one is my brain may melt. So. Worth. It. I don’t know if you realize it, but you ROCK! My jeans felt so wet for a reason. I had removed my blue lace panties earlier. At Edward’s. And folded them up into a neat square. Which I left sitting on the middle of his huge golden bed. My mouth LITERALLY dropped into a HUGE “O”… This. Was. AWESOME! Oh, Bella… you saucy little thing. Laura, I fucking love you…do you know that? This story is AMAZING. And I am disappointed in myself for not reading it until now… xoxo, AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Am I sounding repetitive yet? I feel like I am. I’d like to switch it up and tell you a chapter sucked… LOL, okay, no I wouldn’t. But I feel the need to switch it up…yet I can’t. The EPOV part of this chapter was sexy. Is that weird? I mean, I know y9ou must have thought it was sexy, or you wouldn’t have written it, right? But seriously… If you think about it…it SHOULD be creepy (well technically, SM was a little creepy by having a vampire who couldn’t sleep watch a human teenager sleep night after night…but whatever) Anyways, it SHOULD seem creepy that he totally manipulated her while she slept by talking to her…but it wasn’t. At all. It was HOT. And it was also funny when he asked if she had sweet dreams…and then more-so when Bella got all nervous. Now, BPOV… I don’t know that I even have the words… It was AH-MAAAA-ZING. This was particularly hot: I shook my head and tried to find that confidence I had had a moment ago. “I see…you got my…punishment.” If possible his eyes darkened. “Yes, but you lied.” I was confused. “What?” “You told me I wouldn’t like it.” Then…you make it even hotter by adding: “Harder, Bella. I would touch you harder.” Are you TRYING to kill me?! *groans* then…to fulfill number ten?? I did actually die. Just so you know… xoxo AG1981
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This chapter was just delightful! (As if I’d expect any less :P)
I loved that Alice pulled over the car to talk to Bella… and OMG! HILARIOUS when she brought Jasper up. Talking about how Bella’s frustration led to Jasper feeling frustrated…LMMFAO! Bella’s humiliation was classic! LOVED IT!
EEEE! And the leather couch?! HELL TO THE YES!! And then to have Edward question “number nine?” LOL!!!!
And Emmett. I love me some Emmett. He’s such a smartass, and I wouldn’t have him any other way. I love that Bella stood up to him, and that even Rosalie thought it was funny.
I also love how you’ve managed to capture Edward and Bella’s love. He’s so sweet with her, and it takes me back to hating her for having him :P
Now..let’s get to the hotness that happened in the meadow, shall we?!
Bella…why you brazen little thing. Telling Edward to restrain her against the tree…HOLY DAMN!
This:
I felt his hands leave mine. But when I went to lower my hands as well, he stopped me. “Keep them up against the tree.” It was a command, roughly spoken. I almost lost it right there. I whimpered and his mouth twitched.
I DIED… Seriously.
Then…HE CURSED! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Shit…I should just quote that whole tree-bit…I loved it. I will likely go and read it again and again and again and…well, you get the idea.
Fantastic chapter! But, poor Eddie. Guy has no one but himself to blame for the epic blueballs :P
Xoxo,
AG1981
Summary: For just one day every decade the Cullen family opens things up in the bedroom. AU lemon-fest. Canon and non-canon pairings, but no permanent splitting of canon couples.
This story contains very adult themes and includes F/F slash in earlier chapters and some M/M slash later.
This story earns its NC-17 rating folks!!
A big thank you to DiamondHeart for her guidance (read Moonshadow!), and to my beta, MsKathy!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 42169
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Jasper a.k.a Back to the Sexin'
Okay, so I haven't reviewed every chapter...sorry, but I just thought you should know that your story is so great! I'm really enjoying it...REALLY...
Can't wait for the next update!! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you reviewed! And glad you liked the story. I'll keep 'em coming if you keep reading! (No pun intended)
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Loved it. I wasn'tsure this was "the story" for me when I started it, but I am hooked...seriously.
I liked seeing this side of Emmett. It was a nice change to how he is normally written.
good job! Can't wait for more!! Author's Response: Thanks!! Next chapter's coming soon!
Summary: What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?
Thanks to Leslie (red delicious) for the awesome banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112144
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
OH
MY
GOD!!!!!!
First of all...Can I smack Edward? Seriously.
Second...Bella and Carlisle declaring their love for one another was incredibly well done. In that moment, I don't think anyone would have been thinking of the crap that had happened previously. There had to be so many emotions going through her mind when she saw him. Confusion being one of the top contenders. So, I think that their sleeping together was believable (and hot as hell, BTW).
Then...the epic heartfail. I was near tears and could literally FEEL the lump in my throat that Bella could as the shit hit the fan. It was totally heartbreaking. I wanted to strangle Carlisle...but I also wanted to slap Bella for telling Edward something that she wasn't meant to tell.
I'm pissed that Carlisle is so upset with her over the almost sex...but again, it's believable for him to react that way...which I think is WHY I'm having such a hard time accepting their fight (It's like I think this is real, or something :P).
My heart ACHES for these two! I just want them to work it out!! GAH! I'm DYING here!!
