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Real name: jess
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Member Since: May 22, 2009
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Mother of two beautiful girls ... the oldest of whom wanted to read the Twilight series. Upon learning it was a vampire love story I told her I'd have to read it first. (not knowing at the time that the author was a mormon) Needless to say I was hooked and am now a closet Twi-hard. I am a professional automation control sales engineer and on the side a writer though I do not write fan fiction. I enjoy reading some of it. I've been married for 13 years to a wonderful man and my best friend.


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Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2414]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Teasing, Tasting, and a Trip

Hi Lisa,

 

I found the light feel of this chapter to be perfect. I love Alice's meddling ways and Emmett's childish antics. It's wonderful to see Bella feeling as though she belongs, but my favorite touch was Charlie. Seeing him on the path to acceptance and the struggle of letting his little girl go. It was both heart warming and heart breaking.

BTW - I let out a fan girl squeal when I saw the update. I've been working 60 hour weeks as of late and haven't been able to read as much as I've been opting to spend any free time working on my own original fic, but I had to make an exception for Fractured Hearts.

Much Love,

Jess

 



Author's Response:

You are my 1500th review. Hooray. I love the number 15 in any form. :) Oh Jess, thank you so much for making an exception for my story. I am so honored that you would take time out of your insane work schedule and own writing time to read my work. I'm thrilled you loved the light and fun feel of this chapter - and prepare yourself - because my plan is to write the next two chapters this weekend. They are picking up right where this left off as the Cullens don't do anything on a small scale and Christmas is no exception. I had outlined the Christmas chapter to be ONE chapter, but Emmett and his green crayon shot that all to hell again. Not to mention he's been singing that ridiculous (but funny) song in my head almost non-stop for about three weeks, and since Rosalie is a bit upset with me about Bella's panties - she has done nothing to stop him. Go figure. I so appreciate you. You have always supported my story and given me such lovely reviews, and I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. :)

~Lisa

 

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fists and Fur

So glad you are back and to hear that things are once again stabalizing in RL. The chapter was well worth the wait. You took me off guard with the attack on Bella, I so didn't expect that! Jacob's fury is almost endearing.....almost. I love the depth you gave Sam Uley, also unexpected but it fits so well and makes me respect him. Charlie broke my heart, I love the way you write him. He is the epitome of 'Dad' - and dear sweet Edward, ready to change his love. You're really bringing these characters full circle. The dimension you've given all of them is unlike anything I've read in the fan fiction genre. You're incredible!



Author's Response:

Hey Jess. Thank you for the warm welcome. It's good to be back and yes, real life is starting to find some balance again. Bella's attack caught me off guard as well. Laurent didn't reveal to me just how sinister he was or how evil his plans for Bella were until I was actually typing it out. Jacob's fury is almost endearing in a few scattered moments, but for the most part he's just like every other annoying 16 year old that's fallen in love and can't have the girl he wants. Except in his case he can fursplode into a deadly creature when he doesn't get his way. ;) I've gotten quite a few comments on Sam and how he's portrayed in this chapter. I've been pleasantly surprised as I didn't realize I was writing him any differently than people were used to - other than the fact he doesn't tolerate Jacob's temper tantrums nearly as much as in the books. Oh Charlie. He broke my heart too. That entire scene between Charlie and Edward was very difficult for me to to write as the emotional overload between them both just wrecked me. For Charlie to recognize how much Edward loved Bella, and then to trust her care to him as he went to the res - not to mention calling him son - just turned me into a weepy puddle. I'm deeply humbled by your compliments on my writing, and I've always enjoyed your reviews. Thank you for sticking with me during my absence and continuing to enjoy this story. It means a great deal to me.

~Lisa

 
Summary: Feature

AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.

 
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Seeing Through You

Go Bella! You don't need to put up with that shit girl!

 
Summary:

A few weeks before the wedding Bella remembers something startling about her past which has the potential to disrupt everything.

I dreamed of hall lights and unfamiliar faces, darkness and feeling small and helpless.  I woke with a start.

Contains possible triggers

 

Thanks to heatherdawnc for the banner!

 

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 57416
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: October 26, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: What Bella Suspected

I was surprised, but I've been enjoying this story. To clarify...my surprise wasn't due to skepticism regarding your writing ability, but rather the sensitive subject entailed within.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.  It IS a sensitive subject, and one I've tried to approach with understanding and as much realism as I could.  Hopefully you enjoy the rest!

