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Summary: Feature

Bella, compulsive sketcher of wolves, has not dreamed in years. Unexpectedly, she begins to dream again the night tragedy takes away her first and greatest love. ExB, sort of.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 119182
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

Powerful. 

 
Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

I never review but I effin' love this story.  Seriously; you're talented.  Take out the Twilight characters/references, flesh it out and and make it yours and you could publish it.  It's excellent.

 
Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

This is so amazing.  Really; you have talent.  I hope you're working on a novel of your own.  I'll be first in line on release day.

This whole chapter was spot on.  I'm not even rooting for a particular ending; no matter how it ends it will be right.

 

 
Reviewer: Mal71 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

Wow.  I have a few theories.  But I'll hold off and wait.  Excellent writing as usual.

 
Reviewer: Mal71 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

"...a cigarette butt, a folded note, a square patch of black velvet..."

The most intriguing words written yet, and that's saying something. 

Brilliant.  An ending worthy of the story. 

Brilliant.

 

 
Little Slugger by gimmenothing Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

After a series of mistakes and heartbreaks, Edward long ago committed himself to a secluded double life - by day a Customer Service Rep at a questionable corporate organization, and by night a God of the Open Mic stage. Coworker Bella is quirky and observant, and her curiosity about Edward may eclipse his need to keep his life private.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41646
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: July 03, 2010


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten - Because

I like it.  A lot.  It's got that sort of weird, surreal quality I like, totally OOC.

 
Summary:

 

Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first?  AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Glad I found this when it was complete, even though that meant a few sleepless nights because I couldn't bring myself to stop reading.  Great storyline and fabulous details.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician, or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago?

 Thanks to evilangel813 for making my beautiful banner!!

 

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award for best complete E/B and Romance story

Thanks to Christag_Banners for the amazing banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 119139
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2010


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes

I don't usually review; I'm more of a lurker, but I didn't want you to think no one was reading and therefore stop writing.  I like the story, and I wish you a safe and happy delivery!

 
Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

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Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Acquiesce

I just found this and I love it.  I like the complete departure from canon; those are the stories I prefer and you write very well.  Thanks for sharing it!

 
Work of Art by abstractway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1290]
Summary:

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Brilliant young artist Edward Masen is celebrated in the art world, but is the notoriety and trappings of fame also destroying him? When feisty Bella Swan knocks him off his pedestal, he realizes that she alone has the power to heal him.  In the lust filled world of art-whores and predators, will their passion for art, and ultimately each other, have the potential to change both of their lives?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 299074
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: April 09, 2011


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: March 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60-Our Undeniable Destiny

I started reading when the story was about half way done; it has never failed to entertain and beguile.  Great story!



Author's Response:

hi Mal71,

I have been slow to reply to reviews being so overwhelmed with the story ending and the great responses from readers like you.

I'm so happy to know that you enjoyed Work of Art.

As sad as I am to have the story end, it will be fun to share the epilogue in a few weeks. Thank you so much for reading my story.

xoxoxo

abbie

 
Working Man by diamondheart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

~*~ Winner Twilight Gem Awards, Pearl Round: Best All Human ~*~

Owner of Alpha Auto Repair, Jacob Black has got it bad for customer Bella Swan. The trouble is, she’s out of his league…and then there’s the small matter of her wealthy fiancé...

 AH/JxB  Rated for hot, tart, sweet content & language.

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Thanks to LaPushStarlight for the great banner...be sure to examine it closely for the, erm, details!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 10062
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2010 Updated: November 04, 2010


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Working Man

Love it.  Of course, I knew when I saw the author I would; great stuff as always.



Author's Response:

*gives little wiggle of happiness* Thanks, glad it was a hit! <><3

 
Enough by diamondheart Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 Can love really overcome all obstacles? A fireside tale of tragic decisions, enduring love & unyielding fate. Who can say where truth ends and legend begins?

My entry for the After Your Heart Stops Beating Contest on ffn, hosted by Wordslinger and Twi Charmed:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~afteryourheartstopsbeating

...and I WON!! Both the Popular Vote AND the Judges' Pick!

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4877
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2010 Updated: December 14, 2010


Reviewer: Mal71 Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Enough

You never disappoint; great as always! A departure, yes, but fabulous.



Author's Response:

Thanks! This was a very compelling idea, both the format & the way love can take some detours along its 'natural path'...Gald you liked it <><3





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