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Penname: Rochelle Allison [Contact]
Real name: Rochelle Walker
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As Bella Sleeps by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Feature

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This story is a Midnight Sun-type one-shot, that is, Edward's POV of Twilight.

It takes place at between TW14 (Mind over Matter) and TW15 (The Cullens) while Bella sleeps – a peek into Edward’s infatuation, and how he reacts to hearing Bella say 'I love you" for the first time.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: White Night
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13616
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: As Bella Sleeps

so sweet. this exudes that essence of first love bliss, it's wonderful. i love thinking of edward in this way, finally happy.



Author's Response:

Yes, this is a rare happy Edward story!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

thanks for reading!

blondie

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3026]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time

this story is beyond amazing, one of the best i've read. i'm desperate for an update!! please say u will soon!!! it's so good. it's 3:30am and i've been reading for hours...

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Meeting

sigh. each day i check for updates but alas, none. i know it takes time and energy to write but....have pity on us, ur poor, starved readers!  ;p

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Lucky

oh my! well, firstly you cannot fathom my delight when i saw you'd updated. (although let me say i'm truly sorry 'real life' has been rough on you lately and i hope you're entering into an easier time. your story is a gift to us, so please know we don't take your efforts lightly.) anyway - wow! this was so intense! my heart breaks for edward; he's just like the edward in the original twilight books. excellent portrayal. i cannot believe jacob is at the hospital, ugh. please don't let him or charlie try and take bella back to forks or wherever!! that would be awful! sigh. i am praying for update soon....you left it on such a cliffie.  <3

 
Summary: Feature

It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC.  Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

aw, i loved this!! they're making progress... i'm so looking forward to them going all the way. please update soon, this is such a sexy, sweet story...

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i miss this story,love it! updates soon? pretty please?

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hahahaaaa!! the monster's reactions are just too funny!

oh and by the way, you're horrid for leaving it hanging like that. ack!! the new year?! ok technically i know that's not too far off, but it's far enough.

anyway this chapter was awesome. i'd waited forever for it, it seems. edward is so sweet and enamored...wow. he's really whipped. and bella's so sweet. i love it. her prom dress sounds gorgeous too.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

so great. i love how you keep it real...it's sexy and also so frank and funny at the same time.  thanks for updating, this truly is one of the classics if i do say so myself.  ;)

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

quite possibly the best. smut. ever. this was AWESOME!!!! oh, how i'd missed the monster,marching beside bella w/ his suitcase, checking off lists and such. this was awesome. and oooh, the shower scene...got me hot. edward's the sweetest thing - he really, really loves her! i don't know how you manage to make him so pervy and innocent at the same time. he's delicious.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: March 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

gasp! suspense! i can't believe you left it hanging there!! :(  this is so good though; i was all swooning reading of edward and bella, gazing at eachother as they walked in the halls. <3

and the monster, with his battle ax. ha!

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

that was raw, primal, sexy, excellent! i love that he saved her from the despicable james, and that afterwards bella needed edward as much as he needed her. hot.

this has always been edward's story, and personally i don't need to see bpov. i do, however, look forward to an epilogue. awesome chapter; it was worth the wait...

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

i love your writing style... it flows so well. i'm not the biggest fan of jacob either (loved him in new moon, resented him in eclipse, appreciated him in BD) but you write him fairly and realistically. i can accept this version of JxB (also b/c i know it's temporary). that's my take on ch 1. (oh, and maybe it's b/c i'm a cheseball anyway but i rly liked the preface. i thought it was pretty and poetic.) looking forward to he next chaps....

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Bonfire

i always liked leah too. i feel for her, and i like that you've written her the way she'd have been had sam stayed with her. kudos.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Shakespeare

oh. my. goodness. that...took my breath away. maybe i'm just fluffy by nature. ack! you just combined two of my favoritest love stories. my heart pitter-patters.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Pumpkins

this chapter (pumpkin patch) had me grinning like an idiot. :D  and at the end when bella acknowledges her own goofy-jess-stanley-lovesick look....it made me grin even wider.

sigh. loooove it.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Fine

p.s i already wrote reviews for different chapters plus one when i favorited this story but i just wanted to beg you to update soon. i have to know what's going to happen. your characters are amazingly well developed.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Scarred

sooooo good. so satisfying wen edward raced in to terrorize jake. i was practically shivering in glee (plus, the mental image of him throwing the glass doors open so hard they smashed is ridiculously sexy!)

i compleely understand bella's reactions, even though i do want her to forgive/love edward. she really put herself out there and he rejected her, then ignored her. just thinking about breaks my heart. edward has a lot of explaining to do.

jake...i don't know if i'm compassionate enough to forgive him. he's a jerk.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Uninvited

i feel like i always say this, but, you don't know how glad i was to see a new chapter up. this story is incredible. the angst is so tangible, the pain so real and somehow relatable. i get frusterated by bella's stubborness with edward and alice (although edward deserves it while i feel alice does not. that said i know bella's been through heartbreak of an intense kind and she's just trying to protect herself). anyway....i truly hope  you update again soon. this story rocks

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Relentless

OH MY. I'M....GIDDY AND EMOTIONAL AND....whoops caps lock .... ok i'm so glad she left him say what he needed to. it's so important, even if she's still burning in emotional and  physical pain.

i know he can be so damned cocky....but he's so terribly sexy. ugh. the angst in this is STELLAR, and/but i look forward to bella having some happiness too.

 
Summary:

Now, I love every single one of the Twilight characters, especially angsty, overprotective Edward, but let's face it - sometimes they can go overboard. This is a parody of the characters' personalities.

 


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6030
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: September 18, 2008


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1

oh.my.GOODNESS!!! this is hilarious! i can't remember the last time i've laughed so frikkin hard at the printed word.

and, you used "totes".

that's only my favoritest word. you're my hero.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

this is so awesome! i giggled, chortled, guffawed like a maniac the whole time. yay! silliness. i love twilight and everything related more than life itself but this is some funny shiznit.

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

whenever i need to unwind and enjoy intense laughter therapy... this silly story does it. soooo ridiculous!  *loves it*

 
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: February 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1

i hadn't read this is some time. it's so FRIKKIN FUNNY!!! i laughed almost all the way through it....! i love edward ripping and rending his clothing....hahahahaaaaaa!

 
Greed by wish_girl Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary: The second chapter of Breaking Dawn, Long Night, in Edward's POV and his second thoughts on waiting until marriage. I'm not very good at these summaries, so please read and review!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4341
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2008 Updated: September 12, 2008


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Greed

oooh, that was good! i love how you write; it melds seamlessly w/ myers' style.

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Rochelle Allison Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: April 15 - April 18, 2008

this story is great! i'm totally hooked - can't wait to see what happens next. i love the dynamic between bella and edward (and, admittedly, i so don't want her to hook up w/ jake again!!) anyway, this is well written and it flows.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing :)

 




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