Reviewer: c_tap77 Signed
November 01, 2009
Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway
As much as it saddens me that Edward and Bella aren't together at the end of this chapter, I applaud you for taking it in this direction. Without this, any outcome wouldn't be realistic.
Pardon me while I get personal for a second, but I've been hurt badly by men a few times in my life and as much as I loved them, I couldn't have gone running back to them even if they were as elegant and loquacious as Edward. I hope he can find some way to earn back her trust and they can somehow find a way to be a happy family, but kudos for making Bella walk away right now. It's real and it makes your story that much more compelling.
Can't wait to read the rest!!!!!Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. I know how many folks were disappointed, but I'm not done yet either. I think this is the more organic decision for Bella at this point in time.
I appreciate your review!