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Penname: jordynnem [Contact]
Real name: jess
Status: Member
Member Since: May 22, 2009
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Beta-reader: Yes

Mother of two beautiful girls ... the oldest of whom wanted to read the Twilight series. Upon learning it was a vampire love story I told her I'd have to read it first. (not knowing at the time that the author was a mormon) Needless to say I was hooked and am now a closet Twi-hard. I am a professional automation control sales engineer and on the side a writer though I do not write fan fiction. I enjoy reading some of it. I've been married for 13 years to a wonderful man and my best friend.


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Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I thought she'd comment on Jacob's stench...Lol. That chapter was awesome! Wow, just wow! I absolutley love the way you've written Charlie, he's one of my favorites.

 
Summary: Bella and her family explore her gift's limitations, to the delight and disappointment of Emmett
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2795
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2008 Updated: September 22, 2008


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was good.

 
Summary:

Bella has a habit that Edward can't help but worship. Complete fluff. :)


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1435
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: October 11, 2008


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Big ol' 'shit eating grin' plastered right here on my face.  (I wonder who coined that phrase and why though, hmmm?)

 
Up to Speed by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 851]
Summary:

Race car driver Edward Cullen has wrecked another car.  He's losing all his sponsors and funding.  His only hope is the incredibly sexy but stubborn Isabella Swan a brilliant engineer.  He can't get enough of her and she's keeping a secret that will change his life forever.

Banner by: dazzlemebetch-Thanks!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 140390
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Past

The beginning was hilarious. I laughed aloud. Carlisle is as charming and warm as ever. No surprise at all, but as usual you've hit your mark!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 What the ?

I totally expected her to be a virgin - but only because she went to MIT at 14 - otherwise I wouldn't have known.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Alone

Hilarious...the banter between everyone is perfect! - I'm trying to get you close to 700 reviews as I read.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Fan

That was a bitter sweet chapter ...but, as always, I loved it!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Racing Bella

Okay - I've read your other stories so I know you are not too much of a sadist..I'm guessing you give Bella a heart in the knick of time...but I'll keep reading to find out for sure!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Neighbor

Charming...I want to keep reading so my reviews will probably be brief until the end. But your stories are great and you deserve your reviews!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Disneyland Pt 1

Loved it!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Disneyland Pt. 2

Your stories can stand on their own....I hope to see you've been published one day.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Jealous

You made Mike a total Ass-hat....I love it!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Secret and a Bluff

Okay - that went better than I expected. That Newton is quite a creep, but every story needs a villain. I don't think he's much of a match for Bella though. Also, I know Renee is irresponsible, but OMG - poor Bella. That must have been hard to hea considering their already strained relationship.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Testosterone

2nd Place ----whoo hoo!!!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Barfight

Go Bella - she's such a control freak, but I love it!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Spread the News

Alice is a wonderful alli (sp?)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Hef

He cheated! That's awesome. Bella didn't seem to mind too much.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Amor

He won!! Can't wait for Bella's reward.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Give me a Ring and M&Ms

M&Ms ... that's awesome!!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Tricks and Details

Awww a truce....how very mature of them. And you've redeemed Mike! *sigh*

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV

Bella did the right thing, and I love how you balance lemons with angst. Your ratio is perfect!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Have a Heart BPOV

Typical Bella - too selfless for her own good, but also too scared to risk her figurative heart in a way.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 A Message

I felt a twinge in my eyes....but its hard to actually get me to cry. That was so sweet. Jamie is adoreable!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Texas Sun Part One

What! What do you mean she's not staying??? Oh well, I'll find out in a few minutes..

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Texas Sun Part Two

Lemons!

 




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