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Penname: lislar [Contact]
Real name: Lisa Larson
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Member Since: May 22, 2009
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Bios are a lot like bumper stickers - TMI.  But, having said that: I am an admitted Twilight obsessed mother of two girls.  I love to write and hope that I am good enough that all these voices in my head are interesting to you guys too.  I am very open minded but I am a little stubborn about taking criticism.  I am working on that.


I live East of San Francisco in a way too heavily populated area that is virtually unaffordable.  But the climate is great, there is lots of culture and plenty of gorgeous landmarks nearby.   


I also have a chocolate lab named Django that half the time I love to death and the other time I want to just take him off the leash and see what happens.


I love Twilighted and can't believe that I lived most of my life without it.  Now that I've found it though I am committed to both reading and if they'll have me, writing as often as I can.


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Reviews by lislar
 
Summary: Feature

Note from Admin: The blue ribbon awarded to this story means that it is a "featured" piece, recognized for excellence in content. It is one of the most culturally relevant, seriously deep, moving, unique, and important pieces of fanfiction that I have ever read.  -Roo, Validation Beta 

Bella Swan is homeless in one of the worst winters Seattle has ever seen. When trouble arises, she is saved by a knight in shining armor.

In his endeavor to help her, will he simplify her life, or complicate it beyond anything she could have ever foreseen.

Pairings are all part of the mystery . . .

The Girl Under the Bed Banner


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 61244
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2010


Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Falling into Life

Another excellent chapter.  This is truly one of the most creative stories on this site.  I never can predict what is coming up next for our poor Bella.  You are such a good writer, you pull us in immediately so we just can't wait to find out what is going to happen!  Thank you for sharing your story.



Author's Response:

Thank You :)

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confessions and Bonfires

Another great chapter - can't wait to meet Edward.  It is kind of hard for me to imagine Alice with Jacob.  I'm working on it...



Author's Response:

lol I understand, it's not for everyone. With Jacob's playful demeanor and Alice's happy disposition, I could just see them being in a very loving and playful relationship :)

Thank you :)

 
Summary:

They were the best of friends, "The Sovereign Six" as they were most notably called. After being apart for eleven years, they are all brought back together by a tragedy. Is their friendships strong enough to overcome the time they've missed together?

Here is the link for my thread over on the forums! Come and check it out!

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5213 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 135161
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010


Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Crazy, Possessive

Adorable - I didn't know our Bella had that much spunk.  I thought she might throw a punch to claim her man.  



Author's Response:

I considered having her to do that but figured she hit her hard enough with her words!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Extra Ordinary

I love the optimism in this story - the remaining faithful thing - it may be unrealistic but I don't care!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- I Run to You

I'm really getting into your story now.  I can't wait for the reunion.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's about to get even more emotional!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

This is so much fun - like a fantasy - hey, just like Twilight.  I am enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Hallelujah

sad but fun!  I can't wait to see how E and B's relationship develops!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Ever the Same

Lovely



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Hear You Me

You were right about the tissues!!!



Author's Response:

I know. But you can put them away. You won't need them for a while!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Silent Lucidity

another fun chapter.  I do love Lauren as a lesbian - too real!



Author's Response:

thank you!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes

Oh, so cute.  Little lovebirds.  Such a lovely fairytale.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Your Winter

I guess this chapter was necessary.  It was nice to hear reassuring words from Edward.  He needed to reaffirm his love and committment for Bella.  



Author's Response:

yes it was very necessary. I'm all for the happy ending, but this couldn't have gone left unsaid.

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Love Song

I am still loving your fairytale.  This story is so deliciously satisfying.  I really love that everyone kind of gets what their heart desires - there is no deep trauma yet and that makes me happy.



Author's Response:

thank you. Yes, HEA all around for everyone!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Hot Child in the City

Another fun chapter.  I know I keep saying this, but I really do enjoy the light-hearted quality of your writing.  I'm not stressed for the characters when I read your story because I trust you to give us the happy ending we so want as readers.  Thank you for not bumming me out!  And thank you for the fun.  I was hoping we would get to the Tanya altercation in this chapter but I will wait for your next posting.  Thanks again.



Author's Response:

awe thank you! yes, Tanya is up next and then I promise, lot's of light heartedness around for everyone. With maybe the exception of one chapter but it's just because we have some lose ends to tie up. No HF for any of our kiddos.

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Your Song

Another great chapter - god, I wish I had that ring from Tiffany's and an Edward to go with it.  I love the idea of all the Cullens sharing the same backyard rooted by the tree house.  You are so sentimental - if only real life could be this way - so perfect - so romantic!  



Author's Response:

I know!! I guess that's why fiction is so good. We can get lost in this little world and imagine our own lives this perfect! glad you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Love Game

Wow I got happy chills when I read this chapter - I always get happy chills when I read your story!!!  God, I just wish that I was one of the sovereign six, we can be the sovereign seven?  Oh wait, I would need a guy too = sovereign eight??? maybe.  Thanks again for putting a smile on my face today!



Author's Response:

you are too sweet! thank you! and of course you can be one! now, who oh who could be your eighth? lol next chapter is a little emo but not to worry, after that we're headed to NOLA!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- New Orleans Lady

Thanks again for such a fun time.  I so wish I was there with them!



Author's Response:

thank you! I had a blast writing this chapter!

 
Summary:

Son of a Preacher Man

Jasper Hale is the son of a popular televangelist in Phoenix, and he couldn’t be any further from a church-going goody two shoes. His attitude towards work, attending class, or contributing positively to society is lackadaisical at best. He drinks, smokes, and has a penchant for deflowering teenage girls. Bella Swan attends private school with Edward Cullen, a senior who she’s been in love with since 9th grade, when he moved to Phoenix. Unfortunately, Edward is dating Jasper's sister, Rosalie, the most beautiful girl at St. Mary’s, and doesn’t even know Bella exists. But when Jasper sets his sights on Bella, Edward can’t help but take notice. His initial desire to protect her from Rosalie’s impious older brother leads to deeper feelings. AH/AU/OOC and all that good stuff.

B/J and E/R to start - eventually E/B


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 165517
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2010


Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Timothy 2:22

I think I like Edwards POV the best.  Jasper is funny though.  Is he going to evolve and change?  Is he really falling in love with Bella too? I hope so.

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Corinthians 7:1

i can't wait for Edward and Bella to have more interaction!!!  I hope Edward breaks it off with Rosalie soon!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Timothy 2:14

Okay I am fucking mad - I wasn't expecting that - that is way too OOC.  I thought you would figure out a way to wedge Edward in there and now I'm just not really sure where the story is going.  Huh.  I still love the story but I am confused.  Make me happy.

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: John 4:18

ouch - poor Bella.  and poor jasper.  I love how you're working all this out - how Jaspers actually evolving.  That is excellent!  This is a very realistic story - the relationships are very familiar to me.  Great job!  I am enjoying this very much.

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: John 3:18

Yay!  Finally Edward made a move!  I'm so happy!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: John 3:18

Awesome!

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Ephesians 3:13

Is there hope for Jasper?  I like that he's going through a transformation - maybe he can be a better person than anyone else in his fucked up family.  

 
Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Phillipians 4:8

Give Edward a chance Bella!

 




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