Another amazing chapter and I can't wait for more. Seriously, LOVE every awesome word of this.
xoxo,
AG1981 Author's Response: First, can I just tell you how much I love your review. Don't get me wrong I love all reviews, every single reader that takes the time to tell me what they think is awesome. But reviews that go into such great detail over what the reader was feeling/thinking, etc, like yours, blow me away.
Second, thank you! That is such a HUGE compliment when readers tell me they could actually FEEL what the characters were feeling.
I wrote this chapter so quickly (I actually completed it just two days after posting the last chapter) that I didn't even realize what I had put down until it was finished and I reread it. My heart ached for both Bella and Carlisle. And really, Edward too. Bella throwing that out there at him was tough, but I do believe it was right that she told him in a way. She has to have more of a purpose than just screwing Carlisle all over Forks and falling in love with him lol. Just like all of you, I really do hope this brings Carlisle and Edward the closure they need to move on and forgive each other.
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I LOVE this fic. Not even going to lie.
I am usually a pro E/B girl...but hot damn. I like me some Dr. Cullen on the side ;) This is amazing and I cannot WAIT for you to update!
Seriously so awesome. I knew Edward would find out on his own and I was only waiting for the sh*t to hit the fan!
xoxo,
AG1981 Author's Response: Thank you! It's always a huge compliment when B/E fans stick with the B/C pairing
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
Okay, I read this chapter when it was first posted, but my blackberry wouldn't allow me to review...so it ot put off until I had my computer-time :P
Okay **cracks knuckles**
This chapter was...IDK, "awesome" seems to be overused by me ;) so, let's go with phenominal...outstanding...perfect?? Pick one :)
Charlie is one of my fave characters to read AND to write. i have a major love of Papa Swan. I loved how concerned he was for Bella after the fact, and I LOVED LOVED LOVED that Carlisle admitted his feelings to Charlie early on (even if he isn't in the picture for the moment).
i also loved the talk between Bella and Renee.
Seriously, it was a great chapter.
Okay, now I have to go review chapter 17, because...well see the beginning of this review formy reasoning :P
xoxo,
AG1981 Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted Bella and Charlie to have a real moment before she left, something they never had the chance to have yet. Charlie doesn't always get the love he deserves.
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
**waves**
Hi!
All right...here we go...
EPOV:
I felt badly for him. I get why he felt the need to hear it from her and get the closure that he so clearly needed, but it still had to hurt. When Kate said she wished she'd have had the abortion...there aren't words to describe how angry I was that she would not only say something like that...but to say it to the product of the pregnancy she decided to continue.
CPOV:
I was glad when Carlisle and Edward spoke. I got his anger toward Kate for upsetting Edward the way she did (especially since I was upset also).
I was SO GLAD that Edward fessed up on WHY he wanted to sleep with Bella. I know, that sounds twisted, but I think (read: HOPE) it will help Carlisle on the road to mending his relationship with Bella.
So glad father & son were able to work their shit out!
I am BEYOND sad that this story is ending soon...and I totally get how you're feeling. It's a bittersweet feeling. I have a few completed fics under my belt and am currectly wrapping up the final 5 chapters of a current one...It saddens me EVERY time!
Thanks for another great chapter!
xoxo,
AG1981 Author's Response: I wanted to make Kate cold, but have her believable. So I was very worried she wouldn't come across as real and totally fake. I'm glad that wasn't the case. I'm still holding my breath when it comes to Bella and Carlisle. Of course I know where it goes since the Epi is complete, but really I'm beyond worried to get there.
I have a feeling I may be depressed for awhile after saying good bye lol. I've come really love the OOC characters I've created and putting them away will be very hard! I'm sure all writers feel the same. Rum may be needed to mend my broken heart ;)
Summary:
The dim memories of being pregnant shook me to the core, and before I knew it, I was snarling at him. The sounds flowing from me were animalistic, feral, and very frightening. I was like a vicious dog, a screaming cat, engaging another of my kind in a brilliant display of nature.
The only sounds in the meadow were the wind and the leaves tossing back and forth; the animals, sensing the coming violence, had fallen silent and retreated further into the woods. Even the sunlight, which had been shining brightly in La Push, had become muted by the sudden appearance of cloud cover. Nature was cowering in anticipation of what was about to happen.
In an act of desperation, Edward conspires with Carlisle and the pack, to save Bella's life. The plan is simple: The wolves provide a distraction so Edward can drug Bella without the interference of his family. The plan is put into action, and, when it's all over, the only thing that remains is an unquenchable desire for revenge.
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Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 126318
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2009 Updated: October 07, 2011
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: First Hunt
Wow. Even for just a "filler" chapter it was simply amazing :)
I loved her first hunt, her interaction with her family. The fact that she got lost (even as a vampire) was pure Bella (IMO).
Seriously, this story is amazing and I am always looking forward to updates.
Great job!
xoxo,
AG1981
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the rating!
That was actually my mindset when I wrote this chapter. I wondered what part of human-Bella
could I keep. Then I remembered Alice's vision of Bella (from Eclipse) running around lost in the forest.
BINGO!
Thanks again :)
Reviewer: AngelGoddess1981 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Choice
So far, I really like it. I am pro B&E all the way, but I am open to a good story line, and this promises to be good!
I can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: I am totally PRO-edward and bella too.
I just got this idea and decided to run with it!
thanks for reading :)
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