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Penname: jordynnem [Contact]
Real name: jess
Status: Member
Member Since: May 22, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes

Mother of two beautiful girls ... the oldest of whom wanted to read the Twilight series. Upon learning it was a vampire love story I told her I'd have to read it first. (not knowing at the time that the author was a mormon) Needless to say I was hooked and am now a closet Twi-hard. I am a professional automation control sales engineer and on the side a writer though I do not write fan fiction. I enjoy reading some of it. I've been married for 13 years to a wonderful man and my best friend.


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Reviews by jordynnem
 
Summary:

Under a Killing Moon banner

Bella goes to Forks to complete some omnious task her mother says she "must do on her own."  Edward struggles with his grip on humanity.  They both harbor secrets, but she knows his.  She's about to learn that her mother is a big, fat liar.  He's about to learn that Alice and Carlisle are capable of keeping secrets from him.  These two might be the best thing for each other; the only way they can come to terms and move forward.  And for once, Bella is Edward's equal.  In will and ability.
OOC, AU, canon pairing

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16808
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I like the slight changs in character and the story line. I hope you keep going. Great writing!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow! I can't wait for this story to take off! The premise is so original and intriguing. I'm gonna have to start pimping it on the forum!!

 
Summary:

 

 

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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 

HE HAS TO."

- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)

 

Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...

 

Rated for later chapters.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: A Clean Break

Still here. Wonderful update. I love your command of the english language. Writing is your gift. You create a world and the rest of us follow you there without effort.



Author's Response: Thank you so so much!!! And thanks fit sticking with me. Xox

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me

Ugh...Tanya!?

 
Summary:

When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.

Will he be able to resist?

 

Thanks M81170 for the wonderful banner!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was sweet. The seed has been planted about the change. Charlie has been explained a little more and the banter between Edward and Bella was charming.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you liked it! :)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was the meanest cliffie I've ever encountered. Great chapter, Bella's feelings were very realistic. Ugh, I hope you post soon!!



Author's Response:

The meanest? Really? Sorry, but it just had to end there. Makes it more fun, for me, at least. lol. I'm just playing. I will update as soon as possible. :)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok, I forgive you for the cliffie from the last chapter. And yes, it was the meanest cliffie ever. However, I was just playing mad, I never actually was.

This chapter was just, WOW!!! Can't wait for Bella's reaction to the truth!



Author's Response:

Well, I am glad you were just playing. lol.

I'm glad you liked this chapter. This was angst Emoward at his peak. lol. :)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love the story still, looking forward to some baseball action. Does James show romantic interest in Bella???



Author's Response:

Hmm... lol. Thanks!!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww, she loves to sparkle. I love your witty and sarcastic Bella-Vamp.

 
Broken by Wendyann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1084]
Summary:

How does someone survive a trauma that changes everything? How does she find the will to live? Edward was too late to save Bella in Port Angeles. Can she save herself?

*Note: This story deals with the aftermath of rape. If you are sensitive to this topic, please do not read.*

Thank you so much to Loushane for the amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 104063
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Therapy

It seems as though she's making small steps toward progress if not progress itself. The emotional weight that has put on everyone comes through clearly, especially with Bella, Edward, Rose and Jasper. I am surprised to be enjoying a story of a serious nature, but truly I am.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Beginning Again

I can't believe you work 70 hours per week and beta while working on this amazing fan fiction. I will admit I was skeptical as to whether I would be able to stomach this story, but they way you've written it is so emotionally jarring with under tones of optimism. Truly, your talen is overwhelming.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Panic

Bless your heart...I work 60 hour weeks and they are exhausting, I can't imagine 70 hour weeks.

This chapter was amazing as usual. I swear sometimes Edward is every bit a 17 year old boy. What was he thinking? (rhetorical) Jasper sure has his work cut out for him, but it seems even more so the case for Bella. Give the journey that needs to be taken, is this story going to be fairly long?

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Thanksgiving

Powerful chapter!! Bella is finally feeling something, the reaction to the laugh was perfect and having Edward be able to comfort her. The blow up with Charlie and her reactions to Alice. All very real and powerful!!!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: New Year

you made me cry. you've been so accurate and loyal to the theme of this story and though i haven't mentioned it before, it is very much appreciated.

 
daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1100]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

daybreak

Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Proof

That was hilarious.....lol funny!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Reality

Interesting take....looking forward to the next post.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Torture

I hate it when that happens. ( about your writers block I mean) Sometimes when I'm writing I skip ahead to the next scene and then go back. I don't know if that will help you or not; but you never know. .......Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: 19: Flight

Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: 24: Stalemate

Great job over all and this chapter was great. Cheeky and serious in all of the right places. I loved Renee's internal ramblings.

 
Force of Impact by asheltate24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 212]
Summary:

 Bella Swan has to leave her home, so goes to the only place she can think of where she can be accepted and live as she is; Forks. But she didn't expect to see others like herself there... with pale skin and golden eyes.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8772
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2009 Updated: September 27, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great premise. Very excited about this one.

 
Summary:

Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?

Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 09, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh ... I do love how your mind works. That was awesome!

 
Love Comes by stacylambert Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?

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Amazing banner by Anne Cullen


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Vision

This story is too good to only have 8 reviews!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First Day

I'm intrigued.

 
Summary:

When Edward leaves Bella, the rest of his family refuses.  Bella is left scarred and broken by Edward's sudden goodbye; the Cullens are left shocked and torn by his unexpected departure.  As Bella and her bloodsucking family grow closer, life begins to return to normal.

But just when everything starts to calm down, unexpected events lead to the one thing that can either save or destroy everything the Cullens have.

Including eachother.

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 21296
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: January 03, 2010


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it and I think you're right. The Cullens wouldn't have left Bella in favor of Edward's rant.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You're right, that's exactly what Esme .... or any mother would have done.

 




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