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Penname: jordynnem [ Contact]
Real name: jess
Status: Member
Member Since: May 22, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes
Mother of two beautiful girls ... the oldest of whom wanted to read the Twilight series. Upon learning it was a vampire love story I told her I'd have to read it first. (not knowing at the time that the author was a mormon) Needless to say I was hooked and am now a closet Twi-hard. I am a professional automation control sales engineer and on the side a writer though I do not write fan fiction. I enjoy reading some of it. I've been married for 13 years to a wonderful man and my best friend.
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Summary: 
Ten years.
Ten years have passed since Edward left Bella that day in the woods. He doesn't know what happened to her. He doesn't know if she's happy. He doesn't know if she's had the life that he intended for her.
Alice has developed a new talent closely related to her precognition, and she finally prevails upon Edward to check up on Bella, for her and Esme's sake if nothing else.
And what they see will destroy the fragile peace that Edward has lived in for the past decade.
(Note: this is most definitely not a Bella/Jacob story. In fact, it is at its heart a Bella/Edward story.)
The rating is for violence and character death, not erotica. If you're looking for erotica... sorry. Wrong place.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39016
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed 
Date: November 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Homework is so over rated. You should work on this fic instead. Definitely the right thing to do. Author's Response: haha yes!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: January 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
No one on this site has ever managed to make me cry. You are an amazing writer as you have managed to evoke tears from my eyes with this chapter. Before now, I was certain that was an impossible feat. Wonderful writing as always.
Summary: Bella isn't a werewolve, vampire, or witch. She's "something other." Vamps/Werewolves included. Cannon Pairings. Nominated for Indie TwiFic Award for Most Original Story Line WIP.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 62264
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I feel the momentum gaining. Can't wait to see where you take this. Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I enjoyed the insight into Bella's past. Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Nice little piece of fluff. Looking forward to some twists and turns. But, I trust you have a few tricks up your sleeves. Author's Response: There will be definitely be more twists/action but expect some relationship building fluffiness too. :)
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wonderful chapter. Ligght hearted and fun! Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It was very fun to write.
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
That was cute and funny. Nicely done. Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Toes? OK, I'll admit you did get me to laugh out loud. Another endearing chapter. I loved it! Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Glad you laughed. I was aiming for something rather obscure to make it funny. ;)
Summary:
They come unbidden. Dreams of desire. Dreams turned to nightmares from which she cannot escape. They will change her life in ways she never could imagine. Will she be able to merge madness with reality? AU, The usual suspects.
~~~Disclaimer~~~
Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and any text reference associated with theTwilight plotline.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 60537
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2009
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I end up skipping a lot of descriptive paragraphs, but am pressing forward to see if it picks up because I am intrigued. Author's Response: Sometimes you just gotta do what you just gotta do...it's all good!
Enjoy the upcoming chaos!
Robyn
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
So that was a dream? Author's Response: Yes and no. She was dreaming and woke up into another dream that was a nightmare.
Robyn
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I like the flow and am glad to have given this story a chance. Author's Response: Glad you are still with us!
Robyn:)
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
wow! this is a little confusiing, but only regarding the time line between different POVs Author's Response: I agree; it's very confusing. This is one of those stories that if you blink you miss something. There are several little 'keys' if you will embedded throughout the chapters.
There are insane character POV switeches, and timeline double backs. These are on purpose to 'fill in' any missing blanks and provide you with a broader scope of what's happening.
Robyn
And thanks for sticking with the story.
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
It's weird and intriguing. I like it. Author's Response: Thank you. And I mean it when I say I appreciate every review.
Keeps my confidence bolstered when I post the weirder chatpers.
Robyn
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed 
Date: October 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I am enjoying your flow and definitely interested enough to add this story to my favorites. Author's Response: Thanks!
I appreciate you sticking with me!
Robyn
Summary: AU - As Bella waits for Jacob to make her cliff dive, Victoria takes advantage of this opportunity. The story deviates from New Moon at this point.
Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 46123
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2012
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: The next step
She is going to be so pissed at Jake and Emoward when she finds out about their lies and manipulations. I have a feeling shit is going to be flinging everywhere! Author's Response: Oh probably. Men, what can you say? LOL, thanks for the review!
Summary: Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.
Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.
Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.
First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!
This banner is by Readergoof. I have another one that was up before but I'm switching to just this one for now.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
The banter between these two is as palpable as the sexual prowess. Great job, as usual.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it. I enjoy writing it. Makeas it fun. They both like to play but have never had anyone play back. Thanks for the R&R as usual jordy! I appreciate hearing from all of you. You've been with me from the beginning and I thank you for it!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Delicious! Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Whit,
I love your naughty take on Edward and Bella. This story is amazing. You're in my favs now!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Naughty Edward and Bella. I was a little scared to change the characters that we know and love this much. But the response I am getting tells me that people are ok with it. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reading and reveiewing!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Two can play at this game. LOL... too funny. Perfect. Author's Response: They both can be playful so you know there's going to be some fun coming up! Thanks for the R&R!
Summary: 
This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon. Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever. All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward. But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Imprinting and Other Disasters
I absolutley had a lot of fun reading this chapter and I look forward to following it. You've been added to my favorites. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the support and for adding me to your favorites! I am truly honored to know you enjoy my writing so much. I hope you enjoy what's to come. I think I have some great stuff planned.
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Five Carlisles and a Wedding
This chapter was amazing. I love that you've made Jake a selfish ass. Seriously, where does he get off impugning on her happiness? Great chapter and I am loving this story. It is refreshingly original!
Summary: 
Thanks to TellyTubby101 for the fantastic banner!
What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Devastation
Oh wow, his POV was more enlightening than I would have anticipated. Author's Response: I hope that's a good thing :-)
Thanks!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Discovery
How did they find her??? Updates for the reader are like reviews for the writer. Hurry, please!
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
Hmmmmm........I love that I don't know exactly where you are going with this.
Summary:  ATO for short. This is an alternate New Moon. Edward and the Cullens are gone. A vindictive Victoria takes away all that Bella has left, including her humanity. Bella must leave Forks, but where can she go when she has no one left? All vampire. EdwardxBella
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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 134491
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2011
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Spite
I should have been reviewing all along, but this story is great and I am enjoying it thoroughly. I love Bella's wicked new mind.
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