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Penname: twilight17 [Contact]
Real name: Brooke
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Member Since: May 27, 2009
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Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

I really enjoyed the story, espically how you put in a sort of real life thing. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Snow Ball

I hope he reaches Bella in time and I also hope that they can make up and go back to being together. Jasper still obviously loves her and She's obviously still got major feelings for him if the only reason she's going to the dance with Edward is Jealousy.

I really like this story. Please update soon. Thanks.

 

 
Summary:

Bella is reunited with her childhood friend Alice under unlikely circumstances. When sparks fly between Bella and Alice's older brother, will she be able to resist? And what secrets is he hiding?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 132141
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Bring It On

That chapter was fucking hilaruious!

I loved it

please update soon

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Perspective (V)

Even though Edawrd was a total douche, I still thing taht bella should forgive him and get back together,

please update soon

 
Summary:

Follow Alice and Jasper on a much needed vacation after the drama of Breaking Dawn. On their journey they meet a stranger and someone vaguely familiar with keys to Alice's past.

Rated NC-17 for lots of lemons, language and a bit of violence.

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 16598
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jasper looked and sound a little pissed off What did he mean by where Alice came from. I thought she came from the South, like Jasper did. Was it Mississippi, she came from? Great story though. Update soon. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jasper looked and sound a little pissed off What did he mean by where Alice came from. I thought she came from the South, like Jasper did. Was it Mississippi, she came from? Great story though. Update soon. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jasper looked and sound a little pissed off What did he mean by where Alice came from. I thought she came from the South, like Jasper did. Was it Mississippi, she came from? Great story though. Update soon. Thanks.

 
Summary:

Son of a Preacher Man

Jasper Hale is the son of a popular televangelist in Phoenix, and he couldn’t be any further from a church-going goody two shoes. His attitude towards work, attending class, or contributing positively to society is lackadaisical at best. He drinks, smokes, and has a penchant for deflowering teenage girls. Bella Swan attends private school with Edward Cullen, a senior who she’s been in love with since 9th grade, when he moved to Phoenix. Unfortunately, Edward is dating Jasper's sister, Rosalie, the most beautiful girl at St. Mary’s, and doesn’t even know Bella exists. But when Jasper sets his sights on Bella, Edward can’t help but take notice. His initial desire to protect her from Rosalie’s impious older brother leads to deeper feelings. AH/AU/OOC and all that good stuff.

B/J and E/R to start - eventually E/B


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 165517
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2010


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Psalm 4:4

I really feel bad for bella, I mean she did fall for him and then he gets scared as Renee said and backed out. I hope he realizes what a mistake he made and apologises to her before its too late or is already too late?

Please update soon, I still think that they should end up together again but only after some really serious "I Really Really fucked up" groveling.

Thanks

 
Hidden by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1160]
Summary:

There are more secrets to the ‘new girl in school’ than even a family of vampires could have foreseen. What could the irresistible Bella Swan be hiding? There is more to the golden eyed girl than anyone could have expected.

hidden

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95376
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

that was awsome!

Bella kicked Tanya's ass!

 

 
Waning Moon by YborJen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 420]
Summary: Feature

 

The epic story of Carlisle Cullen began in 17th century England. Since the fateful night he was transformed into a vampire Carlisle has searched for two things: redemption in the eyes of God, and unconditional familial love. Follow Carlisle through the old and the new world as he meets friends and enemies on his journey toward his destiny as an inspiration to vampires everywhere. Carlisle and his family will discover, however, that love is eternal, but life is not.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Amun, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charles, Charlie, Charlotte, Chelsea, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Eleazar, Elizabeth Masen, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Kebi, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Makenna, Marcus, Quil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Stefan, Tanya, Tia, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 152115
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ 1666

wow, never thought about carlisle when he was human or was just turned and the years after that?

great story, please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments!  Every time I get a chapter validated I post the next one.  It's about 2-3 weeks to get validated, so there's more coming ;)  The book is done so it will just take a little time.

Ever since I read the chapter about Carlisle in Twilight I've wondered about his history, his life as a human, how he was bitten, and how he learned to survive without human blood.  And of course the nearly THREE HUNDRED years before he started making his vampire family!

I look forward to more comments from you.

PEACE

 

 
Unknown Beginnings by maired75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 535]
Summary:

Bella didn't make it to Edward in time in Voltera. After faking her death and moving in with the Cullen's, Bella shuts down and buries herself in her grief. Will the Cullen's be able to pull her out? When her feelings change for a certain Cullen, how will she handle it? Will she be able to pull herself out of the darkness or will the guilt tear her apart?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 47131
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Home Alone

interesting

will jasper turn her or have someone else do it

anyways, good story

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: And the Walls Cave In

well then, Bella's dying of pneumonia and wonder when Jasper will turn her or will be Carlisle?

Update soon

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Newborn

does bella also read minds now?

update soon

 
Reviewer: twilight17 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Intimate

YEAH!!! Love this story!

please continue working your magic!

update soon!





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