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Penname: lislar [ Contact]
Real name: Lisa Larson
Status: Member
Member Since: May 22, 2009
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Bios are a lot like bumper stickers - TMI. But, having said that: I am an admitted Twilight obsessed mother of two girls. I love to write and hope that I am good enough that all these voices in my head are interesting to you guys too. I am very open minded but I am a little stubborn about taking criticism. I am working on that.
I live East of San Francisco in a way too heavily populated area that is virtually unaffordable. But the climate is great, there is lots of culture and plenty of gorgeous landmarks nearby.
I also have a chocolate lab named Django that half the time I love to death and the other time I want to just take him off the leash and see what happens.
I love Twilighted and can't believe that I lived most of my life without it. Now that I've found it though I am committed to both reading and if they'll have me, writing as often as I can.
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Summary: For just one day every decade the Cullen family opens things up in the bedroom. AU lemon-fest. Canon and non-canon pairings, but no permanent splitting of canon couples.
This story contains very adult themes and includes F/F slash in earlier chapters and some M/M slash later.
This story earns its NC-17 rating folks!!
A big thank you to DiamondHeart for her guidance (read Moonshadow!), and to my beta, MsKathy!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 42169
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
Wow! You didn't disappoint! Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the R&R!!
Reviewer: lislar Signed 
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emmett
I was kind of worried about how you would portray Bella and Emmett together - I definitely couldn't picture it happening beforehand. But that was f-ing incredible! Perfect! You completely figured it out in a way I never could have imagined. That was the best yet! Thank you for that imagery - the blood and the belt and the enormous Emmett cock - HOT HOT HOT! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was actually very worried about portraying Emmett/Bella also. I sat there for about a week thinking "now what?!" But I like where it went, and I'm glad you did too!
Phew!
Thanks again for reviewing. It is always very, very appreciated.
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: August 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Edward
If only sex could be so good all the time and so uncomplicated. Wouldn't it be great to be able to have sex with everyone we are attracted to with no strings attached or nagging emotions to get in the way?
You are so good at writing this kind of thing!! I am more than impressed!! I just have to make sure I am in the right setting when I read it! Thank you! Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R!
LOL on "the right setting". I hear ya. I have to find the right setting to *write* it too.
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: August 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
shit shit shit - I just can't imagine that - sounds incredible but painful! The Esme/Edward scene should definitely be from Esme's POV. You can have someone else worship Edward's perfection - usually we only get to see him through Bella's eyes - let's see him through Esme's Author's Response: Thanks for voting -- and for the review! I agree it sounds painful, but have to hope that it would be different as a vamp. :)
Summary: This is the companion piece to my first fan fic story Serendipity. It's Edward's side of the story as he comes face to face with Bella after his family moved from Forks twelve years ago, leaving Bella alone to deal with the death of her parents. They're all grown up, and Eddie-boy finds himself in quite the predicament in the beginning.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Phil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 67881
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Party
Wow! That was great - I am so happy to have Edwards POV also - it makes the story so much richer and wonderful!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Busted
This is so great to see it all from Edward's POV - I know I sound like a broken recored - I am so happy with your story though!!!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Realization
So sweet and romantic - if only my husband could be like that!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Soul Searching
I love him - can I have him?!!!?? I'm with Bella - no one deserves him - he doesn't exist. But it's certainly nice to fantasize, isn't it?
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Torture
Thank you - that was so awesome!!! You are such the romantic and I love every minute of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Rapture
I do like his view of things more because I can so relate to Bella's insecurites and isn't it every woman's dream to have a man worship her in this way? It is so so satisfying to hear that he is just as devoted to her as she is to him. Yum!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: August 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Loss
Lovely!!! I love Edward!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: New Beginnings
Excellent - why is it that I love Edward's POV the best? I think that Bella's self-doubt gets tiring sometimes. Your story is so so satisfying - thank you so much - can't wait for them to satisfy their needs!!!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Happy Birthday to Me
awesome - I loved every sappy moment!!!!!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Do
Again - I love Edwards POV the best. Thank you so much for the sweet wonderful story and the HEA. Your story made me so happy and we all really need that! I'm so sad that it's over but it was a great journey!
Summary: Bella returns to the town where she was born to seek out her biological father. When the police take siege on the building next door, she's trapped inside her new home and finds more than she expects from five of the strangest people she's ever met.
Banner thanks to Blackdogs!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73957
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Quiet on the set
Your Edward is weird. And Bella's a tramp. I'm interested in your story but I'm not really sure if I like your characters. I will give them a little more before I throw in the towel.
Summary:  Note from Admin: The blue ribbon awarded to this story means that it is a "featured" piece, recognized for excellence in content. It is one of the most culturally relevant, seriously deep, moving, unique, and important pieces of fanfiction that I have ever read. -Roo, Validation Beta
Bella Swan is homeless in one of the worst winters Seattle has ever seen. When trouble arises, she is saved by a knight in shining armor.
In his endeavor to help her, will he simplify her life, or complicate it beyond anything she could have ever foreseen.
Pairings are all part of the mystery . . .
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 61244
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2010
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Streets
Wow - so sad and depressing. I hate to think that our society allows young people to live like this. Its horrifying. I can't wait to see how her situation changes. Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Winter Underland
This is still so sad and dismal. I hope that the story changes for the better soon. I am too depressed by this depiction of life. But I can tell you are weaving a really solid story and I am excited for what is to come. Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Predators
Okay - this has to get better soon! I'm freaking out now.
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Personal Angel
I love Jasper!!!!
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Cold Hard Truths
I am so happy that finally something is changing for our poor Bella. The homeless scenes are so horrific I hate to imagine them. Great job on the storyline development. I am so intrigued as to where this story is headed. I do really yearn to have Bella interact with more people - preferably Cullen type people. Author's Response: Thank you :) They're coming I promise, slowly but surely ;)
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The House Behind the Trees
Yay!!!! I am so happy that she is finally there with Jasper - her rescuer! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This is really getting good - you have built the story up in a way that makes me just ache to read the next chapter. I love it! Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Strange New friend
This is such an awesome story. I am so addicted. I'm too frustrated that Ihave to make dinner now because all Iwant to do is read!!!!! Thank you for such a truly interesting story! Author's Response: Thank You :)
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Time Changes Nothing
I wasn't really surprised that Julia died - I knew that in order for Bella to move on, she had to die. Thank you again for such a compelling story!!!! I am very invested in these characters - please help Bella to be safe and happy!!! Author's Response: Thank you :) I know I say that a lot, well, in most of them I just say thank you ;) but I really do mean it. All feedback helps and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know what you thought.
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: September 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Don't Leave
Wonderful story! Please update soon!!!!! I cannot wait to see how Bella's life is going to develop with her new friends. Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: lislar Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: See Me!
Your story is so intriguing that I just can't wait to read more. Please update soon because I can't predict anything in this story yet.
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