 
Summary:

Under a Killing Moon banner

Bella goes to Forks to complete some omnious task her mother says she "must do on her own."  Edward struggles with his grip on humanity.  They both harbor secrets, but she knows his.  She's about to learn that her mother is a big, fat liar.  He's about to learn that Alice and Carlisle are capable of keeping secrets from him.  These two might be the best thing for each other; the only way they can come to terms and move forward.  And for once, Bella is Edward's equal.  In will and ability.
OOC, AU, canon pairing

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16808
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I like the slight changs in character and the story line. I hope you keep going. Great writing!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow! I can't wait for this story to take off! The premise is so original and intriguing. I'm gonna have to start pimping it on the forum!!

 
Summary:

 

 

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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 

HE HAS TO."

- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)

 

Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...

 

Rated for later chapters.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: A Clean Break

Still here. Wonderful update. I love your command of the english language. Writing is your gift. You create a world and the rest of us follow you there without effort.



Author's Response: Thank you so so much!!! And thanks fit sticking with me. Xox

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me

Ugh...Tanya!?

 
Summary:

When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.

Will he be able to resist?

 

Thanks M81170 for the wonderful banner!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was sweet. The seed has been planted about the change. Charlie has been explained a little more and the banter between Edward and Bella was charming.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you liked it! :)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was the meanest cliffie I've ever encountered. Great chapter, Bella's feelings were very realistic. Ugh, I hope you post soon!!



Author's Response:

The meanest? Really? Sorry, but it just had to end there. Makes it more fun, for me, at least. lol. I'm just playing. I will update as soon as possible. :)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok, I forgive you for the cliffie from the last chapter. And yes, it was the meanest cliffie ever. However, I was just playing mad, I never actually was.

This chapter was just, WOW!!! Can't wait for Bella's reaction to the truth!



Author's Response:

Well, I am glad you were just playing. lol.

I'm glad you liked this chapter. This was angst Emoward at his peak. lol. :)

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love the story still, looking forward to some baseball action. Does James show romantic interest in Bella???



Author's Response:

Hmm... lol. Thanks!!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww, she loves to sparkle. I love your witty and sarcastic Bella-Vamp.

 
Broken by Wendyann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1084]
Summary:

How does someone survive a trauma that changes everything? How does she find the will to live? Edward was too late to save Bella in Port Angeles. Can she save herself?

*Note: This story deals with the aftermath of rape. If you are sensitive to this topic, please do not read.*

Thank you so much to Loushane for the amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 104063
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Therapy

It seems as though she's making small steps toward progress if not progress itself. The emotional weight that has put on everyone comes through clearly, especially with Bella, Edward, Rose and Jasper. I am surprised to be enjoying a story of a serious nature, but truly I am.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Beginning Again

I can't believe you work 70 hours per week and beta while working on this amazing fan fiction. I will admit I was skeptical as to whether I would be able to stomach this story, but they way you've written it is so emotionally jarring with under tones of optimism. Truly, your talen is overwhelming.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Panic

Bless your heart...I work 60 hour weeks and they are exhausting, I can't imagine 70 hour weeks.

This chapter was amazing as usual. I swear sometimes Edward is every bit a 17 year old boy. What was he thinking? (rhetorical) Jasper sure has his work cut out for him, but it seems even more so the case for Bella. Give the journey that needs to be taken, is this story going to be fairly long?

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Thanksgiving

Powerful chapter!! Bella is finally feeling something, the reaction to the laugh was perfect and having Edward be able to comfort her. The blow up with Charlie and her reactions to Alice. All very real and powerful!!!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: New Year

you made me cry. you've been so accurate and loyal to the theme of this story and though i haven't mentioned it before, it is very much appreciated.

 
daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1101]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

daybreak

Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Proof

That was hilarious.....lol funny!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Reality

Interesting take....looking forward to the next post.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Torture

I hate it when that happens. ( about your writers block I mean) Sometimes when I'm writing I skip ahead to the next scene and then go back. I don't know if that will help you or not; but you never know. .......Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: 19: Flight

Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: 24: Stalemate

Great job over all and this chapter was great. Cheeky and serious in all of the right places. I loved Renee's internal ramblings.

 
Force of Impact by asheltate24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

 Bella Swan has to leave her home, so goes to the only place she can think of where she can be accepted and live as she is; Forks. But she didn't expect to see others like herself there... with pale skin and golden eyes.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8772
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2009 Updated: September 27, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great premise. Very excited about this one.

 
Summary:

Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?

Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 09, 2009


Reviewer: jordynnem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh ... I do love how your mind works. That was awesome!

 




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